Where did I go wrong?KaSh Mini - COMPLETE - Page 13

woooow awesome part really good plss continue soon

hey
i soo hate rids mom in law god doesnt she get it were living in the 21st century ( how old fashionded who gets up at 5 in the moring for a silly man)
and oh how cute they have a kid ( im sure she will bring them together )
thanks for the pm
Love Sanam

hey steffi!!!!!!

thanks Steff!! It was awesomee....!!!!!! 😃 i love reading what you write.

and one small request to you...please please update your other FF soon too! I've grown kinda attached to it since it was the first one I read and now I just can't wait for you to continue!

keep up the good work 👏

Hey Steff Ji ~!
Realli An Aweso0o0me Update ~!
Simple 'MAZA AA GAYA' ~!

First Chapter Is So00o Gud ~! I Wonder What's Next !~
Update S00on Coz I Am Realli Lo0o0ving Ur FF Veryyyy Muchh ~!

Great Writing Skills ~! !~
And Thnx For The Reply Ji !~

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The Best Part Was :

"Sir, would you like some tea or coffee?" The heavily perfumed airhostess questioned Armaan.

'I'll have coffee"

As she poured the coffee, "No I won't have coffee" Armaan said suddenly, "ok sir, tea then?"

"No, do you know why?" Armaan asked, while the airhostess stared blankly, "coz I am going back to my wife, who makes the best coffee you never tasted" he said proudly as if he won some national level competition. The airhostess smiled, "good luck sir" she said and walked away

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U Wrote It so0 Well That I Imagined The Whole Situation !~

Ko0o0l Work !~

Loads OF Care !~

-Walo

Hi steff,

hey. gr8 part.

Sigh...such tender moments you 've written up in Rid'z diary 😳

ohh steffi...

i thought to post as reserved first but wen i start reading...i go on till part 1 cums to an end...

i know ridzi was having somehardships living wid mother-in-law wgo never understands her!!

Armaan loves ridzi at that extent that he gave full announcement to airplane that ridzi makes best coffee in the world!!

i hope riddhima will wait for armaan before giving thier child!!!

Armaan's feelings was put brilliantly by u dear....

but m still a lil confusing that armaan was reading a diary..that waspast & now the things happenening is present....am i rite???

but the whole thing has been portrayed very nicely & meriticulously!!!

*hugs* to u dear!!!

update it next sunday!!!

i'll be waitin.....

muaaaaaaaahhhhh

Lots of Love & Care
Divya😊

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Edit:

Hey Steffi!
gr8 part!👏
As i mentioned earlier, the concept is really interesting and what adds on to it all is the narration of past through Ridhima's diary entries. Love the way ur unfolding it slowly and yet with hints of Armaan's mom being the villain here😡
She seems to have had quite a hold on Armaan.
Eagerly waiting for AR to meet!😊

Love
Smriti