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@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#731

hi 😊

the up is good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

naina was waiting for raj😃 but raj got angry on her as the place was not safe for her

he really cares for her 😊😊😊😊😊

naina raj se aapne baat ke liye maaffe maagte haai 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃naina ko aase maaffee maagte dekh ke aur rote hue dekh raj feels bad woh naina se kaheta that he forgives her😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 but yeh raj aapna pyaar aapna dukh naina se chuppa kun raha haai 😕😕😕😕😕😕😕maana ke uske dil mein guilt haai ke usne naveen ko naina se aur uske paarivaar se cheen liya par jab naina ne usse maaff kar diya haai tabhie raj aapne dil mein yeh baat ko leekar kun baithta haai 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

ab raj ne naina ke parents se sab kuch baata diya haai 😭😭😭😭😭

hope that naina's parents forgive him😊

taaki raj ko aur aapne feelings aapna love naina se chuppana naa paare 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

plz cont soon and pm me with a romantic one my eyes are eagerly waiting to see a romantic scene between rn😳

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

OOMGGGGG ....!i love the whole story....
it awesome yaarr...........brilliant,amazing .....story........

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

Namashkaar !!!

Kya sunenge aap?

Taariff? 😛 ya Gaaliyaaan??😡

huh !! main to tujhse baat nahi karne waali thi...

Kyun? Yeh tu jaanti hai...

Kyunki kisi bhi SAHI cheez se GALAT Inspiration lena kitnaaaaaaaa galat yeh tum jaanti bhi ho???😡

Ab se dekhna, main tujhse pehle kabhiiii bhi update nahii karungi...katti !!!

par update ekdam...boletoh ekdam jhakkkkkkaaaaas tha !!!

so naina ko bata diya gaya ki usse scape goat banaya jaa raha tha...good !

RN scene in the car was awesome !! and yesss...RAJ ne usse Jeep mein notice kiya ISSIIIILIYE itna badhiya RN scene mila...right SUMI ?? 😛 (Ab kya karu, tere kaarnaame ki wajehse main tujse bahot gussa hoon pri ! Update ready hone ke bawajood bekar mein usse break kiya !??😕)

and ab last scene ....awesoooooooooooomeee !!!

ab jaldi continue karo plzzzzzzz....

P.S. :- aur haan ! Naina ke Maa- BABA ko mera msg dena plz...agar galat fehmi ho toh aur baat hai, par saare doubts clear hone par bhi unhone adiyal logonki tarah Raj ke bajay Huda se Naina ka rishta karana chaha aur Raj ko continuously naveen ka qatil bula bulakar hurt karte rahe aur rulate rahe, toh main unhe Anaesthesize karke....aree nahi....apna FILMY chloroform sunghake , behosh karke, Naina ko kidnap karlungi aur uski shaadi Raj se karadungi !

Agar Raj apne usoolon ka drama karne laga toh uske haath pair baandhne mein bhi kam nahi karungi....u GET THAT???😛😉😆

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

Aaawww superfast update 😛😛😛 …lagta hai last part mein humsab ne milke kuch zyada taang khinch di 😆😆😆😆 ……sowie..😈 .but if leg pulling gives us fast updates then no sorry…😆😆😆

Coming to part …if in last part Rajveer gave heart attack to me 😆😆😆 ..this time its naina's parents turn 😆😆😆 can imagine there shocked faces. The beginning of the part was gud 👏👏👏 ..progressed nicely…huda-alekh-naina parents scene was nice😃😃😃 … & what means by Rajveer baar baar ghar aayenge 😛😛😛 hinting at something 😉😉😉

Naina was sweet waiting for Raj 😛 😛….& fir so bhi gayi 😆😆😆 .their scene was nice😃😃😃 she was feeling so sorry & kind hearted Raj 😳😳😳 itni jaldi maaf bhi kar diya 😛😛😛 …Gullu da dhaba😆😆😆😆 … good they got there warna poor raj ko sandwich khane padte .😛😛😛 .& I thot he knew cooking 😉😉😉

So finally every1 knows abt mission… so all the best to every1👍🏼 …ek special extra best of luck 4 RN 👍🏼… hope mission is not too dangerous.

