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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#771

Hiiii all...

sorry...raj ko samjhane me baht tym lag gaya...!!! kya hai na...LRL ke raj ki aatma abhi tak us me ghusi hui thi...!!! mujhe thoda sa tym laga use nikalne ke liye...!!!😆😆

kahir ud jaisa bhi hai bardast kar lena...jaise mujhe karte ho...!!! yeh sochna ke mere dimag me baht pressure pada hai...isiliye cooker ki tarah siti maar rahi hun...!!!😆

vaise mere sahadat ke din suru ho gaye hain...!!!matlab...abhi kuch dino ke liye hamare samman me hamare teacher khade rahenge...!!!! aur kabhi kabhi LEFT RIGHT LEFT parade bhi karenge...kabhi aage ki ore toh kabhi piche ki ore...!!! hamari har ek farmaish puri ki jayegi...!!! hum kahenge... 'sir... pani... toh turant hamare samne pani pesh ki jayegi...!!! hum kahenge... 'sir...paper...' toh turant voh le kar hamare paas daud kar aayenge...!!! hamare bina kahe hi is baat par nazar rakhenge ke...kahin pichewala humarui mashumiyat ka faida toh nahi utha raha...!!!😆

kitni khusi ki baat hai na...ke hamare teachers hamare huqum ka palan karenge...😆

nahi samjhe...!!! arre mere xams suru ho gaye hain yaar...aur kya..😭

chalo ab raat baht ho chuki hai...so jati hun main...'suhani raat dhal chuki ...na jane neend kab aayegi'...🥱

hellooooooooooo...aap kahan ja rahe hain...!!! pahle comments karo...phir jane dungi...huh...😛

take care

bye😃

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#772

Hi Priya

Update was just outstanding 👏👏👏👏 and one of the best in Ankahi..loved it completely and after reading Sumi's reply I dont have much to say..she has expressed all but still i'll reply.😆😆😆

I never expected that Naina's parents wud understand Rajveer' position..I thought they'll definetely create some problems and somehow reading the beginning I was convinced too but then when i read the flahback I wanted to hug u there..😃

Naina's mom expressed her pain in so many emotions and Raj cudn't control his tears then..lukka chhupi song is indeed too emotional and whenever I see it my eyes gets teary ..the pain of loosing a child cannot b described and this song literally brings out the worst fear any parent can even dream of..😭😭😭

But I still think suicide option was much better than crucifying Raj for his whole life.

Raj was finally over that guilt..😊 I hope he stays this way from now on..

Shalini enjoyed her outing with Yudi but she still considers him as a mere student..

Raj indeed deserves thanks coz he let Shalini think beyond her marriage..there is no use to carry the burden of a relationship which is already dead..

Naina was so glad to see Raj sleeping peacefully ..Wat did Naaz wanted to ask her??

Naaz is so happy to see Raj smiling and she teased him a bit..😉😳

Naina n Huda!! 😲😲 I had completely forgotten abt this prospect and after reading Raj's reaction I lost all hope again..I thought once again everything will b back to squre one but aisa hua nahin..Naveen's ghost came to meet Raj at the very right moment..He forced Raj to admit his real feelings for Naina and his one word was sufficient to know the depth of his feelings..she is his life and he was lost without her..First time I liked Huda way too much..He tried to explain Naina's position to Raj and finally he succeeded..the timing for rain was just perfect for this much awaited confession..😊 Those 3 magical words changed Raj and Naina's life forever😊❤️

LRL jokes were as usual too funny😆😆🤣

Pls continue soon

Bye

Best of Luck for exams.👍🏼.Teachers se khoob seva karao..😆😆

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#773

Main kya kahu yaar....seriously....this tym I AM SPEECHLESS!! ⭐️⭐️

Now dont take me too literally.....coz I am gonna write a long enuf speech for u...😉😆

Rajveer ka wo first line padhte hi....maine aankhein bandh kii thi....coz I sumhow feel that pain....pata nahi kaise....and u did it so well...feel naa karne ka option hi nahi rakha yaar!!

And u knw....wat was my last reaction..."this is the Rajveer I always wanted to see"....😳....maine LRL ke continuation me kaafi fics padhe hai....may be saare padh liye hai...😉😆....and I had only one most fav till now....(that was also practically the first ever fic for me😉)....and now....'best continuation for me'....iss list me...ANKAHI bhi aa gaya hai...😉😳....I always had a hunch...this fic is gonna be beautiful....coz u r a dam awesum writer dear.....and then of course...u portray feelings beautifully....so I always thought I might get the kinda of emotions I had always wanted....in this very fic!! And aaj ye part padhke...mujhe itnaaa achha laga....that I am actually typing out the comment at 1:15 a.m. 👏

Coming to the part more seriously....the song 'Lukachhupi'.....itself is sooooo heart touching...and I always melt whenever I hear the song....it was a bang on choice for the situation!! Sach puchho to....at the very beginning....Navin ka voice over padhke....maine muskuraya....phir usse bahut daanta saying...."ye sab teri wajah se hua....khudkhushi nahi kar sakta tha kya" 😆😆😳.....but you actually made me feel....Navin's pain and his position as well....(though I wud still prefer khudkhushi for him😆)....The way u portrayed Meera ji's thoughts....then Rajveer ka tut jana....unke samne ro dena....Navin ka fun-filled voice over se uss scene ko khatam karna....👏👏...it was a wow!! 👏👏

