Why is the pre-note/recap font sooo tiny??? - lol! seriously, it was just so the readers didn't have to scroll down the page forever and ever - so much for being considerate 😆
6694 words :D You are crazy ... that's like three updates for me. - see?! and the recap itself must be over a 1000 - exactly why the font!
"My bad. It was the 'head ache'." Atul retorted. A big like...how you've eased into this update, carrying it forward from where you left off last time you know that feeling one gets everyonce in a while reading something about how easily a transition ad taken place in scenes and how the dialogues were bang on?! that eeling of, geez! i wonder if i'd be half as spontaneous if i was actually that chaacter in that situation? - so when i was a kid i'd be like, wow, that wit! now i'm like, damn this author is....! 😆 basically, i'm saying that it took me around 7 re-edits before i got that one dumb line straight! so if it came out smart *phew, at last* you know i ain't that smart after all - i just had all my life drafting it! 😆 but from a different perspective mostly through Atul's eyes- unlike the last part from previous update from Riddhima's point of view (literally).That emphasis on her guilt (?) at their whole situation made you feel sorry for her while here Armaan's resentment comes pretty strongly even without a mention, its not been spelled out as such save for a few places and yet its' pretty obvious. The most effective I'd say was, The 'she-curse' would not stop interfering with his evening however much he shunned the thought!, which doesn't leave room for much doubt. Strange how things can go wrong in a matter of moments, who would have thought the evening would turn this bad for the otherwise jolly fellow and otherwise polite hostess. - yeh, but it happens right? the cliche sticks and stones may break your bones but words shall break your heart...?! and this was more about the unspoken words too - o utterly ridhima-ish! 😆
Her thinking had been retarded so greatly, that it were some good seconds later, as the two of them Muskaan and him adjusted their positions balancing the table between them, that disappointment hit her. He hadn't spared her the barest glance, and more sadly than at any other point this evening, and somewhat angrily, she could simply wonder about the one thing.
You've managed to alienate her in her own house! Its one of those days when everything goes a little crazy...I'm keen to see how she's going to (if at all) or how they will take things from here. Alright, I give up, I can't make it more sensible and I know it doesn't make much sense already!! - you're right, as is everyone else who saw the fact that there is more to come... this is turning outto be the longest party in the history of the word 'party' - i should apply for Guinness or something! 😆
Ah ha! Now I remember exactly, why this para stood out earlier too," An insufferable grin plastered itself on Armaan's face, showing off the pair of those deep set dimples which were (in)famous to wordlessly, but unexceptionally make impression, and the altogether familiar sight of a mischief making glint appeared in the animated hazel-blue eyes which were soon enough trained back upon the cause of his amicability"
You can take out Armaan from it and it's still going to scream Armaan...Armaan!! I was smiling silly asI read this the first time. And even more so since it is exactly the thing that makes some people go 'ughhh!! Not again' but that's precisely this Armaan, you would understand what I'm trying to say here... since you are not burdened by 'retarded processing' (whatever!!)😈 I just hope you weren't in the midst of an experiment in a lab when you wrote that :P - he he! in retrospect i think i sond quite fan gurlish with that description - but heck! its armaan malik!!! *sighs...dreams...sighs again* 😆
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How the hell do you come up with these!!? May be I can borrow some classic NJ banter for the starry NJ ;) - LOL! ur most welcome to lady A, but really, could you of all people actually need borrowing words?!
Private PDA!!??
Then close your eyes, and imagine...Chicken and Keeper sitting under a tree...um-mm-mm-mm-hm-mm-mm-mm!" LOL
Nothing could keep him down forever, for he always bounced back. The world, their world, may have been a safer place without him, to be honest - but it would also have been a world much less exciting.
I don't think I watched DMG with Abhi-Nikki at all so I'm clueless about them in terms of the actual show. But even then, I'm sure Modi wouldn't have approved of 'PINK' ?? I'd love to know what Modi would react to this color co-ordination. And I share Atul's surprise, these two aren't wasting much time are they?? - ahaha! so i haven't watched AN either... less than the least of all times that i hav watched DMG... AN are from my head (and from knowing more about them reading and participating and voting for the AN contest) as for Atul's surprise, i'm sue you got it right - but it was more at Armaan's stating of it... the Atul Armaan bond is going to more allusive at all times - if i can maintain that - because that's how i see Atul, and because Armaan is capable of that streak too... you know?!i said somewhere before, so again, Armaan is a little of both abhi and atul - hence the link between them at the bottom of all else =)
And Chikki?! Quick recovery but Yuck! It is, I'm with Abhi on this one.(so thats what someone on the show actually called her, i think abhi did - i tweaked its misuse to my convenience and actually gave rason to it 😆) And Armaan's not finished yet, Talk of the gall of the man, he should leave it at that, why enrage the Modi further? I suppose he needs distractions to keep his eyes away from the 'she-curse', this promises to get even better, update soon.- sigh sigh sigh! not like it will successfully happen at her party, in her house - when her is Ridhima! 😆
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