Ending of part .poor raj 😭😭😭 has to relive all those memories again…he made me cry. I was reminded of LRL when he confessed same to naina.😭😭😭😭

Waiting to see naina's parents reaction😕 😕…hope its not what I expect… zyada naraaz na ho … hope they understand Raj's point of view.😳😳😳

Now that u left at crucial point continue sooner..😛😛😛😛

4got to say… overall part was lovely .bas end mein thoda sa rula diya.. but overall part awesome...........& yes congrats 🥳 on completing 100 pages 4 this FF too 👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

So finally i read one part ( i mean both now) of Ankahi. 😆 😆 😆

Sorry for being late dear. 😕 😕 😕

Good part. 👏 👏 👏

Tujhe to mai maroongi bus, mujhe to ab Raj ko akele dekh kar sadness aane lagi hai.😭 😭 😭 Bus bhi kar us ko torcher karna.

Sab kuch keh chuke hain ye dono ek doosre se aakhon ki aakhon me aur jaante bhi acche se hain ek doosre ki feelings ko but hothon se abhi tak kuch bhi nahi kaha hai. 😕 😕 😕

Naina bhi chahti hai ki Raj us se kuch kahe par nahi ye to sach me LRL waala typical Raj hai jo itne asaani se kuch nahi kahega Naina se aur pata nahi keh bhi paayega ki nahi. 😡 😡 😡

Loved the song n moments they spent with each other, 😳 😳 😳 Raj bhi na kabhi pass aata hai to kabhi door chala jaata hai, pata nahi kitna patience hai us me? 😕 😕 😕

Ye kaise mock drill thi, baap re par fir bhi Raj ko bahut bharosa tha apne cadets par ki vo us ko ki vo apne desh k liye sab kuch karenge aur jaroorat padne par Raj k against bhi jaayenge. 😊 😊 😊

But they showed perfectly that they are true soldiers of Rajveer. 👏 👏 👏 Naina is really angry on herself and on him too. I know Naina should not say that to him.

Loved Alekh's dialogue when Saleem Khan asked about Cadet Singh he said "de rahi hogi Rajveer sir ko karcha paani." 😆 😆 😆 They all were shocked and unhappy with Rajveer but still he was laughing at their reaction. 😉 😉 😉

They are active, smart and patriot. 👏 👏 👏 Raj par Naina ka gussa karna obvious hai aakhir vo bhi bina soche samjhe aisa kaise kar sakta hai,😲 😲 😲 pareshaan karta rehta hai har baar apne cadets ko. 😛 😛 😛

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

Here is the next comment for next part.

Raj knows that whenever Naina's parents will get to know about him that he has killed Naveen they will never let Naina marry to him and than she has to choose between his family and his parents.

Naaz really want happiness for Rajveer but his doubts are right too and it would be really sad if something. Every thing is very confidential.

Naina is very unhappy about her behavior but Raj to Raj hi hai na kab tak apni Naina se door rahega aur gussa to kabhi kar hi nahi sakta na. But he can't deny the fact ki kahin na kahin Naina aur us ki family ko bahut jyada hurt hoga ye yaad kar k kabhi bhi.

Naina was crying and waiting for him and he was unable to see tears in her eyes. That was nice and romantic but still waiting for their confession.

Now he told everyone that her life is in danger and now every body must be alert about that. I like the way u maintained secreacy in the update.

Raj ka trust bahut hai apne cadets pe and i know after him ki vo kabhi Raj ko guilty feel nahi hone denge.

I am afraid that Raj has told everything to Naina's parents what will be their reaction.

Try to update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

update bahut achha hai....socha iss baar tarif hindi meinki jaye...but cannot do it so well.

Alekh and huda ki comedy bahut acchi hai...their sense of humour is well timed which is what makes it so perfect. Jahan Naina ke parents Raj ke liye unka gratitude bata chahate hai, wahan Alekh aur Huda kuch aur hi hint karne ki koshish kar rahe hain.

Yudi should follow his heart and not hear to any suggestions that Alekh and Huda give him when it comes to his and Shalini's relationship. He needs to take their relationship slowly and maturely.

Raj is very angry to see naina wanting for him all alone in the parking area and even more angry with Alekh and huda for leave her alone despite of knowing about the danger to her life.

Naina feels very guilty about her behaviour...she is ashamed of all the things that she said to Raj...she knows how much her actions and words have hurt him causing him lot of pain.

But Raj has already forgiven her...how could be angry with naina...and most of all he can never see her cry.

Raj has finally told the truth of Navin's death to his parents. This has been the most difficult thing for him to do. And he can only hope that they will try and understand the circumstances in which he had to make such a decision.

