MayUr FF _A Brilliant Tragedy|Part 18\Page118|NEW - Page 74

omg god....dear it was an awesome update!!!!.....really loved every bit of it......nupur wanted to talk to mayank alone!!!.....hope all their problems get resolved now......the story is proceeding very nicely!!!....keep up!!!.......n continue soon!!!

aww soni...........awesome awesome update dear............👏............i really lovd tht part when mayu ws almost goin to say to her frm friendship to love......😳.............pehli baar kisi ff mein sammy kabaab mein haddi ban gaya....n pehli baar i'm hatin him for doin tht........😆😉......nywz i'l 4give sammy as there r alwz first times.....😆
nywz i'm really mayur r talkin to each other.......they really need a big convo to resolve many probs b/w them......

plzzzzz continue soooooooooon

wow nice update.. some flash back stories now... :).... waiting for your update...

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

*sorry for the late update, once again! Schools been hectic...anywhoo, heres the update, enjoy:I enjoyed it thoroughly

Part 15:

"it's simple.. Right, left, right, left' good, now bend forward a bit and use your arms to help you move," Mayank said as he held onto Nupur's elbow.Yu noe soniiit kinda remindsme thetime Mi jiju proposed to my cousin it was on a skating rink in New york

"I suck at this," Nupur complained, "we've been near the edge of the rink for nearly an hour..maybe you should just go around by yourself," she said looking at him, it was still awkward yet as time passed, the awkwardness was dying down. and thenthe same reaction from her .. "OH lord I suck @this" it was sweet u know remembering tht Proposal.....

"okay, listen up Nupur, you have to learn new things in life and I'm here okay? trust me," he said looking deeply into Nupur's eyes, "We're going to go to the middle," she looked at him and let out a sigh, nodding her head, she slowly got out of Mayank's grip and slowly started skating by herself with Mayank close by.Jesus sonii its getting the Nostalgia back and its gripping

Someone once told me that you have to choose

What you win or lose

You can't have everything

Don't you take chances

Might feel the pain

Don't you love in vain

Cause love won't set you free

I can't stand by the side

And watch this life pass me by

So unhappy

But safe as could be (Love this song you selected)

"It's not as easy as it looks," Nupur said as Mayank placed his hands on his hips,
Hell yeah Things can get difficult @ times

"nothing in life is easy Nupur" he replied looking around the rink, Samrat and Gunjan held hands as they skated around, where as Dia and CJ were trying to do the most pirouettes they could, laughter burst out from their side of the rink when they both fell flat on their bums. hahaha Manme and my sis were doing the exact thing Back then you knoe

So what if it hurts me?

So what if i break down?

So what if this world just throws me off the edge

My feet run out of ground

I gotta find my place

I wanna hear my sound

Don't care about all the pain in front of me

Cause i'm just trying to be happy, yeah

Just wanna be happy, yeah

"I agree completely with you, if life was easy, it wouldn't be challenging and without challenges it wouldn't be interesting" he nodded in agreement, MAN !!! DEJA VU!!!! fr me

"Mayank I've tried to, but I just don't understand you" he chuckled shaking his head, "I would have suspected you to be angry at me, not calm and mellow.. Sorry to say but it doesn't suit you" this time he just looked at her and didn't say anything, "C'mon Mayank, talk to me, like we used to talk back in Goa" he opened his mouth to talk though Nupur cut him off, "I know lots of things have changed, but we haven't have we?" she asked softly. mmmm here my story differs

"Just like how life changes, people and their feelings change too" he said moving closer to her,

and YET again DEJA VU!!!!!!!!

"What feelings have changed Mayank?" she asked looking into his eyes, oh lord my senses r tingling now

"from anger-to-happiness, from disappointment-to-content, and then from fri-" stopped mid-sentence by Samrat, he sighed, shaking his head and looked at Samrat skated up to them, OH JESUS CHRIST Sonii how many times r u gonna remind me of the PROPOSAL????☺️

"Mayank! Nupur!" Samrat said, "you've been in the middle for the last 10 minutes, just standing here' something up?" he asked as Mayank shot him a look, HA it's expected to happen when u r EVES DROPPING lolllzzz

"We're fine, just talking.." he said in a bemused tone, good answer mi boy

"Well then If you're done with you 'talking' it's time" Samrat added,
SAMMY I must say is playing Cupid

"Time for what?" asked Nupur nervously, a smile came upon Samrat's face as he winked at her,
Hah she got really scared mmmmm *GRIN* More like some1 caught them redhanded

"kill round.." Nupur's mouth flung open and her eyes got bigger,
YEH toh honaa hi thaaa......

"Say what?" she said, Mayank looked at her and shook his head, LOVE .........Is in da air

"It's just a faster round.." he said, Uff stifle your sense of humour Sammy

"and your going skate with us" put in Samrat, Nupur started shaking her head,
"Ditto as above"

"No Way!" Yeah the poor Lass can't take speed 🤣

okay sonii I analysed my fave part for u please enjoy reading as this part plays an Important role in my life the phase of meeting a true sweetheart who looted away the heart of my cousin

sorry if I got u senti or anything Its Just DEJA VU ntn else............ and it's JUST SPLENDID

EDIT: congo on 100 pages

Lekha

amazing update sonia, really liked the comfort shared by these 2

i loved it so much

wonderful update
continue soon
all me to ur pm list plz

lovvved the upd8 dear, 😃😃😃