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Posted: 15 years ago
great part!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bachha that was really nice! thanx so much for updating jaan! New guy? Cool... dekhte hain love story kahaan jaane waali hai. lol.
Love youuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Komal Di
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesom Part Apoorva!!

Loving it!! OMG.. naya wala ladka.. pata nahi yeh buddhu sa Rahul kya karne waala hai 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Apoorva,
Sorry kehna wont be enough I know for my not commenting on sooo many chapters and taking such a long time on them...but seriously I'm really very sorry for it.....studies and all kept me sooo busy that I didnt come online at all.....but just now read the entire thing...OMG!!!!Rahul ko jail hui?????He went on drugs??????OMG!!!!!! But our Muskaan saved his life....awwwwwwwwww......the sweetest....the way she restored his confidence....was simply sooo cutee......and now who is this new man entering their life......cant wait till they confess their feelings......!!!Fantastic writings...
Continue soon and thanks alot for those PM's!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 19:

Muskaan is walking backwards looking at Rahul.......

Meanwhile,

Wardboy is taking the oxgyen cylinder from behind Muskaan...she is unware lost in seing Rahul......her leg hits the cylinder &she is abt to fall.....she calls RAHUL!!! & closes her eyes.....

She knows now she will fall bt a strong grip helds her tight.....she smiles....she could always rely on Rahul.......she thought she was in Rahul's arms....

Rahul turns & sees Muskaaan in another man's arms......

Muskaan still has her eyes closed she smiles.....

M- Mujhe pata tha amin hamesha tujhpe bharosa kar sakti hu,.....

Man smiles.....

MAn- Really?????

Muskaan opens he eyes dead shocked & stands straight.....

M- Tum??? Kaun ho tum????

Man- Muskaan??? Tum mujhe bhul gayi????

M- How do u know my name???

Man- Aree kya ho gaya tumhe ..abhi toh keh rahi thi ki u can always depend upon me & alll....

M- Shut up...that was not for u..mujhe laga ki -----

MAn- Kya laga...????(goes a bit closer)

M(surprised)- Excuse me.......Yeh kya kar rahe ho???? Aur ho kaun tum???


Man- Yaar Muskaan ab mazaak bas bhi karo na....

M- Main mazaak nahi karrahi...bt i think ki amine tumhe kahi dekha hai...

Man- Ofcousrse..hum saath kaam kar chuke hai....Sameer.....Dr.Sameer??? Kuch yaad aaya????

M(smiles)- O ya Dr.Sameer...kaise hai aap???

S- Thank God...tumne mujhe pehechaan liya warna mera kachra ho jata...Kya Muskaan 2 saal baad mile toh mujhe bhil gayi???

Yu na socha ki iss dagar pe aa khade hongre hum yu....(melodramatically)

M(rolls her eyes)- Plzzz....Aapki yeh aadat ab tak nahi gayi....

S- What aadaat???

M- Bhayanak si shayri karna.....

S- Meri shayri bahut aachi hai....

M- I know.....woh kya thi....um.....Chuha bhi roya mere dard yu asar hua,....sumthing like that....

S(surprised)- Tumhe ab tak yaad hai???

M- Obviously....koi itni ghatiya shayri bhulta hai kya???(smiles)

Rahul was looking @ Muskaan & sameer......he felt BAD...actuaalyy he didnt think that anyone could make Muskaan smile other than him or rather he never wanted anyone to make her smile except him BT......

bt he had decided to find his BEST FRIEND a good life partner & Sameer was contestant no.1

S- S tell me Muskaan...Tum Goa Sanjeevani kaise???

M- Maine yahin hu ek saal se....

S- O...Actually main bhi kuch mahine Delhi Sanjeevani me tha bt now back to Goa....

M- Delhi??? Aapke parents hai na wahan??

S- hmm...Ek puchu??? Main moota hua hu kya????

M- Nahi toh...kyun???

S- Aree mumma roz parathe deti thi dozen bhar.....

M(laughs)-Kuch bhi....

S- Nahi really.....

Rahul was looking at them still.....bt then he had to report to his duty ...he was leaving when a nurse called him...

Nurse- Dr.Rahul..............

Muskaan turned on hearing Rahul's name.....

Muskaan smiled....& blushed on seing Rahul actually seeing her bt when she saw him looking at her he looked somewhere else.....

M- Dr.Sameer...aayiye..main aapko kissise milvati hu.....

S- ok....

M- Rahul......yeh hai Dr.Sameer aur yeh Rahul mera best friend....Rahul Dr.Sameer aur maine ek case pe ek saath kaam kia tha...he is also a ped....

R(smiles & shakes hand with Sameer)- Hiii Sameer..nice u meet u.....

S- Hey Rahul...tum ne aaj hi join kia kya???

R- Ya.....

S- Great...maine bhi actually main Delhi SAnjeevani me tha bt theni have rejoined 2day itself...

R- O thats really nice.....Ok Sameer bye.... Muskii main chalta hu...meri duty ka tme ho raha hai..u guys carry....

M- Rahul....hum lunch pe milte hai......all the best....

S- Lunch?? wow..mujhe toh abhi se bhook lag rahi hai....Kitne baje lunch hai???

M- Kyun???'

S- Mujhe toh pata hona cahhiye na kitne bahje canteen aana hai???

M- Aap humhare saath lunch karenge????

S- Ofcorse ...yeh bhi koi pucnhe ki baat hai??? Kyun??? Do u mind????

M- Yesss'

R-No...plz Sameer it would be ggoood if u join us.....

Muskaan looked at Rahul angrily....Took his hand

M- Excuse us....

RM alone....

R- Kya kar rahi hai????

M- Tu kya kar raha hai????

R- Kya???

M- Sameer it would be ggoood if u join us..(imitaating RAhul)

R- Toh kya hua??? Woh dost na tera???

M- Nahi...bas colleugeue hai mera....professional relation thats it.......hum sirf ek mahina saath the woh bachi ke case ke liye....

R- Bt Sameer toh...

M- Ek dum chipku hai aur ek no. ka flrit hai......

R- Tu hamesh ki tarah over exaggerate kar rahi hai......

M- haan mujhe aur aata hi kya hai....

R- Muskii???

M- Mujhe tere saath lunch karna tha na ....mujhe tere saatha akele time spend karna hai..Mujhe yeh Sameer ka bacha kabab me haadi jaisa nahi chahaiye.....(said it all in one braeth)

R- Kya???

M(just realised what she said)- I mean ki....matlab....

R- Matlab????

Muskaan looked into Rahul's eyes......she wanted to tell him that she loves him......

M- Rahul.....main.....Rahul....i....wanted to say ki..main...tujhse..main......

Rahul looked Muskaan...was she confessing her love??? What should he do??? Say YES??? No??? O god!!!!
Bt he could see love in Muskaan's eyes.....

RM eyelock....
Background:

Kabhi na sukuun aaya..kabhi na karrar aaya
jabse hai tumpe mujhko pyaar aaya.....


Sameer is looking at RM talking....

S- Itni kya baatein kar rahe hai..aur woh bhi mere bina????

Whats up Guys??? Kya baat kar rahe ho????

RM looked at him.....Muskaan was very angry......

M- Main apne dost se baat bhi nahi kar sakti kya????(dangerous tone)

S- Opps...Muskaan ji naraaz hai....Ky aRahul Kya kiya tumne??? Kyun naraaz hai Muskaanji???

Muskaan giving Killer looks to Sameer......

R- Sameer woh....

Rahul's pager rang

R- Sorry guys..i have to go.....Muskii.....plzz smile karde yaar....

No response....

R- Its my first day @ work......

M(smiles)- All the best......(patted his back)

R- Thank u......

S- Wow...2 mins ke andar gussa gayab??? Teach me the trick dude......


RAhul smiled & left.....

S- Rahul is an amazing guy....

M(busy looking at Rahul)- Haan....woh sabse aacha hai.....he is the best.....

S- Um...well...hmm...main hu yahan....Rahul gaya....

M- Aur ab mujhe bhi jaana hai...Ok Dr.Sameer.....

S- Bye Muskiiii

M- its Muskaan

S- Bt Rahul ne toh kaha tah Muskii...really suits u....

M- i know sirf Rahul mujhe Muskii kehta hai just him......

S- Oooookk....Ek baat batao MuskAAAN....tum aur Rahul...i mean.....

M- Dr.Sameer mujhe late ho raha hai ok????

S- Muskaan tum hamesha mujhe DR.Sameer kyun bulati ho??? Frends call me SAM...u can call that tooo...

M- Dr.Sameer is fine.....main itni aasani se dosti nahi karti i hope aapko paata hai.....

S- Ya i know...

Muskaan is going....

S- Muskaan......

She turns....

S- Yeh colour tumpe bahut suit karta hai...u looking very nice 2day......

M- Aap na kabhi nahi sudehrnge right???? Main dosti bhi nahi kar rahi bt aap flrit ek dum bindaas karte ho....

S- Kya karu??? Tum ho hi itni aachi cant help it.....

M- U r Impossible........

Muskaan goes away......Sameer smiles dremily......

hope u like it...plzz comment & criticize.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Part Apoorva!!

yeh Sameer ka bacha sach mai bada kabab mai haddi ban raha hai 😆😆

But RM scene was cute as usual!! Loving it!!

Edited by ibdt2004 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
man i hate this sameer guy..very chilpku and flirt 😡😡😡..lol...hope muski confesses her love soon before any confusion starts..loved it when she said that she wants to spend time alone with rahul..and the eyelock was just sooo cuteeee😍 thank u for the pm and continue soon. can't wait to read moreee
Edited by i-love-dr.rahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part!!
thanks for the pm!!
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hayyyee............soooo cuteeeeee.......the RM scene was really sweet...I could actually imagine the scene how Muskaan pulls his hand......hehehe....aur ye Sameer kaha se aa gaya beech mein....cant wait to know aage ya hoga.......!!
Continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!!!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey bachha! Finally yaar!
Kya chipku ladka hai yaar! Aur koi hota toh he would have gotten a hint. Rahul ko bhi yehi mila as CONTESTANT #1? EEEYUCK! Kuch toh class honi chahiye, woh bhi Muskaan ke liye. Oh well, maybe he won't be AS chipku later? Chaddo!
How r u? Studies kaisi chal rahi hain?
Komal Di

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