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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part-2

cool part yaar...but why is nupur crying ??

usse mat rula yaar :(

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Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

part-3

too good adi

i loved the way u showed the change in nupur...its sad !

but well written

loved it

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prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hi adi.....just read all the parts.....nice going...loved it.....par yaar aisi kaun si baat hai jisne humari chulbuli nupur ko itna sad bana diya hai....jaldi batao plzzzz.....can't see her crying.....update soon....loved ur ff.....and plz pm me.....

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

part-2

cool part yaar...but why is nupur crying ??

usse mat rula yaar :(

well she will laugh again

soon

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
part-3
too good adi

i loved the way u showed the change in nupur...its sad !

but well written

loved it

thx yaar

you like it

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal
hi adi.....just read all the parts.....nice going...loved it.....par yaar aisi kaun si baat hai jisne humari chulbuli nupur ko itna sad bana diya hai....jaldi batao plzzzz.....can't see her crying.....update soon....loved ur ff.....and plz pm me.....

ya i will surely pm you

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

awesome . update next part soon plezzzzz

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

hey adi its getting interesting.........

loved the cool convo between friends........

hope to see more of such masti.......

please make nupur normal soon.....want to see her smiling again.....

I think mayu will make nups normal......anyways waiting for your next part......

thanksssss a lot for your PM........😊

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: pinky_5

hey adi its getting interesting.........
loved the cool convo between friends........
hope to see more of such masti.......

please make nupur normal soon.....want to see her smiling again.....

I think mayu will make nups normal......anyways waiting for your next part......

thanksssss a lot for your PM........😊

yes pinkey i soon make everything ok

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

my life
part-4
after chattering they all leave their next class
so m,n,and u r going
m said to nupur
m-tum kahi first day hai college ka isliye worried ho
dont worry tumhare itne friend hai.hum sab ke hote hue tumhe worry karne ke jarurat nahi hai
n-thx, nahi aise kuch nahi hai
(thinks nupur bhool ja sab kuch tune aapne aap se wadda kiya hai control yourself nahi to sab ko pata lag

jayga) and she smile
m-aapki smile itne achi hai aap smile kije hamesha
u- ha karni chyia tum roz brush jo karte hoon to teeth chupane ke kya jarurt hai
both m,n shout uday!!!!!!!!
u- im just joking
they go to class
miss aaha come in the class
AA-guys well mein aap sab ko photograph per assignement de rahi hoonin which u want to show indian

culutre,u choose ur partner on your choice.or this will start in two days.so best of lucj to all of u.
u-mar gaye yaar yeh miss aaha to aah he nikal dete hai
pooja-uday kya tum mere partner banoge?
u-sure
n- bhai phir mein
m-main hoo na
you will join me.
nupur doesnt say anything ,she will walk from there, nupur goes to sam
n-vo muje project .kya maynk
s-nupur dont worry he is nice guy,yaar sabhi ek jasse nahi hote.you can trust him
n-par
s-tu muje par trust karte hai
n-ha
s-to bus main maynk par trust karta hoon
go with him
maynk hear all this and feel sad but thought we meet first day she will be not comfort with me bnut why

she is so afriad.and thinking this he goes from there.
nupur see him and call him
n-vo kya hum saath project kar sakte hai
m-why not
to hum kal se start karte hai
and he was to go when sam call him
s-kaha ja rahay ho
m-ghar
s-aabhi nahi hum sab aaj beach ja rahay hai
m-par
s-tu ja raha hai
n-ha maynk chalo
m-ok
then they all went to beach
they all g, d, u ,b,s making sand castle
gunjan first make sam come there and said to yeh mera or tumhara ghar hai
g-ha
s-kya kaha abhi tumne
g-nahi vo main
d-guys kya kar rahe ho cholo vo dekho golgappe wala chalo golgappe kate hai
on the other side
nupur standing near the water and she remember how she ,her father and gunjan play in water she

remember some moment and she start crying suddenly some pat her shoulder she think it will sam so she

hugged him tight and start crying she said
"i will kill him i was the killer .i kill papa"
suddenly she relize that it is not sam it is maynk
maynk feel sad to see her crying she took again her into her arms and console her
but there is another person who is watchinmg this and feel anger built inside him and he want to kill the

person who hugged nupur
n-nupur come her sense and say sorry to them
m-it s ok
lets go sam bula raha hai
they go their on golgappa staal
and there is eating competion all boys one side and girls other
first the compition
dia and sam
dia will eat 25 golgappa and sam eat 28 he win
but dia said gunjan will beat you in this and
then gunjan eat 38 golgappa and sam will lost
they all cheer up but then sam said now maynk and nupur will do
and then m and n
dia said mayu tum haar joge
s-nahi mayu kabhi nahi harta he will win
n- morne express bnhi kabhi nahi harte
then nupur eat 50 golgappa and mayu eat 49
and n win she will laugh alot s-oh yaar tu haar gaya vo bhi ek ladki se
m-thought pata nahi kyo muje harna acha lag raha hai
other side the same person thought "nupur ab tum muje mil gayi ho aab tum kahin nahi ja sakti or koi muje

tumse alag nahi kar sakta"
and the parson goes from there
m-pata nahi kyo par nupur mein tumhari sadness ko door karna chta hoon.bus mein hamesha tumhe haste

hue dekhna chata hoon
suddenly dia and sam argu on something and run on the beach and they all went in the water and spread

water on everybody maynk see nups out from there he drag her in the water and played with her
and they all start enjoy
when they were returning nupur sandle tripped and she fall but mayu caught her and lost his balance and

he is lying over nupur and they share eye cconntect.
that all for now
friends if u like it then plz comment and critism is also welcomed plz comment😊

Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago