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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Hi Priya

How r u???

chalo tumne yeh fiction update to ki..Mujhe laga tum kahin bhool na gayi ho😆😆..

Maine aaj end se padna start kiya coz socha tumne koi msg diya ho..Raj iss poore update mein nahin hain😕 but u know I'm missing him..

Main aayega aanewal gana nahin gaaungi kyunki woh aa to chuka hai bus Priya usse iss update mein nahin laayi.😛..😆

Now coming to the update Naaz ne bahut bravery dikhayi.👏👏👏

.Aisa agar sab log karne lage to yeh badmash kuchh bhi nahin kar payege..

Naaz ne sahi kaha jab kahin kuchh ho raha hota hai to hum aankhen band kar lete hain yeh sochkar ki isse humein kya but kal wahi sab aap ke sath bhi ho sakta hai..

Gunny was too impressed by her bravery..

Huda,Alekh,Yudi,Ali n Pooja r missing Rajveer too much..They r remembering their gud times in KMA..

Yeh VAADE ka concept kuch samjh nahin aaya..Mere dimaag ka fuse ud gaya hai..😆😆😆

Shalini gave them a nice welcome..Yudi is certainly has some feelings for Shalini but he unable to voice dem..She is giving them a party to refresh the old memories...Lagta hai wahin sab ko Raj ke baare pata chalega..😛

Every1 was noticing dat glow on Naina's face..She seems to b quite content n happy after a long time..All of them were puzzled at this changed behaviour..All of them were remebering their days with Raj n crying n she was the only 1 who had smile on her face..After all she knows that Raj is back..

Naina is remebering something that has passed between her n Raj..

But tumne wahi end kar diya..kitna maza aata hai tumhe humein tadpane mein.😆😆

Ab jaldi se update karna aakhir mujhe Raj se bhi milna hai..😛😉

Bye

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Awesome update.loved it. too good part.

loved the conversation between shalini, yudi.

loved the scene of naaz.

continue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#293

Priiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!! 😡 😡

Tu na !!! Pakka pitnewaali hai mere haath se !!!

Maine tujhse kis condition par Ankahi UD karne ko kaha tha??? 😡

Tu na...huh !!!

Aur shaan mein likh diya ki agle UD mein Rajveer hi Rajveer hoga...huh ! Par agla Update hoga kab???? Agle saal !???? 😛

Aur by the way....tum note mein likhna kya chahti thi?? huh???

MANA maarna manaa hai....ya Marna mana manaa hai?? 😛 Nautanki ! 😆 😆 😆

Isse pata hai kya kehte hai??? Durse candy dikhao aur paas jaao toh...phussss....

But FORTUNATELY yaha par aisa nahi tha....

Bhale hi candy na sahi.....par ek bahotttttttttt achcha UD mila ! 😃

you are right....Raj sab keliye important tha and sabki life mein uski importance show karne keliye yeh UD must tha .... 😊

Update was too good ! 👏 👏

Toh Yudi bhi aagaya ! 😛

Aalekh's VAADA phone was funny ! 😆 😆 😆

I loved Naaz's scene !!

chalo ... Priya madam hasane ke saath saath JANHITH mein messages bhi de rahi hai ! 😊 Keep it up dear !! 👏 👏

Sab ke sab Naina keliye pareshaan hai aur finally Naina aa gayi ! 😃

The reunion was quite touchy....especially Pooja's lines....😊

Aalekh aur sabne Naina ki khushi ko notice kiya, but Aalekh decided to wait...coz he knew, Naina will definitely tell him...

Sab Rajveer Sir ko yaad kar rahe the....

Mujhe Yudi ka woh dial bahot achcha laga, jab woh kehta hai....Rajveer sir the nahi hain aur hamesha rahenge...👏 👏

Aur jab peechese awaaz aayi ' humne kuch nahi kiya?'....toh tujhe pata hai 😛....

Maine frustration mein apne sarr par haath maar liya ! 😛

Maine socha, main wait kar rahi hoon RAJ ka aur aagaya muyaa ABHIMANYU ! 😆 😆 😆

Thank god ! Woh Shalini thi ! 😆 😆

Huda ka beechmein ghusna and kehna ki woh meri mentor thi, it made me laugh 😆

Shalini and super 6 ka oath taking and aankhe bandh karke Rajveer ko yaad karna was too good 👏 👏

And sabke lips par sirf ek hi duaa ! " Rajveer Sir waapas aajao ! " ...Wonderful ! 👏 👏 👏

Aur ab sab party keliye wait kar rahe hai...

