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Posted: 15 years ago

hello....

I am updating in a while.....
This ff is coming to an end....after three-four parts.....
This part has the theme song & next part is RM CONFESSION......
Hope u guys like it...& thnak u for ur lovely comments.....
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

PArt 21:

Muskaan run to her cabin all the way blushing.....

M(herself)- pagal ho gayi hai kya tu Muskaan??? Kya bak bak kar rahi thi???? Aur yeh kya soch rahi hai tu??? Thodi toh sharam kar na....Rahul kya soch raha hoga tere baare tu yu acahnak whaan se bhaag aayi....Khoti hai tu Muskaan u have lost it......Haiii Rahul tu kab mujhe apni zindagi ka hissa banayega??? Mere aankhone bahut apne sajaye hai hum dono ke future ko lekar....Kahin yeh sapne tut toh nahi jayenge na????


Rahul & Sameer r surprised ...

S- Yeh Muskaan ko kya hua???

R- Pata nahi....Main dekhta hu...


Rahul comes in Muskaan's cabin...

R-Muskii???

M- Rahul.....

R- Tu theek hai na????

M- Haan Kyun????

R- Nahi woh tu wahan se yu acahanak chali aayi toh....

M- Woh aose hi...Rahul mujhe ek baat batayega???? Sachi batana...

R- Haan..puch na...

M- Kya main aachi ladki hu???

R- Kya??? Matlab?? Main kuch samjha nahi???

M-Matlab kya koi ladka kabhi mujhe pasand kar sakta hai??? Plzz Rahul sachi batana....Kya mujheme koi aisai baat hai jisse kissiko lage ki main ..i mean....

R(looks in her eyes)- Tu bahut aachi hai Muskaan.....tu aisi ladki hai jisse ek pal me dekhte hi kissiko bhi pyaar ho jaye....Teri sharaaat tera bholapanaur teri muskan kissiko bhi apna bana sakti hai....tu har ladke ka sapna hai Muskii....Tu jiske saath jayegi na uski zindagi khubsuart bana degi...koi bhi ladka tujhe apna jeevan saathi banana chahega....

M- Koi bhi??

R- Haan Koi bhi...

M- Tu bhi??

R(lost in her eyes)- Haan....

Muskaan smiles ....her eys full of tears....She looks into Rahul's eyes & he is looking at her with all the love in his eyes.....She hugs him.......


RM music...

Rahul carried away in the moment hugs her back.....Bt suddenly realises what is he doing ????He wasnt supposed to do this...he baks off.....

R(emabrrased)- Woh...main...ummm....mujhe jaaana hai late ho raha hai....

M(didnt like Rahul's sudden backoff bt was blushing)- Hmm...bye....

Rahul went away from there....the remaining day he avoided Muskaan & went to his room early..he didnt want to face Muskaan again 2day....atleast 2day....


In his room:

R(himself)- Yeh kya keh raha tha Muskaan se??? Usse apna dost kehta hai aur uski zindagi barbad karne pe tula hai tu???? U r such a loser Rahul Garewal.....(sighs)(closes his eys) ur not the right guy for her Rahul...plzzz Muskaan se dur reh.....
Sameer sachme aacha ladka hai...woh Muskaan ko duniya ki sari khushiyaan dega...Shayad Muskaan nahi samaj pa rahi bt Sameer genuinely Muskaan ko pasand karta hai....Muksaan usse ghas nahi dalti bt koi baat nahiI will have to do something abt it.....ya i will....


Next day:

Rahul went early to Sanjeevani & didnt meet Muskaan before going...he had something plaaned in his mind & he was gonna follow that.......

Muskaan went to his room Bt it was locked....

M(looked at her watch)- Haii Rabba yeh rahul itne jaldi kyun gaya ????Kuch jyada hi kaam kar raha hai....As always "Extra perfectionist"(laughs)


Sanjeevani:

Muskaan is seaching for rahul....

M- Excuse me sister, aapne Dr.Rahul ko dekha hai???

Sister- Jee..Dr.rahul Dr.Mehta ke saath OT me hai...

M- OT??? Rahul surgery kar rahahai???

Sister- Jee....

M- Thanks.... (wondering) Rahul ne bataya nahi ki uski surgery lined up hai aaj.....


S- Good Morning Dr.Muskaan

M(sighs)- Good Morning Dr.Sameer

S- Actually mujhe iss case me thodi tumhari help chhaiye thi...if u can help or rather want to???

M- Taunt mar rahe hai app mujhe ???

S- Nahi toh...

M- Chahliye....

Muskaan's Cabn"

Sameer was talking abt the case bt Muskaan was busy looking at her watch...

S- Muskaan???? Kya hua??? Tumhe kahin jaana hai???

M- Nahi woh..actually Rahul ki surgery thi aaj...u thionk its over by now????

S- Pata nahi....tumhe jaana hai toh u can go..hum baadme ----

M- No..its ok...

Rahul is done with the surgery...He was assisting Dr.Mehta bt he was gaining confidence..he wanted to share this with Muskaan....

