Hamari Adhuri Kahani (SK/AR) pt46 pg86 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_samrah

hey nice part.....................but sujal ko kia hoga coma mein.......................uske past mein kia hua tha .......................con't soon



Hey thank you very much for the appreciation

yeh ab oske past ko bhi bataya jaaehga.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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continue soon.. waiting for the next part eagerly..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

The phone kept ringing and finally he picked it up. "Hello, Piyush Garewal here."

"Hello Mr. Garewal, I'm officer Mathur here and I'm calling regarding a vehicle which is registered under the Garewal name." Piyush was curious and he kept listening as to what had happened. At the back of his mind he was aware that something terrible was coming his way. He had just come back home from the office after his late night meeting last night and was exhausted. Then he was checking his calls list and saw he had nine missed calls from Armaan. Before he could call him he got the call from the police. "Mr. Garewal are you still there?"

"Yes officer I am. What has happened?"

"The car number is DL 5 C AB 9876…"

Piyush became stiff, "yes that car belongs to my brother Sujal Garewal." He had become tensed as strange ideas were coming in his mind and wanted the officer to tell him quick as to what has happened. "Officer what has happened?"

"Mr. Garewal this car has been through a severe accident here at the Mumbai – Pune expressway."

"What?" Piyush stood up with shock. "What do you mean accident? Kaise huwa yeh?"

"Dekhye Mr. Garewal aapke bhai yeh gaari kuch istarha chala rahe the ke unka kaabu nahi raha or onka accident hogaya. Last night he was taken to the Sanjeevni hospital in Mumbai and we're doing further investigation."

Piyush didn't know how to react. This was bad news and he felt as if a big burden was being thrown on him and he was finding hard to breathe. He dropped the phone and fell on the sofa. Mauli saw his state and rushed in to handle him.

"Oh My God Piyush what happened?" she held onto him and tried to make him relax. "Kiska phone tha?"

"Mauli…Sujal…Sujal…" he couldn't find the right words.

She panicked, "Kya huwa Sujal ko?" she stared at him with wide eyes.

"Sujal ka accident hogaya hai."

"What?" she was utterly shocked.

"Yes, I just got a call from the police who informed me that last night he was driving on the Mumbai – Pune expressway and he got into an severe accident. Me jaanta tha ke ek din aisa hee kuch karega Sujal isilye me ose is haalat me gaari chalane nahi deta tha. His delirious state made him end up here."

Tears had formed in her eyes, "we've to go to Mumbai straight away." She was ready to leave but Piyush stopped her.

"No Mauli, right now the doctor has advised you not to travel. I'll go there with Rishi and then inform you."

"But Piyush I…" she was really upset.

"I know Mauli how you're feeling right now but we can't take such chances. Don't worry me waha pohochte hee tumhe phone karunga." He was able to convince her well and she agreed. Then Piyush went to find Rishi who was sleeping in his room after a hangover. He informed him about what happened and Rishi was also shocked and immediately got up and started to get ready to leave.

Piyush called Armaan finally and Armaan was relieved to get through to him eventually. He gave him all the details and Piyush was alarmed that so much happened and he didn't get the information. Armaan didn't include the part of Sujal being in a coma as he thought he'll tell him when he arrives. Then Piyush told him that he's taking the first flight and he'll be there with Rishi. Armaan was glad that Piyush would be coming and now he'll have the extra support. He knew that he himself was very emotional so might not be able to make the right decisions, but Piyush was always focused and stronger in these situations.

Back at the hospital the ICU room was beeping with machines all clung to Sujal and he breathed with the respiratory. His one leg and arm were in a plaster and his full head had been bandaged. It was as if he no longer seemed human and was just a dummy laid down with no life whatsoever. Even though he was not awake he was aware of what was happening around him. He knew how people were reacting to his situation but he just couldn't go on like this anymore. There seemed to be no end to his sorrow so he decided to make an end of himself. Life without her had been like being dead anyways so he was doing a favour to himself. Life hadn't always been this way and he always hadn't been this depressed. He used to enjoy life a lot and spent his time spreading happiness for others regardless of his own. His favourite passion was poetry which he wrote many and captured many hearts. His heart was waiting for the day when it would flutter off to heaven and that day arrived. It arrived on a stormy rainy night….

FLASHBACK

It was thunder storming and Sujal's car had broke down. He had come to Shimla on important business and now was returning back to Delhi but because of the weather he was stuck. He loved the rain as it was so he left his car and sauntered in the rain absorbing the drops on his face and taking the most of it. Since he was a kid he had always loved the rain and would spend hours playing in it. The most he loved about the rain was how the drops touched the eyes and gave it a sensational feeling. He also loved Shimla a lot and he spent most of his days here only, musing for his couplets and getting new inspirations. Right then he was waiting for something new, something which would push him further and till date he hadn't found it.

As he was walking, suddenly he heard noises of anklets and they were getting close. He stopped and kept listening to them as if they were enchanted. They were getting closer and closer and fast too as if someone was racing. Then they stopped but something happened. Something which he didn't expect. Someone clung onto him from behind and held on as if they were afraid or something. He didn't know what to do. He waited to see what the person does and then he slowly began turning around but to his surprise he found no one there. Was it his imagination? Or was someone really here? He kept searching but he couldn't find anybody. The rain and the dark made it impossible. He brushed it off and turned to walk again when lightning struck and the thunder roared. That was when someone rushed into his arms and clung onto him taking him completely by surprise. He noticed it was a woman but whom? And why was she doing this? She held onto him really tight and had her eyes closed as if she was afraid of something. He didn't know what to do? His hands were hung mid air wondering whether to engulf her or not. The feeling he got as she held him so close was unexplainable. He didn't know what he was feeling but his heart was racing and the hairs on the back of his neck had stood up. The thunder struck again and the woman's grip became harder around him. Slowly his hands did rest on her back and it was natural how he held her close. As if they were molded together.