Ab kyunki Shalini bhi aagayi hai, toh inki TOLI toh poori hogayi ! ( I'm not at all waiting for Abhimanyu...puhleeezzzzz 🤢 )

Ab toh yeh sab yahabhi ' Dhamachaukdi' macha denge !

But please, as Huda said, yaha inki dhamachaukadi par grahan lagane Bharghav ya Nair ko mat bhejna !

Shalini ne Naina ko thank you kyun kaha ? 😕

Pooja ki lingo ki wajehse Ali ke ammi abbu mein jhagda hogaya ! 😆 😆

Abtak toh mera mood achcha hogaya tha...par.....

AB YEH NAINA KYA SOCH RAHI HAI??? KYA HUA USKE AUR RAJVEER KE BEECH ????

aur ab bata.....yeh mujhe kab pata chalega????

AGLE MAHINE ???? *** ANGRY **** ( arey yaar woh angry waala emoticon bahot ganda hai...maine kaha tha na tujhe?)

*** ZOR SE i.e. FORCEFULLY haath jod rahi hoon *** JALDI update kar meri maa! Mujhe yeh aage padhna hai ! 😆😆 😆

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#294

The whole Naaz eisode was fantastic and its so very true...People do enjoy the tamasha....and react only after everything is over.....!!!!!

So at last everybody is together....expect Raj...which I guess will be taken care of by you in the next part...!!!!😉

And now you need to update really soon as we need to kno wke jab Naina apne Rajveer Sir ke saath thi tab kya hua tha...!!!!

Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#295

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pooori ud mein mera raj gayab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡 ja jo marzi kar le main comment nahin deti...tu gandi hai...😡😡😡

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Hi Priya 😊
How r u?

The update was awesome 👏 👏 but I missed RAJ alot.........And I know ki next update me tum Raj ko laogi isliye mein tum pe gussa nahin karti aur jaane deti hun......par kahiin next update me tumne RAJ ke kum scenes likhe na to next time tumhe nahin jane dungi....

Now coming to the update...Naaz was too gud.......she is too brave...bechare wo 3 log to pachta rahe honge ki pata nahin kis bure waqt humne usse panga le liya 😆 😆 😆

all the friends were so happy to be together but wo sab kitne udaas the ki jo insaan unhe saath laya hai wo abhi unke saath nahin hai.......par zyada der tak aisa nahin rahega.........I know shalini aaj raat ki part me raj ko hi lane wali hai......are ise badha surprise koi ho hi nahin sakta

Sabki aankhon me raj ko yaad karke aansoo the....they all missed him so much par hamari naina to bahut khush thi yaar, huda aur aalekh naina ke khush hone ki vajah janana chahte hain.......m sure jab unhe pata chalega to bechare yeh bhool jayenge ki wo react kaise karen.....😲 😲 😲

Aaj ke liye bas itna hi.......aur ab next prt jaldi update karna aur wo bhi raj ki entry ke saath.....
Luv Preet 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Yudi ki entry ho gayi aur woh Neelu se milke aaya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda toh dur hi rahe Naina se!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Mujhe uska itna concern bhi accha nahi lagta!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aalekh ka Vodafone ko Vaade ka fone kehna was too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yudi kitna acchi tarah se Aakh ko samajhta hai aur jhat se pakad liya ke Aalekh kya kehna chahta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is very imporant to Naaz and here Gunny is trying to understand her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh aadmi Naaz ko chhed rahe thhe when Gunny had gone outside!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naaz ne bahut accha sabak sikhaya un teeno ko!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Usne sabbit kar diya ke woh Rajveer ki behen hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Ab woh log aaj ke baad kisi ladki ke saath batameezi karne se pehle sau baar sochenge!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Naaz aur Gunny ne kya dhamkaya un logo ko!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naaz ne sahi kaha ke woh log teen thhe aur compartment mein 30, chahe toh un logon ko asani se rok sakte thhe!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Magar sab log bas tamasha dekh rahe thhe!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

