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Posted: 14 years ago
waittinggggggg.........update soon......buhoooo๐Ÿ˜ญ...mummiiiiii.......dekho na update nahi kar rahi hai...................

plz plz plz update sooooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi๐Ÿ˜Š hiii

the up is good๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Thanqqqq๐Ÿ˜ƒ
naina was waiting for raj๐Ÿ˜ƒ but raj got angry on her as the place was not safe for her
he really cares for her ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š ab voh us ki care nahi karega toh aur kis ki karega...๐Ÿ˜‰
naina raj se aapne baat ke liye maaffe maagte haai ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒnaina ko aase maaffee maagte dekh ke aur rote hue dekh raj feels bad woh naina se kaheta that he forgives her๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ but yeh raj aapna pyaar aapna dukh naina se chuppa kun raha haai ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•maana ke uske dil mein guilt haai ke usne naveen ko naina se aur uske paarivaar se cheen liya par jab naina ne usse maaff kar diya haai tabhie raj aapne dil mein yeh baat ko leekar kun baithta haai ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก tumhe LRL yaad nahi...raj sab ki fiqar karta tha...sirf khud ki chod kar...!!! aur kahani bhi maine vohin se suru ki hai toh raj ko kaise badal sakti hun...!!! matlab thoda sa change karungi par jyada nahi kar sakti na...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ab raj ne naina ke parents se sab kuch baata diya haai ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
hope that naina's parents forgive him๐Ÿ˜Š ab kya hoga yeh toh mera next ud hi batayega...
taaki raj ko aur aapne feelings aapna love naina se chuppana naa paare ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
plz cont soon and pm me with a romantic one my eyes are eagerly waiting to see a romantic scene between rn๐Ÿ˜ณ main toh chahti hun ke ek romantic part likhun...par meri marzi se kya hota hai...raj ki bhi marzi ki jarurat hai na...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanxxxxxxx Ria...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: oliveya

OOMGGGGG ....!i love the whole story....
it awesome yaarr.....
......brilliant,amazing .....story........

Thanxxxxxx Oliveya...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Namashkaar !!! namashkar...aage ke mukhya samachar kuch is prakar ke hain ke...kuch hi der me mausam ki sthiti badalne wali hai...!!! zor ki tufan aanewali hai...aur is fic ke writer ko udanewali hai...๐Ÿ˜†

Kya sunenge aap? tu kab se mujh se puch kar bolne lagi...๐Ÿ˜›
Taariff? ๐Ÿ˜› ya Gaaliyaaan??๐Ÿ˜ก ofcourse Tarif yaar...!!! baht din hue sune hue...๐Ÿ˜†
huh !! main to tujhse baat nahi karne waali thi... ab maine aisa koun sa gunah kar diya...
Kyun? Yeh tu jaanti hai... nahi...main nahi janti...pakka nahi janti...๐Ÿ˜†
Kyunki kisi bhi SAHI cheez se GALAT Inspiration lena kitnaaaaaaaa galat yeh tum jaanti bhi ho???๐Ÿ˜ก kaha na nahi janti...main toh bas tere aadarsh se anupranit ho kar tere piche piche chali hun...๐Ÿ˜†
Ab se dekhna, main tujhse pehle kabhiiii bhi update nahii karungi...katti !!! haan...haan...tujhe toh ek aur bahana mil gaya...late ud karne ke liye...!!! lekin final warning hai tere liye...vaise bhi tere xams ke bahane hum baht kuch sah chuke hain...lekin ab aur nahi...!!! tere xams isi month khatam honewale hain...matlab ab se uds regular hone chahiye...varna tu mujhe nahi janti...main sirf naam ki sherni nahi hun aur bhi baht kuch kar sakti hun...samjhi...!!!
par update ekdam...boletoh ekdam jhakkkkkkaaaaas tha !!! sachhhhh....๐Ÿ˜›
so naina ko bata diya gaya ki usse scape goat banaya jaa raha tha...good ! ab kab tak use chupate...๐Ÿ˜› heroine hain na voh isiliye...batana hi pada...
RN scene in the car was awesome !! and yesss...RAJ ne usse Jeep mein notice kiya ISSIIIILIYE itna badhiya RN scene mila...right SUMI ?? SUMI achhi bachhi jo hai...hamesha achhi achhi baat karti hai...๐Ÿ˜› (Ab kya karu, tere kaarnaame ki wajehse main tujse bahot gussa hoon pri ! Update ready hone ke bawajood bekar mein usse break kiya !??๐Ÿ˜•) yeh karnama bhi maine teri hi wajah se kiya tha...!!! arre tu bhul gayi...jab kiya tha...tab sab se pahle tere ko hi toh sms kiya tha...๐Ÿ˜†
and ab last scene ....awesoooooooooooomeee !!! dhanyavaad...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ab jaldi continue karo plzzzzzzz.... tere jaise karun...jaldi...๐Ÿ˜›
P.S. :- aur haan ! Naina ke Maa- BABA ko mera msg dena plz... sorry mera msg pack khatam ho gaya hai...๐Ÿ˜†agar galat fehmi ho toh aur baat hai, par saare doubts clear hone par bhi unhone adiyal logon ki tarah Raj ke bajay Huda se Naina ka rishta karana chaha aur Raj ko continuously naveen ka qatil bula bulakar hurt karte rahe aur rulate rahe, toh main unhe Anaesthesize karke....aree nahi....apna FILMY chloroform sunghake , behosh karke, Naina ko kidnap karlungi aur uski shaadi Raj se karadungi !
Agar Raj apne usoolon ka drama karne laga toh uske haath pair baandhne mein bhi kam nahi karungi....u GET THAT???๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† pahle tu mujhe ek baat bata...tu mujhe kah rahi hai ya dhamka rahi hai...!!! kyoun ke koi faida nahi hai...!!! jaisa ki maine pahle kaha tha ke ud likh chuki hun...toh phir change karne ke toh sawal hi nahi uthta...aur us ud me kya hai yeh toh padhne ke baad hi pata chalega na...๐Ÿ˜† tab tak ke liye kripya pratikhsha ki jiye...Dhanyavaad....๐Ÿ˜†

Thanxxxxxxxxx Doc...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

Aaawww superfast update ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› ?lagta hai last part mein humsab ne milke kuch zyada taang khinch di ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ??sowie..๐Ÿ˜ˆ .but if leg pulling gives us fast updates then no sorry?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† is superfast ud ke raaz hai...aap jaise khubshurat log...jo har waqt is mauke ki talash me rahte hain ke kab is ki khinchai karen...!!!๐Ÿ˜†

Coming to part ?if in last part Rajveer gave heart attack to me ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ..this time its naina's parents turn ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† can imagine there shocked faces. ha ha ha...๐Ÿ˜†The beginning of the part was gud ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ..progressed nicely?huda-alekh-naina parents scene was nice๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ? & what means by Rajveer baar baar ghar aayenge ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› hinting at something ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ dono ishara karr rahe the ke raj jab SIL ban jayega toh baar baar aayega...

Naina was sweet waiting for Raj ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›?.& fir so bhi gayi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† .their scene was nice๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ she was feeling so sorry & kind hearted Raj ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ itni jaldi maaf bhi kar diya ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› ? ab rajveer sir ke kindness ki wajah se hi toh KMA tika tha...voh gaye...toh serial hi bandh ho gaya...๐Ÿ˜†

Gullu da dhaba๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ? good they got there warna poor raj ko sandwich khane padte .๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› .& I thot he knew cooking ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ haan...par tired ho kar ghar aane ke baad cook koun karta hai yaar...!!! main toh bina khaye bhi so jayun...par meri mom sone nahi deti...๐Ÿ˜†

So finally every1 knows abt mission? so all the best to every1๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ?ek special extra best of luck 4 RN ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ? hope mission is not too dangerous. mujhe kya pata...main writer thode hi hun...Tongue

Ending of part .poor raj ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ has to relive all those memories again?he made me cry. I was reminded of LRL when he confessed same to naina.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ main toh tab tak ro rahi thi...jab tak RN phir se ek nahi ho gaye the...Cry

Waiting to see naina's parents reaction๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•?hope its not what I expect? zyada naraaz na ho ? hope they understand Raj's point of view.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Raj ka POV sab se better hum hi samajhte hain...aur koi nahi...

Now that u left at crucial point continue sooner..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› usi koshish me lagi hui hun...par kuch na kuch prob ho hi jati hai...

4got to say? overall part was lovely .bas end mein thoda sa rula diya.. but overall part awesome...........& yes congrats ๐Ÿฅณ on completing 100 pages 4 this FF too ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ thanqqq...thanqqq....thanqqqq...!!! aur vaise bhi rona ankhon ke liye achha hota hai...ankhen saaf ho jati hai na...

Thanxxxxxxxxxx Puri...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So finally i read one part ( i mean both now) of Ankahi. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Sorry for being late dear. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• arre mujhe pata tha na ke tu busy thi...aur Baishno devi gayi thi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Good part. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ dhanyavaad...

Tujhe to mai maroongi bus, mujhe to ab Raj ko akele dekh kar sadness aane lagi hai.๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ Bus bhi kar us ko torcher karna. pahle chu kar toh dikha...phir maarne ki baat sochna...๐Ÿ˜†

Sab kuch keh chuke hain ye dono ek doosre se aakhon ki aakhon me aur jaante bhi acche se hain ek doosre ki feelings ko but hothon se abhi tak kuch bhi nahi kaha hai. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• tabhi is fic ka naam ANKAHI hai...๐Ÿ˜†

Naina bhi chahti hai ki Raj us se kuch kahe par nahi ye to sach me LRL waala typical Raj hai jo itne asaani se kuch nahi kahega Naina se aur pata nahi keh bhi paayega ki nahi. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ab tum sab ki dua rahi toh jarur bolega...par kab nahi kah sakti...๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved the song n moments they spent with each other, ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Raj bhi na kabhi pass aata hai to kabhi door chala jaata hai, pata nahi kitna patience hai us me? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• baht patience hai us me...Embarrassed

