ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 47

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

awesome update dear wowwwwwwwwwwwwww no words to describe amazing fantastic update soonnnnnn tc

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

superb

mindblowing

loved the part

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiii Priya, hiiiii Yogi

How r u? ab bataya toh tha tujhe ki halat nazuk hai...abhi bhi puch rahi hai

Fabulous part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 shukriya😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Sab se pehle meri fav scene in this part pe aati hun,mera matlab poora update i liked so much but raj n naina scene i loved sooooooooooo much ...haan haan...matlab mat samjha...main samajh sakti hun...dost jo hun teri...😆 😆 😆

wah kya scene tha yaar ,maine us part 2 times padha tha,isse pehle tu mujhse kahegi kha kasam main sirf kasam hi kya sab kuch khakhe kehthi hun i read that part two times ....... sachhi tu sab kuch kha sakti hai...??? phir toh ek din main tujhe apne hath ka mashrum bana kar khilayungi...phir kabhi kuch khane ko nahi kahegi...kyoun ki tu tab Mana k hospital me apne pet pakde padi hogi...😆

especially jab naina raj ko huda samajhke baat kar rahi thi na ..n when naina said "mujhe apni poori zindagi main aapki jarrorat hain" n naina raj aur uski photo wall pe lagathe hue jo baat ki thi na ..they r such an awesome scenes.....loved them ..tune bahut cutely likha tha Dhnyawaad...Yogi jee...hum sach me baht khush hue...😃

so finally naina madam aagayi line pe ,kitna sweetly raj kaha aur nahi toh kya...Line pe toh aati hi na...!!! ab use yeh bhi toh samajhna chahiye na ki use LINE koun maar raha hai...😆

Naina ki friends kitna acche hain ..huda is so nice ....thanks to him ..ab uski wajah se hi humko itna acchi ,lovely sweet RN scene mila na...the canteen scene is so funny Huda ka char thoda change kiya hai...!!! kya hai na...is fic me Huda thoda samajhdaar hoga...😛

Loved the way how u portrayed Naazs character ...ye naaz ke family ke saath kya hua..aur ye yusuf usko kaunsa kaam karne ko kehraha tha.. in sab k jaane k liye aap ko PRATIKSHA karni padegi...

the convo between raj n Col Gupta is nice dhanyawaad

tune ye kahape rokdi yaar waiting eagerly to know now what raj say to naina....so jaldi se update kar ab tune itni jaldi comment kiya hai toh jaldi toh ud karna hi padega na...😆

thanks to dhara for giving u maarne ki dhamki ..ab tu uski wajah se ye ud ki na .... ab kya karen... jaan kis ko pyari nahi hoti hai yaar...😆

n lots of hugs to u for this lovely update 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 meri taraf se bhi 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: vvdn

gr88 update dear.. thanxxxx Namita...

Naina n Raj sach mein bohot badal gaye hai...dono ne sharmana chodkar freely baat karna start kar diya hai...luved the update.. aur main kya karti...jo serial me chal raha tha...vaisa sab dikhane ki koshish karti toh...dono is janam toh kabhi bhi sath nahi ho pate...😆

plzzz continue soon

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

absolutely wonderful updt.....👏 thanqqqqqqqq😃

convo of col and maj was very nice and interesting..unhone bhi raj ko pakad hi liya dat he luvs naina.......raj is very obvious wen it comes to naina...too good der..... 😳

den naaz and gunny part wasa good as well... 👏 thanxxxx😃

loved d cadets part and den rn was awesome.... 👏 thanq😃
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loved it wen raj said"basss...itna sa kaam...voh toh main jaldi hi kar dunga...!!! us k baad...kya...main Rajasthan ja sakta hun...???

Naina:- "nahi...bilkul nahi...aap mujhe chod kar kahin nahi ja sakte...!!!

Maj rajveer mushkuraye...Naina k thoda aur kareeb aaye eur kaha:- "kya kaha tum ne...???"

Naina ne nazrain jhukayi aur dhire se kaha:- "mujhe apni puri zindagi me aap ki jaruart hai Raj...!!!"....

tooo goood luved it......👏😳 ab naina k muh se kuch sahi words nikalwane k liye yeh sab jaruri tha...😃 😃

gr8 updt in all thanxxxx a lot Lipi😃

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb part thanxxxx Nisha...😃

Raj gets worried to see that Col Gupta wants naina to be the target of the enemy in their coming mission. He tries to change Col Gupta's decision but when he sees that he is losing. He puts behind his emotions and like a true soldiers accepts the challenge. He is confident that they will be successful in their mission and naina will be his strength and not weakness. tabhi toh us ne kuch socha hai...jo ki us k liye baht tough hoga...lekin...kahte hai na kuch pane k liye kuch khona padta hai...😊

Col Gupta knows that Naina is the love of Raj's life. And just like us he wants to know that when will Raj propose to naina. He even tells Raj that he will waiting to meet his naina and not Lt Singh. haan...varna Maj rajveer ka dimag army k rules k hishab se chalta...na😛

Naaaz and her family have suffered so much'par yeh saab kaise hua? And After all of this how could Yusauf that she will marry him. Hope that Naaz will be ok. yupe...main hun na sab k sath sab kuch achha hi hoga...😃

Naina and her friends are trying to bring Raj and her together. All of them come up with excuses and refuse to help her to set up her room. tabhi toh RN thode tym k liye akele me bita payenge...😃

Huda manages to send Raj to naina's room by making an excuse. huda ka char thoda change kiya hai maine...

And when Raj reaches there he is surprised to hear her complain about him. Who bina dekhe hi apni baat bol rahi thi. He has never heard naina speak like this and wonders whether he has changed over time or has she changed. ab naina itna bolegi toh toh raj toh hairan hi hoga na...!!! khaash kar k tab jab sare complns usi k liye ho...😛

Naina Raj se keh deti hai ki who zindagi bhaar ke liye Raj ko apne paas rakh na chahati hai. Raj aur apni photo lagete hua naina Raj se jo kuch bhi kehti hai usse yeh to saaf hai ki who raj se bahut pyaar karti hai. haan...par abhi bhi dono kuch nahi kah rahe hain...

Hope that Raj bhi apne pyaar ka izhaar karke naina ko jaldi se aapni banale. Ameen...😃

Waiting to know what happens next. Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

that was awesome.......part..........👏 👏 👏..... thanxxxx Puri 😃

it was good to see Raj & naina talking so freely.........😃........... hope they confess soon.....ya u planning to make them confession on mission..😉 😉.......... ha ha ha...ab main kya karungi...yeh main pahle se hi thode hi na bol sakti hun...😆😆😆 samjha karo yaar...secreat hai...😉
continue soon asap......... & soon means real soon.... not late ki readers bhul hi jaye last part mein kya hua tha 😆 😆

ab batayo...tumhe yaad hai ya...phir se last ud post karun...😆😆

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Maj Rajveer n Capt Randhawa.....kya dhasooo combo hai yaar!! Main to abhi se day...umm its night tym actually.....so I am night dreaming wid open eyes....hehe. sach kahun hai...toh yeh tumhare liye tha...kyoun ki tumhe hi raj k baad Ankur pasand
!!! isiliye maine socha ki kyoun na 'achhi bachhi' k favs ko le kar ise likha jaye...😃

So Naina has to be a part of the mission widout being let to knw abt it all....in fact she will act as the target....hmm....I'm sure Raj n tum....dono sab sambhal lenge....mujhe chintakarne ki zarurat nahi hai...hehe!! bilkul sahi kaha hai tum ne...!!! hum dono us tension ko handel kar lenge...😆

Naaz ka scene zabardast tha....I liked the way her character is being portrayed....thanqqqqq 😃and Gunny ji to kuch zyada hi polite behave kar rahe the...hehe!! Not that I mind btw!! ha ha ha...ab kya karen...Gunny jee k char ko thoda badla hai maine toh yeh sab toh hoga hi...😆

Ali ka wo scene...bechara help karne jaa raha tha....lolz!! Huda did a gud job.....he is a gud kid here.....and Aalekh is as always "I knw it all".....gosh!! yupe...huda ka char thoda change kiya hai maine...😃

RN scene was fab fab fab!!! shukriya sumi jee.

Pehle to Naina ki bak bak....without seeing that handsum face just behind her....and Rajveer ka usse Raj bulwana.....and then wo tasveer wali scene....khana banane wali baat....all was tooooooooo gud!! Gr8 yaar Priya.....aise hi UD karti raho...punya milegi!! aur tumhe toh pata hi hai ki har inshan ko Punya ki kitni jarurat hoti hai...😆...!!! humain baht hi HARSH hua...jab humain pata laga ki yeh DRISHYA aap ko achha laga...😆

Hi Priya…..

How r u?

Dekho.mein yahan bhi tumhe bore karne aa gayi……………………par kya karun, tum itna acha likhti ho to mein tumhe bore to krungi hi na. ab mein apni bakwas band karungi aur tumhare updates par aati hun.

Part 8:-

Raj thodha sa confused hai tabhi wo is tarah behave kar raha hai naina ke saath. Naina ke man me raj ke liye bahut se questions hain aur wo pochana bhi chahti hai par kya Karen, raj abhi kisi bhi sawal ka answer karne ki condition me nahin hai.

Raj naina ke mom dad se milna chahta hai aur unse maafi mangna chahta hai. Please ab unko raj par gussa mat karne dena aur unhe jaldi se mana lena in dono ki shaadi ke liye. Naina raj ki condition samajhti hai aur issiliye wo chahti hai ki raj kud aa kar naina se sab discuss kare.

Dekho yeh pedh kitna acha hai na, usse pata hai ki raj aur naina ko baat karne ke liye time chahiye issi liye wo gir gaya aur raj naina ko baat karne ke liye time bhi mil gaya…….vese naina na pagal hai wo jeep se isliye bahar aayi kyunki wo dekhna chahti thi ki khayi kitni gehri hai…….uff……yeh ladki na sach me pagal hai.

Naina aaj bhi naveen ko bahut yaad karti hai aur uski aankhon me aanso aa jate hain. Aur yeh dard uske saath hamesha rahega.

Raj naina ka scene bahut acha tha jab raj na naina ko uska naam lene ke liye kaha aur naina ko kitni problem ho rahi thi raj ka naam lene me. It was very funny. Raj ne sahi kaha ki huda aalekh yudi ali aur pooja sab naina ke dost hai aur pata nahin raj ko dekh kar wo kaise react karenge issiliye usne naina ko chup rehne ke liye keh kar acha iya varna bechara un sab se kaise bachta.

Shalini ne samjhaya raj ko ki wo aise sabko chood kar na jaye, acha kiya varna raj apne dimaag ka istemal karte karte aur koi galat kaam kar bhethata aur sab kuch gadbad ho jati.

Ending to mast thi….aise situation me naina ko bhook lagna…….wow

In whole, the update was superb

Luv Preet

Hi again priya……..

Is baar me faltu ki baatein anhin arungi aur seedhe comment karungi.

Part 9:-

Raj ka reaction to superb tha bechara confuse hi ho gaya ki naina sach me naveen ki hi behen hai yan nahin. Par naina ki agli justification ne raj ka shaq door kr diya aur usse yakeen ho gaya ki naina naveen ki I behen hai kyunki uske pass question puchne se pehle hi uska answer ready hota hai.

Ab naina ko bhuta khana hai aur raj usse hilne se mana akr gaya usse dar hai ki kahiin phir se khayi ki gehrayi dekhne na chali jaye. Par naina ke reaction to fab hai yaar. Just loved them aur uska bhutte wale se behas karna,bilkul bachi hi hai yeh ladki.

When I was reading the bhutte ke daane wala scene, I was shocked. Mene socha ki aisa kaam raj ar hi nahin sakta kyunki pyaar ka izhaar to usse karna hi nahin aata na aur mera khyaal theek bhi tha yeh dono sapne bahut dekhte hain aur wo bhi kholi aankhon se. I loved raj's reaction, jaise wo jeep se bahar kood gaya. It was very funny yaar.

Jab naina ne apni watch raj se vaapis mangi na, I totally loved it. It was so sweet and very special moment for both of them.

Party scene was fab and raj's entry was beautiful. All were happy to see him and were also angry with him because he hasn't met them. I loved the way he met everyone and then he left, but naina sudherti hi nahin phir se raj ko sir bula rahi thi par wo aadat se majboor thi, jaldi hi sudhar jayegi. Aalekh ne naina ka jhuth pakad hi liya aur pakadta bhi kaise na in sab me wohi hai jo apne dimag ka use karta hai.

I am looking forward to read about raj's case. Going to next part.

Luv Preet