MayUr FF _A Brilliant Tragedy|Part 18\Page118|NEW - Page 2

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

😲oohhh miii goshh.... snuzzzyy!!! SINDHYYYYYYY!!!!

hww cummm i neeverr kneww u wrotee ffs???? uhhh i dunnoooooo.... 😆

pehlee awesummm vms...naww.. thanks

n nowww ffs.... wwoaaaaahhh yaar.. hatss off to u...awww..cho chweet.

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tu too cchaa gayee re!⭐️

seriouslyy....

okkkk cumnn to the ff....

it wuzz awessuum,mmmm....Thanks.

mayank... right hand of hitler???👏😆yep. i thought u all would like that.

and nupur ko kitna tang kiya us doggy ne!gawwdddd mayu is walking into serious trouble wid me!haha.. ill let him kno that.. he's run far far away from u now..

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aurr to aurr usnee benji swthrt ko hii bhi nai bola.... i kno bechara benji.. my sweety pie.

kitnaa ulluu insaan aur kitna meeaaaann hai ye mayankk...😕

and he rejecteddd nupurs pruposal like that!!!!

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maaaannnnn mayuu u shudd beware of mee....

or elsee....😡

newyzzz awesuummmmm one snuzyy...

do continue soonn swtyy n do pm mee....

love u loadsss

sindhya

Originally posted by: muneefah

hmm
Such a different name
Brilliant tregedy

AWWW
nyc part
Lyked it

Originally posted by: palak5

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Sonii..first of all.congrats on starting your FF.im going to be in the pm list..informing you from now as ive read the part and it was 😲 😲..!!!!Its simply superb!! Thanks soo much Palak, ur already in the PM list dw about it..

The name of the FF is verry offbeat..it has this completely different and new feel to it..A brilliant tragedy..Brilliant name i must say!!👍🏼 awwee... im glad u feel like that.. coz i did wanna try something a bit different to my normal "sad" FF's...

Ohk coming to the first part..OMG such an amazing start i must say..the intro to both the charecters was outstanding..the description being so well mixed with the dialogues..loved the way you've described the little details also....👏 👏 👏 👏.. thank you sooo much.. i hope u didn't feel i kept going on and on about one little thing..

Coming to the story..i think its a verry good idea..i mean its soo realistic..all this happens in real life with many couples..and im so looking forward to see how the ego-clashes would be..their love...how their career and work would come in between their relationship..omg..im already thinking about so many things that could happen!!😆..ohhh yaa i loved how you've included the other charecters also!!ohh god theres a real long list of what all i loved!!..😆i do and try make my FF's as realistic as possible.. even at times with a hint of bollywood songs and random dancing .. LOL.. it's good to get u thiking meaning u will come bak to read the next part.. haha...

Soni..amazing part.youre a talented writer and im sure you'll do realy well with the FF!!.youve left me wondering about whole lott of things..!!😉 😆...im so waiting for the next part..all the best..!! Thanks sooo much again.. next part will come soon.

Love you!!🤗Love u too.

xxSonia

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Great start sonia!! thanks Nidhi. 😳

You write really well yaar...I love how you pay attention to the details...the conversation...the routine...its looks very believable!! im glad u find it like that.. i try to make it as if you were standig between them

And the fact that you didn't show them already having a crush on each other was nice...! Mayank is sadu and even more so than in the show...hehe...great!! Thanks. :D im just sayig love if a far stretch for these 2 stil

Also...its really nice to read something other than the usual college fanfic...I'm really looking forward to reading more!!

Do update soon and PM me..!! will do PM u dw about that.

hmmm...i haven't seen "The Proposal" movie...so what's the basic storyline....?? I'm really curious...! haha like i said in my PM u gotta wait n c

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and you named it The Brilliant Tragedy...its such a contradictory name!! it really built up my interest...!naww thank you.. most thanks goes to the girl who came up with the song.. LOL..

thanks soo much again

xxSonia

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

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hey huni! it was fab start! loved it! plz do continue! add me in ur pm lists plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz