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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Priya,

This part was out of the world👏👏👏...you have made the dreams of all LRL lovers and Rajiv's fans come true...And not matter which words i use to appreciate your talent...i will not be able to do justice. This was the moment that we all have wished to see in LRL. And thanks for writing this part in such a superb way.👏👏👏

Sumi ka comment itna accha hai ki👍🏼...everything that I say will just seem to be a repetition. But i am going to say it anyways.

Raj ke confession ko lekar hum sab pareshan the😲...because we were all afraid that Naina's parents would blame him for their son's death and misunderstand Raj. I completely agree with Sumi...Naveen khudkhushi nahi kar sakta tha kya. Raj ko zindagi bhar ga guilt de gaya.😉

After hearing Naveen's w/o i felt that my fear had just come true..but after reading the flashback...i wanted to give you a BIG HUG.🤗

You have narrated naina's mom's feelings so well that it brought tears to my eyes. Naina's ke parents se maafi paane par, Raj ko apne guilt se mukti mil gayi. Hope that this joy will always stay in his life.😊

Naina knew that even though everything between her parents and Raj went very well...Raj had been through tremendous emotional stress, and it was soooo touching when she came to check on him. I have already read this scene twice but i still want to read it again.😍

Naaz, naina se bahut sawal pooch rahi thi😕...par luckily Huda aur Alekh wahan aa gaye aur who kuch zyada nahi jaan payi. They are keeping a close eye on naina just like Raj had asked them too.

Shalini has found a very good friend in Yudi but she still thinks of him as her student and friend. She is thankful to naina because her love had brought Raj back in shalini's life. Raj made her understand that she needed to move on in life and leave behind a dead relationship. it was only because of Raj's support that she was able to divorce her husband.😊

Naina, Raj and his students are shocked😲 to hear naina's parents talk about Huda and her marriage. No one had ever thought ki naina ka yeh chota sa jooth aisa problem create karega.

Seeing Raj's reaction and heart break😭...I was afraid that he might just leave the base and go far away. Par tabhi naveen ka wahan aana aur Raj ko samjana ki usse bhi jeene ka adhikar hai...khush hone ka haq hai...was very good.

Naina breaks down in front of her parents because she is afraid that she might lose Raj again.😭 Alekh ek sacche bhai aur dost ki tarah naina ke dil ki baat uske parents ko batata hai. They are all overjoyed when naina's parents accept her and Raj's relationship.

Huda's confrontation with Raj was too good. Some one needed to give Raj that extra push...and Huda was there to support Raj.

And finally Raj confessed his love to naina...the very thing that all of us had been waiting for.

Well i have tried to give my reply...but you have made me so emotional with this part that I think I need to be as good a writer as you are to truly appreciate your talent. So bahi ke liye isse kaam chala lo.😉 Please continue soon...waiting eagerly to read the next part.

Wish you all the best for your exams. 👍🏼

Edited by dazzling_glory - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Yippieee… . Finally confession ☺️ after so much intezaar😆😆😆 …3 words for which we were waiting 4 so long…😳😳😳now next update mein aakar yeh mat kehna it was just Rajveer's dream…😆😆😆

As 4 this part loved the beginning happy that naina's parents understood Raj's POV much better than naina…😃😃😃when he confessed to her … she got angry …& mere Rajveer ko shoot bhi kiya … I so hated her back then…😡😡

Really happy to see Rajveer ki itne saalon ki tension door ho gayi… 😃😃😃 the thing he dreaded 4 so long … guess it wud be a big relief 4 him bechara itne saalon se pareshaan tha…😔but humari writerji Rajveer ko kahan chain se jeene degi…😈 de diya na zor ka jhatka Raj ko…with huda-naina shadi news..😆😆😆😆

For first time liked huda…good to c… he has got brains here …so thanku to him😃😃😃

& badawala thanku to naveen bhoot for giving some brains to Rajveer…😆😆😆

Yudi-shalini ki bhi gadi chal padi …gud👏👏👏

As 4 naaz I am having serious doubts 😕😕…kuch toh gadbad hai…😆😆don't know why not giving me positive vibes…

Shalini FB was sad… bechari such a sweet lady … used to like her in LRL. 😊😊Glad Raj helped her out.😃😃 I wonder he helps & understands every1 😳😳…but when it comes to himself khud ki lovestory itni slow😒 & complicated kyun hai😔…but now with confession hope the speed accelerates…😆😆😆

Will wait 4 next part to see how RN relation progresses from here after confession.😳😳

Continue soon oops I mean whenever u free from exams…😃😃 all the best 4 exams…👍🏼wishing u all the luck …hope u get easiest of questions..😃😃

& before I 4get bigwala thanku for a long part this time no complaints with the length…😃😃😃but hoping u didn't had problem with length of comment.😛😛😛 .dont fall asleep sweety…🥱🥱 & yes LRL jokes were 2gud…👏👏👏👏 6saal ka raj…🤣

Continue ASAP 😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Woah....Finally jo LRL mein nahi hua woh yaha ho gaya....ANKAHE jazbaaton ko juzaab mil gaya....... Rajveer ne Naina se I Love You bol diya.....WOWWWWWW.........Love you Priya.....I so loved the part.........mujhe laga tu iss part ko aur kheenchegi,magar nahi tune Rajveer se bulwa hi diya apne pyaar ka izhaar.....haayyyeeeee..............now waiting for the next part like a desperate despo.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
love you for this............... a very tight hug for this update..
wonderful, amazing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god u made them confess their love 4 eachother, any how.
One more, the best part was that Naina's parents forgive Raj's mistake or i should say his act.
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love u too Priya
bcoz finally Raj ne Naina se pyaar ka izhaar kar hi diya!!!
waiting for next part soon...!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Pehle mujhe ye bata ki sach me kya Raj ne Naina se i love u kaha hai ki nahi abhi, kahin tu hume sapna to nahi dikha rahi hai na?

Ok coming to the update, that was lnteresting.

Sab se jyada mai jis baat se khush hue hoon vo baat ye hai ki jis cheej se Raj sab se jyada dar raha tha ab us ko darne ki jaroorat nahi hai us se. Saara us ka dukh aur dard ek pal me khatam ho gaya jab Naveen ki maa ne us ko maaf kar diya.
Sach kaha unhone jab ek maa ka baccha dard me hota hai to us ko dekh kar sab se jyada dard maa ko hi hota hai. Shayad vo jo dua kar rahi thi Naveen k dukhon ko khatam karne k liye kahin na kahin bahgwaan ne bhi us ko manjoor kar liya.
Raj itne dino se jo bhi kuch apne andar chupa k baitha tha aaj vo sab saara dard bahar aa gaya aur ab vo bina kisi pareshaani se khule man se Naina ko accept kar sakta hai. Yahan Naina aur Raj ki to vahan Yudi ki bhi gaadi set ho rahi hai kuch had tak.
Naina ko pata chal hi gaya aakhir Doc Shalini ne thanks kyoun kaha tha us ko, aakhir Raj ne un ki life ka sab se bada problem jo solve kar diya tha na. Jis rishte ko Doc Shalini dho rahi thi us me kuch nahi bacha tha vaise bhi varna vo aadmi divorce k fauran baad hi kaise shaadi kar leta?
Sab k liye itna karta hai Raj par apne liye jab kuch karne ki baari aati hai to peeche reh jaata hai vo. Accha kiya tha Huda aur Alekh ne Naina ko daata tha bina bataye yu hi Raj se milne jaane k liye. Ab Raj kam se har raat sukoon se so sakega, Naaz bhi khush hai apne bhai ki khushi k liye.
Par ye kya hua? I mean ye Naina bhi na Raj se milne k baad bhi us ne apne parents ko nahi bataya ki vo Huda se shaadi nahi karegi Raj se karegi? Ye Huda to khush ho gaya ye jaan kar ki Naina us se shaadi karna chahta hai aur daud gaya.
Naina k parents ko bhi ye baat poochne k liye Raj hi mila tha, us se pooch rahe hain Huda kaisa hai Naina us se shaadi karna chahti hai. Ab Raj vaise bhi kya bolta aur nahi hi bola us ne aur Naina ko thanks keh kar chale gaye janab aur jaa k ro rahe hain.
Raj grow up dood, ye kya ladkiyoun ki tarah rona laga k rakha hai jaa k kehte kyoun nahi Naina se. Ab ye baat bhi Huda samajha raha hai apne sir ko, tab jaa k gaye janab. Yahan finally Naina ne rote rote poori raam kahani bata di apne parents ko aur vo bhi gayi.
Song was perfect and one of my favorite, but is it true?
I am still in doubt aur mujhe ye bata ki kahin ye fic bhi to khatam nahi hone jaa raha hai na? 😕 😕 😕
Update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
y r u nt updaing????????????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting for the update mam..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
arre...abhi abhi toh UPDATE kiya tha na...itni jaldi kya hai...kuch din ruk jayo...main phir UPDATE karti hun na...pakka...😃

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