My Mayur FF..Updtd Chp 12 Pg 42 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww i love this....youve managed to keep romance between them without changing the characters...youve captured it so well...thi is better than the mayur romance actually being shown!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh gr8 part yaar..... really liked it...... n mayu - dodo talk was superb..... kabhi soch bhi nahi tha ki in dono ki chemistry itni acchi ho sakti hai......... mayur was also gr8.......actually i liked ur whole update.... plzzz continue soon.... n thanks 4 d pm yaar........
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing yaar! loved the romance!simply beautiful!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great FF!
Loved the bit when Nupur made Mayank say "You were right; I? MAYANK SHARMA, former top student of excel college who never did anything wrong was? wrong."...happy??" 😆
Please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww...this was soooooooooo romantic 😳 update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Nice FF! Can't wait to read more. Update soon and please PM me.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi dear....... I m new here....... but luvd ur FF......... Plz PM me for ur next update....... I m addicted to it.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
when r u goin to post.......??
pls do fast im waiting.......... 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

I know you guys are angry with me..but i was really tied up with my work..hope you forgive me and enjoy this chapter..its a bit long..

Chapter 6

His lips were warm and firm, and started a delighted shiver that she couldnt hide.
She heard him laugh with quite triumph, then he moved up and found her mouth in a long, hard, dizzying kiss and nupur kissed him back unreservedly, her delicate hands on his shoulders, her head tipped against his arm, her mouth eagerly accepting his..

When he stopped kissing her, she opened her eyes and looked at the trimph in his with bemusement.
"you look smug" she accused him laughing..
"i feel smug.." he replied smiling
"why" she asked looking confused
"because i am the only one who knows how to shut you up.." he said smirking
He smiled and she bit her lips, looking away..pushing against him"tum kabhi nahi sudhroge.." she said blushing..looking everywhere but at him..she knew mayank was laughing at her..she decided to give him a taste of his own medicine
"aur by the way..flipping her hair.."you are not the only one who knows how to shut me up."there was a challenge in the gaze she directed mayank
Mayank froze.."excuse me?" he asked crisply
"i think you heard" she said with a twinkle
"and who would that be" he asked coldly
She cocked her head to the side and thought for a minute.."hmmmm...samrat.." nupur smiled devilishly
Mayank almost choked. "What?!" he yelped.
nupur winced then smacked her lips in a self-satisfied way " ha..u are not the only one with the talent you know..." she said with a sexy pout
"Really" mayank said dangerously while advancing towards her "so how does he shut you up huh? he asked silklycomng closer..
nupur kept silent..infact she was trying very hard to keep a straight face..mayank looked like a raging bull..
"nupur" he promptd
finally she turned around "by telling me to shut up, u idiot" she said and burst out laughing
"Kya?!" mayank gaped, clearly suprised..."you..." mayank growled advancing towards
but nupur ignored him "and gunjan continuously says di di di until i stop,uday bhaiya just shouts as usual,main kya india ki local train bhi usski awaaz se ruk jaayegi by god, ma toh bas says nupur beta and benji...."
"benji bhi...mayank muttered..."Oh for crying out loud nupur.."
he waited for nupur to spit it out
"why he just says nups in his sweet tone..but you already know that "she said innocently.."you saw him do that many times.."her eyes twinkled amusement
they both stared at each other for over a minute..finally mayank walked up to her and made her face inches from his
"yes woh sab karte honge but there's a one tiny difference..."he murmured softly
"and wat is that?" she asked suspiciously
"i dont need any words to shut you up.." he whispered in her ear..
nupur looked down blushing " mayank tum...kitna flirt karte ho by god..." she mumbled
Mayank frowned slightly " kyu tumhe nahi pasand" he asked anxiously
nupur's face softens..but she decides to tease him..."ummm..woh itni aadat nahi hain naa issiliye..by god tum college mein kaise the..kisise baat to door kisiko dekhte bhi nahi the..sivaye apni books ke.. " she said teasily..
mayank chuckled but said nothing to disagree..
"lekin ab," nupur said with dramatic sigh, playing with his tie..
"ab kya" he asked worried
looking serious "ab toh tum raj se bhi das kadam aage ho.." she said softly.."in do saalo mein you've given me so much
love and happiness...yeh do saal kaise chale gaye kuch pata nahi chala..thank you for loving me..I love you so much.. am so lucky to have you.""she whispered with tears in her eyes

