ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 38

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

nice update

too good

superb

mindblowing

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Priya Hiiii Sur...
How are you? baht bura...
thik hi hogi na itna mast update likha
fir bhi bata hi do
thik ho na? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 nahi yaar...haal...bilkul be-hal hai...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
lolz chalo ab jab hi hello ho gai hai, update par atey hai
Update to bahuuuuuuuuuuut achchaaaaaaaaaaa tha shukriya maam...😃
Lagta hai Rajveer ko dekhte hi Naina k andar ajib o garib reactions hone lagte hai...I mean usey sawaal poochne k alawa kuch soojhta hi nahi...Lagta hai uska maanna hai k ab Sach ka Saamna usey host karna chaiye- Raj k sath! haan...kyoun nahi...par kuch aise sawal Raj puchta hai ki us se pahle Naina us show se bhaag jayegi...😆

Aur humare pyaare Rajveer Sir ko to jeep chalate chalate daura pad gaya! jab usne ekdum se jeep roki, mujhe to hasi a gai...k pata nahi ab ye kya karega! kya karega...??? kuch bhi nahi...us ki dor jo mere hath me hai...😃

Naina ne shayad Rajveer se badla lene ki thaan li hai..pehle aap gayab huye, ab mai gayab hoke dikhaungi! ha! I know its lame but still... arre tumhe kaise pata chala ki naina ne yahi soch kar yeh kaam kiya tha...😆

Aur ye kya, Rajveer ko darr bhi lagta hai? hehe aise logo ko jab darr lagta hai na to mujhe bada maza ata hai
Naina jab aisi harkate karne par utar ayi hai, to usko pagal kehna galat nahi hoga...Yaha pe raj ka dialogue bahut achcha tha.."kyoun...mujhe maarna chati ho...??? kya ek pal k liye bhi jeene nahi dogi...??? kya milta hai tumhe baar baar mujhe chot pahuncha kar...???"
seriously its really touching. he he he...mujhe laga tha ki yeh scene sayad tumm sab ko thoda ajeeb lagega..par chalo...main bach gayi😆

And hey Gudiya mera nickname hai!(im sure ye sabka hoga) ...mera nickname Naina hai...😃...ajeeb hai na...😆

Akhirkar Rajveer ke agey se Sir hatt hi gaya..good progress.
Lagta hai Rajveer apni surprise dene ki adat se baaz nahi ayega...kamal hai...
Vaise 1 baat mujhe samajh nahi ayi..jab rajveer nahi tha, tab to Naina roti rehti thi k ek baar uski shaqal dekhne ko mil jaye.Aur ab jab mil gaya hai, to har 2 min me ankhe band kar rahi hai...adhi pagal! ab itne dino se raj k ghum me soyi jo nahi thi...toh kahin parr toh yeh kasar puri karegi hi na...😆

Achcha hua Shalini ne Raj ka juice nikal dia...varna uske gumm me Naina aur baki cadets ka juice nikal jata.Pata nahi Rajveer ko sara khtra khud mol lene ka shauk hai. mana k vo hero hai, par bakiyo ko bhi to serial me kaam karne k paise milte hai na! ab yeh baat Rajveer ko koun samjhaye...aur vaise bhi samajhne k liye Dimag ki jarurat hai...aur voh toh hamare DDPA club ka president hai...toh phir aage tum hi soch lo...😆

Ab Rajveer to Shalini ko yaad karke hass raha hai, Naina bechari kya kya samajh baithi. Achcha bahana hai, bhuk lagi hai...ab mai apka dimag khaungi! he he he...😆

vese na, I agree with Mana..u need a doctor! seriously. hamesha itni dhamkio baad bhi ud type karte karte adha chod k post kar deti ho! arre yaar...yeh Mana hi toh meri doc hai...!!! par voh medicines kamm deti hai aur injections jyada deti hai...jiss se side-effect padd ta hai...😆
great update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanqqqqqqq sur...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
ab dusra ud jaldi karo na plz bass...sare comments ka rply karr dungi toh Ud bhi kar dungi...kyoun ki UD toh last week se ready hai...par main hi jyada tym k liye OL par nahi aa pati...😭
Love
Sur

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome, mindblowing update.........thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome, mindblowing update.........eagerly waiting for the next update. hope the flashback has not yet finished........wanting to see what happened more? thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was tooo good...amazing. thanqqqqqq Nisha...😃

Naina is worried that Raj is very quite...what is he thinking about.

