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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

i can't believe i had missed this b4. it's an awesome FF. i was gonna write one like ghajini just like you.. but i reckon from what i had in mind. u've done an AWESOME job!! love the starting and the name of the show.. kyunki ma da ladla bigad gaya.. hahaha.. hilarious!!!!
and the scene in the dressing room!!

LOVED IT!

do cont soon.

plz add me to the PM list

xxSonia

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic
i can't believe i had missed this b4. it's an awesome FF. i was gonna write one like ghajini just like you.. but i reckon from what i had in mind. u've done an AWESOME job!! love the starting and the name of the show.. kyunki ma da ladla bigad gaya.. hahaha.. hilarious!!!! Thank you so much! I'm sure you'd do a fantastic job too! But still, many thanks. 😃
and the scene in the dressing room!!

LOVED IT!

I am so glad! 😃

do cont soon.

plz add me to the PM list Added!

xxSonia

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Aradhna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hey! So Tuesday is here, and that is my designated day for BB updates. Here's part two, which I hope you enjoy as much as you seemed to enjoy part 1! Thank you guys so much for the overwhelming response!

Enjoy!

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The plane landed smoothly, to the relief of all the staff. After all, it was a private jet, and the only one their boss owned (he refused to buy more, stating that he did not find them necessary). The jet taxied to a stop, and the staff that had assembled to welcome their young boss all stood at attention. Slowly, the door opened, and the steps were let down. A young man made his way down the steps, talking to the woman beside him intently.

"And move my five-thirty meeting to tomorrow morning. Tonight, I do not want to be disturbed," he commanded, though no one would say no to him. He was a generous boss, and a genuinely nice person, just very obsessed with his work.

"Yes sir," she nodded, making note of it in the book she held.

"Good afternoon," he smiled at the staff that was assembled in front of him. That was the smile that had made him one of the most eligible bachelors in Mumbai. That, and the amount of money he was worth. "You know you did not have to come, you could have just sent a driver."

"Aap bhi na, Sir," his oldest employee began. "Aap aaney waley the, aur hum aapki swagat karney na aaye, aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?"

He placed his hand on the older man's shoulder. "Thank you, Shukla Ji, for always being there for me, and for this company." He grinned at the rest of his employees, thanking them for coming as well. "Ab, chale? Ma se bhi milna hai."

They got into the cars, and drove off from the landing area that was owned by Shilpa Industries.

Mayank Sharma was one of the leading industrialists in India, and one of the youngest. He was an entrepreneur, starting his company when he was just out of college. According to magazine interviews, his inspiration was his mother, who had single-handedly raised him after his father's death. Good-looking, charismatic, smart and rich to boot, Mayank Sharma had it all. He was amongst the most eligible bachelors in India, and was constantly fawned over by women. But he never saw them, focused only on his work. His friends, all of 2, both whom had worked for him for a long time, thought he was crazy for not seeing the people who looked up at him, who adored him. But Mayank was as he was before he got famous and rich, down-to-earth, hardworking and humble.

And of course, his best friend, his right-hand man (or in this case, woman) liked to call him a 'Mommy's boy', which he proudly stated that he was. Celina Joshi, or more commonly known as CJ, was the vice-president of Shilpa Industries, and one of the few close friends Mayank had. She knew him inside out, and was hard pressed at getting him to enjoy life. It was one thing she and his mother enjoyed ragging him about. One would think that her husband would be of some help to Mayank, but Uday Khanna was right with his Shilpa Ma'am and darling wife, though he was also one of Mayank's closest confidantes.

Mayank flipped through his agenda for the next couple of days, glad that he had been able to come back a day earlier than planned. He settled back in his chair, glancing at Shukla Ji. The older man had been a pillar of support since he had begun his venture into the world of business, and despite his many attempts to promote his mentor (because despite Mayank being his employer, that was what Shukla Ji was), Shukla Ji had been happy at his position as just an employee in the firm. But that did not change his position in Mayank's life.

"Shukla Ji, you'll be coming with Aha Aunty for dinner tonight right?" Mayank asked.

"Of course," Shukla Ji smiled at his boss. "Like I would miss your mother's birthday. After all, it's why you came back early and refused to allow anyone to tell her," he mock-frowned. "Do you know how hard it is to lie to your mother?"

Mayank laughed. "Of course I do, why do you think I didn't even call her since I changed my plans?"

Shukla Ji just shook his head. "You're never going to change are you?"

"You can't change perfection," Mayank smugly told the other man. Shukla Ji just rolled his eyes.

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I just had to bring him in already. I mean, all of you were waiting for him, and really, so was I! 😆

Do please let me know what you think!

Love,
Radz

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Heyy Radz. gr8 part 2.. now ill look forward to Tuesday : D i can imagine Mayank and his million dollar smile right infront of me.. *dreamy face* i can't believe u added SHUKLA!! YAYAY
CJ and Uday as Hubby-wife..

i really do wanna read more.. ur an amazing writer..

plz do cont soon.

xxSonia

ps. Thanks for the PM

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

waah kya gr888888 entry kiya hai tune for mayank.......👏......nywzzz it ws a vry nice updated.....n for the 1st time i'm seein Uday is already married n tht to CJ n also hes one of close frnds of MAYANK!!!!!!!.......... srsly ur ff is all in all a fresh one.....continue soon.....