mayank closed his eyes..when he opened his eyes and met hers, she started to tremble inside and out with what she
saw reflected there. "i'm the lucky one...i love you too.," he said softly bringing his face closer to kiss her...nupur closed her eyes..waiting for his lips to join hers..when...
"aur waise bhi tumhare saath saath rah kar main aur maa toh kya, tommy bhi filmy ho gaya hain..bas gunji normal
hain.."mayank said laughing at her..
Nupur pushed him, planted her hands on her hips and glared at him through narrowed eyes, then she gasped "hey bhagwan..main toh bhool gayi.." she said
"kya bhool gayi?" he murmured pulling her back in his arms and kissing her neck "shahrukh ki koi film dekhna?" he joked
He grabbed her waist but she smacked him away "mayank stop joking,maine bhola bhaiya se kaha tha tommy ko khana
de dena..abhi shaadi mein sab log busy ho jaayege toh bechara tommy toh bhoka rah jayega naa" she said biting her lips.."patani us gadhe ne usse khana diya ki phir se bhool gaya..jab dekho film dekhta raheta, koi kaam do toh hamesha bhool jata hain aur har waqt nauthanki..main jaanti ho usse khana nahi diya hoga, abhi jaakar pochugi toh kahega didi mein yeh kaam mein phas gaya..agar usse tommy ko khana nahi diya hoga toh dekha main uska kya haal karti ho by god..." she kept rambling

Guys bhola is their cleaner..he is in his teens and very filmy kind of guy..he always gets a blasting from nupur because he is very lazy and often forgets to do wat he's told..he has a kind heart and everybody luves him esp nupur..she treats him like a younger brother..buts alwys scolds him,not seriously..

Ok tommy is nupur's small puppy..mayank gave him to her on their first wedding anniversry and she adores him like a
child. she's very possesive abt him,always fusses over him, and when he is not given his supper not time she brings the whole house down. that day poor bhola bhaiya gets his hiding..LOL..

Mayank groaned inwardly "why did i mention that idiot's name" he thought, sometimes he regrets he brought that
wretched dog for her..she spents more time with that dog then with him.."oh god listen to me, now m even jealous of a dog.." he thought shaking his head.."what next..

slowly he smiled.he could still remember how nupur's face lit up when he gave him to her..she laughed and cried at
the same time asking if he still remembered their bickering at the academic meet where they were unknowingly discussing their future..how she ran and hugged him almost knocking him down..she forgot everything else and kissed him in front of everybody almost embrassing him..and for 2 days he couldnt meet his mom and gunjan's eyes..he chuckled..nupur was unpredictable. She did things out of habit and not logic and he loved her just like that..
"mayank" nupur called shaking him lightly
he jerked " huh" looking at nupur
"kaha koh gaye" before he could reply "acha baba ab jao aur jaldi se taiyaar ho jaao..baarat aati hogi..main maa ke paas ja rahi hu..patani kya sooch rahi hogi..itni der se bulaya hain..yeh sab tumhari galti hain.."scolding him cutely..hamesha mein hi phas jaati ho..acha ab jaao naha lo" pulling his tie out and throwing it on the bed..and when
i cum back i want to see you out of this room and into the hall receiving the guest.." she ordered while making her way to the mirror..
mayank kept staring at her..she looks very sexy and cute when she talks non stop..my angel..he smiled affectionately..He loved her so much. He thanked God every day for giving him the love of this woman. Her grace, her loving eyes, her entire existence was a gift to him. And mayank never forgot it..well she never lets him forget
it..He would cater to all her needs, go to the ends of the earth to grace even the hint of a smile on her beautiful, breath-taking face..

Nupur looks at her reflection one last time, fixing her saree..
"You look gorgeous, you don't need to fix anything." mayank said coming behind her and kissing her ear..making her
blush..

"and you look like a ruffled monkey.." she said with a giggle and ran out of the room before mayank could catch
her..he can hear her laughter..
"Nupur tum.." tried to catch her but missed it.."you just wait" he promised.."suna toh isi room mein padega naa.." he
smiled and went to get ready..humming..

To be continued
Edited by jayalal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
As usual......vryyyyyyyyy vryyyyyy romantic update..........its really a pleasure to read ur updates jaya....thnxx a ton for this....plzzz continue soon...😃

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