Naina will have to be strong not only for her parents but most of all for Raj...because at this time he his goign to need her support the most.

I know you have your exams...but I cannot help but be selfish...you have stopped at such a crucial point that I hope you will be able to continue soon.

All the best for your exams.

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

Sorry for the late reply but really Awsome Update........
continue soon........!

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Another beauuuuuuuuuutiful part 👏👏👏 thanqqqq
Sumi...
Main pehle hi bata deti hu....mera fav scene....end wala tha....jab Raj Navin ke bare me baat kar raha hota hai.....Maine pehle bhi kaha hai....meri nazar me....ye baat Raj ko jitna jhinjhorta hai....utna shayad kuch aur nahi kar pata....and Rajveer ke dialogue me wo essence bakhubi tha!! 👏👏 main bach gayi...!!! main khud is scene me voh dard lana chahti thi...par mujhe is scene me phir bhi baht kami nazar aa rahi thi...par ab...mujhe 'Achhi Bachhi' ne jo tarif kar diya...

Anyways....coming to the very beginning....Aalekh n Huda....their double meanings r wonderful...😆😆...but all thruout the portion I was tensed...😆😆...coz mujhe to pata hai na....ki Raj ek khulasa karne jaa raha hai...😕....waise I knw...asan to nahi hai....but later on at least....Naina's parents shud mellow down on Rajveer!! 😕 But yeah...mere liye ye kehna shayad kuch zyada hi asan hai...😆😆😳 hum sare jo bhi raj ke fans hain...hum sab ko yeh kahna ashan hai...!!! par sach kahun toh main khud doubt me hun ke next part par tum sab ke reactions kya honge...😉

Now moving on to the RN portion...seeeeee.....mera Raj kitnaaaaaa scrutinizing hai....koi jeep me baitha tha....ye bhi usne notice kar liya....😳😳...thats why I love him sooooooo much....after all usike wajah se to hamein itnaaaaaa badhiya RN scene mila...😆😆 (yeah yeah....tumhari bhi thodi bahut credit thi) 😆😆 ek baat bata tu mujhe...!!! koi ek wajah hai jis ki wajah se tum meri khinchai na karo...!!! matlab kuch toh hoga na...!!! mujhe lagta hai tumhara answer bhi Mana ki tarah 'NO" hi hoga...😆😆

The scene was actually done very nicely Pri....well done!! ⭐️⭐️👏👏 As u said....dono characters prefer to keep it to themselves...so u need such moments....😉😉....and I guess....u r perfectly bringing them....😉😳😳 main tumhare is comment se phir se apne next part par chali gayi ke mujhe voh ud post karna chahiye ya nahi...😆

And next....Raj tells abt the mission....and the fact that Naina has to act as the scapegoat and thats why she is in danger!! But no worries actually....after all....Raj ne kaha hai na....uske hote hue...Naina ko kuch nahi hoga....and I knw...ye kitnaaaa sahi hai...😉😉😳😳 sahi hai matlab arre yaar...patthar ki lakeer hai...😆

And then of course...the ending scene....I hav already told....I loved that....but ye part mujhe chhota laga yaar!! 😕 Cud hav been longer na?? Ya phir....ye hamein yaha hanger pe latkane k liye tha?? 😲...😕 jo aap samjho...😆 vaise ud jaldi chahiye ya nahi...

Chahe kuch bhi ho....jaldi se next part ki tayyari karo....jaldi jaldi UD karna hoga tumhe....yeah I knw...u hav xam from 1st Feb....and sincerely wishing u ALL THE BEST for that....but hope gaps me tum UD bhi kar paogi...😳😊 vaise thanq haan...wishes ke liye...is ki shakhat jarurat hai...!!! aur rahi baat next ud ki toh voh toh taiyar hai...bas post kar ne ki deri hai...😃

And now LRL jokes:

Number 1 was awwwww....😳😳...my lil Rajveer is sooooooo....intelligent!! Haiiiii main mar jawa!! 😳😳

And even Number 2 is cool....😆😆😆...

Plssssssssss doooooo tryyyyyy toooooo continueeeee soooooonnnn....😉 yeh kya hai Sumi...itna bada 'cont soon'...ab mujhe seriously is ke bare me kuch sochna padega kya...??? ya phir kuch le de kar kaam thoda postpond kar sakte hain...😆

Luv,
Sumi. 😳