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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#351

awesome, mindblowing update.........eagerly waiting for the next update. hope the flashback has not yet finished........wanting to see what happened more? thanks for the pm.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#352

Update was tooo good...amazing.

Naina is worried that Raj is very quite...what is he thinking about.

Raj surprises her by saying that he wants to meet her parents to tell them the truth about naveens death.She fears that her parents may not understand him...and this will only cause him more pain.

But telling the truth is very important for Raj. He needs to confess his guilt so that he can look naina is her eyes...love her and start a relationship with them.

Naina wants Raj to share his sufferenings, pain and hurt with her. She wants to take away all his pain and return joy and happiness in her life.

Raj daar jata hai..naina to khai ke paas dekh kar. He shouts at her for coming there. But later on jokes with her to lighten the mood. Loved the way in which naina suggested for both of them to walk together.

Chalo accidents ke wajah se hi...paar dono ko saath rehne ka chance to mila. Naina has been waiting to ask Raj soo many questions. and Raj cannot help but smile at her curiosity, But her that he will answer all the questions infront of her friends.

Naina even gets jealous when she sees Raj smiling in his toughts....why does she have to be negative and think that raj is thinking about someone else.

The flashback with Shalini was very nice. Glad that Shalini finally managed to knock some sence into Raj. Her anger was just what the doctor has prescribes...had it not been for her, raj would have taken the transfer. Raj realises that Shalini is correct and so agress to meet naina and his favourite cadets.

please continue soon...waiting to see the big reunion.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#353

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj and Naina are together aur mausam bhi suhana hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is distracted and Naina is confused about Raj's feelings!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj is still feeling guilty and wants to apologise to Naina's parents for killing Navin!!!!!

Ab jab jaa hi raha hai toh I hope lage haatho Naina ka haath bhi usne maang le!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!! Aaj bhi woh khud ko rok raha hai Naina ke kareeb jaane se!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina wants Raj to share his sufferings, pain and hurt with her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

She wants to take away all his pain and return joy and happiness in his life!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is scared on not finding Naina aur usse Naina khai ke paas milti hai!!!!

Raj shouts at Naina and Naina said ke woh khaai ki gehrayi dekh rahi thi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She slips but Raj pulled her to himself and held her in his arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj tells her ke Navin kehta tha ke Naina aadhi pagal hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Navin ne Naina ka naam liya tha before he had died!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina got emotional on hearing about Navin!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I loved it when Naina suggested that they walk together!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊After all ab toh dono ko hamesha saath hi rehna hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This reminded me of the song "Hum jo chalne lage chalne lage hai yeh raaste" from Jab We Met!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj tab tak Naina ko jawab nahi dega jab tak Naina usse naam se na bulaye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But it is difficult for Naina to suddenly start calling him Rajveer!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Naina is eager to know everything but Raj said he will tell her when they are with her friends!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina ko mana kiya kisi ko uske baare mein batane ke liye and Naina agreed like an obedient student!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne finally Naina ke chehre se baal hataya and touched her cheek!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I am lad that Shalini managed to knock some sense into Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Had it not been for her Raj would have taken the transfer!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj realised that Shalini is right and agreed to meet Naina and his cadets!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj's aam dialogue was very funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Now Naina is feeling jealous thinking ke Raj kiske baare mein soch kar muskura raha hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab Naina ko bhookh lagi hai aur ab Raj jungle ke beech mein uske liye khana kaha se laaye??😛 😛 😛 😛

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#354

Hi Priya...😊

Tera mai kya karun...???😕😕😕 Chal mai tujhe nahi daanti kyunki tu iss particular fic ko itna late update karti hai ki iss baar mai surprised thi ki tujhe iss fic ki yaad kaise aayi...😲 Iss baar na tu late nahi perfectly on time hai...😛😆😊 Aur rahi baat electricity department ki to unse to mai bhi pareshan hun... 😡😡😡😡😡😡isliye teri problem samajhne me mujhe koi takleef nahi ho rahi hai... aur mai iss baare me apna muh bhi nahi kholna chahti kyunki mai iss dept se bahut pareshan hun... Pata hai... Mana ke MS par reply type kar rahi thi... line chala gaya... mujhe fir se sab type karna pada...😭😭😭😡😡😡

Khair... ab update par aati hun... Naina ka flashback...

