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roshni_light

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Posted: 15 years ago

#641

Its too good.I really enjoyed reading all the conversations.Do continue soon....

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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#642

sonia awesome update, nupsssssss dream seemed to be soo real man, excellent update.

The way you portrayed each and every emotion was soooooooo damn good, i totally loved and could connect to everyone and especially mayank and nupur so well.

Its only because you are a gem of a writer.

Keep it up. God bless.

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Diana Lydia

@angelz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#643

she told him!!!! man i wonder what his reaction will be?? continue soon sonia jaan <3 dia

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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#644

hey dear this was sweet. Nupz dreamin mayu was great o great. And dia finding out nupz dreamin made her wake up late was nice. And everybody on outing was nice. Mayur falling was bang on. And the caf scene was too cute mayur gettin to talk out a lot share many things. Wil nupz b able to tel mayu tat she works for his dad along wit sajan? Gosh mayu wil turn wild at her if he comes to know. Overall wonderful update. Thanks for pm continue soon. Plz show some mayur romance na.

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King Aragorn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#645

WOW!!! Multitalented person!!!! Makes siggies, writes FF!!! Thanks for the link!! Will read and comment this weekend! 😃

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#646

hey nice one and lovely see ayank took initiaTIVE TO SPEND TIME ALONE WITH NUPUR... REALLY LIKED THIS PART

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#647

fabulous updt!!
nupur told mayank where she lived n worked the last 9 months!
omg, i wonder how mayank will react!
it was so sweet how mayank was trying to save nupur, from falling, n then he took her to the little caf! that was sweeter!
loved this part di
continue soon

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shinz

@shinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#648

hi.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
finally caught on.!!!!!
and hows it.......u bet.....its just the same!!!!
i still get that nostalagia feeling reading it.....i dunno why...??
its like these two ppl are sooo meant to b together but the miscommunication or rather the lack of communication, the inner inhibitions........everything is stopping them to be together..!!!!!!!
soni...i have been one of the ppl who have been persistance on romance between mayur in ur ff.........and i feel its creeping in.......slowly.......nt in we-are-in-love way but in a we-have-always-been-in-love way.......if u get what i mean lol!!!!!!!1
even i m confused like u...!!!!!!!!
waiting for ur next update
love,
palak aka shinz!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#649

loved the part.......simply awesome......why doesn't nupur tells him the truth?

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nupurvj23

@nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#650

amazingggg FF!!!! 😃 😃
just read all the chapters now...n i must say....it is GREAT!!!!!
absolutely loved itttttt....
plz plz plzzz pm me...
waitin for wednesday 😃!!!!