Raj surprises her by saying that he wants to meet her parents to tell them the truth about naveens death.She fears that her parents may not understand him...and this will only cause him more pain. But telling the truth is very important for Raj. He needs to confess his guilt so that he can look naina is her eyes...love her and start a relationship with them. yupe....raj...apni purani zindagi se puri tarah se bahar aana cjhahata hai...taki voh apni nayi zindagi naye sire se suru kar sake...😃

Naina wants Raj to share his sufferenings, pain and hurt with her. She wants to take away all his pain and return joy and happiness in her life. raj ko ek baar kho chuki hai naina...ab dubara nahi khona chahti...😃

Raj daar jata hai..naina to khai ke paas dekh kar. He shouts at her for coming there. But later on jokes with her to lighten the mood. Loved the way in which naina suggested for both of them to walk together. ...actually yeh scene maine tabhi add kiya jab maine ise post kiya tha...is se pahle maine ise likha hi nahi tha...!!! aur mujhe darr bhi tha ki pata nahi aap sab ko achha lagega ya nahi...par thank God...aap sab se is scene k liye mujhe pyar mila...thanqqq Nisha...😃

Chalo accidents ke wajah se hi...paar dono ko saath rehne ka chance to mila. Naina has been waiting to ask Raj soo many questions. and Raj cannot help but smile at her curiosity, But her that he will answer all the questions infront of her friends. naina k sath sath voh sabhi bhi toh sab kuch jann ne ka haq rakhte hain na...aur phir Raj ek hi flashback ko kitni baar batayega...isiliye us ne socha hoga ki ek baar sab ko bore karunga...😛

Naina even gets jealous when she sees Raj smiling in his toughts....why does she have to be negative and think that raj is thinking about someone else. ab naina ka dimag toh pahle se hi kharab hai na...!!! raj k har baat ko voh ulta samajhti hai...😛

The flashback with Shalini was very nice. Glad that Shalini finally managed to knock some sence into Raj. Her anger was just what the doctor has prescribes...had it not been for her, raj would have taken the transfer. Raj realises that Shalini is correct and so agress to meet naina and his favourite cadets. ek shalini hi toh LRL me thi jo sab k dimag ki batti jalati thi...varna na toh kabhi Raj realise kar pata ki voh Naina sa pyar karta hai...aur na hi kuch dhang se sochta...!!! bass ek hi galati ki thi shalini ne Raj ko Ritu se engage hone k liye kah kar...

please continue soon...waiting to see the big reunion.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanxxx Shaina...😃

Raj and Naina are together aur mausam bhi suhana hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ab dono sath me hote hai toh mausam toh apne aap hi suhana ho jata hai...kisi ko kuch karne ki jarurat hi nahi padti...😃

Raj is distracted and Naina is confused about Raj's feelings!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj is still feeling guilty and wants to apologise to Naina's parents for killing Navin!!!!!

haan...ab kabhi na kabhi toh use Naina k parents k samne sach k sath aana hi padega...

Ab jab jaa hi raha hai toh I hope lage haatho Naina ka haath bhi usne maang le!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!! Aaj bhi woh khud ko rok raha hai Naina ke kareeb jaane se!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ab voh bhi kya kare...us ka dimag kuch jyada kaam karta hai...

Naina wants Raj to share his sufferings, pain and hurt with her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 pakana chahti hai bichare ko...

She wants to take away all his pain and return joy and happiness in his life!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is scared on not finding Naina aur usse Naina khai ke paas milti hai!!!!

Raj shouts at Naina and Naina said ke woh khaai ki gehrayi dekh rahi thi!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 raj k aate hi naina ka dimag kaam karna band kar deta hai...

She slips but Raj pulled her to himself and held her in his arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ab aur koi dushri heroine hoti toh baat kuch aur hoti...par yahan par raj k opposite sirf ek hi heroine hai...isiliye Raj ne naina ko bachaya...

Raj tells her ke Navin kehta tha ke Naina aadhi pagal hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Navin ne Naina ka naam liya tha before he had died!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 us waqt main na toh naveen ko dekh rahi thi aur na hi mujhe naveen ki kahi hui kuch baat sunai de rahi thi...main toh bass Raj ko dekh rahi thi...bichare par baht 'emotional atyachar' kiya ja raha tha...!!! ek taraf se production house aur dushri taraf se Naveen...

Naina got emotional on hearing about Navin!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I loved it when Naina suggested that they walk together!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊After all ab toh dono ko hamesha saath hi rehna hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 kis ne kaha...maine toh aisa kuch socha bhi nahi hai...

This reminded me of the song "Hum jo chalne lage chalne lage hai yeh raaste" from Jab We Met!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj tab tak Naina ko jawab nahi dega jab tak Naina usse naam se na bulaye!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 ab hamesha SIR SIR bol kar voh Raj ka Saar hamesha khaati thi...

But it is difficult for Naina to suddenly start calling him Rajveer!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 obvious hai...

Naina is eager to know everything but Raj said he will tell her when they are with her friends!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina ko mana kiya kisi ko uske baare mein batane ke liye and Naina agreed like an obedient student!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne finally Naina ke chehre se baal hataya and touched her cheek!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 patane ki koshish karr raha hai...

I am lad that Shalini managed to knock some sense into Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👏 👏 👏 👏

Had it not been for her Raj would have taken the transfer!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj realised that Shalini is right and agreed to meet Naina and his cadets!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 raj k paas MENTOS jo nahi hai

Raj's aam dialogue was very funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 voh mere dil ki baat hai...meri MOM mera roz juice nikalti hai...

Now Naina is feeling jealous thinking ke Raj kiske baare mein soch kar muskura raha hai!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab Naina ko bhookh lagi hai aur ab Raj jungle ke beech mein uske liye khana kaha se laaye??😛 😛 😛 😛 kuch na kucj toh karega hi...

Originally posted by: nihatri

update soon

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey that was good part
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Lovely part Priya.....!!!Thanxxxxxx Dhara...😃

Raj wants to meet Naina's parents....he obviously wamts to say sorry....lekin mai kehti hun ke jab Naina ke ghar jaa hi raha hai toh uncle aunty se uska haath bhi maang hi le....U see kitna time bachega....!!!! just kidding...!!! Raj...Naina ka sirf Hath le kar kya karega...yaar...??? use toh puri ki puri Naina chahiye...!!! aur mere hote hue...main Raj ko Naina ka hath nahi lene dungi....bal ki puri ki puri Naina us k gale me bandhungi...taki zindagi bhar Ghanti bajata rahe...😆

Really Shalini ne achi tarah the mango man ka juice nikala....!!! aur nahi toh kya...??? dekha nahi...kitni garmi hai aaj kal....ab kisi na kisi ka toh juice banana chahiye tha na...??? aur Shalini ne sahi aam pakda tha...😆

Now Naina is thinking soooo ulta.....use jaldi thik karo....!!! kise....??? Naina ko... raj ko...ya mujhe...??? kyoun ki teeno hi baht mushkil hai...😆

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya...😊 hiiiii guglu...!!! yaar tera naam itna cuteeeeeee hai ki kya batayun...??? jab bhi tera naam zuban par aata hai toh smile aa jati hai...

Tera mai kya karun...???😕😕😕 kya...??? tu mera kuch karnewali thi....??? bachao....!!! main is ki itni tarif karti rahti hun...par yeh toh mujhe Murgi samajh kar Halal karne par tuli hui hai...😆 😆 😆

Chal mai tujhe nahi daanti kyunki tu iss particular fic ko itna late update karti hai ki iss baar mai surprised thi ki tujhe iss fic ki yaad kaise aayi...😲 Iss baar na tu late nahi perfectly on time hai...😛😆😊 Aur rahi baat electricity department ki to unse to mai bhi pareshan hun... 😡😡😡😡😡😡isliye teri problem samajhne me mujhe koi takleef nahi ho rahi hai... aur mai iss baare me apna muh bhi nahi kholna chahti kyunki mai iss dept se bahut pareshan hun... Pata hai... Mana ke MS par reply type kar rahi thi... line chala gaya... mujhe fir se sab type karna pada...😭😭😭😡😡😡 arre yaar...in k baat mat kar...!!! din me do ghante ka power cut karwate hain...aur us k baad itna low voltage ki puch mat...!!! aur kabhi kabhi toh 6-8 ghante k liye currents chala jata hai. Fone karne par kahte hain ki yahan fone karo vahan fone karo...!!! main toh tung aa gayi hun...in na-muradon se... !!! aur phir is baar main phir se late hun...!!! wajah bhi main khud hi hun...!!! ud toh kab ka ready tha...par main kuch dino se itna upset thi ki...chah kar bhi khud ko relaxed nahi kar pati thi....

Khair... ab update par aati hun... Naina ka flashback...