She is right that one should always learn to defend themselves!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny was impressed to see her boldness and bravery!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He understands that she is shaken up from the incidents and hence wants her to rest!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko dekh ke her friends are so happy aur ek choti si hug party bhi huyi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Naina and Pooja's convo was very sweet and emotional!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina told her friends about the incident but did not tell them about Raj because of special instructions!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ko ush daredevil officer ki baatein sunkar Raj ki yaad aa gayi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne thoda hint diya when she said thhe nahi hai but others were unable to understand it!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

I liked what Yudi said ke Rajveer Sir hamesha unke dil mein thhe, hai aur rahenge!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Huda Raj se maafi maangna chahta hai!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔Maanga bhi chahiye!!!!!

Aalekh is right ke aaj woh sab saath hai magar unhe mutthi bananewala hi nahi hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Shalini is also there and everyone is happy to see her and Yudi is the happiest of them all!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar Yudi jab milne gaya toh Huda beech mein aa gaya!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Shalini invites them all over for a party at her place!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Sab ki ankhon mein Raj ko yaad karke aasu thhe magar Naina ke hothon par muskurahat thi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sab ne ek saath kaha wapas aa jayeye Rajveer Sir and their wish is going to come true very soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Shalini has a surprise for them at the party and I am sure that it is going Raj's entry!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini ne jaate waqt Naina ko thanks kaha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But why??😛 😛 😛 😛

Yudi Shalini ko uske quarter tak chhodne gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Everyone had noticed the glow on Naina's face and who seems to be quite content and happy after a long time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

All of them are puzzled over this changed behaviour!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Well only Raj can be the reason for it!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ki mobile lingo ki wajah se Ali ke ammi aur abbu mein jhagda ho gaya tha!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina is hugging the photo of her and Raj's close dance and trying to sleep!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

She is remembering what had happened when she was with Raj!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#298

Hi Priya..how r u dear??
thank god finally u decided to update this fic...!!! 😛
but but ..u didnt write abt Raj.. 😕 ... hope to see his scenes in the next update... but pata nahi next ud kab milegi?????....
so shal is also there ...wow...loved the scene when everyone remembered their old days with Raj...
So shal is giving them a party...n suprise..hmm..we know what it is..right?? 😉
so madam ne iss baar bhi interesting point pe aakar update ko end kar diya... so bad... 😵 ...
abb jaldi se ud dena hoga....donno Priya sun rahi hai ya nahi... 😆
waiting for the next ud...😆

Edited by sweet_shona - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#299

Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏 lovely part 👏 👏 👏 👏 Yudi ka bhi entry hogayi is part main....n alekh ka vodaphone ko vadde ka phone kehna too funny 😆 😆 😆 😆.....yudi kitna acchi tarah samjhtha hain alekh ko jhat se pakad liya ki alekh kya kehna chahtha hain Naaz did the right thing with those teen gunde..she is so brave...kyun na ho...akhir wo raj ki behen jo hain ... bahut acche se sabak sikhaya un teeno ko...ab wo log aag se kisi ladhki ke saath aise battamiji karne se pehle sau baar sochenge..naaz ne sahi kaha wo log 3 hain ...compartment main 30 log hain..chahe to wo unlogon ko asani se rok sakthe hain...but sab log sirf tamasha dekh rahe hain..koi rokne ke koshish nahin ki...u have written that scene so beautifully

Naina ko dekhke her friends r so happy ....n ek choti sa hug party bhi hua,Naina told her friends about the incident but raj ke bare main nahin bataya...special instructions ki wajah se..kya hain wo instructions mujhe bhi janna hain

pooja is so sweet ..us dare devilofficer ki baatein sunkar usse raj ki yaad aagayi...naine ne thodi hint di about raj wo the nahin hain...but sab ne tikh se samjha nahin..but i like yudis dialogue...rajveer sir the nahin hain aur hamesha rahenge...aur huda to maafi maangna chahtha hain...koi baat nahin huda...aapka ye wish bahut jaldhi poora hojayega

