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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

i lik it pm me

bt oe small suggestion...tes break lines make it diff to read...so please try to write thm as single lines wid out breaks

hey yaar thx
for the suggestion so in next part you dont hav this complain
thx i will pm you when update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

okkkiizzzzz.... adi nice try.... doo continue...

n do pm me...
luv ya

thx cindy
i ll pm u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

hey adi!!!!!.....i loved ure idea .....cant wait fr d nxt prt.....plz pm me wen u continue......
tnx
luv
ananya

thx anya yaar
ill pm u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was nice yaar...... plzzzzzzz continue soon....... n plzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hay friends thx for ur comment
here is the pm list
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cool.sindhya
pinkey-5
kanky
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bharti aram
mayank-nupur fan
ananya-s
preethis
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Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
here is the second part if any mistake plz tell me yaar
or plz gave suggestion also
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
" part -2"
this is the second part hope u like it
now present day we shifted to bombay. i closed my diary which im reading or which brouht back all the pain of my life on my eyes
and i broke down and start cry.
suddenly i hear door knock ,i get up and wash my face so nobody can see that im crying.i saw samarat come.
S- hey t kya kar rahi hai college nahi janna kya .aaj college ka pahla din hai or tu aaj hee late hona chate hai.then he see her eyes, her eyes become red becoz of crying.tu ro rahi thi
N-nahi ,mein kyon roege ,roa mere dusman
S-tu yeh baato se muje mat bana samaje teri in baato mein sab phas sakte hai lakin mein nahi.baata kya baat hai
then he relaize some thing and he put his hand on nups shoulder.
tu vahi purani baat soch rahi hai kya ,jo hua use bhool ja ,agar tu vo sab nahi bhoolge to life mein kasse aage badd nahi payge
plz yaar for god sake bhool ja.plz nupur mein janta hoon jo hua galat hua par kya us ek baat ke liiya tu sab ko bhool jayge sab ko takleef dagi
plz yaar.
nupur hugs samrt and start crying loudly
N- yeh sab mere saath he kyo hua , mein jab vo sab sochte hoon to muje khud se nafrat hoti hai,mein kisika kya bura kiya tha
why, why ths happen to me.
dia and gunjan shouted-samrt or nupur agar aaj college jaane ka man ho to neec aa jao hum kitni der se wait kar rahay hai
hum pata hai ke tum kuch nauhty karne ke soch rahay ho par let do this after the college .plz yaar we dont want to be late.
come on
S-nupur to khud ko kyo saja de rahi jab ke teri koi mistake nahi hai,why are u blame your self
why ?
or agar tu aisa karge to gunjan ko sab pata lag jayga.
or phir gunjan par kya bitagi plz nupur bhool ja
N-samart im sorry mein bhool gayi thi ke ab gunjan ko mere saath kr\e bahut jarraut hai
papa ke death ke baad vo bhi chup rahte hai.
mein sirf apni dard ko dekh rahi hoon. nahi mein nahi roaugi i hav to become strong. samart kya tum hamesh mera or dunjan ka saath doge
S-nupur kya tuje ye kahne ke jarurat hai. tere gunjan or dia ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.
N-thx ,tum hamesa mere saath hote ho,agar tum na hote to shayd mein aaj jinda nahi hoti
S- ek chanta padega aab tuje samje ye thx kaha se aa gaya aapni friendship mein or aage se us baat ke bare mein kabhi baat nahi karge. chal chalte hai varna vo dono mata danda laker aa jayge.
down in the hall
dia ,uday and gunjan waiting for them
dia- so agar aapka yeh vartalap khatam ho gaya ho to college chale ya phir hamere dono ladkoo senapati ko abhi or ladi ke tayari karne hai
S-hey aay to dia kaali mata ka roop liya hua hai
D-mein kitni baar kaha hai ke muje kaali mata mat kaha kar ,ruko tum i will beat you
dodo give him a stick to beat sammy
dia run after sammy with stick .and beat him
S-sorry mata ji phir se nahi kahuga.now chale college ke liye derr nahi ho rahi hai ab.
after some time the mouse cat fight finish and they all go for college
N-i promise sammy that i will not cry so i hav to be strong for my lovely family if the truth come then all will shatered
and also hurt.now from today i will start my life with new thouht yess. for my family
and all go for college.
😊
here is the second part
Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey adi it was very good.......

sad for nupur.....why is she crying?????hope the suspense gets over sooon.....
liked the caring nature of sam....
keep it up 👍🏼
thankssss for the PM.......😊
Edited by pinky_5 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
very nice huni! plz pm me when u update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh very nice yaar....... but why is nups crying......cant c her sad......... luv sammy.....he is soooooo carying..... thanks 4 d pm yaar..... n plzzz continue soon.....

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