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Posted: 15 years ago
EPISODE:-9
Rajveer:-"kya kaha tum ne...???"
Naina:- "mujhe bhuk lagi hai...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne dil hi dil me Naveen se pucha:- "sach sach bata Naveen...yeh teri hi bahn hai ya...kumb mele me bichdi hui kisi aur ki bahn hai...jise tu bahn bana kar le aaya tha...!!! itni achhi tarah se tym beet raha tha...ise abhi bhuk laggni thi...!!! ajeeb ladki hai yeh teri bahn...jise 'hum-damm' aur alu-damm' me farq hi nahi pata...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "Naina...hum yahan rashte k bich me fashe hue hain...ek taraf pahaad hai...aur dushri taraf jungle...jahan se abhi abhi tum ek khaii ki gahrai naap karr aa rahi ho...!!! ab main tumhare liye khana kahan se layunga...???"
Naina:- "mujhe kya pata...???aap ne hi ek din kaha tha ki aap ek trained soldier ho...aur main abhi tak soldier bani nahi hun...!!! aur ek trained soldier har situation ka samna karne k liye hamesha taiyaar rahta hai...!!! toh phir is situation se ladne k liye bhi aap ne kuch na kuch toh socha hi hoga...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "yeh dail maine tabb bola tha jab tum cadet hua karti thi aur main tumhara teacher...!!! par ab hum dono hi trained soldier hain...!!!
Naina:- "lekin main toh abhi bhi aap ki junor hi hun...!!! kahan aap gr8 Maj Rajveer Singh Shekhawat aur kahan main sirf Lft Naina Singh Ahluwalia...!!! isiliye aap jo order doge mujhe voh follow karna padega...!!! aur abhi main aap ki zimmedari hun...matlab aap ko mera pura khayal rakhna padega...!!! agar mujhe bhuk se kuch ho gaya toh...aap mere parents k paas kya akele jayoge...???"
Maj Rajveer ne hairani se Naina ko dekha...!!! Naina kabhi bhi is tarah se Rajveer se baat nahi karti thi...par aaj achanak kya hua hai use...!!!
Naina ko bhi laga sayad voh kuch jyada hi bol gayi...!!! us ne puppy sa face banaya...phir mushkura diya...aur kaha:- "abhi abhi aap ne kaha na ki aap mere parents se milna chahte ho...!!! toh aap ko akele jana achha lagega kya...??? matlab agar mujhe bhuk k mare kuch ho gaya toh..."
phir mere dost ne mujh se kaha:- "ab mujhe pakka yakeen ho gaya hai Naveen ki yeh teri hi bahn hai...!!! haar sawal se pahle jawab taiyar rahta hai is k paas...!!! lekin hum dono ki phuti kishmat...ki tu bhi is se baht pyar karta tha...aur main bhi is se baht pyar karta hun...!!! aur apne is kishmat ko main na toh badal sakta hun aur na hi kabhi badalna chahta hun...!!!"
Maj Rajveer khud ki soch par hass uthe...!!! Naina hairan hui...
Naina:- "aap phir se soch me dub gaye na...???"
Maj Rajveer ne dhire se khud ko kaha:- "aur kar bhi kya sakta hun...??? jabb se mili ho...tab se yahi toh karta aa raha hun...bass sochta hi rahta hun...aur kuch toh karr pata nahi...!!!"
Naina:- "aap ne kuch kaha...???"
Maj Rajveer ne apne jeb se ek chewing gum nikali aur kaha:- "is se kaam chalega...???"
Naina ne use liya aur muh me dal diya...phir kaha:- "is se bhuk thode hi na mitegi...???
Naina ki nazar padi kisi chiz par...aur us ne kaha:- "mujhe 'bhutte' khane hain...!!!"
Rajveer:- "kya....???"
Naina ne ek taraf ishara kiya...!!!
ek aadmi khada tha...bhutte le kar...!!! kafi bheed thi us k paas...!!!! log rashta jam hone ki wajah se fashe hue the...aur us ki selling achhi ho rahi thi...!!!
Rajveer:- "thik hai...main le kar aata hun...!!! lekin...tum apni jagah se nahi hilogi...!!! aur agar tum mujhe dubara us khaii k paas nazar aayi toh...toh mujh se bura koi nahi hoga...!!!"
Maj Rajveer chala gaye...!!! Naina ne muh banate hue kaha:- "kis ne kaha ki lambe gap k baad insaan badal jate hain...!!! Rajveer sir toh bilkul bhi nahi badle...abhi bhi vaise hi hain...!!! yeh mat karo...voh mat karo...yahan mat jayo...vahan mat jayo...!!! hadh hai...agar kuch karna hi nahi hai toh hum insaan bann kar kyoun paida hue hain...???"
Naina ne khud se baat karte hue kaha......
Rajveer:- "ab tum kis se baat karr rahi ho...???"
Maj Rajveer ne Naina ko roasted bhutte dete hue kaha...!!!
Naina ne kuch nahi kaha...Maj Rajveer k hathon se bhutta liya aur use gaur se dekhti rahi...!!! phir Maj Rajveer se pucha:- "kya ab main hil sakti hun...???"
Rajveer:- "kya...???"
Naina:- "aap ne hi kaha tha ki main hil nahi sakti...!!! kya ab main hil sakti hun...???" Naina ne muh banate hue kaha...