Main sach me thodi choked feel kar rahi hu....and am a lil swayed away by emotions....😆....and I seriously wish....u had taken over LRL...😆....then I wudnt have to feel bad over the end....🤢

Anyways...getting on to the part....Naina ka Raj ke room me aana...and the scene that followed....hats off!! How do u do it yaar?? How can u manage to engross me in the part so much?? 😲 I mean....am just not able to get over it...and jo bhi Biology padha tha....sab bhul gayi...😆...raat me bas Rajveer ke bare me hi sochungi...😆😳 (ye wala Rajveer😳)

However Naaz was trying to knw things....hmm....but achha hua Aalekh and Huda aa gaye....and they knw their duties very well...😉😳

Yudi-Shalini wali baat achhi rahi...and Rajveer ka Shalini ko uss mess se bahar nikalne me himmaat dena....that was again gr8!! Kya kare....Maj Rajveer....hai hi gr8!! 😉😳😳

And then wo confusion.....main na pehle bhul gayi thi uss jhooth ke bare me...😳...but then yaad aa hi gaya...😆😉...and well...Raj ka reaction dekhke....maine socha..."c'mon....there is a misunderstanding....u cant possibly take these to be true...😲"...but then....its hard to be this much optimistic in love...I guess!! Pyar me khone ka darr sabse zyada hota hai....so I wud say....I in fact loved the reaction....specially becoz it suits the personality of Maj Rajveer. 👏😳

Phir saari baaton ka clear ho jana....song sequence was gud....specially the lyrics was perfectly gelling wid the situation....Navin ki aatma ka aana...was nice!! 😉 Phir Raj jaise 'meri zindagi' keh jata hai....I just lost my heart to him all over again!! C'mon....mera dil dhundke wapas karo Pri....after all he is booked....😆😉

On a serious note....Huda ka aana achha laga...and that was in fact a nice inclusion...👏👏...phir baarish....was even a nicer inclusion...and then the confession....the nicest and bestest ever inclusion!! ⭐️

In short a gr8ly written part....mere reply ke size se hi pata chalta hai...and yeah...there is more to the reply..😆😆...gosh...tum to gayi Pri...mujhe reply karne ke baad nap le lena...😆😉 Waise...frankly confessing....bahut dino baad iss tarah bowled over feel kiya maine...😆...aisa nahi hai ki kabhi achhe updates nahi padhe....😆....but this feels way tooooooo nice...and abhi raat ke der baje...mauka bhi hai aur dastur bhi....to bas likhe jaa rahi hu...😆

Coming to the LRL Jokes:

1. Mera Rajveer....kaha tha na...bachpan se smart hai...😉

2. Mssg sending failed...🤣 hot shot idea hai...😆....bas zara non-applicable hai...😆

3. Well done Aalekh....😆...kitne achhe sanskar hai tumhare....😆😆

4. Ye wala bhi badhiya hai...😆

Achha now at the end....I wud say (still😆)....hamesha aise hi confuse ho kar UD karna....it turned out the best for me....😉😆...and pls...jaldi continue karne ki koshish karna....as its at a crucial point...😉😆

Last but not the Least....ALL THE BEST!! Rock the xams....😉😳

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

(my biggest comment ever I guess) 😉😆😳

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#774

awesome update
finally they confessed technically only Raj did
plz continue soon

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#775

awesome, beautiful. brilliant, mind blowing update. loved it.
update soon.

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#776

finally ankahee kahi ho gayi lekin 50% hi hui.......... baaki ki kab hogi??????????????? but the update is tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddddddddddddddd

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#777

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#778

hi 😊

the up is good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

so raj finally naina ke parents ko sab baata deta haai😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

raj ke ander itne dino se jo dard jo dukh jo guilt tha aaj woh uske ander se bahr nikal aata haai

its really very painful to see him like this😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

par yeh aacha hua ke naina ke maa ne raj ke baat ko samjha uske situation ko samajh ke usse maaff kar de😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 aur saath he saath yeh bhi kaha ke naveen ko aase dard bhare haalat mein dekh kar unke dil se bhi yehi dua nikalte the ke woh maar jaaye😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 aur raj ne unhe woh khowaish pure usne unke bete naveen ko us zilat se bhare zindage se maut ke roop mein mukte de haai😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

meera jee yeh baat sunke sach mein raj ke mann aur dil pe jo boj tha woh aakhir kar nikal gaya 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

ab woh aapne zindagebina guilt ke jee paayega 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

lekin yeh naina ke parents uske shaadi huda se karwana chahate haai its really shocking😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

but huda i liked him very much he handled the situation so maturly 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏usne kitne aache se raj ko samjhaya ke usse aapne haq ke liye laarna chaheye kunki agar woh aase nahin karenge then he will not only hurt himself but also naina who loves him very much 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

ab dekhte haai aage kya hota haai

plz cont soon and pm me