Hamari pyarisi shalini mam ki entry bhi hogayi...i am so happy to see her...n mujhse bhi jyada khush hain yudi..kyun na ho itne dinon baadh wo shalini ko apne aankhon ke saamne dekh rahatha

sab ki aankhon main raj ko yaad karke aansoon the...but hamari lovely naina ki honton par muskurat hain..n i loved that scene jab sab ki honton par eki saath eki baath hain "wapas aajayie rajveer sir"

so the surprise in the party is the entry of our dear raj...aur ye shalu naina ko thanxs kyun kaha

huda pooja ,n alekh ne ye baat notice the glow on nainas face but wo log ye nahin samaj pare hain ki reason kya hain..pooja ki mobile lingo ki wajah se ali ki ammi aur abbu main jagdah hogaya...its too funny

Naina jab rajveer ke saath thi tab kya hua tha..plz jaldi bataona..cant wait long to know what happened

plz update soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#300

Huh....madam note pe note likhke gayi....aur Raj ko memory mode pe daal diya!!! 🤢🤢

Me very gussa!!!😡😡 Pata hai....subah saath baje....mujhe tution k liye der bhi ho rahi thi....lekin sab kuch side line karke main baith gayi Ankahi UD padhne....aur tumne...tumne mere Raj ko hi gayab kar diya!!!😭😭😭

Lekin pata hai kya....being a member of Dimagless association....main ek aur dimagless ki dimag ko samajh sakti hu....isiliye maaf kiya....aur comment bhi kar rahi hu....😃

Now the part.....Raj k bina sukha tha....🤢....par umm...kabhi kabhi sukhi cheezein bhi achhi hoti hai...ryt?? To ye kuch aisa hi tha....samjhi!!

Ab kaha se shuru karu?? Raj ka scene to tha hi nahi....so main Gunny pe ati hu....u c...my 2nd fav....😛😛....Priya uska spelling GUNNY hai....his name was Gunraj.....so I hope...next part se tum sahi likhogi....😳😳...

And that scene wid Naaz....was awesum!!! Waha jo tumne kaha Raj Naaz k liye bahut maine rakhta hai....that felt soooooooo nice to hear!! And I loved the way Naaz took care of herself....in fact main bhi kuch aisa hi expect kar rahi thi....tumse!!! 😉😉 I was sure....yaha Gunny ka koi kaam ho hi nahi sakta....😆😆

And then....the cadets....they were talking abt their Rajveer Sir....and it was so cute when they were remembering him and was crying as well...though its not like I want them to cry....but Raj k liye...kuch bhi!!!😳😳 And yaha...Naina madam to bahut khush hai....hogi hi....zahir si baat hai....but wo bechare samajh anhi paye kyun wo itna khush hai....😆😆 Btw....I loved them saying....pehle jaisa kuch naho ho sakta....pehle jaisi masti nahi ho sakti....coz Raj is not there....it was soooooooooooooo gud to hear that!!

And party....aur usme KMA wale....I'm hoping Raj to cum....but then agar usse itni jaldi darshan dene hote to Naina ko chup rehne ko kyun kehta?? Well may be surprise....btw....main ye sab kyun soch rahi hu...ye sab to tum decide karogi na....maine agar apna dimag yaha laga diya....to minus mode chala jayega....from zero mode!!😆😆

And then at last but definitely not the least....Raj ne Naina se aisi kya baatein kii jo madam itniiii khush hai?? Scene ko next part me daal hi diya na....being Priya ji!!!😉😉

Ab main agar kahungi bhi ki main bahut eager hu next part k liye....coz u said....usme sirf Raj hi Raj chhaya hoga....then too koi fayda nahi....coz u also said....tum iss fic ko thodi intervals k saath hi UD kar sakti ho....due to 'Ehsaas' n 'Tere Naina'....btw....Tere Naina....must hav more parts....arre abhi kuch waqt pehle hi to shuru hua tha......mujhe yaad hai....Raaz 2 dekhke maine ye fic padha tha....and I cud feel the atmosphere way too well....😆😆

Phew....kitna bak bak karne lagi hu....I'm sure pehle isse to kam hi bakti thi....waise tumne jo apne notes se pakaya usika jawab samajhke ab tum bhi iss reply ko padho...aur achhi tarah se fry ho jao....dont worry....main kahungi nahi tumhe....just saying!!!😆

And...no continue soon raag....coz koi fayda nahi....so will just say....me w8ing EAGERLYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

Luv,
Sumi.😛

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