Maj Rajveer ko hassi aayi...unhone kaha:- "haan...ab hil sakti ho...
Naina jeep k bahar aayi...Maj Rajveer hairan hue...aur us k piche aaye...!!! Naina gayi us bhutte wale k paas...aur us se pucha:- "yeh bhutta aise kyoun hai...???"
voh bhuttewala hairan hua...aur kaha:- "jee main samjha nahi...???"
Naina:- "nimbu kahan hai is me...??? is par achhi tarah se nimbu lagao...us k baad namak aur laal mirch ka powder chidko...!!! tumhe kya lagta hai ki hum Japan se aaye hain...???"
Maj Rajveer chup chap vahan khade Naina ki harkatain dekh rahe the...!!!
phir Naina apne spl butte ko le kar...jeep me aa gayi...aur aaram se khane lagi...!!! us k upar itna chilly powder pada hua tha ki Maj Rajveer khud hairan the ki Naina itna tikha kaise kha sakti hai...???
khane se pahle Naina ne bass ek baar Raj ko offer kiya tha...Maj Rajveer ne mana kiya...toh us ne dubara us se pucha hi nahi...bal ki apna kaam karne lagi...
Maj Rajveer bass Naina ko dekhe ja rahe the...!!! aur Naina ki nazar sirf bhutte par thi...
Maj Rajveer ki nazar padi Naina k honthon k corner par... jahan pe...ek chota sa bhutta laga hua tha...!!!
Maj Rajveer ne bina kuch kahe...Naina ko apne hathon se ishara kiya...!!! par Naina confusing look se unhe dekhti rahi...voh samajh nahi pa rahi thi ki Maj Rajveer kya kahna chahta the...!!!
Maj Rajveer ne dubara kuch nahi kaha Naina se...thoda kareeb aaye Naina k...apna hath aage badhya...!!! Rajveer k hath jaise hi Naina k cheek ko touch kiye...Naina ne ankhen band kar li...
Maj Rajveer nahi jante the ki us waqt voh kya chahte the...voh yeh bhi nahi jante the ki us waqt Naina ka dil kya chahta tha...
par Maj Rajveer k ander koi kashamkash nahi thi...ek strong desire un k dil k dhadkanon ko badha rahe the...!!! kuch pane ki...kuch mehsus karne ki...achanak se ek tamanna jaag uthi thi un k dil me...
(Jo meri rooh ko
chain de...pyar de
voh khushi bann gaye ho tum...
zindagi bann gaye ho tum...
zindagi bann gaye ho tum):-2
unhone apne dono hathon se Naina k face ko cup kiya...Naina ki ankhen abhi tak band thi...!!! Naina ko aise dekh Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...!!! apna chehra Naina k kareeb laye...apne honthon se Naina k honthon k kareeb laga hua bhutta unhone le liya...
Naina ne apni ankhen kholi...dhire se kaha:- "aap ne toh kaha tha ki aap ko bhuk nahi lagi hai...!!! phir aap ne mera bhutta kyoun khaya...???"
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...aur kaha:-" tumhe apna bhutta wapas chahiye...???"
Naina ne 'haan' me saar hila diya...
Rajveer:- "toh khud le lo...!!!"
Naina ko jyada mehnat nahi karni padi...us ne...apna chehra Maj Rajveer k chehre k thoda aur kareeb le kar aayi...!!! dono ki saanshe ek dushre ko choo rahi thi...!!!
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...apna chehra thoda piche hataya......phir Naina thoda aur aage aayi...Maj Rajveer ne phir se apna chehra piche hataya...Naina phir se aage aayi...achanak...Maj Rajveer ruke aur khud Naina k kareeb aa gaye... Naina k honth apne honthon se choo liya...!!! Naina achanak is touch se...kaamp uthi...us ki ankhen apne aap band ho gaye...!!!
his hands burshed thru her hair...Naina ne badi mushkil se apne hath se Maj Rajveer k soldier par rakha...kafi tightly...!!! us ka hath abhi tak kaamp rahe the...!!! us k kaampte hue honthon ko Maj Rajveer ne apni honthon me panah di...!!! Naina k dimag me...kuch rok raha tha use...!!! par dil kuch aur kah raha tha us ka...!!!
(Jism se jaan tak paas aate gaye...
yun nigahon se dil me samate gaye..):-2
jiss haseen khawab ki thi tamanna mujhe
Haan...vohi bann gaye ho tum...
Zindagi bann gaye ho tum...
Zindagi bann gaye ho tum
akhir Naina ne apne dil ki baat maani...!!! apne aap ko pura Maj Rajveer k hawale kar diya...!!! Maj Rajveer ne use apni taraf thoda aur khincha... Naina...janti thi ki voh kya karr rahi hai...phir bhi is ehsaas se voh apne ander ek ajeeb si khushi mehsus karr rahi thi...!!! Naina k hath Maj Rajveer k back par tha...voh use mehsus karr rahi thi...tightly hug karte hue soch rahi thi ki' ab voh kabhi bhi Raj ko apne se dur nahi karegi'...!!! Maj Rajveer ka hath Naina k waist par tight hota ja raha tha...voh khud nahi jante the ki aage voh kya karne wale hain...bass us waqt voh vohi karr rahe the...jo un ka dil kah raha tha...!!! voh nahi jante the ki un ki manzil kahan hai...par itna jante the ki jo bhi hai...un k paas hai aur baht kareeb...!!! voh Naina k har ek banavat ko mehsus karr raha the...
tabhi kisi ne un dono k kareeb cheenk diya...
( PS:-ab mujhe pata hai...ab meri dhulai pakki hai😆)
Dono hi apne apne duniya se bahar aaye...dono ek dushre k kareeb baithe hue the...!!! ek dushre k ankhon me jhaank rahe the...!!! Maj Rajveer aur Naina dono embarassed feel karr rahe the...apne apne khayalon k bare me soch kar.....
un k jeep k paas khada ek aadmi khada...lagataar cheenk raha tha...!!!
voh aadmi:- "bhai saheb...aap k paas pani hai...??? meri biwi ko pyaas lagi hai...agar maine use pani nahi pilaya...toh voh mujhe dhamki de rahi hai ki voh mujhe us khai me phenk degi...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne pani ka bottle us aadmi ko de diya...aur khud jeep se bahar aa gaye...!!! voh aadmi thanx bolta us se pahle Maj Rajveer ne use 'thanx' kah diya...
voh aadmi hairan hua...aur kaha:- "Thanx' toh mujhe aap ko kahna chahiye tha...!!! aap ne kyoun kaha...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "sahi tym par cheenk ne k liye...!!"
Maj Rajveer vahan se chale gaye...aur thodi dur par khada ho kar...smoke karne lage...!!! ek hi kash me cgrte ki adhi khatam karr diya...aur khaashne lage...!!!
unhe smoking ki aadat nahi thi...par kabhi kabhi jyada tension me pee lete the...!!! aur aaj toh un ka dimag kaam hi nahi karr raha tha...!!!
cgrte ko dekh kar bole:-"koun kambakhat kahta hai ki'cgrate smoking is injurious to health"...jo ander mere dimag me chal raha tha voh kuch jyada hi injurious hota hum dono k liye...agar us aadmi ne sahi tym par cheenka nahi hota toh pata nahi kya hota...!!!"
rashta saaf hua...
dono sath me phir se chal pade...camp ki aur...ya phir yun kaha jaye ki apni nayi manzil ki aur...!!! jahan unhe pata nahi tha ki kishmat ne un k liye kya soch rakha hai...!!!
dono camp k gate k paas pahunche...
Maj Rajveer:- "Naina...tumhe apna vaada yaad toh hai na...???"
Naina...mushkurayi...phir kaha:- "achhi tarah se yaad hai...!!!! main aap k bare me kisi ko nahi batayungi...!!!"
Naina vahan jeep se utar gayi aur jate hue kaha:- "sir...???
Maj Rajveer:- "phir se sir...???
Naina:- "ahhh....sir nahi kahungi toh...sabhi meri khinchai karenge...!!!"
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye aur kaha:- "thik hai...hum jabb akele ho...tab mujhe Raj kah sakti ho...kya...???"
Naina:- "koshish karungi...par mujhe aap ko sir kahna...jyada achha lagta hai...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "nahi tumhe sirf RAJ hi bulana hoga...samjhi... aur ab batayo kya kahna chahti thi... !!!"
Naina ne apne ander thoda himmat jagaya aur ek hi saansh me kah diya:- "thik hai sir...ahhh RAJ...!!! (Naina thodi der ruki phir achanak ek hi saansh me bol gayi)...kya hum kahin mil sakte hain...matlab akele...??? mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai...!!!!"
Maj Rajveer kuch pal tak aise hi Naina ko dekhta rahe aur phir mushkurate hue kaha:- "hum jaldi milenge...cadet Naina ahh...Singh...!!!"
Naina ne aap na hath aage badhya...Maj RajVEER samajh nahi paye ki Naina kya kahna chahti hai...!!!
Maj Rajveer:- "main samjha nahi....
Naina:- "aap kuch bhul rahe hain...
Rajveer:- "kya...???
Naina:- "mera watch...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ko yaad aaya ki Naina ne use wapas kar diya tha...!!! us ne mushkurate hue kaha:- "par tumhe toh voh pasand nahi tha na...!!! tabhi tum ne use wapas karr diya tha...???"
Naina:- " voh ghadi mere liye baht ahmiyat rakhti hai....agar us ghadi ki koi mayne nahi hota meri zindagi me toh main aaj tak use apne itne kareeb kyoun rakhti....??? aap se baht gussa thi...isiliye lauta diya tha...yeh batane k liye ki mujhe bhi taklif hoti hai...jab bhi aap jaan bujh kar mujh se dur rahne ki koshish karte ho toh...!!! ab meri ghadi dijiye...mujhe aur kuch nahi kahna...!!!"
Naina ne apna hath phir se age badhate hue kaha...!!! Maj Rajveer ne Naina ka hath thama...dhire se use apne kareeb khincha...aur us k hathon me voh ghadi bandh di aur kaha:- "jo tumhara hai...use hamesha apne paas hi rakhna...!!! kyoun ki jo sirf tumhara hai...voh kisi aur ki kishmat nahi bann sakta...!!!"
jo meri rooh ko chain de pyar de...
voh khushi bann gaye ho tum
zindagi bann gaye ho tum
Zindagi bann gaye ho tum...
flashback over......
Naina ne apni ankhen kholi...mushkurayi...aur khud se kaha:- "pata nahi...mujhe tab kya ho gaya tha...aur main vahan jeep k ander sir k bare me kya kya soch rahi thi....!!! agar sir ko pata chalta na...
Naina ne ankhen band kar k phir se mushkura...aur apne seene se lage use tashveer ko thoda aur tightly hug kiya...phir us tashveer ko apne nazar k samne la kar kaha:- "nahi janti...ki main jo aap k bare me feel karti hun...voh aap bhi feel karte ho ya nahi...!!! par itna janti hun ki...jabb chot mujhe lagti hai toh us ka dard aap k ankhon me dikhai deta hai...yeh baat maine hamesha mehsus kiya hai...!!! isiliye yeh bhi janti hun ki... utna hi main aap k liye ahmiyat rakhti hun...jitna aap ho mere liye...!!! maine faishla karr liya hai....!!! maine hamesha aap se pyar kiya tha...aur aur aaj bhi zindagi k har ek pal me...har ek saansh me bass aap se hi pyar karti rahungi...!!!
(har kisi se jise main chupati rahi...
Bekhudi me jise gun-gunati rahi...)
maine tanha kabhi jo likhi thi vohi
Sayari bann gaye ho tum...
zindagi bann gaye ho tum....
zindagi bann gaye ho tum
jo meri rooh ko chain de pyar de
voh khushi bann gaye ho tum
zindagi bann gaye ho tum...
zindagi bann gaye ho tum...
Naina ne wall clock ki taraf dekha...9:30 bajj rahe the....!!! use taiyar ho kar Shalini k room me bhi jana tha...surprise party k liye...!!!
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Naina 5 min late pahunchi...par tab tak...Alekh, Ali, Pooja,Yudi, Huda... sabhi pahunch chuke the...!!!
Huda... Naina ko dekh karr bola:- "oye Phoolan...kabhi toh sahi tym par entry maara karr yaar...!!! hamesha late...!!! kabb se hum sabb tera wait karr rahe hain...!!!"
Naina:- "jyada halla mat macha Huda...main bass 5 min late hui hun...!!! aur tu aise chiila raha hai...jaise ki main 5 ghante late hun...!!! aur vaise mera kyoun wait karr rahe the...??? main 'surprise' thode hi hun...!!!"
Yudi:- "arre tu nahi thi na...isiliye Doc Shalini ...cake ko chune bhi nahi de rahi thi...!!!"
Naina:- "voh toh sayad abhi bhi tumhe chune na de...
Pooja:- "tujhe kaise pata...??? tu toh hamare baad hi camp me aayi aur yahan bhi hamare baad hi pahunchi hai....???"
Alekh:-Naina...mujhe aisa kyoun lagg raha hai ki tu hum sabb se kuch chupa rahi hai....???"
Naina:- "main kyoun kuch chupayungi...???"
Shalini:- "Attention guys....
sabhi ne Shalini ki taraf dekha......
Shalini:- "itne dino baad hum sab phir se yahan par ek hue hain...!!! aur aaj ki party bhi tum sab k liye khaas hai...aur yeh cake bhi tum sab ki wajah se hai...!!! lekin...lekin...lekin.........is cake ko kaatne se pahle...mujhe ek chota sa bhaashan dena hai...!!! jinhe sunn na hai voh sune...aur jinhe nahi sunn na hain....unhe zabardasti sunn na padega...
Shalini ne ek gahri saansh li...aur us k baad kaha...
"hum sab pahli baar...KMA me mile...ajnabiyon ki tarah....!!!! phir kabhi ek dushre k liye mushkuraye...toh phir kabhi ek dushre k liye roye...par kabhi bhi ek dushre ka sath nahi choda...!!! aap sabhi kal tak KMA k students the...aur aaj is desh k jaanbaaz officers....!!! paas-out hone k itne dino baad...hum phir se ek dushre k samne hain...!!! aur ek dushre k liye hamare dil ka pyar kabhi bhi kamm nahi hua hai...aur itne dino baad aaj...voh pyar badha hi hai...kamm nahi hua hai...!!! main apne kushi kah nahi sakti jab mujhe tum sab k aane k bare me khabar mili toh...!!! par mere alawa koi aur bhi hai jo aap sab se milne k liye baichain hai...
Huda ne dhire se Alekh k kaan me kaha:- "yeh pakka...Maj Nair ya phir Maj Bharghav k bare me bol rahi hai...!!! varna is duniya me aur aisa koun hai...jo hum se milne k liye baichain ho raha hoga....!!!"
Naina...ne orange juice ka glass thama aur dur ja kar khadi ho gayi...
Shalini:- "voh koi aur...jis k liye aap sabhi spl ho...voh koi aur jo aap sab k liye spl hai...!!! jo aaj zinda hai toh sirf aap sab ki wajah se...
Shalini ne apne hath se ek taraf ishara kiya...
vahan andhera tha...par vahan koi baitha hua tha...!!!
sabhi ne dekha...andhere ki wajah se koi pahchan nahi paya us shakhsh ko...par us insaan k bol un sabb k kanon tak pahunch rahe the...
"hum rahen...ya na rahe kal
kal....yaad aayenge yeh pal....
pal...yeh hain pyar k pal....
chal... aa mere sang chal...
chal...sochen kya....
choti si hai zindagi....
kal..................................
mil jaye..........................
toh hogi khushnaseebi....

hum...rahe ya na rahe yaad aayenge yeh pal..."

voh insaan...dhire dhire roshni me aaya...sab ki nazar padi us insaan par....
Ali....k pair kaampe...voh piche ki taraf hata....
Yudi...diwar se takraya...aur dekhne laga us insaan ko...
Alekh aur Huda...statue bann kar khade us insaan ko dekh rahe the...
Pooja...apne aap ko baht kamzor mehsus karr rahi thi...voh apne ghutne k bal baithi zameen par...nazar us ki abhi tak us chehre par lagi hui thi...do boond anshun chalke us k ankhon se...!!! phir us ne apne hathon se apna chehra chupaya aur be-tahasha rone lagi...
Maj Rajveer aage aaya...Pooja ko uthaya....
Pooja bass roye ja rahi thi
Maj Rajveer:- "maine tumhare mobile lingo ko baht miss kiya cadet Ghai...
Pooja:- "parr humain toh laga ki hum ne aap ko hamesha k liye kho hi diya hai...sir...
Pooja...Maj Rajveer ko hug kar k rone lagi....!!! Maj Rajveer... samajh rahe thE...Pooja k jazbaton ko....!!!
Maj Rajveer ne Ali aur Yudi k taraf dekha...
Ali apne kadam ko aage badhate hue...Maj Rajveer k kareeb... aaya par kuch kah nahi paya....!!! Ali ki hamesha se yahi prob thi...ki voh kabhi bhi na toh apne khushi share kar pata tha aur na hi ghum...
Maj Rajveer...aage aa kar Ali k samne khade huE....Ali k shirt k coller ko thik kiya...Ali ki ankhen namm hui...voh asusall thoda emotional hua... Maj Rajveer ne Ali ko gale se lagaya...
Yudi ko kuch kahne ki jarurat hi nahi padi...aur voh khud hi aa gaya Maj Rajveer k paas...aur bass itna hi kah paya:- "Lft Yaduvansh Sahani reporting sir......
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...us ki nazar Huda aur Alekh par padi... dono wapas ja rahe the...
Maj Rajveer jante the ...us k cadets me se sirf Naina hi akeli ziddi nahi hai...Alekh aur Huda...yeh dono bhi aise hi hain ki...unhe samjhana matlab...Brig Chandok k sar par hath pherena...
Maj Rajveer...un dono k samne aaye...aur kaha:-"manta hun...ki galati ki hai...!!! par ek hi baar ki hai...aur tum log is k liye mujhe maaf bhi karr hi sakte ho....!!! kai baar...tum sab k utt-patang harkaton ko saha hai maine...ab itna haq toh main maang hi sakta hun na...!!! narazgi sahi...par is tarah se muh pher kar toh mat jayo...
Huda:- "aap aisa kaise karr sakte ho sir...??? aap itne dino tak yahin the...phir bhi humian is guilt k sath jeene k liye majboor kiya ki...kahin na kahin hum aap k maut k zimmedar hain...
Maj Rajveer:- "tum sabb meri maut ki wajah kaise ho sakte ho....??? bal k aaj agar main zinda hun toh us ki baht badi wajah toh tum sabb hi ho...!!!"
Yudi:- "main samjha nahi...sir...hum aap k zinda hone ki wajah...kaise.................
Maj Rajveer:- "batayunga...lekin us se pahle...mere naraz cadets mujhe ek baar maaf toh karen...!!!"
Alekh aage aaya...Maj Rajveer k samne...
Alekh:- "apun janta hai sir...aap koi bhi kaam bina wajah k nahi karte...!!! in sab k piche bhi koi wajah hogi...aur voh wajah hum me se kisi se judi hui hogi...!!!"
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...!!! unhe pata tha...un k cadets me se sirf Alekh hi tha...jiss k paar dimag naam ka koi chiz tha...!!! varna baki sab k dimag ko balance me lane k liye Maj Rajveer ko baht papad belne pade the...!!!
thodi der baad......
sabhi cake k charon taraf khade the...!!! knief Maj Rajveer k hathon me thi...
cake kata...aur Maj Rajveer k students k taliyon se voh kamra gunj utha...!!!
Huda:- "sir...yeh toh batayiye...akhir us din hua kya tha...??? aur phir aap sare ilzamon se bache kaise...aur aap army camp me...
Shalini:- "uffo...Huda...pahle apne fav teacher k Maj bann ne par unhe congrats toh karo...!!!"
Alekh ne...Naina ki taraf dekha...!!! Naina samajh nahi payi ki... Alekh use is tarah se kyoun dekh raha tha...
Pooja ...ek damm se khushi se uchal padi...!!!
Pooja:- "kya...apne sir Maj bann gaye....??? ab yeh toh ek mobile me do memory card wali baat ho gayi...!!! sir ab is k liye aap ki taraf se pakka party hona chahiye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "ok....guys...party bhi hogi...aur apne bare me bhi sabb kuch batayunga...!!! lekin us se pahle tum log...halla machana band toh karo...!!! agar kisi ne complane karr diya na...toh sabb ki watt lagg jayegi...!!!"
sabhi ne hairani se Maj Rajveer ki taraf dekha...!!! Maj Rajveer Alekh ki tarah baat jo karr rahe the...!!!
