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missing Vmars

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Posted: 16 years ago

#501

lol lets see kavs .... not tomorrow ... still some paras are left .. wil try tuesday at the earliest

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kavya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#502

ohh noooo, have 2 wait till tuesday....

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missing Vmars

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Posted: 16 years ago

#503

kavs i havnt had a chance to finish it na ... kya karon n am busy tomorrow so lets see

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Sana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#504

hey dis ff is reeli gud...i luved each n every part but i luved da 9th part da most it was soo emotional...lol luved da whole shoes fing it was soo funii lol...do update soon n plz pm me wen u do...gr8 job...tc

Luv Sana x

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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lovely part all sajan and as i big sajan fan its a wonderful treat
god they just love each other
i am wishing at last moment gunajn changes her decision
do continue bye sumi

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missing Vmars

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: xxSaJanxx
hey dis ff is reeli gud...i luved each n every part but i luved da 9th part da most it was soo emotional...lol luved da whole shoes fing it was soo funii lol...do update soon n plz pm me wen u do...gr8 job...tc
Luv Sana x

thanks ya ..... am glad u liking this FF

will update the next part hopefully in the next few days n will PM u 😊

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missing Vmars

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Posted: 16 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
lovely part all sajan and as i big sajan fan its a wonderful treat
god they just love each other
i am wishing at last moment gunajn changes her decision
do continue bye sumi

lets see what happens 😊

anyways thanks for liknig it ya ... will continue soon

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Divya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#508

kanzoo i'm sooo sorry for da late comment....but here it is....finally!!
first for part 6....
was it the lets call gunjan day or what .... she was actually a bit irritated at having been disturbed by the phone call
*ehem**ehem* is gunjan really gettin irritated??....luks like she really really enjoys samrat's company=P i like it!😉
dia is such a 🤬..."gunjan we both are really busy with other stuff ...... you have to ...... get back "...hellooo...she's on a vaccation! gud dat gunjan said no....go girl go!...it totally called for celebration!
da part where she realizes she's not in nupur's bedroom seriously gave me a fright for a split second😲....but then i realized she was just leaning over his shoulder LOL....poor samrat...bechare ko laga uski izzat ka remix ban gaya😆😆😆
kanzoo u described da terrace scene beautifully👏👏👏....'she felt she could tell him everything under the sun without having him judge her ... it was this comfort she felt when she was with him '...👏

cumin to mayur ....." mayank guess what a lady just entered the hall sitting on an elephant "🤣....man i love nupur! she puts ketchup in his friuts....wah wah...kya idea hain by godd....nupur ko hi aisa idea aa sakta hain🤣 i'm so lukin forward to mayur's love story in ur ff...unfortunately didn't get to really c it in da show(or shuld i say i did get to c but it wasn't really a 'story' lol)....it'll b one fun ride i'm sure!

gonna read part 7 now....

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Divya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#509

part 7
kanzoo dat sahayetaa thing u added was very sweet...i guess at one point of time v all want to do sumthing which is more humane in nature...v can't really run after da material things all our life right?

aahhh da radio....when u say nothin at all😳😳😳...alyson is like da only country artist i like...love this song of hers😳

ok...wen samrat landed up at gunajn's seminar i thought it was all gettin a little too much....he needs to give gunajn sum space...but woah....CONFESSION??😲...i so wasn't expectin it in this part! needless to say i'm glad dat they finally confessed their feelings to each other....or i wuld've thought this samrat is like da show's samrat...a dhakkan LOL....da way they spoke to each other....decribed their feelings for each other....👏👏👏...i especially loved gunajn's bit "yes samrat i do ... i like you for the way you make me feel special ....i like you for allowing me to be just me when i am with you .. i like you for not judging me when i am with you .. i like how your eyes lit up when you smile at me ... i wan to believe that sparkle is because of me " very well written👏....kudos to u!

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Divya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#510

part 8..
gunjan saw samrat take her hand and interwining his fingers with her others ....i kno how much u wanted this scene for SG in da show....i'm so glad u used it in da ff....just da simplicity of it makes me go awwww😳

da whole beach thing was really cute....talkin bout nothin particular...displayin affection in da most simple yet meaningful way...dunno whether dat's even da right word to use....it was all so...sweet!

now cumin to mayur...ice cream at india gate...reminds me of da old times....wen me n my bro were both very young....india gate used to b like da most popular place for picnics n all....family friends wuld join us there for picnic on certain holidays....n nirulas was da only fast food chain durin those times....how v used to love da strawberry ice-cream n pastries of nirulas....but times change...nobody goes to india gate for picnics nemore...n everybody's forgotten nirulas😭
n nupur's story was saddening.....she really is a strong girl....mayb wen she gets together wid mayank, v'll get to c more of this side

Edited by divya_07 - 16 years ago