This was a very beautiful update... and completely on RN...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Raj was distracted...pehle mujhe laga ki Naina paas me hai isliye distracted hai... fir pata chala ki wo Naveen ke liye maafi mangna chahta hai...😭 Well... Naveen ke baare me mere khayal Sumi se milte julte hain... Naveen ko marna hi tha to khud ko shoot nahi kar sakta tha... Raj se kehne ki kya zarurat thi...??? 😡😡😡Mujhe wakai me lagta hai ki Raj ne second hug ke time par Naina ko jo kahani sunai thi kash wahi sach hoti... yaani ki naveen ka Raj ki gun chinkar khud ko shoot karna... Mujhe Naveen ki iss harkat par bahut gussa aata hai... Aur yahan Raj sabse maafi maangna chahta hai... Mujhe wahan Naina ke thoughts bhi bahut ache lage... very heart touching... Raj ne apne haath piche kyun khinch liye...? Yaar ye sochta kuch jyada hi hai...😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉

Ab Raj ye dekhne gaya ki bheed kyun hai aur yahan madam bade maze se khai ki gehrai dekhne chali gayi...😆 yaar ye wakai me puri nahi aadhi pagal hai... I was laughing at that dialogue of Raj... adhe pagal pure pagal se jyada khatarnak hote hain...😆🤣😆 Raj kitna darr gaya tha Naina ko na dekhkar...

Aur fir jab Raj ne kaha ki wo usse koi sawal nahi puch sakti jab tak ki wo usko uske naam se nahi bulati... aur Naina kitne sawal karti hai... Raj ne kaha ki wo tab batayega jab uske sab saathi honge... sach me yaar... bakiyon ka reaction dekhna hai na... 😉

Aur ab... Flashback me Flashback... Raj ka flashback... Shalini ne bilkul sahi kaha Raj se... wo ek aam insaan hai... usse wahi bane rehna chahiye. I loved that aam ko squeeze karne wala dialogue... 😆😆😆I am glad ki Raj iss baar nahi bhag raha aur usne apni life ko ek dusra mauka dene ka faisla kiya hai... And I somehow found myself agreeing with the statement ki raj ki so called maut ke liye kahin na kahin ye log bhi zimmedar hain... Maut ka to nahi pata... apne views mai apne paas hi rakhti hun... par ek Aalekh ko chodkar sabhi ne kabhi na kabhi, kisi na kisi tarah se raj ko hurt kiya hai... Ab Aalekh is a gem...😊

Raj ko flashback par muskurate dekh Naina ulta sidha soch rahi hai... 😆😆😆Aur baat ghumane ke liye usne kaha ki usse bhukh lagi hai... par wo khaegi kya... Raj ka dimag...??? 😉😉😉Wo to tujhe hi pata hoga... 😛😛😛

Ab continue soon... Isi tarah time se update deti rehna... der mat karna...😊

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Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#355

Lovely part Priya.....!!!

Raj wants to meet Naina's parents....he obviously wamts to say sorry....lekin mai kehti hun ke jab Naina ke ghar jaa hi raha hai toh uncle aunty se uska haath bhi maang hi le....U see kitna time bachega....!!!! just kidding...!!!

Really Shalini ne achi tarah the mango man ka juice nikala....!!!

Now Naina is thinking soooo ulta.....use jaldi thik karo....!!!

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#356

hey that was good part
plz continue soon

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#357

update is good.....Naina ke us EK 😕 sawal ke jawab ka toh hamein bhi intezar rahega....but really ye RN bilkul pagal hai.bas sab kuch maan mein hi sochtein hai.
n good work from Shalini...Raj need her scolding.aaj uski wajase Raj Naina se mil pa raha hai & hope woh jaldi hi usse apne pyaar ka izhar karne par majboor kar degi.

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#358

sorr for late comment but i must say the up is just fantantic ,mindblowing ,beautiful raj n se mila aur dono ne kitne dino bad baat ki raj is smart ussne kahe diya n ko usse sir mat bulaye "cool dude" waise bhi ab sir ke jaaga raj suna aacha lagega

plz cont soon

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#359

Priya tu na din ba din bohuth chaalu hothi jaa rahi hai........lagtha hai tera dimaag badh rahaa hai tere saath -saath.......tu har ek update ke saath koi na koi 'NOTICE' chipkaa deti hai taaki daant aur maar khaane se bach sake,kyun?chalo iss baar tune thoda jaldi update kiya hai iss liye thode kam daant padenge tujhe..............

ab aate hai tere ud par........

