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Posted: 16 years ago
it was choooo chweet....loved it a lot😃.....i was almost lost in ur ff😳..... arima r too cute....armaan is such a sweetheart yaar😳.... plz update soon n plz pm me wen u do dat....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww loved it sweetie very well written woooooooooow amazing long part do continue soon swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
THX SWANCY iw as wondeirng where u are this tym cz u alwzy comment 1st or 2nd hehe thx alottttttt
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part
it was so nice of armaan to help mend ridz & anji relationship
thanx for the pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks very1 these comments MEAN ALOTT 2 encouraghe me 2 write onn
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Posted: 16 years ago

part 8 coming your way but b4 thankss for al the comments they mean alott


PART 8


As all of them were leaving the office to go back to their duties Dr Shashank personally came outside to call armaan in his office again to discuss something important whilst told everyone else to leave. Armaan got worried especially after what happened last night. He thought he might be in trouble but he decided to play it cool as Riddhima was watching him. He walked into the office smiling. Dr Shashank sat down and told armaan to as well. As he was he noticed Riddhima peaking through the door she gave him thumbs up trying to console him that everything will be alright. She knew her father too well. He loved his daughters more than anything and finidng out that armaan saved his daughters life she knew her father probably called him there to thank him.

Dr Sh: armaan
ammy: yes sir
Dr Sh: woh '..kal ke liye thankyou
ammy: (relieved sigh) oh sir woh to koi baat nahi woh to mera farz that
Dr Sh: nahi beta tumne meri beti ke jaan bachai mein tumhara jitna shukriya karu utna kam hai. Riddhima ne bataya ke kaise tumne apni jaan ko khatre me daal ke uski jaan bachayi THANKS A LOT
aamy: sir aapko thankyou kehni ki koi zaroorat nahi hai aur waise bhi aap mujhse bare hai

Both father and daughter smiled at his good values. Riddhima was so surprised. First time she met him she never expected a guy like armaan to turn out to be be such a valued man though she didn't like his flirty side or she just thought she didn't.

to herself: ladka itna bhi bura nahi hai actually bura hi nahi hai (she laughed )

she saw armaan and dr shashank getting up and dr shashank gave a hug to armaan and patted on his back. As he started leaving dr shashank remembered

dr sh: oh yb armaan beta im also sorry kal jo maine tumhe Riddhima ke saath dkeha to tumhe galat samjha . im sorry

ammy: no sorry no thankyou ur waise bhi koi bhi pita apne beti ko aadhi raat aise dekhega to galat hi samjhega na

dr sh: par'

ammy: sir its ok acha bi

dr sh: bi

when he left Riddhima rushed wantng to hear it from his mouth: kya hua? Kya kaha? Kcuh zaroori kaam tha? (trying to look as if she doesn't know anything)

ammy: calm shant shant woh thankyou kehna chathe the kal ke liye ab chalo duties par warna hitler daante gi

whilst they were walking

ammy: waise tum humari baatein kyun sun rahi thi

ridzi: urm.. woh.. woh' waise hi meri marzi (she ran off)

ammy: pagal(laughed)

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At the end of their duties they were all in the locker room excited for their 1st party together. They were all chatting thinking off what to wear tonight. They wanted to give good impression of themselves at the party especially anjalii. She wanted to impress armaan or rahul. NOT ATUL. She went to chat with armaan or shall I say flirt with him.

anjy: armaaaan

ammy: yes anjy babes

anjy: tum raati kya pehne wale ho

ammy: maloom nahi kyun

anjy: aise hi waise tum par to kuchh bhi acha lagega aakhir itne handsome jo ho

ammy: aww who to mujhe pata hai kuch new bolo

anjy: (laughs) acha yeh bolo nah ke mein kya pehnu mujh par kaunsa colour suit karega

ammy: sab colour tum par jachenge (feeling awkward with anjy)

anjy: aww thankyou (blushing)

atul interuppts and ammy gave a relieved sigh

atul : anjy tum kya pehnogi jo colour tum pehngi mein bhi wohi pehnunga phir hum match match karenge

anjy: im not telling you no way

atul: please well look very good na? just like a couple

anjy: but were not

atul: to hojayenge

anjy: urrrr(thinking of her with atul) NEVER

atul: (thinking of something else to talk about)
urrmm kitne baje aana tha?

anjy: 8.00

atul: mein jaldi aa jao

anjy: why?

atul: madat karunga khana pakane mein ghar sajane mein

anjy: mein aur papa kaafi hai

ammy looked at ridzi in a symapathic way. He was feeling very corncened ofr these sister relationship. He had promised ridzi and himself he will improve their bond.

atul: koi baat nahi mein aajaunga to jaldi ho jayega

ridzi interrupts: di sahi keh rahi hai atul mein papa aur di hai na

she looked at anjy and anjy gave a stern look back

atul: acha(disappointed)

ammy: kitne bajgaye?

ridzi: oh no 6.00 bajgaye aur ghar mein itna kaam bhi hai tyaar bhi to hona hai

ammy: uff tum ladkiyan to gnate lagati ho sirf tyaar hone mein

ridzi: (smiling) par phir utne sunder bhi to lagte hai

ammy: (wink) who to hai

ridzi: di chalo

anjy walked off without saying a word and ridzi followed.

atul: armaan bro tu mujhe ghar chod dega meri cycle ka tyre puncture hogaya hai

ammy: sure champ

atul: thanks bro

they also walked off

muskaan was taking her phone out of the locker and house keys whilst mumbling to herself: mein ghar kaise jaaungi auto ke liye chute bhi nahi hai

rahul heard: main chod du?

muski: nahi its ok

rahul: nahi mein chod dunga na

muski: acha thanks

rahul and muskaan were sitting in the car whilst rahul wanted the answers to his questions

rahul: muskaan tu mujhse tikh tara baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai

muskaan: kar to rahi huun

rahul: tujhko pata hai mera matlab kya hai

muskaan: tu us baat ko bhool kyun nahi jaata?

rahul: par kyun aise achaanak ha kyun tu bjhi jaanti hai aur mein bhi ke hum ek dusre se abhi bhi utna hi pyaar karte hai jitna karte the

muskaan: mujhe us bare mein baat nahi karni please

rahul: par kyun?

muskaan: agar tumhe is bare mein baat karni hai to gaari rok stop the car

rahul : par tumhara ghar aane hi wala hai

muskaan: rahul acha sun tu agar chahta hai ke hum dost bane rahe to us baat ke bare mein mujhe yaad mat dila

rahul was silent he didn't know what to say he really wanted to know the reason but he dint want to lose muskaan. He stopped the car wher her house arrived and muskkan got off but before closing the door she said: thankyou hope tumne decide karliya ke tum mere dost bana chahte ho ke nahi

she walked off

rahul was very confused for 4 years. She never answered him. Urghh he was soo angry

rahul: why? Why? What have I done???

FLASHBACK

there was a hot couple in excel university who everyone looked up to because they never got into fights and loved each other more everyday.. they were a couple more than 3 years now. They were so in love that they decided to get married. And on that special day rahul was going to ask muskaans hand from her parents.


That day (in the morning)

mrs garewal: betha aaj bahut hi special din hai tumhare liye aas kuch bhi garbar mat karna

rahul: yes mom( eating his breakfast)
he was on top of the world today. He was very very very excited and happy. So happy that nothing in the world could ruin his happiness. Today was the most importanat day of his life. If muskaan's parents refused he would die because he couldn't live without muskaan. She was the reason he breathed. She was his life

rahul: mum bye wish me luck

mrs garewal: mera aashirwaad to humesha tumhare saat hai or humesha hoga.

rahul: bi mom

he left the house in excitement but he was also very scared. He couldn't wait. He was so nervous that he forgot he had to go UNI 1st. he turned his cars direction. And arrived uni in a few minutes. When he went in he saw muskaan more excited than him running towards him.

they both shared a passionate kiss. It lasted for 3 minutes. They twirled thie toungues. They could taste each other. They didn't want anything to ruin this moment par aakhir friend skab kaam aate hai. Theyr friends arrived

FR1 : calm down yaar
FR 2: yh man uni mein ho yaar

they broke apart

muski: itne late kyun hoagie? Kya hua? Tum tyaar to ho na? nervous to nahi ho#'

rahul: bas bas mujhse zyaada nervous to tum lag rahi ho?

muskaan(weird laugh)

rahul: hai is hasi pe to mein fida huun

muski: achs sirf hasi

rahul: nahi meri jan pura tumpar

they shared another kiss

FR1 : lo phirse shuri hogaye

RM laughed

rahul: tumhari jab girlfriend hogi na tab pata chalega


FR2:sachi(teasing him)

both freidns ran away

muskaan held both of rahuls hand: tum tyaar to ho na?

rahul: yes aur tum phikir mat karoaaj ke baad tum meri hogi

muski hugged him : chalo class ke liye der ho rahi hai

they both entred the class

student 1: dekho love birds aa gaye

r: chup beth raj

student 2: kyun tum aaj iske ghar nahi jaane wala the(teasingly)

madam: acha bas rahul muskaan beth jao par saath saath nahi (as she knew they wouldn't work but would stare at each other for the whole lecture)

student3: oh bichara love birds alag hogaye

muskaan: chup beth sonia

they sat far apart but hadn't stopped looking at each other. As soon as the lecture finished they ran outside

muski: omg time hogaya hai papa ghar aa gaye honge jaao mera ek aur lecture hai isliye meh abhi nahi aa sakti

rahul: acha bi(kissed her on the forhead)

muski: good luck(rahul walked off)

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after a hour

rahul entered : good afternoon mr chadha

mr c: gd afternoon bera tum aaj yaha muskkan to ghar par nahi hai

rahul: pata hai mein aapse hi baat karne aaya tha

mr c: kya hua bate aao betho

rahukl: uncle who'.mein aur
mrs c: yeh lo pani

rahul: thanks. As I was saying unle who mein aur muskaan ek dusre se pyaar karte hai

mr c: I know betha bachkaani pyaar

rahul: nahi uncle hum ek dusre se'' urm(nervous) shaadi karna chahte hai

mr cLsmiling) sachi yeh to achi baat hai muskaan tyaar hai to hum kaun hote hai manna karne wale

rahul: sachi uncle thanks alottt

muskaan(suddenly): mujhe yeh rishta manzoor nahi hai

rahul laughing: yeh kya mazaak hai

muski: mazaak nahi sach hai tum please mere ghar se isi waqt chale jaao

rahul: par kyun

muski: please go and she ran upstairs crying

rahul left wondering what just had happened. There were tears in his eyes. He was shocked. He couldn't believe what just ahd happened . he looked back incase muskkan was there laughing saying it was just a joke. But noone was there. After that day muskaan always ignored rahul at uni. But when they did slowly start talking because of projects in uni and all all they did was fight as rahul always wanted to know the answer to WHY?

flashback ended

that's all he remembered . he still didn't know why? But he was determined to find out because he still loved her. He drove off to get5 ready as he was getting late for the party
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In the gupta mansion

Riddhima had finished all the preparation but all that was left was her getting ready

she sat in front of her wardrobe in a clothes crisis

she took out a black salwar as that was her fave colour

ridzi: nahh

she took out a yellow salwar looked herself in the mirror with it

ridzi: nah yeh bhi nahi
she rejected many salwars but then she took out a white one white silver working on it. She remebred ammy saying it was his fave colour


ridzi: perfect
she ran into the bathroom and after a few minutes she cam outside wearing a beautiful white salwar which showed her skinny fgure perfectly. She was looking like an angel in white. She had wet hair as she just had a bath she combed it staright and dried it. After a few minutes she tied it back into a pony. She sat infront of her mirror and don her makeup. Gliterry white eyeshadow. Then eyeliner with a slight flick at the end, mascara which she didn't really need as she alredy had long eyelashes. She put glossy blip gloss onm and there she was perfectly rweady she was looking prettier than ever . she looked herself in the mirror and smiled. She couldn't wait till armaan saw her.

the sam crisis was in the mallik mansion

who says men don't take time getting ready an example is DR ARMAAN

he didn't know what colour would impress Riddhima

armaan: kya pehnuu?????

he remebreed ridzi saying her fave colour was balck so he took out a balck shirt. He took of his shirt and he was wearing a white vest underneath(VEST ATTACK LOLZ SORRY) you could see his muscles perfectly . his muscles were to die fro actually any girl to have him was veryy luckyyy. He put on the black shirt. You could see his msules and his physique perfectly. He was looking hotter than ever. He put on blue jeans and some trainers. He fixed up his hair with his hand spike it up a bit. He put some deodorant on and winked at himelf in the mirror. He was looking dashing than ever only if Riddhima thought the same though . he couldn't wait for ridzi to see him.
he left to go to the party

in gupta mansion.

ridzi jeot checking the time. She was waiting eagerlyyyy for ARMAAN. Someone knocked the door.

ridzi: yes hes here

she rann to open the door and when she opened''..


how was it guyzz sorry for the long wiat hope its gd enuff

plzzz comment or crticzie




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Posted: 16 years ago
ANAM!!!!
guys after todays epi this was just the icing on the cake!!!
loved all of it anam
great job keep it up
AR toh as awlays awesomly written hun
i loved how armaan and anji scne hope we get one too in dmg havnt had one for ages!!
and ramusk soooo cute!!!
i love how you include all couples, its a total dmg story
FATNATSIC anam
ROFL@ vest attack
armaan in black with vest underneath
haiiiiii anam luv ya babe!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey anam
nic eupdate
so shashank said sorry wow
and anjali ko armaan ke liye kuch hai kya
ui think armana will make her nice

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey another awesome part. Loved it!!! Do continue soon plzz. Thnks for the PM!!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
thxxxxx trinzy and ambyy and jessica glad u enjoyedd it luv yaa
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