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Vamonos

@Vamonos

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#651

WOW loved this bit esp d cafe scene wesomeeeeeeee!!!👏👏👏 very well written again 😳 just brought their feelings so well😳
God bless u!:)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#652

Hi its a super duper, mind blowing update.
the dream sequence was really very nice.
loveddddd a lot.
keep it up

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Posted: 15 years ago

#653

awesome once again yaar!

loved it!

mayur sooooooo cute!

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#654

hmmm finally they meet
n the dream wow i actually thought i miss3ed out on a part or so !!!
luv to see mayus redaction on nupz revealation ...
to update soon

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#655

oh amazing update sonia...........the beginning had me confused for a sec.........but such a nice start...........she is madly in love.......and i liked their comfort level, now i just hope he doesnt take a offence...........plz update soon.........if possible on weekend.........diwali gift.......lol

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Roma

@romiebee2002

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#656

"Of course it is.. When ever I close my eyes your there, you make life so much easier"😍 I love this line

It was a nice touching part, i'm liking the intro of Nimi to the plot & the picnic incorporation was good😃

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#657

wowwwwww soni another wonderful part as usual..the falling bit was just too.....i had a blast while reading it...u r a genius!!!!🤗🤗

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#658

As always Sonia

it was awsome

I really enjoyed the conversation between Mayur

and in the starting

where Nupur is dreaming about Mayank

it was so cute

I was like blushing

and

when Mayu save Nupur from falling

uff

that part killed me,

Now juct can't wait

Sonia

do continue soon

M wondering what Mayu's reaction will be after

Nupur told him where she was.

Ahh so excited.

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#659

It was really good :)
You were saying earlier that conversations r a problem with u while writing..but not at all soni.this is really very good!! gr8 stuff!! loved it :)

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#660

sonia....wow i read all the parts i missed out...reading the parts....gng more and more crazy dear....so nupz dream was ufffff waiting for more romance between them....so i shuld wait for ur next part till next wed huh...plz upd fast...better if u can then post one diwali spcl part....a suggestion from me...lolz i would like to read more...