They both didn't know how long they were like that but something stirred in the woman and she opened her eyes and realized the position she was in. she loosened the grip and Sujal felt it and could feel her slipping out. She gradually pulled away from him. "I'm sorry," she spoke in a remorseful voice, "I got really scared of the thunder so I…"

The lightning struck again and she grabbed onto his elbow and closed her eyes. With surprise he kept looking at her grip on him and just kept thinking about who she was. The lightning allowed him to see her face and he was dazed. She was the prettiest creature he had seen till date. Her skin appeared fair even in the dark light. Water droplets were falling down on her face from her wet hair. Her eyes were shut and her lips were trembling. As the water grouped up on her lips he had this urge to drink them all up and taste her soft velvet lips. She was the creation of perfection and his eyes wanted to capture her beauty forever. He didn't know what it was but he knew he was attracted to her. "aap istarha akelee, is toofanee raat me kya karahee hai?"

"Ji?" her eyes popped open at his question and then she let go of him too quickly feeling a bit embarrassed.

He saw her big sparkling eyes and they did the magic. They captured him completely and he didn't want to look away. "Maine poocha aap akelee raat ko yaha kyu ghoom rahee hai?"

"Actually I was with my friends and going back home but their houses come in between and I thought I would be able to go back by myself but obviously I was wrong and then the dark and the lightning and the thunder and the rain and…." She was out of breath and he just kept staring in amazement at her go on and on. Her voice was music to his ears and it was giving him so much serenity that he wanted to listen to her forever. She appeared so innocent and virginal that he felt as if she was thrown down from heaven just now for him. She saw how he was staring at him and she stopped and bit her tongue. "I'm sorry, wo kya hai ke jabhi me kabhi ghabra jaati hu na to aise hee bak bak karne lagti hu."

He laughed and his voice filled the air. This girl was certainly something else and he couldn't believe his fate that he met her. He continued laughing as if he had heard the biggest joke of the century.

She thought, "strange man, kahi paagal to nahi?" she became afraid and decided to move away from him but the dark and the thunder was scaring her too much. She thought that it would be a lot worse to be alone than being with a mad man. Cautiously she asked him, "are you alright?"

He composed himself and then looked at her, "maaf kijyega per me aap pe nahi has raha hu. Me bus apnee kismet pe has raha hu." And he started laughing again.

She muttered under her breath. "Alright, I think he really is insane. I've to get away now." She looked up at him and saw he was still laughing so she decided to turn away and walk before he caught her.

Sujal saw she was missing and then looked and saw she was walking away. He didn't even catch her name and he couldn't let her go off like this alone. He followed her, "hey miss wait. Sunye…are rukye…"

She didn't wait and continued walking as she was getting strange vibes from Sujal. She was ready to face the atrocities of the dark and the thunder but not of a mad man.

"Hey didn't you say you were afraid of the dark. I'll drop you home. Wait…" he continued following her. "are ajeeb larki hai yaar." He saw how she was not stopping so he continued following her. She increased her pace and he also did. She began to jog and he also followed suit. He couldn't understand what was wrong with her but he couldn't just let her go all by herself after seeing how scared she was.

She looked back and saw he was still following her. "are yeh aadmi to ruk ne ka naam hee nahi leraha hai. Ab kya karu me." She increased her pace of the jog and just continued in the desperate need to escape him. All of a sudden her foot tripped against a stone and she began falling towards the front.

Sujal was quick and he grabbed her before she reached the ground. Again their eyes met and they got lost in each other.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahh the flashback started...............very lovely............think thats kashish...........pehli mulakaat baarish mein...............and of course the final scene was romantic...........wat else can i ask for.............but the way they met and sujal laughin was really funny and also cute..............cont soon.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: harpy

cont soon gr8 story...



thanks alot for the appreciation

i'm happy that u liked it.

yeh i shall continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

ahh the flashback started...............very lovely............think thats kashish...........pehli mulakaat baarish mein...............and of course the final scene was romantic...........wat else can i ask for.............but the way they met and sujal laughin was really funny and also cute..............cont soon.............



hey Deepa thanks alot

yeh the flashback has started and hopefully u'll be getting ur answers soon.

i'm glad u liked the scenes between them and found it funny.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey ur ff is awesome. Im totally in love with it. Plzzz continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gr8 part. It was gud to c how much every1 cares 4 Sujal. And u knw its completely ur credit that we understand the bond btwn them so well. In the last part I was kind of angry at Piyush n Rishi but the way u stated Piyush's condition it showed how much he really luvs Sujal n so all the anger vanished away.

The way u described Sujal's state of mind while being in coma, was fabulous.
Luved Sujal's first meeting wid the girl. But mujhe ye part padte waqt lag raha tha jis hassi ki wajah se usse Sujal insane laga ab wohi hassi ghum ho gayi hai. I was feeling terribly bad 4 Sujal.
Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey ur ff is awesome. Im totally in love with it. Plzzz continue soon!!!!



hey thanks a lot for the appreciation

i'm glad u luved it and hope u continue loving it in the future.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks a lot for loving this part.

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