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Priyanka

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Posted: 15 years ago

#661

hailaaaaa awesome part sonia.....
sooo romantic....
mayur convo was sooo sweet....oh iam soo excited....please update soon.pm me😳

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#662

awesome update soni...............superb............lovd d way u described places in shimla.....n thnxx a ton for d mayur scenes......kabse raah dekh rahi thi....aww....so nupsi ab sapne bhi dekhne lag gayi og mayu bein wid her....gr8.....ab mayu ka bhi similar sapna kab dikhaoogi jaani?😉

nywz truly truly rockin update.....plzzzzzzz continue soooooon

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#663

part 11

love the talk bet ween cj and nups.diya

but plz soon both mayu and nups meet

thx for the pm

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debby

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Posted: 15 years ago

#664

Hey Sonia!
I forgive u completely for being late with the update..err I mean for commenting late.. Oops. I mean I am sorry for commenting so late but the update totally made up for it.

First, what a beginning! "was it you there" "was it me there" was SO cute. Ultra, extremely cute! Then the whole part abt returning without going anywhere... Man, you have a thing for portraying emotions.

I love both Shimla and Mussoorie and have wonderful memories from both places, so loved the reference. And the whole part abt Nupur slipping and flicking snow and Mayank helping her out was really cute.

Now this Nimi.. err.. I kind of cant think nicely of anyone interrupting them, esp not at this time of the night. So Nimi better beware of me if she plans to make future appearances in this story.

But Sonia... fabulous update. Loved it completely!!

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#665

wow.....lovely updates!!........just loved all of them......awesome.....the story is going ahead very well.....

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#666

awesome part

thx for the pm

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: naina_mayur

yay!!!!!!!first one 2 comment!!!

great update as usual sonia!luved evry bit of bit...

ok..lemme start..

d dream was too gud..perfect timing..

nupur workin 4 mayanks dad?!😲 nw dt was sumthin...i mean hw is mayank gonna react wen he gets 2 knoe dis?he is already suspicious wid nupur-samrat-gunjan interaction..is he gonna b mad at sajan 4 not tellin him?

enjoyed d mayur fallin bit..lol..n d snow sure made it fun!

i lik nimi..is she gona play a major part further in d story???lol..luvd d way nupur guessd mayank-nimi story..n mayank justifyin their relation!!so r dey gona catch up wid each oders lives in d next part..??

sonia wen is mayur hard core romance gonna start??i remembr readin ur os..since dn ive been waitin 4 it 2 start here😉sorry 4 al d questions!he he..jus curious...

continue soon..

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-naina

Naww. Naina, im really glad u liked it..

to answer ur Q's, Nupur is technically working for Samrat but again its Shekhars company..

and Mayanks reaction and his reaction to SG knowing will all be releaved in the next part along with some MN flirtation/romance.. haha..

thanks soo much for the comment

Originally posted by: roshni_light
Its too good.I really enjoyed reading all the conversations.Do continue soon....

Hey Roshni!

thanks, im glad u liked it.. i really appreciate the comments

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Senny

sonia awesome update, nupsssssss dream seemed to be soo real man, excellent update.

The way you portrayed each and every emotion was soooooooo damn good, i totally loved and could connect to everyone and especially mayank and nupur so well.

Its only because you are a gem of a writer.

Keep it up. God bless.

Heyy Senny!

I'm really glad u liked the dream, i had been relluctant having it there or not but im glad it was good
:D

Thank you so much, comments from all you make it so worthwhile

Originally posted by: angelz
she told him!!!! man i wonder what his reaction will be?? continue soon sonia jaan <3 dia

Hey Dia!, yeh she told him.. reaction will be found out in the new part coming

Originally posted by: little_dragon
hey dear this was sweet. Nupz dreamin mayu was great o great. And dia finding out nupz dreamin made her wake up late was nice. And everybody on outing was nice. Mayur falling was bang on. And the caf scene was too cute mayur gettin to talk out a lot share many things. Wil nupz b able to tel mayu tat she works for his dad along wit sajan? Gosh mayu wil turn wild at her if he comes to know. Overall wonderful update. Thanks for pm continue soon. Plz show some mayur romance na.

Heyy Priya!!

im realllyy really glad u liked this part.. it was extra long for everyone! hahaha.. you'll see Nupz telling M things in the next part

thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: stingray
WOW!!! Multitalented person!!!! Makes siggies, writes FF!!! Thanks for the link!! Will read and comment this weekend! 😃

haha Sayeed!!

thanks.. and makes VM's too. 😛..

will wait for ur comment

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: aati1429
hey nice one and lovely see ayank took initiaTIVE TO SPEND TIME ALONE WITH NUPUR... REALLY LIKED THIS PART

heyy!

thanks so much, yeh he's trying to "patch" things up?

LOL.

thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: muneefah
well-written

Thanks Munee

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
fabulous updt!!
nupur told mayank where she lived n worked the last 9 months!
omg, i wonder how mayank will react!
it was so sweet how mayank was trying to save nupur, from falling, n then he took her to the little caf! that was sweeter!
loved this part di
continue soon

Heyy Mishu!

really? you thought so? nawwww..

M's reaction will be brought out next part

dw about that..

thans so much for ur comment

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: preethis

nice update dear... wonderful...

Thanks Preethi
:D

Originally posted by: shinz
hi.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally caught on.!!!!!
and hows it.......u bet.....its just the same!!!!
i still get that nostalagia feeling reading it.....i dunno why...??
its like these two ppl are sooo meant to b together but the miscommunication or rather the lack of communication, the inner inhibitions........everything is stopping them to be together..!!!!!!!
soni...i have been one of the ppl who have been persistance on romance between mayur in ur ff.........and i feel its creeping in.......slowly.......nt in we-are-in-love way but in a we-have-always-been-in-love way.......if u get what i mean lol!!!!!!!1
even i m confused like u...!!!!!!!!
waiting for ur next update
love,
palak aka shinz!

ShinziiI!!

YAY for catching on..hahaha..

nostalgia?? hmm.. even i wonder why.. LOL..

i guess communication is the key to a good relationship.. to me personally that is, i know that you've always wanted romance but with me, and with this FF.. its more about the bond.. the jucy lovey bits wil lcome soon.. but you need to understand the characters as people, you have to be able to relate to them.. you'll see love coz love is life..

haha

thanks soo much fo rthe comment jaani