Ye kaise mock drill thi, baap re par fir bhi Raj ko bahut bharosa tha apne cadets par ki vo us ko ki vo apne desh k liye sab kuch karenge aur jaroorat padne par Raj k against bhi jaayenge. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š aur Raj ke vishwas ki jeet bhi hui...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

But they showed perfectly that they are true soldiers of Rajveer. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Naina is really angry on herself and on him too. I know Naina should not say that to him. haan...voh toh aise hi bol gayi...abhi tak aqal kahan hai use

Loved Alekh's dialogue when Saleem Khan asked about Cadet Singh he said "de rahi hogi Rajveer sir ko karcha paani." ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† They all were shocked and unhappy with Rajveer but still he was laughing at their reaction. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
ab kya karen...ullu bann gaye hain sabhi...

They are active, smart and patriot. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Raj par Naina ka gussa karna obvious hai aakhir vo bhi bina soche samjhe aisa kaise kar sakta hai,๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ pareshaan karta rehta hai har baar apne cadets ko.
๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› yun kaha jaye ke us ka bhi in sab par haq hai...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Vertika...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Here is the next comment for next part.

Raj knows that whenever Naina's parents will get to know about him that he has killed Naveen they will never let Naina marry to him and than she has to choose between his family and his parents. raj ko naina par trust hai par use yeh nahi pata ke us ke parents ka kya reaction hoga...

Naaz really want happiness for Rajveer but his doubts are right too and it would be really sad if something. Every thing is very confidential.

Naina is very unhappy about her behavior but Raj to Raj hi hai na kab tak apni Naina se door rahega aur gussa to kabhi kar hi nahi sakta na. But he can't deny the fact ki kahin na kahin Naina aur us ki family ko bahut jyada hurt hoga ye yaad kar k kabhi bhi. sahi bhi hai aur raj ko bhi toh hoga na...

Naina was crying and waiting for him and he was unable to see tears in her eyes. That was nice and romantic but still waiting for their confession. confession....voh kya hota hai...!!! tu mere fic ka naam toh nahi bhul rahi hai na...๐Ÿ˜†

Now he told everyone that her life is in danger and now every body must be alert about that. I like the way u maintained secreacy in the update. thanqqqqq

Raj ka trust bahut hai apne cadets pe and i know after him ki vo kabhi Raj ko guilty feel nahi hone denge. yeh baat toh hai...

I am afraid that Raj has told everything to Naina's parents what will be their reaction. mere next part me hi hai...

Try to update soon.

Thanxxxxxxxx Vertika...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

update bahut achha hai....socha iss baar tarif hindi mein ki jaye...but cannot do it so well. koi baat nahi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...!!! actually main Hindi ke xtra xams deti hun...matlab mere regular studies ko chod kar...isiliye yahan par Hindi ki practice karti hun... par phir bhi pure hindi nahi likh pati bich bich me english ghush aati hai...๐Ÿ˜†
Alekh and huda ki comedy bahut acchi hai...their sense of humour is well timed which is what makes it so perfect. Jahan Naina ke parents Raj ke liye unka gratitude bata chahate hai, wahan Alekh aur Huda kuch aur hi hint karne ki koshish kar rahe hain. haan...par naina ke parents bhi toh nahi samajh paye na...๐Ÿ˜†
Yudi should follow his heart and not hear to any suggestions that Alekh and Huda give him when it comes to his and Shalini's relationship. He needs to take their relationship slowly and maturely. ab Yudi kya karega yeh toh use hi pata hai...๐Ÿ˜‰
Raj is very angry to see naina wanting for him all alone in the parking area and even more angry with Alekh and huda for leave her alone despite of knowing about the danger to her life. kisi ko pata nahi tha isiliye...
Naina feels very guilty about her behaviour...she is ashamed of all the things that she said to Raj...she knows how much her actions and words have hurt him causing him lot of pain.
But Raj has already forgiven her...how could be angry with naina...and most of all he can never see her cry. tabhi har baar naina bach jati hai...
Raj has finally told the truth of Navin's death to his parents. This has been the most difficult thing for him to do. And he can only hope that they will try and understand the circumstances in which he had to make such a decision. par aage kya hoga...
Naina will have to be strong not only for her parents but most of all for Raj...because at this time he his goign to need her support the most. yeah naina raj ko jarur support karegi is ki guarrenty main de sakti hun...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I know you have your exams...but I cannot help but be selfish...you have stopped at such a crucial point that I hope you will be able to continue soon. koi baat nahi dear...ud toh main kab ka likh chuki hun...par kuch na kuch prob aa jati hai aur main post nahi kar pati...!!! hope ke kal kar dun...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
All the best for your exams. Thanqqqqqq...

Thanxxxxxxx Nisha...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Sorry for the late reply but really Awsome Update........
continue soon........!

Thanxxxxxxxx Namita...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Abhi sirf thank u thanku hi hai ya ud bhi hai aage ?

hai na Ud aage...par abhi baht raat ho chuki hai toh aaj so jate hain...kal ud karte hain...okay...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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