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BaniGupta thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi
Nice part
Hope Armaan will able to find riddhima soon
Bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thats an awesome part....hope armaan meets ridz soon....loved it.... u r seriously a very gud writer👍🏼....would love 2 read more....cont soooon n do pm me...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow! superb update!!
i am in luv wid dis ff.....a treat for all of us!!
aww....armaan read her diary...he is missing her....and she wrote each and every line for what had happened dat day....!! aww....choo-chweet!
i wonder y she got married just at 19?
and den armaan is coming back..his conversation wid dat lady on the flight.....very well written!!!
and den ridz-neha convo..was too gud!
so riddhima wants to pursue her studies...and have a graduation..ofcourse! coz she is still only 22.....and ahana is her daughter, and she wants her aunt(Neha) and adi to adopt her....but y?? maybe becoz armaan isn't dere wid her, and she is too young to handle her child and all.....
and at the end of dere convo....it was so emotional!! aww...she doesn't have any other choice....but y is it so??
and den riddhima's convo wid adi....aww..he still believe dat armaan will come back....!!
he is back...but y didn't he meet riddhima yet??
waiting for dem to meet each other....!
and to know what had actually happened in the past!!
plzz update soon!
i am dying to read the next one....!!
luv ya
-Sanjana
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Posted: 16 years ago
Steff Splendid job .U have ability to feel some one.U can peep in heart of others . I think this is God gifted .
God bless u .
Ridz's diary was nicely written .Every word was so true and full of emotions and enough to shake his love.
May he soon get her back with Aahna.
But why Ridzi wanna give her to some one else .I know its hard for her to manage but worse to live without her love as well as blood both.
one reason u mentioned was Aahna's resemblance .but that can't be solid reason.
plz let them meet soon.

If we might have a second chance
To live the day's once more,
And rectify mistakes we've made
To even up the score.

If we might have a second chance
to use the knowledge gained,
Perhaps we might become at last
As fine as God ordained.

But though we can't retrace our steps,
However stands the score,
Tomorrow brings another chance
For us to try once more.

thanks for pm
love
ritu

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part steffu 👏
hope armaan find riddhima soon 😳
updated soon 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohk half of my doubts got erased...dis part was good...i really empathise wid ridzi in dat adoptation matter... Temporary single undergraduate mother.... I can understand how difficult is it to take dis decision... Jus hope ammy is able to convince her...its ok if u keep dis mini...no need to unnecessary drag da plot... Update soon babes... Hugs
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Steff..
Lol..thanx a lot for adding me like right "THEN"..!!
whoa...the swirl of emotions make me go dizzy girl..!! stop it..!! anger, happiness,sadness,guilt..all in one go..!! STOP i say..!! 😆
Oh man..I hate her..I totally do..she does not deserve Armaan as a son, DIE i say! GO DIE Lady..!! u trouble yer daughter-in-Law truble comes back tuh yah..!! hmph!
Bravo girl..!! can you hear people clapping? You are officially in my list of Personal favourites now..right there with jeffery archer and Stephenie Meyer and J.K Rowling..!!
Where did I go Wrong..all i can say is..no wait..cant say anything good enuff..!! Brill..!!!!!!
Oh Oh I hope Ridhimma waits..!! Dont let ur baby get adopted girl..!! hez cumin for you..!! *sigh*
But yayie for graduation..!! I wonder why did she marry at 19 ? I hope its not because of HER..!! Evil sadistic Witch 🐷
Okay..see?? Im so lost in your story..i have absolutely no idea what am i blabbering on about..Were this Lady real..I would be in Jail..!! hmph!! she pisses me off..!!
Now you update fast girlie..or else..ahh well naddin I can do can I? U'v got me Way too engrossed in yur story..I'd wait for ages even for you tu continue..but dont u take advantage..!!! 😆
Tc
Lou yah Loads
*huggies*
Edited by lovejuhi91 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey steff,
The part was really nice, I loved it.
So Armaan is going back to his love.
I hope she'll agree.
I so want to know what happened that caused ridhima to leave him.
I truly hope they'll be together soon.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago

hmm...atleast ridz chucked her plans of lettin the adoptation be a success....:) luking fwd to wat armaan does to woo her lady love....

nice upd! :)

cheers!

PS: its nijaL
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Posted: 16 years ago
👍🏼👏😎
SWEETHEART!!! U MADE MY DAY!!!!!☺️❤️
if i hdnt read ur PM nw, i vudnt hv read it early this morning...THANX A TON FOR THAT PM!!!!😍

n abt this part...
i lovd it ven t said he promised himself that he vud bring bac those days again😳😍...without mom-in-law😆😆😆

for th first tym, i dun want AR to meet soon...😛may b coz im more eager to know WAT EXACTLY HAPPENED B/W em N DEN know 'WHO WENT WRONG, n VER?"😃😉
n once they get bac to each other...I DUN WANT THEM TO GT SPRTTD FOREVER!!!!okie????(shud plead u for that..😉🤣)

it was really a Fantabulous part... n hey.. WHO WAS THAT LADY IN TH FLIGHT???? 🤔 (i'm thinkin a lot..😛)

k den, vil cmmnt mor l8r, coz nw, I GTG TO COLLEGE!!!! its tym..
buh-bye...
vil cia in th eve...😊
loads of ❤️
anjaly😳
Edited by anjaly07 - 16 years ago

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