Tanha Dil-AR Mini FF [Last Part pg 82) 17/09/09

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Shravya1

@Shravya1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#641

Excellent job, again!! When I saw "last part", I was like "oh no" coz I really didn't want u to end it soon....It was such a great story but I understand that u didn't want to drag it / make it similar to ur other FFs.

AR's marriage and honeymoon was so romantic!! Aahana is such a cutie!!! U really have ur way of writing abt kids!!

A sister for Aahana, just like she asked for!! So cute!! Loved the last bit, where Rids kiss both her daughters, such a sweet moment ....

This is my favourite fanfic!! I'm really going to miss waiting for ur updates!! (I guess I will just read it over and over again)

You have such amazing talent!! Please keep writing whenever possible.....

Please do start another one soon!!! Can you please PM me when u do? thanks.

Edited by Lilymay - 16 years ago

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Swaminathan

@swamii92

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#642

SORRY for the late comment rucha really busy with studies right now.............anyways the part was awesome just loved it .............thnx for the pm.......................n plssssss start onr more ff of urs ...............koi nai take ur time for the concept n all but don stop writing

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#643

hey rucha...

congo on completing one more FF...about the last part well now it's come to an end that's the only sad part..but i hope you'll start something new soon..about the update..it was beautifully written...finally everything is settled..well that's bound to happen after all it's the last part..😆..loved all the cute moments between AR and even sia got married but the best was AR having a new member in the family that too a daughter...
overall a lovely ending to a wondeful FF...

hoping to see you soon with a new FF..but write if you have time..studies are more important..

thanks for the pm...

loads of love...

Caramel...

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#644

Hi di!!

I haven't ever replied thoroughly on this FF but yeah, I have to, now...

It was a really beatuiful story, woven with cute characters and intense emotions....

Loved the way Aahana reacted differentlly to different situations...how Armaan and Riddhima met finally, and yes, little Ashi as well...!

The emotional quotient in ur FF's appeals people, who connect with the fic..!

Thanks a lott for sharing such a wonderful story with all of us..!

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angel

@-Love.is.You-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#645

yeh lo jii fir se asusual late ho gaye..

anyways aww rucha dii

the part was totally awesome

wonderafully written....

everything was just perfect....

good that armaan dint forgive his old frends they deserved it...

haha angel is a sweeeet heart aww love her shoo much...

awww another angel woww that was more than perfect..

the only sad part was that the fic ended...

but koi gal nahi waiting for u to start a new fic

all i can say is that PERFECT STORY WITH A PERFECT ENDING OF PERFECT COUPLE WRITTEN BY A PERFECT WRITER

LOVE U

pooja

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#646

excuse me?

did u just call the part, kaam chalou types?

then i was sorry to say dat ur abosolutely wrong!!
this was a perfect ending what it could be!
i just luv dis ff so much..!
y did u end it haan?

at least public request pe u should continue it na?

continue...! plzzz.!
continue, what happens after ashi..ashna!

lol..!
choo-chweet!

i luved it so much..

right from AR getting married in the beginning..and now dere second daughter....!
angel is so happy to get a sis..!
and both of dem r so cute..!

omg....!!!

this ff...is just mindblowing..each and every expression..!
everything is just out of the world..!
i cn't explain how happy i feel when i read dis ff....!
unknowingly, the cuteness of shona, the sensibility of riddhima and d naughtiness of armaan..bring life to dis ff....and make me smile!
gang realizzation was nice..!
it had to end dat way..

ofcourse, AR cn't forgive dem..

i liked the way u portrayed dis realistic part...!
gr8 job done!
last but not the least...!

*standing ovation*

though, i have a lot more to say..

but i would prefer to keep mum....

coz Sometimes, silence speaks volumes! lol..and i m still waiting for ur comments on my ff rucha!
come back soon honey!

i miss u..

and b/w when r u starting ur new ff?

luv u for writing dis...!

thnx!

*hugs*

-Sanjana

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aarora

@aarora

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#647

Aww last part..seriously will miss this FF of urs..now about the update..loved it..but somewhere felt it was going in fast forward more..but beautifully written..all emotions beautifully portrayed..Aahana is truly Armaan's daughter..such a naughty child..enter her parents room without knocking even n AR they dont know to lock their room..lol..loved the family moments..but somewhere thought armaan will forgive his friends..but may be he is right at his place..shashank toh doesn't deserve forgiveness after his confrontation with riddhima..n yeah their could have been insecurities for Aahana here after their second child according to the story but u have already used the situation..so no offenses..At the end just want say..truly it was AWESOME update..LOVELY.. waiting for more FFs from u..write a new one soon..
thanks for PM always..
love ya..

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#648

hey rucha wow yaar congratz for completing anothr ff yaar super cool it ws it ws seriously dammmm gud re lol!hehehe ahana masti ar naughtiness nd friends also now knw the truth but no ridz also said tht she wants to live wth armaan wth him nd her cute family lvd it yaar the way showd it ws brilliant this was the perfect ending nothing could be better than this yaar starting arridz marriage to their second daughtr wowwwwwwwwwwwww lvd it..........sooooooooo much potray their reltionship gud vryyyy well dun.........the cuteness of her shona awwwwwwww naughtiness of armaan ek mauka nahi chodta nd ahana been a gud girl nd gang realization nd thy didn't forgv thm gud thy diservd it i am gonna miss it nd finally start wth a new ff soooooon huh...........
thnku soooo much for wonderfull story brilliant story keep writing this way hehehe
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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riddhima1

@riddhima1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#649

hey rucha.....awesome part dear👏
a perfect epilogue it is

so sad tat this ff had ended
luvd this ff so much😭😳
finally gang realised their mistake
luvd AR moments
woww AR has another baby girl...so sweet
thx for the pm
cont soon