ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 8

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was mindblowing ud ... thanxxx prerna...😃 😳

how everytime and in every fic u write so well ...well...i don't think so....!!! yaar...main toh abhi is field me nayi hun...!!! bas jo bhi dimag me aata hai...use likh deti hun. thanxxx a lot dear ki tumhe yeh part achha laga...😳

tum apne saare fics ke emotions itne acchi trah kaise pakadti ho

love the way u introduced each character and there situations thanxxx😊

love the Naina Gunny scene

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: .x.Shilky.x.

All the charcters very well introduced...!!!
N loved Naaz-Raj part...!!
n nice ff once again

its fab...!!!

The words about Life and First Love were just beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I could almost hear Navin's voice say them!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊

Raj ka Naina ko yaad karna was very emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Sach kaha ke Raj kabhi apne pehle pyaar ko bhul nahi payega!!!!!

Naina ko toh lagta tha ke Rajveer par sabse zyada haq uska hai aur yeh sahi bhi hai!!!!!

Raj apne saare ilzaamo se bari ho gaya and now has been promoted to the rank of Major!!!!!

It is nice to see that justice was done chahe der se hi sahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yun kah lo...der aaye ...durust aaye...😃

The system in which Raj believed in completely did work!!!!!!

Navin bhi chahta hai ke Raj aur Naina ek ho jaye hamesha hamesha ke liye!!!!!!

Raj's feelings about Naina was described beautifully!!!!!

It's great that he has been posted in India again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊arre tune voh nara nahin suna...'east or west india is d best'😃

The song is very nice and perfect for describing their emotions!!!!!!

Naina was seeing Raj's accident again in her nightmare!!!!!!!!

Naina is remembering all the moments she had spent with Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

It was a trip down memory lane!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊really😊

It is very sad that Raj has not told Naina that he is alive!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔haan...yeh baat toh hai

Doesn't he know how happy she will be to know that??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡koi wajah hogi us k paas😊

Naina ne apni responsibilty poori kar di par ab usko bhi hak hai apna khoya huya pyaar wapas paane ka!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭tabhi toh 'ankahi' naam k spl. dish k sath pesh hui hun😆

The way Naina's emotions and pain were depicted was beautiful!!!!!!

Naina is sitting and crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ke kandhe par kisne haath rakha??😕 😕 😕 😕maj nair ne...!!! un se naina ka dard bardast nahin ho raha tha...😆

Jaldi se Raj aur Naina ko ek dusre ki zindagi mein wapas lao taaki woh dono hamesha ke liye ek ho jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

Ah Pallavi Subhash .... I hope this Character is Played by the Actress 😳 because she's my Favourite ofcourse along with our Dear Pri !! tabhi tum ne apna username iqbal-pallavi rakha hua hai hai....😛 ...aur haan yeh chrachter bhi pallavi...i mean real pallvi ko maine sign karwaya hai...!!! vaise voh abhi 'Basera' naam k ek serial me busy hai aur voh bhi mere 'TN' fic k main villian k opposite me...😆

anyways glad to Know that None of our Cadets have changed Huda Vohi ka Vohi Flirt ... aur phek tha bhi hain 😆 haan...voh agar yeh chod dega toh real huda nahin rahega na...😆

Yudi, has became the Man he wanted to be, good to know that his Parents our proud of his aswell .. aur bhi kai hain jo us k liye proud feel karta hai...😃

Pooja and Ali, Mashalla !! they are so cute ... Ali bhi apni hone wali patni ka sapne dekhna shuru kardiya, and humari Punjabi Kri aur uski Mobile Lingo, uska koi kya kahe ... waah!! haan...ab Ali ki shaadi honewali hai toh romantic sapna toh dekhega hi na...😆

Aur coming to Naina, *Sigh* really Man her Name seems so incomplete without Rajveer so just make them meet Asap ...lo... story suru hui nahin ki tum log un dono ko milwane k liye mujh par pressure dal rahe ho...!!! ab agar main tum sab k pressure me aa gayi na toh mujhe toh pakka unhe milwana hi padega...😉

but till then she's got her friends and her Gunny "Baiyya" 😆 Gunny seems to be a Jovial Character on this ...maine thoda sa change kiya hai gunny k charechtar ko...!!! arre yaar...tum ne notice kiya hai...ek smile aane k liye us k chehre par pura adha ghanta lag jata tha....aur jab us k face par smile finally aati thi...tab raat k 10:00 baj jate the aur serial khatam ho jata tha...😆

aur Our Kaidi Alekh, i feel sorry for ... he's got married to his Love, but they don't have that Relationship .. I know Neelu's feeling Guilty, but can't she see the Love He's got for her ... and i can't believe the Babys dead 😭 dj's ne bekar me ek faltu scene add kar diya tha. matlab jab neelu pyar alekh se karti thi toh voh kisi aur se kaise kah sakti thi ki' main tumhare bacche ki maa ban ne wali hun( famous dial of hindi movies)😆'...hai na...!!! toh maine dj's k is idea par phynail ka pocha maar diya hai is fic me...!!!😆

