RM: Pyaar hai ya sazza...upd18/12pg48 LAST PART... - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY Apoorva that part was awesome👏
Hope this sameer guy doesn't create any more prob
Tanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part who is playing dr sameer
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow !!!!!!! Extremely nice part yaar. Awesome!!!!!👏

Hate that kabaab mein haddi guy.😡 Dont even want to say his name. And RM were totally cute😍 Loved them.❤️

Thanx 4 d PM. Waitin 4 ur next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh no i need to read it! im sooooo sorry! will try to read it tonite! pakka promise!
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Posted: 15 years ago
aawwwsemm deaar
ye sammer ka tohh main kitna fliirtyy
pm mm e
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part!!
and i hate this sameer guy!!!!!
Thanks for the PM......
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Posted: 15 years ago

👏i just read your whole ff 👏

👏it fantastic👏
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👏awesome 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 20:

Muskaan in children's ward.......

she was attending the kids talking to them....laughing with them.....

A wardboy came with a bunch of flowers..RED roses.....

Wardboy- Dr.Muskaan yeh aapke liye...

M- Mree liye??? Kisne diye???

Wardboy- Woh...aaj jo doctor aaye hai na unho ne.....

M- Rahul ne????

Wardboy- Madam mujhe naam nahi pata....

M- Koi baat nahi thanks....

Muskaan looked at the flowers...RAHul sent her roses...OMG!!!

She smiled looking at the flowers & kissed them....

M- Tu bahut aacha hai Rahul....na jane kaise sirf tujhe pata hai ki mere chhre pe smile kaise lani hai....I love u...(smiles)

Sameer was standing near Children ward...he saw muskaan...

S(smiled)- Mere roses dekh ke hansi...Sameer beta ladki hansi toh phansi....Muksaan bhi tujhe like karti hai.....bt na jane itna attitude kyun deti hai???


LUNCH TIME:

Rahul came in the canteen

Sameer was already sitting there.....

S- Hey Rahul...

R- Hi Sameer...

S- Ek baat puchu???

R- Haan kaho na...

S- Kya main tumnhe aur Muskaan ko disturb kar raha hu??? I mean jab maine kaha ki i will join u for the lunch Muskaan wasnt that happy.....main...i mean...

R- Nahi Sameer aisi koi baat nahi hai...

S- Tumnhe lag raha hoga na ki main ek number ka flrit hu jo Muskaan ko akele chodne ka naam hi nahi leta???

R- Um...aisa kuch nahi hai..i mean....

S(smiles)- Mujhe pata hai...shayd Muskaan bhi yehi samjhti hai aur isliye mujhse theekse baat nahi karti....Rahul dude main ,..i...really like her yaar.....i mean....Woh mujhse dosti bhi nahi karna chahti pata nahi kyun bt main usse dost se badkar maanta hu...Meri help karoge?? Tum toh Muskaan ke bachpan ke dost ho na toh umhe uske baare me sab pata hoga...Dude tell me seriously agar uske dil me mere liye koi bhi jagah nahi hai aur uske dil me koi aur hai toh main yahan se chala jaunga.....Mujhe Muskaan ki khushi chhaiye bas..agar uski khushi mere saath nahi hai toh main usse kabhi truoble nahi karunga....

R- Aree Sameeer plzz relax..Mujhe pata nahi tha ki Muskaan ke liye itne serious ho....(smiled Bt somewhere felt hurt)

S- Rahul main uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu...sachi......Tum Muskaan se baat karoge???? Plzz dude mera itna kaam kardo na plzz.....

R- Main kaise?? i mean...main koshish karunga.....

S- Thanks Rahul...tum bahut aache ho....

R- Waise aur kaun hai tumhari family me???

S- Main mere momdad aur meri didi jinki last year shaadi hui...Parents mere Delhime rehte hai.......

R- Thats nice...tum yahan Goa me akele rehte ho??? Bore nahi hote???

S- Actually maine mum dad ko kaha tha ki woh bhi Goa shift kar de bt Dad ka buisness Delhi me tha so...

R- Ur dad is buisnessman???

S- Ya humara garments ka buisness hai....

R- Toh tum doctor???

S- Dude dont ask....mere gharpe itni mahabahrat hui thi jab i said ki mujhe doctor bana hai...My dad was so angry ki itna buisness kahda kia woh kaun sambhalega & all....Bahut naraaz the mujhse bt then unhe mum ne samjhya ki jisme meri khushi hai agar main woh cheez karu toh i will be much happy.....aur dad loves me more than anything in this world unhe mere happiness chahiye thats it......So ab mere jijaji help karte hai dad ko...sab happy hai....

R- Thats good...

S- Main tumhe apni ram kahani sunaake bore toh nahi kar raha ????

R- No no not at all....

S- Tum batao.....

Nurse calls- Dr Rahul Garewal apne yeh file mangavaithi na

R- o thanks....

S(staring at Rahul)- tu Rahul garewal ho????? THE RAHUL GAREWAL???

R- Ummm..haan bt kya hua???

S- Dude tum toh star ho...kitne famous the tum aur London jaane ke baad acahank se gayab ho gaye??? London me setlle ho gaye the kya??? Kaunse hospital join kia tha??? Aur jahan Goa Sanjevani me kya kar rahe ho??? Tum London se wapas kyun aaye????

Before Rahul could speak....

M- Hi Rahul......

R- O hii Muskiii..Kafi der ho gayi???

M- haan woh thod busy thi...

S- Hello ji main bhi hu yahan....

M(rolls her eyes)- Hi Dr. Sameer....

S- Waise Muskaan tumne bataya nahi ki tumnhara dost STAr hai...DR RAHUL GAREWAL....

Sameer's cell rings....

S- Excuse me guys....

R- sure....

M- Jao aur wapis mat aao...

R- Muskaan???

M- Kya???

R- Tum SAmeer ke saath itni rude kyun ho???

M- I dont like him...

R- But he is nice guy.....

m- puhlessse...spare me....

R- Muskaan tumhe kya problem hai Sameer se???

M- Rahul can hum plzz Sameer ka topic chodee???

R- Bt

M-PLLLZZZZ

R- Hmm

M- Sabse pehle Thank u...

R- Kis liye???

M- Mujhe pata hai ki tujhe pata hai ki main kya keh rahi hu so...

R- Nhai Muskii tu kya keh rahi hai??

S- Hey guys....Didi ka phone tha.....main mama banne wala hu! My didi is preganat.... OMG!!!!!!!!!

Muskaan looks at Rahul....Smiles......Some day even she will call her papaji & her cousins to tell..TELL WHAT??? Muskii blushed at that thought......

R- Congrats dude....

S- Thank u....

Rahul looks at Muskaan who is lost in her own world...

R- Muskaan??? Tumhe kuch nahi kehna???

No response.....

Rahul touches her hand...she snaps out of her dreams...

M- Huh???

R- Sameer ko congrats nahi kahogi???

M(still dreaming)- Haan...

R- Muskii?? Kya hua?? kahan khoyi ho???

M(looks at Rahul)- rahul..main soch rahi thi ki...

R- haan kya soch rahi thi

M(blushes)- Main....woh....tu....woh..main...Kuch nahi....

Muskaan runs away......Leaving Sameer & Rahul confused.......

Hope u like it...i know it wasnt a graet part though...i will definately come up with RM confession soooooooon......... Plzz comment.......& feel free to criticize.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Apoorva !!!!! Lovely Part 😊

Aur Muskaan kitne door ki sochne lagi😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Hate that Sameer guy😡

Anyway thanx a lot 4 the PM😳

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