ab Naina hai aur vo bhi Rajveer ke saath hai toh usske dimaag mein sawaal toh aayenge hi na? varna vo bhalaa Naina kaise hogi?aur bhalaa Rajveer Rajveer kaise hoga agar vo itni jaldi apni asli feelings naina ke saamne aane dega toh?hey bhagwaan inn dono ka na LRL mein kuch ho saka aur na ki ANKAHI mein kuch ho payega..........jab tak Priya nahi chaahegi!!!!aur jab tak Priya ye chaahegi hum sab buddhe ho jaayenge..............😭

ab Rajveer Naina ke parents se milnaa chahtha hai ye achchi baat hai par pataa nahi unka kya reaction hoga?waise mujhe na Dhara ka idea bohuth achcha lagaa,lage haath Naina ka bhi haath maanglo Raj beta pataa nahi aage jaake kya hoga?😆

ab jo baathe saamne waale se kehnaa chaahiye woh baathe agar dil hi dil main karne lagogi toh kya faaydaa hoga Naina?Rajveer hai hi buddhu raam vo toh itni jaldi kuch kehne waala hai nahi aur tum apne aapse baat kar rahi ho ab toh kuch nahi ho saktha tum dono ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yaar Priya ye tere saare fics main aane waali saari Naina(s) bilkul teri hi parchaaiyaan hai kya??sab teri tarah hi baat karthi rehthi hai.ab Rajveer ne darr ke maare hi sahi apni feelings ke baare mein thoda hint toh jaroor kiya hai na par fir bhi ye Naina ji hai ki samajhthi nahi aur upar se kehthi hai ki khaayi bohuth gehri hai🥱mujhe lagtha hai uss gehri khaayi ki tarah hi Naina ka dimaag bhi bilkul khaali hai.......mujhe na ek pal keliye lagaa ki iss Naina ko ussi khaayi mein dhakel du ya fir khud kudh jau......sach mein aadhi paagal hai ye ladki issi liye toh itni khatarnaak hai aur upar se stupid bhi.................

and dont worry 'GUDIYA' bohuth achcha hai.........😛

hmmm.......sahi hai jab tak ye dono ek doosre ke saath hai ek doosre ko har khushi dene ki koshish jaroor karenge par ye baat ek doosre se kahenge nahi............par chalo thoda toh improvement hua kam se kam Naina ne Rajveer ka naam toh liye........sach mein kab se 'sir sir' kar ke usska sir khaa rahi thi..............pagli...............

yaar tere 'NOTICE BOARDS' kya kum hai ki tujhe ye 'P.S.' ki bimaari bhi lag gayi.............Priya jaldi apni bimaariyon ka ilaaj karwaa le Manaa se warnaa pataa nahi ki tujhe aur koi nayi bimaari lag jaaye...........waise mujhe ek aur nayi bimaari dikh rahi hai tujhme...........ek taraf keh rahi hai ki RN ke baare mein tune socha nahi hai aur doosri taraf kehthi hai ki tu bataayegi nahi tune kya kiya hai unnke saath.........ab bataa ye bimaari nahi hai toh aur kyaa hai????????????

toh iss baar Rajveer ke iss 'romantic touch' ke peeche Shalini ke pravachan ka haath hai............achcha hai koi toh hai jo iss aadmi ke dimaag mein thoda toh akal daalne ki koshish kar rahaa hai.........warnaa ye toh jaise bhool hi gayaa hai ki ye bhi ek 'AAM' insaan hai😉.......waise ye 'AAM' waala dialouge bohuth jyaada achcha tha🤣

aur ab ye ulti khopdi mein kya khichdi pakaa rahi hai ye ladki?????ufffff.....ek muskuraahath ke liye itne saare sawaal............sach mein ye Naina bhi na hadh karthi hai kabhi kabhi..............aur ab isse bhookh lag rahi hai........wah..........jaao beta Rajveer isske liye jaldi kuch le aao warna pata chalaa ki gusse mein ye tumhe hi kachcha chabaa gai........................

ab Priya ji aate hai tum pe............tu ne firse update ko flashback par rok di.......aur RN ke beech bhi kuch nahi ho rahaa sivaay Q-A ke..........tu agli update mein kuch interesting si cheeze daal warnaa tujhe hum sab milkar 'kofta curry' banaake rotiyon ke saath khaa jaayenge............fir Manaa hai na hajam karvaane keliye..............so u better post a proper update aur vo bho bohuth jald..........

Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago