Tanha Dil-AR Mini FF [Last Part pg 82) 17/09/09

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Ria

@Rockstar_ria

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#601

Hey rucha....

Aesome part yaar.....

Loved it....loved their litlle family moments.....the were so cutely described....

And aahana was the cutest in the part....she was such a little angel.....love her sooooooo muuuuuuuccccccchhhhhhhh..............muah muah muah..........

Am really happy that AR got married.....n happy For sia n AJ too.....

Sia was very sweet when she teased riddhima for that dress....she was toooo gooooood......

Well.....i would just like to say that the part was FANTASTIC.....the PERFECT ending......

Even i could see the happiness in the lil family's eyes....you really portray their feelings greatly.......

Love you Rucha.....

Will surely wait for you to start an another ff just sweet as this.....

And once again......SUPERB....FANTASTIC....MINDBLOWING.....part.........muah....muah.....muah.....

Take care.....

*Hugs n Kisses*......

Love

Ria

Edited by ria020594 - 16 years ago

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simi

@searchoffriends

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#602

hey rucha 👏 perfect ending , that what i can say it , wow great

i loved it soo much , each and every part of this was great , i m feeling really sad that it ended up , but as we say all good thinks comes to an end one day , soo its ok ,😕

well as per the part, it was great , oh i loved ar and there cute little family ,

and armaan and riddhima happy being there alone , no reunion with the old gang , ohh i was expecting that shashank would realise his mistake and would ask for the forgiveness and all, but still after that too the part was great loved it a lot

congratualation for a successful ending of your ff sweety 👏 you were great in this ff , all parts of this ff were great , and i didn't found a single part of this ff as 'kaam chalau' , soo just be happy now

loved the ff a lot , please try and start with a new concept soon , would love to read more ff from you , well as per this ff , hope to read an epilouge , i hope you r planning to write that ,

please doo write an epilouge soon , will be waiting for that

till then take care and thanks for the pm

lots of love

simi

Edited by simi2 - 16 years ago

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kiranminhas

@kiranminhas

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#603

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~Edited~......

rucha a perfect ending........superb......👏
bt i really miss dis ff as it ws really close 2 my heart.......😭😭..
it ws nt at all kaam chalau......itna acha to likha sb to fir yeh sb kyu kaha tha.....
finally AR getting married n their lil family completed wid another angel.......
a complete happy family.......
evry emotion ws vry well described....i luvd each n evry bit of it......
plzzzz jaldi se ek aur achi se ff ise compensate krne k lie strt kro......
ll b w8in......
really luv dis ff......
thnx a lot 4 d pm.....

luv ya
kiran.......

Edited by kiranminhas - 16 years ago

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#604

wow finally thet got married

it was an lovely part

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#605

Excellent FF. Loved it. Awaiting the next one.....

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#606

hey rucha........

ur insulting ur readers by saying the part was kaam chalu........

let us decide ............ its our job.... u cant suspend us from it........

loved the part.......... the lil family was simply sweet, naughty ans spicy... all ingreditents... to make it erfect....

congratulations for completing another story....

its simply difficult to say how much i hav enjoyed through each situstion... lines and words.

i think it cant get any better....

but if u think it was not upto mark.. then go ahead and write another.. i cud love that but at ur own sweet time..

thanks for the pm

bye

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@ammy-ridz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#607

hey ...Amazing part and a wonderful end to the ff.

It was an awesome ff for sure.

It's sad that it has ended...but I know all good things do come to an end.Hope to see u with the new one if not now then maybe after a short while.

Will love to read them.

Thanxx and👏👏👏

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#608

Rucha thanks honey .this ff is near to my heart and always remain there .

In every manner this is superb .yaar itni to acchi thi phir ye sab kyun kaha.oyye naam Aashi ki agha kuch aur rakh na Aashna hi kar de.waise u can drag this .Re union of friends and all that stuff but i think its preferable for us to get new one .

U know u told me that u have concept in mind regarding memory loss of Armaan and he forget all except her name.

And now i want that should start before i really start shouting at my KUCHU.

YES i m threatening u .Rok sako to rok lo.

The way u look into my eyes, it scares me,

The way u say I Luv U, it scares me,

The way u know just what to say, it scares me,

The ways u scare me I luv it.

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kshanikaa

@kshanikaa

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#609

Seems like its for d first time when am commenting so soon.....😆
But a totally worthwhile part.....
Superbly written....perfect ending in all manners....deserves the claps....👏 👏 👏
a prisoner for life under the supervision of this romantic jailor..
It was true in her case that broken ties can be mended but still a Knot in between remains alive..
well-written lines....
And aahana was acting as a detective.....Lol....😆............. cute.....
Finally AR got married and their family was completed with another angel...
And aahana-aashna sounds really pretty......👍🏼

Not at all a kaam chalau part....loved it....
Thanks for d pm.....Congo on succesful completion of this ff, Rucha....
Hope to see another coming soon from ur side...