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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
awesome awesome awesome
meri jaan..rocking FF re !!

too cool ...jjst PERFECT INTRO !!

LOVED IT

Heyy Ruchi!!

Thanks sooooooo much

glad u liked it.

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur
so sweet,great mayank right hand hitler wow...
nupur assistant...go on yaar....but am waiting to know the story ahead..

title itself made feel something nice....whats the story line?i havent watched the movie...could you plz say that...

Heyy Jeni.

story line pretty much u;ll find out wen u read the next part..

thank you soo much for u comment and liking it.

: )

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: yourtwinkletoes
a nice concept.good to see you have included the side characters-annie,chacko,cj & even shukla.i would like to find your shukla as funny as the original one in the soap.but its absolutely upto you how you will shape up your characters.i want to read more of this ff.pls pm me your next update

Heyy Ankkita..

yes side characters.. how could i not add shukla?? LOL..ill try and make him funny when i can.. but a twist is coming in the next part.. so u'll see what i meant.

thank you fr ur comment..

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: falak01
woohoooo.....sonia ji..kamaal kar diyaa.... nawww.. Thanks soo much Falak Ji.,
it is simply superb...👏👏👏

*hats off*.. bows down.. to thank for such a sweet comment.

even it is the first part...but i think its going to be an interesting one...totally different from other ffs...

mayank is sadu in this ff also...😆😆i love my sadu mayu.. hehe and yehh it will b a bit different from other FF's especially the ones i have written

mindblowing work....👏👏

thanx 4 d pm...

waiting for the second part...😃😃

Thanks soo much hunny..
second part will come very soon..

*hugs* for commenting . 😳😳

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
awesome storyline yaar do continue sooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz .

Thanks soo much.

will cont very soon.

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: nikki028
wooooooooowwwwww sonia...........nw tht ws an amazzzzin start of a 'fresh new' mayur FF....BY GOD mayu kitnaaaaaaaaa sadu hai...n bechari nups se aur kitnaaaaa kaam karvaayega yeh.......i must say....lovd ur concept.....this ff surely has a realistic touch to a gr8 extent,,,,well done dear......👏....plzzz continue soon....n btw me toh hogina in ur pm list???????isliye formally bhi nahi keh rahi...😆

Heyy nikki babes.

: )

im soo happy everyone is saying it's fresh and very different.. u all don't knw how much that means..

i love my sadu mayank.. hehe.. i can't let him go.. 😆..

nupz and work. i kno she's like his slave but dw.. things wil change.

thank you soooo much for ur comment and YEs ur in the PM list already. hehe

xxSonia

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik
hey Sonia dear... tiz is 2 gud i tell u... u wrote it veryvery well.. nice FF 👏 👏 n very intresting.. luking 4wd 4 more .. 👍🏼

Heyy Sana..

thanks soo much..

nxt part will come soon.

xxSonia

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Tarandeep Kaur {Taran}

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

really nice work yaar....n different title....n yeah really wishing this FF is not any tragedy....well really enjoyed reading it....but plz next time more dialouges and not so many paragraphs....more dialougs would make ur FF perfect...just a suggestion...otherwise its AWESOME....n plz pm me whenever u update the next 1....👏

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

i've read ur dmg FFs and ur a great writer so im luking foward to this one
i like the name its well brilliant 😆😆
i can't wait to read ahead so plz plz continue soon!
and add me to ur pm list thanks

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: frndship_trust
really nice work yaar....n different title....n yeah really wishing this FF is not any tragedy....well really enjoyed reading it....but plz next time more dialouges and not so many paragraphs....more dialougs would make ur FF perfect...just a suggestion...otherwise its AWESOME....n plz pm me whenever u update the next 1....👏

Heyy Thanks soo much.

i'll try and put in as much dialogue as i can thanks for being honest tho. really do apprecite it.

will cont soon and have added u to the PM list

; )
xxSonia