Huda se raha nahi gaya...us ne kah hi diya:- "lagta hai...apne Rajveer sir sudhar gaye...!!!"
sabhi hassne lage...
tabhi Maj Rajveer k cell par ek call aaya...!!!
Maj Rajveer:- "thodi der chup raho sab...!!! Col Gupta ka fone hai...!!!"
Maj Rajveer kuch der tak un se baat karte rahe...phir sab k paas aa kar kaha:- "sorry guys...mujhe abhi jana hoga..Col Gupta ne mujhe turant report karne k liye kaha hai...!!! main tum sab se kal milunga...!!! gud night...
Maj Rajveer chale gaye...
kuch dur jane k baad unhe yeh ehsaas hua ki un k piche koi bhaag kar aa raha hai...toh unhone turn kar k dekha...voh Naina thi...
Maj Rajveer thoda hairan hue...phir Naina k kareeb aane par pucha:- "kya baat hai Naina...???"
Naina thodi si pareshan lagg rahi thi...aur us ankhon me ek darr ko bhi Maj Rajveer mehsus karr rahe the...!!!
Naina:- "sabb thik toh hai na sir...??? matlab itni raat ko aap ko kyoun bulaya gaya hai...???"
Maj Rajveer samajh rahe the...Naina k dil k darr ko...!!! voh Naina k aur thoda kareeb aaye...aur kaha:- "pahli baat...hum yahan par akele hain isiliye tumhe apne vaade k mutabik mujhe RAJ kahna chahiye... dushri baat hum sipahi hain...hamare liye din-raat sab saman hai...!!! aur tishri baat...mujhe yaad hai ki maine tum se kya vaada kiya tha...!!!"
Naina k chehre par mushkurahat aayi...
Maj Rajveer:- "gud night Cadet Naina Ahh...singh...c u tomorrow...!!!"
Naina wapas aayi...toh dekha...Shalini ko chod kar sabhi use gusse se dekh rahe the...!!!
Naina:- "kya baat hai guys...tum sab mujhe aise kyoun dekh rahe ho...???"
Huda:- "tujhe hum se pahle pata tha na Rajveer sir k bare me...???"
Naina:- "haan...voh...actually...
Ali:- "Naina....humain aap se yeh umeed nahi thi...aap ne hum sab se chupaya....???"
Naina:- "sorry Guys...voh...actually main tum sab ko toh batanewali thi...par sir ne mana kiya tha...!!!"
Yudi:- "haan...haan...Rajveer sir ne tujhe apne sar ki kasam di hogi...nahi...???"
Naina:- "sorry...k alawa ab main aur kya kah sakti hun...???"
Alekh:- "tu jis Maj k bare me bol rahi thi...jo tujhe jungle me mile the...voh apne Rajveer sir hi the na...???"
Naina:- "haan...par tum logon ne kaise guess kiya...yeh baat...???"
Alekh:- "apun ko dimag jyada kharach karne ki jarurat hi nahi padi...!!! thoda sa bass bheja fry kiya apna aur sari baat samajh me aa gayi...!!! sir...yahan pe aaye...sabb se mile...sab ko gale lagaya...aur bass...apne fav cadet Naina..ahh...singh k paas nahi gaye...voh cadet Naina singh...jis ne Rajveer sir k jane k baad...kai dino tak humari watt lagaya hua tha...!!!! aur un k fav cadet bhi karr kya rahi thi....??? dur kahde orange juice pee rahi thi...!!! ab tu hi bol...Naina...hum sab is ka kya matlab nikalen...???"
Pooja:- "tabhi main sochun ki Naina ka chehra itna chamak kyoun raha tha...??? maine toh socha tha ki yeh sayad Jammu me milnewale spl kesar-badam face pack ka asar hai...par yeh toh Maj Rajveer Gold facial karwa k aayi hai...
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Maj Rajveer...Col Shekhar Gupta (Pankaj Dheer) k samne khade the...
Col Gupta kafi pareshan lagg rahe the:- "kal sunday hai Maj...aur tumhara off-day bhi...!!! aur officially mujhe tumhe yeh file monday ko deni chahiye thi...!!! par main jyada wait nahi karr paya...agar yeh itna serious nahi hota toh...main aap ko is waqt yahan nahi bulata...!!! main officially yeh file aap ko monday ko hi handover karunga...sab officers k samne...par main chahta tha ki us se pahle aap is par ek baar nazar pher le...!!!"
unhone ek file Maj Rajveer ki taraf badhayi...
Maj Rajveer samajh rahe the ki baat jarur baht serious hai...unhone file open kiya......first page par kisi ki tashveer dekh kar chaunke...
Maj Rajveer:- "Lft Naina Singh Ahluwalia...???"
Col Shekhar Gupta:- "yes Major...!!!....Lft Naina Singh Ahluwalia...!!!"
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Naaz train se utri...apna luggage sameta...!!! Gunny us k paas aaya......
Gunny:- "mere liye army camp se jeep aaya hai...tum kaho toh main tumhe kahin drop kar dun...???"
Naaz:- "nahi...main chali jayungi...!!!"
Gunny:- "okk...take care....!!! agar kishmat ne chaha toh phir milenge...!!!"
Naaz mushkurayi...aur kaha:- "jarur milenge...aur baht jald milenge...!!!"
Naaz ek taxi me baithi aur chali gayi...!!!Taxiwale ko Naaz ne kuch kaha...voh saher k ander jane laga...
Naaz ne apne pairon k paas jeans ko thoda upar uthaya...aur chk kiya...us k shoes me us ka chota sa gun...sahi jagah par tha..!!!
saher k bahat ander aane par ek purani se tute hue ghar k bahar voh taxi ruki...
end of d epi
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Plz feel free to post ur comments or hit d LIKE button...!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Note:-
mujhe pata hai ki main phir se late hun...par yeh ud maine baht pahle hi likh diya tha...!!! par post hi nahi karr payi...!!! kuch baton ko le kar baht tension me thi...!!! isiliye SORRY...😃
love u all
bye
take care
Priya😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
dekha??? jab bhi tu pm bhejegi na, main sabse pehle reserve karungi ! 😛 issliye bheja kar ! 😆 😆 😆
*** runs away to avoid priya's beating *****
Heylo priya !!!
Update kaisa tha yeh main tumhe nahi bataungi....this is your PUNISHMENT....
kisliye??? WOh baadmein bataungi !
So....start pe aate hai....
MAJOR (😆 😆 hass issliye rahi hoon kyunki jitni baar bhi tumne issmein Raj ka naam likha hai na, utni baar EK AGYAAKARI junior ki tarah ki tarah tumne uske aage MAJOR likha hai...😆 😆 😆)
haan....MAJOR Rajveer pooch rahe hai ki kya waqai mein Naina naveen ki behen hai??? Goli khane ke baad bhi Majorsaab ko doubt hai iss baareimein !😛
Aur keh rahe hai ki kitna majese time katt raha tha !!!
Helooo !! Major saab !!! Aapka sapne dekhne mein time kat raha tha...aap dono ko chup dekhkar HAMEIN bore ho raha tha....kamse kam kuch change toh milega !😛
I enjoyed Naina's dial and her reasons about why Raj should get her something to eat and should take care of her ! 😛
Naina gussa hogayi ki MAJOR Rajveer phirse kisi soch mein doob gaye Aur MAJOR Raj keh rahe ki sirf sochta hi toh rehta hoon...*** sigh ***
Toh Major kuch karo !!! Be a man !! 😆 😆 😆
Raj ne chewing gum diya parrrr woh kehte hai na NAZAR honi chahiye....sab kuch barabar dikh jaata hai...😛 Toh Naina ko bhutte dikh gaye ! (wowwwww !! well...errr....control mana ! 😆)
Now that whole bhutte ka daana and THAT scene...😆
"apna chehra Naina k kareeb laye...apne honthon se Naina k honthon k kareeb laga hua bhutta unhone le liya..."
Jab yeh padha toh meri aankhein BADI hogayi...😲
aur jaise aage padhti gayi, toh main sochti rahi ki YEH ho kya raha hai...??? 😲
Aur phir jab yeh padha...
"Maj Rajveer ruke aur khud Naina k kareeb aa gaye... Naina k honth apne honthon se choo liya...!!!
Toh my reaction was " HAILA !!! "😛 😛
As i kept reading, MY MIND WAS SCREAMING at me 😆 😆 Ki NAHIIIII .....yeh sab sapna hai....yeh itniiii samajhdari waala kam nahi kar sakta 😛 😛 😛 Aur agar usse karna bhi raha toh PRIYA usse nahi karne degi 😆 😆 😆
Aur maine apni KHAALI dimaag ki baat maani aur fayde me rahi ! 🤣 😆 😆 😆 😆
The Sweetest thing was Naina asking Raj to give her that watch back and the whole scene ! 😃
Bechare MAJOR Rajveer....kabse ek hi baat keh rahe hai...mujhe RAJ bulaaao !! Par yeh...iske excuses ki list toh khatam hi nahi hondi !! 😆 😆
The party scene was supeeeerrrrbbbbb !!!
Aalekh and Huda ka gussa hona and Raj ka unko manana....was awesome blosssom !!!
And the SAHI thing was Aalekh ka Naina ki chori pakadna !!! 😛
Naina ran behind Raj to ask him why has Col.Gupta called him...
PHIRSE??? 😲 😲 Naina !!! Plzzzzz !!! Hamare MAJOR saab ke patience ki limit mat dekho !! Ab toh unhe RAJ bol hi do yaar !!!
Ek baat kitni baar bolni padti hai iss ladki ko !
NOW AM VERRRYYYYYYYY VERRRRYYYYYY ANGRY with you !!!!
Uss file mein NAINA ki photo kya kar rahi hai....