He sses a wardboy..

R- Ajay sunno..tumne Dr.Muskaan ko dekha???

A- jee ...woh aur Dr.Sameer unke cabin me baithe hai...

R- Ok..Thnaks....

Rahul goes near her cabin....

He sees MS dicussing something....he smiled..tried to smile.....

Sam had cracked some silly PJ bt Muskaan smiled....

R- Yehi toh achiye tha mujhe...dono ek saath thoda waqt spend karenge toh ek dusre ko behetar jaan payenge....


Few days paas with the same routine....

RM talk bt very less....Rahul tries to aviod Muskaan & makes sure she is with Sameer.....

Muskaan is beginning to notice this bt whenever she tries to talk abt it Rahul avoids the conversation very smartly.......

Sameer on the other hand is happy to spend time with Muskaan bt somewhere he is not happy....


All three sitting in their rooms thinking abt whats happening in their lives.....

Rahul- Main tere liye khush hu Muskaan...Sameer sach me abhut aacah hai....bt pata nahi kyun kahin kuch chub raha hai.....tujhe kissi aur ke saath dekha aasan anhi hai Muskii..main bhi pal pal mar rah ahu...


Muskaan- Kyun Rahul?? Kyun mere saath aisa kar raha hai??? Mujhe pata hai ki tu mujhe aviod kar raha hai aur Sameer ke saath ..bt main Sameer se pyaar nahi karti copz main tujhse pyaar karti hu..Rhaul plzz aisa mat kar..main mar rahi hu Rahul plzz....


Sameer- Pata nahi kyun bt Muskaan tum mere saath hoke bhi mere saath nahi...main tumhe bahut cahhat hu...sachi....bt kya tumhare dil me mere liye koi jagah nahi hai??? Main kya karu??????

The screeen divides into three....


Pyaar hai ya sazza aa mere dil bata..
Tutta kyun nahi dard ka silsila.....


Iss pyaar me ho kaise kaise imtahhan
Yeh pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi daastaan....

Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar....
Dilbar pr hona koi asar.....


Pyaar hai ya sazza aa mere dil bata..
Tutta kyun nahi dard ka silsila.....


kaisa hai safar waffa ki manzil ka
Na hai koi hal dilonki mushkil ka
Dhakan dhakan bikhri ranjeeshe
Saanse saanse tutii bandhishee
Kahin toh koi lamha hotton pe fariyaad hai..
Kissi ki duniya chhahat me barbad hai...

Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar....
Dilbar pr hona koi asar.....


Pyaar hai ya sazza aa mere dil bata..
Tutta kyun nahi dard ka silsila....


Koi na sunne siskati aahon ko
koi na dhare tadaapti bahoon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwwahishee
Tutti tutti sab farmaishhe....
Ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar....
Dilbar pr hona koi asar.....


Pyaar hai ya sazza aa mere dil bata..
Tutta kyun nahi dard ka silsila....

Pyaar hai ya sazza aa mere dil bata..
Tutta kyun nahi dard ka silsila....
Hope u like it...do comment & criticize

Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Apoorva that was a lovely part👏👏👏
loved RM's convo and their hug😳 choooo cuteee
Aw rahul aisa kyunkararha hai, muski only loves him not sameer
thanx for the update
will be waiting for ur next part RM confession bhulna mat😉
and loved the way how you used the song😃
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG appy ...i sooo hate this sameer !!!! 😡 rahul bhi na ?kyu nahi samajhta hai ...but i must say i m enjoying ur FF completely ...love all the twist and turn ...OMG next chap is their confession ....EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i cant wait .i m already dancing
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiii apoorva how r u?
hav read the parts!!
this last was very lovely!!
rahul hav to clear that muski loves him
not that sameer!!
great updt!!
loved it!!!
see u sooon!!
love uuu!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very well written part Apurva!!!!!👏

I really want this Sameer guy to realize that Muski loves only Rahul!!!!😳 And Rahul should also get this fact into his head asap😆.And i loved the hug that RM shared😍

Anyway, i liked the use of the song. It was perfect⭐️ I was actually singing it aloud😆.

It was a lovely update. Thanks for the PM. Will be waiting for the next one😃
Edited by Muski_Aly - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lovely!!!!!!😳rahul muskaan almost confession &hug was really cute.😳..😳.😳...plz plz plz update soon waiting 4 RM confession





Edited by cezzuprerna - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
bachha that was lovely! I loved the way you ended it. Half RM confession. Song fit perfectly. The way Rahul told her that she was every guy's dream. It was very beautifully written! Well done!
love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Komal Di
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG apoorva it was beautiful😃 Totally loved it😳

Loved how rahul got carried away and they hugged😳😳 and then he went away😭😭

Loved how all three think about eachother and Pyar hai ya sazza😭😭

Oh man u write sooo beautifully, i was like imagining them😳😳

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Plz plz continue soon😉

Luv
Nazd

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part apoorva cont soon

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