Now our Hero ... Hai kya entry Maari !! Mwaah Mwaah ... it seemed like a scene out of a Film, i wish i had popcorn with me 😆 😆sirf popcorn...cold drink nahin chahiye...!!! tum baitho main cold drink bhejti hun...'sprite' chalegi na...!!! kyoun ki "sprite bujhaye pyaas...baki all bakwaas"....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


Great Update 👏 Thanqqqqqq😃

Your a ⭐️ kya baat kar rahi ho...???star bole toh vohi na... jab kisi k saar par zor se danda padta hai aur us ko din me stars⭐️ dikhai deta hai ...hai na...!!! main voh hun....yeh mujhe aaj hi pata chala...😆


Take care

Yasmin

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

woww.... nice intro of all characters.... thanqqqqqq😃
so finally they all r going to meet in J &K...gr888..hope Raj ki posting bhi wahi pe ho.. 😍 let's see😉
Raj is back with bang... 😛 n aate hi... aate hi kya...??? 😆
lovely update..looking forward for RN meeting... pls unhe jyaada mat rulana... 😒 main toh unhe pakka rulane wali hun...😆
waiting for the next update.... n desperately waiting for "Tere naina" 😳pahle is ka ud toh kar dun...phir TN ka bhi kar dungi....😃

Originally posted by: guglu088

Superb. ...Dhanyavaad😃

Arey intro hua to kya hua, padhkar bahut acha laga.Aur wapas se LRL ki yaad bhi tazaa ho gayi.😊 tabhi toh maine ise post kiya tha...tum sab ko 'taaza' karne k liye...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aur tumne fir se ek mod pe lakar kahani ko adhura chod diya. voh meri purani bimari hai...jo kabhi thik nahin hoti...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Huda was hilarious.😆😆😆koi shaq...😆 😆 😆

The part about Aalekh and Neelu was a bit sad. 😭Kash ki Neelu ko jaldi samajh me aa jaye ki Aalekh usse kitna pyar karta hai.😭aayega...aayega... nahin aayega toh main use thappad maar kar yeh ehsaas dilayungi...😆

Also sabki posting J&K me hui hai. Kash Naina wahan Raj se mile. Aur Raj usse Barfile wadiyon me propose kare.😉(Just joking).vaise idea itna bura nahin hai... lekin thik propose karne k waqt agar border paar se ek bullet aa gayi toh tum sab meri peetai kar doge...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj: Kya entry thi. Wah!!!!!!!Dil kush ho gaya.👏 Par Naaz hai kaun? raj ne use apna sister bola na...!!! toh voh sayad kuch lagti hogi raj ki...!!! aage dekhte hain raj us ka intro kya deta hai...😃

Absolutely mind blowing. thanqqq😃

And the last part where Rajveer said to Naaz that TU MAJ RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT KI BEHEN HAI!!!!!!!!Wah kya baat hai. Arey meri excitement control nahi ho rahi hai.👏

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👏👏👏... voh toh dikhai hi de raha hai...😃

Pata chala ye sab padhte padhte mai khud hi kabhi likhne lagun.😆😆😆.😉😉😉likh toh rahi ho na...ek awesome fic aur maine jo kaha tha voh ho bhi raha hai tumhare fic me...😃

And thanks for sending me the pm. le...ab frnds ko bhi thanx kahte hain kya???😡

Jaldi update karna next part. I'm waiting eagerly for it. kar dungi...next yr tak toh pakka ud kar dungi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow very beautiful part. Thanqqqqqq Sumaiya😃

Aur main last se start karungi. Haiiiii, kya entry tha hamare hero ki. Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!! 😳 I luved this portion a lot. Actually pure part me main Raj ka hi scene dhund rahi thi......hehe. But sabse achhi cheez to end k liye hi rakhi jayegi na. ryt dear...tabhi toh khana khane k baad hi sweet khate hai na...😆

And now my cutie, Gunny. I'm happy dat he's also in the FF. Luved his convo wid Naina. And to tell the truth, I hav always wanted a glimpse of Navin in him whenever he was wid Naina. So u kinda fulfilled it. yaar mujhe bhi yahi lagta tha...toh maine apne dil ki murad puri kar li...!!! glad ki tumhe bhi yeh achha laga...😃

I am feeling very bad abt Aalekh. He doesnt deserve such a painful lyf. And Huda's encounter wid Capt. Pallavi was really funny. Poor guy always gets himself embarrassed. apni sikka jamane k chakkar me hamesha fasta hai Huda...😆

Yudi's part was also sweet. And so was Ali n Puja's. they both wer having such sweet dreams aur Puja ne to baccho k naam bhi dekh liye.....lol. haan...voh bhi aise ajeeb...😆

Anyways, ab main sabke ek sath hone ka besabhri se intezaar kar rahi hu. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.