This was a very beautiful update... and completely on RN...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanqqqq Guglu😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃...next part me bhi RN ka lamba scene hai...jahan par tu mujhe pakka marne k liye danda le kar daudegi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj was distracted...pehle mujhe laga ki Naina paas me hai isliye distracted hai... fir pata chala ki wo Naveen ke liye maafi mangna chahta hai...😭 Well... Naveen ke baare me mere khayal Sumi se milte julte hain... Naveen ko marna hi tha to khud ko shoot nahi kar sakta tha... Raj se kehne ki kya zarurat thi...??? 😡😡😡 sahi hai yaar...maine bhi yahi kaha tha...jab voh scene dekha tha maine...!!!

Mujhe wakai me lagta hai ki Raj ne second hug ke time par Naina ko jo kahani sunai thi kash wahi sach hoti... yaani ki naveen ka Raj ki gun chinkar khud ko shoot karna... Mujhe Naveen ki iss harkat par bahut gussa aata hai... dekh...hum sab ki soch kaise milti hai...after all ek hi club k jo member hain...😆

Aur yahan Raj sabse maafi maangna chahta hai... Mujhe wahan Naina ke thoughts bhi bahut ache lage... very heart touching... Raj ne apne haath piche kyun khinch liye...? Yaar ye sochta kuch jyada hi hai...😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉 tu bhul gayi kya...yeh hamare club ka president hai...!!! ab members k paas dimag toh hai hi nahi...ab yeh baat raj achhe se janta hai...isiliye jo bhi us k paas bacha kucha dimag hai...usi se kaam chalata hai yeh banda...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab Raj ye dekhne gaya ki bheed kyun hai aur yahan madam bade maze se khai ki gehrai dekhne chali gayi...😆 yaar ye wakai me puri nahi aadhi pagal hai... I was laughing at that dialogue of Raj... adhe pagal pure pagal se jyada khatarnak hote hain...😆🤣😆 Raj kitna darr gaya tha Naina ko na dekhkar... tu yakeen maan...aadhe pagal sach me jyada khatarnaak hote hain...!!! 😆

Aur fir jab Raj ne kaha ki wo usse koi sawal nahi puch sakti jab tak ki wo usko uske naam se nahi bulati... aur Naina kitne sawal karti hai... Raj ne kaha ki wo tab batayega jab uske sab saathi honge... sach me yaar... bakiyon ka reaction dekhna hai na... 😉 haan...haan...kyoun nahi...sirf dekhna hi nahi hai...raj ko unhe jhelna bhi hai...😉

Aur ab... Flashback me Flashback... Raj ka flashback... Shalini ne bilkul sahi kaha Raj se... wo ek aam insaan hai... usse wahi bane rehna chahiye. I loved that aam ko squeeze karne wala dialogue... 😆😆😆 ab garmi ka season hai toh juice ki baat toh samne aayegi hi...😆

I am glad ki Raj iss baar nahi bhag raha aur usne apni life ko ek dusra mauka dene ka faisla kiya hai... And I somehow found myself agreeing with the statement ki raj ki so called maut ke liye kahin na kahin ye log bhi zimmedar hain... Maut ka to nahi pata... apne views mai apne paas hi rakhti hun... par ek Aalekh ko chodkar sabhi ne kabhi na kabhi, kisi na kisi tarah se raj ko hurt kiya hai... Ab Aalekh is a gem...😊 yeh baat toh tum ne bilkul sahi kaha hai...!!! sabhi ne raj ko galat samjha hai...par akela Alekh hi tha jo raj par pura bharosha karta tha...chahe voh kuch bhi kare. in fact voh raj ko samajhta bhi tha...!!! kai baar naina raj ko le kar pareshan hoti thi toh alekh k paas hi toh aati thi...😃 😃 😃

Raj ko flashback par muskurate dekh Naina ulta sidha soch rahi hai... 😆😆😆Aur baat ghumane ke liye usne kaha ki usse bhukh lagi hai... par wo khaegi kya... Raj ka dimag...??? 😉😉😉Wo to tujhe hi pata hoga... 😛😛😛 nahi...main naina k liye Domino'z k Pizza... ka intezam karnewali hun...😆 😆 😆

Ab continue soon... Isi tarah time se update deti rehna... der mat karna...😊 sorry par is baar main bahhhhhhhhht late hun...!!! aur mujhe yakeen hai...tum sab mujhe maaf kar doge...

Love
Guglu