Kahi yeh uske PROMOTION ki toh baat nahi hai? 😆 😆 😆 Dekha...main RN ke liye kabhi bura soch hi nahi sakti !!! WOh toh sirf aur sirf tum karti ho....HAMESHA.😛 ( Mere Fic ki advertisement bhi hogayi ! 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆)
Chal byeeeeeeeeee
Aur Update soon kehke koi faaida toh hai nahi....😉
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ko bahut bhuk lagti hai Raj romance kare bhi toh kaise??😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj Navin se pucch raha hai ke Naina uski hi behen hai na!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Goli khane ke baad bhi Raj ko doubt hai??😛 😛 😛 😛

I loved Naina's reasoning of why Raj should take care of her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj Naina ka badla huya behaviour dekh kar shocked to jaata hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

But even after this Raj loves Naina very much aur apni kismat ko nahi badalna chahta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne sahi kaha ke woh bas sochta hi rehta hai aur kuch kar toh pata nahi!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ne chewing gum diya magar usse Naina ki bhuk thodi na mitegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko bhutta dikh gaya aur usne khane ki zidd karli!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj uske liye leke aaya toh Naina usse le jaa kar usmein nimbu, namak aur lal mirch dalwa kar leke aayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is surprised that how can Naina eat such spicy food!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj taking the bhutta from the corner of Naina's mouth was so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina's dialogue ke aap ne mera bhutta kyun khaya was very cute and funny!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj and Naina's kiss was very romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But then both came out of their dreamland!!!!! Yeh sapna reality mein kab hoga??😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ke bhutte ne toh usko aur Raj ko dono ko hi dreamland mein pahucha diya tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Yeh Raj bhi kamal hai jisne itne acche sapne ka satyanash kardiya ussi admi ko thanks bol raha hai!!!!!!

Raj tension mein aake smoke kar raha hai!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Naina remembers her promise that she won't tell anyone about Raj!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wants Naina to call him Raj atleast when they are alone!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Lekin Naina ke excuses!!!!!!D'oh D'oh D'oh D'oh

Ab woh itne pyaar se keh raha hai toh Naina ko uski baat maan lena chahiye na!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina sweetly asked Raj to give her back the watch!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha jo uska hai woh kisi aur ki kismat nahi ban sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure he was talking about himself who is only hers!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina has always loved Raj and loves Raj in every breath!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Aalekh as usual realises everything and said that Naina is hiding something from them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Shalini gave her speech and Huda's comment on it was funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The song is very nice and apt for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone is shocked to see their Rajveer Sir!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Pooja cannot stop her tears and Ali and Yudi have become emotional!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Aalekh and Huda are angry at Raj for keeping them in the dark!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Par Raj unhe mana leta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right ke uske cadets mein dimaag sirf Aalekh ke paas hi hai!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh samajh gaya ke Naina Raj se pehle mil chuki hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Ish waqt bhi Col.Gupta ne Raj ko bula liya and he had to go!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Seeing Raj leave Naina gets worried and Raj tried to reassure her that everything is fine!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Naina ko ek baat kitni baar bolni padhti hai??Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveShe should call him Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's friends are angry with her for hiding the truth from them but in the end they forgive her because they are glad to see her happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne sahi pakda Naina ko ke akhir yeh kaise ho sakta hai ke Rajveer Sir apne favourite cadet se na mile??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Col.Gupta ne Raj ko kaun sa file diya jismein Naina ki photo hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

I hope this mission will not take Raj away from Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Dono itni muskil se mile hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Great choice for Col.Shekhar Gupta!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yeh Naaz ish tute huye ghar mein kyun jaa rahi hai??😕 😕 😕 😕


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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an amazing mindblowing update..........loved the convo between raj and naina........later raj and the cadets. what is the matter with naina's pic in the file? continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pehle tere TN par comment karungi...fir iss par...kyunki mai uss par comment karne ke maamle me chappar fad ke late hun...
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really cool
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
its just awesum
bohot aache haai up
plz ab jaldi se cont karna ok
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Priya

How r u???
Update was brillaint as usual..👏👏👏 hamesha accha likhna kya zaroori hai??😆😆
Naina ko sach mein bahut bhookh lagti hai..bechara Raj romance kare bhi to kaise jab uski Naina ko har waqt alu-dam dikhta rehta hai..😆😆😉
Naina ke bhutte ne to usko aur Raj dono ko hi dreamland mein pahuncha diya..
it was a beautiful scene but yeh reality mein kab hoga?Dono abhi bhi apni feelings ko chhupa rahein hain..
Raj bechara kab tk cigerrate pita rahega n Naina khana khati rahegi..Inke peene khilane ko band karke inke dil ka kuchh karo...Warna yeh hamesha sapne hi dekhenge..😆😆😉
Every1 was so shocked to see their Rajveer Sir..Pooja,Yudi n Ali were crying..Raj consoled dem..But Alekh n Huda were angry on him..They always blame demselves for his death..But now he was here n he had hidden dis thing from dem..But Raj ne unhe mana hi liya..😊
Yeh aaram ke waqt mission kahan se aa gaya..???😲
Alekh samajh gaya tha ki Naina Raj se pehle mil chuki hai n uski logic sahi bhi tha...aakhir sabse milne ke baad Raj Naina se kyun nahin mila???
Yeh Raj ke paas kaun si file hai jisme Naina ka naam hai?
where is Naaz going???
Itne saare questions ke answer tumhe dene hain isi liye ab aap jaldi update karne ki koshish karengi...😃
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Instead of hitting the like button, can I hit u ? Not coz dat ultra romantic scene was a dream but 4 wer u mentioned naina's foto.
Ab woh buddhe ne Maj Rajveer ko naina ki foto kyun di yeh jaan ne ke liye tu hame sadiyon tak wait karwaegi, yehi sochke mujhe gussa aaraha hai is liye yeh part ke liye meri taraf se no comments !

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