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Posted: 15 years ago
Mayank's POV


Don't look at her-
Just don't look at her-
Mayank fought the inner turmoil,feeling a sense of anticipation mixed with guilt.He was trying to find a spot to fix his eyes on when Diya spoke.
"You could have changed Mayank-You look like you are in a board meeting or something."
He barely heard her.He needed to keep his focus up- Don't look- Its dangerous.
But even as he fought he knew it was easier said than done-
"There must be something wrong with you- We cant be sharing the same genes- Where you mixed up in the hospital by my chance?"
He scowled,rolling his eyes.My retarded sister Diya.
And then she laughed- the tinkling sound he had so missed –
Immediately as though by some magnetic pull his eyes found her and all thoughts rushed out.She was dressed in a blood red saree- with a gold pendant resting on her neck.Her soft pink skin was just visible around her neck as that gave way to her full lips.Her lips were painted a dark red and it was beautiful.He had difficulty making his eyes move up- The lips captivated his focus.They were so beautiful and inviting.
He heard Diya say something but his brain had stopped working.He saw her lips part and his heart speeded-They looked so soft- would they feel the same?
Wrenching his mind with a huge effort he looked up- Her skin was flushed with a pretty blush and her eyes were downcast.Gulping hard he stared at her hair let open –He wish he knew how it would smell.
Someone waved a hand infront of him.
"Are you even listening to what I am saying?" said a familiar voice.
Sense returned and with that a desire to slap himself.What was he doing here- He was not here to stare at Nupur- He was here to- Good question – why was he here?
"Of course not.Who with any sense ever listens to you anyway D'doll?"he said trying to inject normalcy.
There again- she laughed and once again the sound made his eyes turn to her lips.
"Beautiful"he said
"What?"came a hurried question.
He cursed himself and coloured with embarrassment as he saw Diya look at him intently.
"You look beautiful D'doll.All grown up-"he said.
Diya smiled in her special way.
"You still have some sense Mayank Sharma- sometimes I think maybe you could be good enough to called my brother."
She looked between them.
"And why are you not speaking to each other-Or am I supposed to be the only one talking-"
He shook his head and smiled at Nupur.
"Hi.."
She smiled back tentatively.
"Hello- We would be leaving for the venue as soon as all our relatives get here-" she said nervously- Her fingers worked on her bangles-"Please make yourself comfortable- I need to get to Gunjan-And I will give you the juices- soon-"
"Nonsense-"called Diya."We can serve ourselves"
Mayank nodded.
"Yes we can.You spend time with Gunjan."
She nodded shyly and then lifted her eyes to smile at him.
"Thanks for coming."
He felt a strange exhilaration- Like someone had handed him the newest bestseller on the stand-or that he had finally gotten the contract for the housing society he so craved-and all she did was smile at her.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Gunjan's Nervousness was right at her place

but the way she was consoled was very nice
Diya too was nice and MAYANK wow
kahi pe nigahe kahi pe nishna
He is really too nice ,
The way you potray nupur's beauy was too nice dear
Thanks for the PM -but i reserved before the PM only 😉😉😉😉😉
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
so gunjan was nervous....well i was feeling sad abt her....then her oath to make her marriage work made me soooo happy!

Awwwwwwwwww...........i just LOVED dia and nupur moment....it was truly amazing....i read it more than 5 times! just simple mind blowing!

And the mayur part was yet more amazing......i mean how do u manage to steal my heart with ur updates? they are tantalizing..beautiful....

LOVED the excellent work!

Do update soon....

This update was worth the wait....

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update....
loved the mayur part
the lips thing amused me.....
gunjans thots were well written too
update soon plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow Neha,
It was lovely
I loved dia- nupur bonding
Thats amazing, a sisterly bond
Then my mayank,
His pov was wonderful.
Hope he makes a right decision.
Continue soon

I love to read this in star forum, dn know why, bcoz i started reading it there may be.

I had askd u for Dreams to dwell upon.. That ws the second ff i started reading in cv thread, first was this nd mayur ff in story forum style.

Try to update that too.
I still cant forget it...

You are a wonderful writer...
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh that was a fantabulous update! Loved it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
love the update!!!!!!!!! thanks for long one this time!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous ff......plssss add me to ur pm list......update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update Neha... thanks for giving fabulous MN part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey neha........

well d prts were too gud!!!!
D Nups-dia moment was too sweet!!
nd mayu.......I found it slightly amusing!
Gunji's prt was d best!:)
plz cont soon this time:)

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