Tanha Dil-AR Mini FF [Last Part pg 82) 17/09/09 - Page 63

Hey..lovely update dear....very touching part...enjoyed reading it...hope u start another FF soon...thanx 4 the pm..

heyyy dear,
awsome part
thanks for pM.


love
Riddss

hey rucha

It was awesome

*edited*

Wola.... That was superb...!! It's been an amazing experience throughout...!! Thanks a lot Rucha...!! I'm going to miss it terribly ...!! The part was nice and I liked it though... but I'm seriously not happy with this early ending... :( Ya toh iske compensation mein ek nayi fic chahiye.... or resume it up!!

Please... I just loved more than all your FF's... It was better than everything, It was really mind-freaking stuff!! Just awesome... Could not imagine how would I handle it... but genuinely supercool Fic... Amazing and extremely different content... I just loved the way you used to write this.... That was worth appreciating .. and you totally deserve this...!! 👏 👏 👏

You are the most talented write I've seen .... Better than everyone..!!
Simply adorable ..
😭 😭 😭
but it's ok...!!

hizz hru
wow yr it was osum 👏
lovely part ]
thnkz for pm
love princess

Hey
Im soooo Sorry...
I couldnt comment earlier...
Overall, A very very very cute update....
Really liked it....
But somehow, I had this feeling like you just wanted to get over with writing this FF...
I mean the entire last part was written in such a fast forward with minute descriptions....
Im not saying it was bad...
It was certainly a treat to read but you could have broken it into alot more parts trying to express every ounce of every scene...
U had a complete chance of adding alot more twists in the future of this story like Ahana getting a lil jealous of the little one as she saw Ridhima taking care of every little thing about Aashna and then Armaan making her understand and Ridhima giving her an explanation...
Ridhima could have some visa problem due to which all of them would have to go to India...
Then confront the gang... I mean Armaan has a right to be angry with them but Ridhima doesnt... They were there for her when she was in pain, rite?
Shashank's health declining or Shashank's death or something...
If I was in your place, I wouldnt have ended this FF...
A LOT can happen...
But overall, truly, this FF was a masterpiece...
I would rank this first compared to all your other FFs....
Keep going....
All the Best!
😊

P.S.-Again, honest opinions... Plz dont mind! 😊

my god it z the end yar ill b missing this ff ! luved dpart!!!!!!!