FF || Behka Behka (part 6, page 19) - Page 11

Originally posted by: blushpink13

hey Radz! Hey! Iqra right?

i know you since kis desh days...lol..when i was a crazzy there...not anymore..*sigh*

anyways your FF is just splendid! i just read 2 parts (will read others later)

everything is so perfect! nupur-benji-samrat-gunjan woww an amazing circle of friends! Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest. 😃

Mayank the famous business man!! and CJ_Uday as a couple!! usually people show usay as stupid in their FFs too...but really loved your idea as everyone has respect and have great characters! Thank you! I love Uday, he's one of my favourite characters! 😉

plz add me to the PM list Added 😃

Thanks!

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Mannnn this is like my 3rd try trying to type out this comment...stupid annoying internet screw ups! Aww. *hug* I feel your pain.

WOHOOOOOOOOOO I'm not the last one to comment for once! 😎

What a great moment. *celebrates* CONGRATULATIONS! 😃

O YAAA...the update...righhhhttt....was just getting to that too....eeeeeeeeeee loved it!! :D Pshhhhh watch'ya talkin' about? Not upto the standards my a*s! Nakhre toh dekho jee is ladki ke. :P 😆 Oi, I was iffy about it. It's not my best work, but it's not bad. Chalega? 😆

LOL CJ and Uday arguing. And Mayank amused. What a queet moment. Aww... I know na? They're all so fun to write. 😆

OOO I love how you have these 'almost' meeting Mayank and Nupur scenes. It's kinda like in the movie too how Sanjay keeps noticing Kalpana before actually meeting her...like when she's helping those kids etc. So he kinda makes an impression of what she's like before he meets her. Plus it keeps us excited for their actual mulakaat! Juu are a genius writer Radzjee! LOVE how Mayank's already kinda noticing aspects about Nupur...like being slightly amused at her and noticing her bright clothes wagera wagera. MANNNNNN you better make them meet soon!! I love writing these 'almosts'! It's so much fun. *bounces* And no one can kill me either, because it builds up the story. Thank you so much Pallojee! And they shall meet soon. About two or three parts I think. I have the next bits planned. 😉 Now to write them out. 😆

LOL the part where Nupur is deliberately irritating the reception desk lady made me smile. SO like Nupur. :D I could so see her doing that too! 😆 I would do that. 😆

OOOOOOOOOOO the lift scene...when Gunjan meets the lady...I was like THIS IS SOOOO MAYANK'S MOM YO!!!!!!!!!!! YIPIEEEEEEEEEEE she's here! Yes! Mommy's here! And you smart girl you! 😆

And I love how she knows both the sisters! Makes her more closer to Nupur's life I think. I seriously love how you've written all the moments where all these characters interact with each other! Other than just the couples wala angle I mean. 👍🏼 Thanks. 😳 Shilpa Aunty is the sort to watch daily soaps though, no? 😆 So she would recognise Nups. 😉 And it makes for more fun parts later. 😆 You shall see. I have that bit planned. 😆

Aww the Nupur and mom meeting wala scene was so adorable. I kinda wish Nupur had been like "haina?" and all excited and agreeing with Maa about Sheena...but it's their first meeting and all so it's totally understandable. It's kinda nice how you had her defending Sheena. Def. adds more to her character. =) Yup, I know Nups doesn't like Sheena personally, but I feel she has this sort of personal code, that she won't badmouth the people around her, not to people she doesn't know. With people she does know and trust, it's a whole other matter. 😆 Nups isn't a gossip. 😉

ooo just the last bit...I'm kinda confused...does Gunjan know that the lady is indeed her boss, i.e. Mayank's mom now? Or is that just left for us to ponder upon? left to our imaginations perhaps?...you mean and skillful writer kahin ki....lol...either way....AWESOME update!! Loved it to the core. Can't wait for part 5! :D Gunjan doesn't know, yet. 😆 Thank you so much Pallojee!

*HUGSS* *tight squeeze*

OO p.s. I'm going to be dissappearing for awhile....going to India where I won't have access to a computer so if I don't comment on a lot of parts you know why. DO keep pm-ing me though. 😃 🤔 Yeah, I never updated. 😆 Lucky you, you didn't miss anything! 😆

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Originally posted by: debby

Hey Radz! Howz everything going? *gives you a stern look for being apprehensive about this part* This was brilliant as always! 😃DEBBY! *tackle* It's going alright. I got stuck with the next part. But now, writer's block is gone! Kinda. 😆 Aww, thank you! You are such a sweetheart.

I loved how Nupur irritated the receptionist. LOL hahaha 😆 that was SO like her! I know! I could so see her doing that. I could so see me doing that too. 🤔 I think anyone in that position would do that. 'cept maybe - no, everyone would do that. 😆 Mayank finds her attractive.. ahem ahem.. I loved how you built up to that flicker of recognition, starting from her bright coloured attire. You picked up on that! But of course you would. 😉 He's not blind you know, just married to his work. 😆 The Gunjan Nupur interaction was amazingly sweet - so Mayank's Mum gets to meet his son's goody two shoes employee. I always thought a scene between Mum and Gunjan would be fun to watch on the show as well. Sometimes its strange what life plans for you - oh well, its almost always strange. 😆 Mayank and Gunjan are both workaholics, both pretty much suited to each other. But life ensures you fall for the one who is different from you and ascertains that you have several complications lined up to be solved. But spice makes life intersting and this is why Mayank and Nupur are made for each other, on the show and in your story. 😊I hope we do get a Mayank ki Mummy with Gunjan scene sometime in the near future. Both Nups and Gunjan crave that motherly affection, I think. And it'd be cute to see her mothering Gunjan and Nupur, while Mayu sulks in the background. Even Sammy would get more attention than mommy's boy. 😆 And yeah, they are alike, but I think that's why they'd never work! There's no excitement, and they'd both never spend time with one another, just with their books. 😆 The balance they get with their respective significant others is important too I think.

Nupur-Ma scene rocked! You get brownie points for how cute it was. Jannat is a nice name ya.. *pens it down for future reference* Mum would be so happy to see her darling son get together with her much adored little TV star. It was hilarious how you brought in criticism for Sheena. LOL how much I do agree with her! Thank you! *dances* I got brownie points! And Jannat was a spur-of-the-moment thing. 😆 I think I was listening to Jannat songs. 😆 And, you shall see Mommy's reaction soon. 😉 No one likes Sheena. Only her chaddis apparently. 🤔

I am upbeat about the parts to follow. Mayank and Nupur's first meeting, more of his Mum, more of everybody else too since you write them all so perfectly and just MUCH more of Mayank. *blushes* The certain element of mystery that you have attached to him is alluring to say the least. "confidently strolled out..", "let a smirk cross his face.." the little things matter the most and you have them bang on. THANK YOU SO MUCH! 😳 Your comments mean so much, considering you're my benchmark for writing MJHT! 🤗

Continue soon Radz. Very soon. Lotsa love. 🤗Oops. *hides*

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Awww... I loved this part. I loved Nupur and Gunjan in this part I loved the way Gunjan mouthed the abbreviation, and how Nupur was trying her level best to annoy the receptionist. So cute. Ohh.. I was kinda confused about the 2 women and Mayank. I didn't understand whether one of the "girls" fell in to his arms or what. Can you please clear the confusion. Ah-mazing part and looking forward to Mayur finally meeting :)