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helloo sorry i changed the title hope u guys dont get confuse
excetp of Love at 1st sight i thought PEHLE TAKRAAR PHIR PYAAR suits teh storyline better plz give opinions on this if u dnt like it plz feel welomed 2 criticize
hello evry
this is my first FF so hope you enjoy it
my charcters
sme as DMG
PART 1
riddhima : di chaloo late ho jayegi pehle din meh hi
anjali : aa rahi hoon
riddhima: acha me jaati huun tum papa ke saath aa jana
anjali: tikh hai
riddhima trying to stop a taxi
ridzi: taxi taxi
taxi doesnt stopp
ridzi: aaj kal ke logh bhi naa
a motorbike goes past her and stops
the man rides back
takes his helmet off and slides his hand through his lush hair
armaan: need a lift?
ridzi: no thanku (feeling awkward)
armaan: iill drop you me waise larko sa nahi huun so dont worry
ridzi: nah its ok
armaan : ok fine
ridzi: u can go now
armaan:u wont get a taxi aa jaoo(trying to force her)
ridzi ignores him and tries getting another taxi
ridzi: taxi taxi
no taxi stops
armaan: aaj kal ki ladiyan ziddi kahin ki
ridzi: kuch kaha aapne
armaan : nahi aapne kuch suna(cheekily)
ridzi: ab aap jao mujhe aapse lift anhi chahiye thanku
armaan: pakka ok mai jah raha hu
he starts the motorbike
riddhima still trying but no luck
so she thinks and then she goes
ridzi: acha suniye
armaan: kya
ridzi: aap mujhe sanjeevani hospital chod sakta hai please
armaan:(laughs)
ridzi: kyun hase?
armaan: aapkko pata chal jayega
betiyen ji
by the way aapka naam?
riddhima sits trying to keep her distance
ridzi: riddhima aur aap
armaan: aap mujhe nahi jaanti
sari ladkiyan mujhe jaanti hai
main mallik armaan mallik
ridzi: O K then (whispering)
armaan: kya
ridzi: nothing to aap jah kaha rahe the
armaan: dont worry mujhe paka pakro warna gir jaogi
ridzi: mujhe kuch nahi hoga
he starts the bike
rides it very fast
ridzi: dheere chaloa
armaan: maine kaha na mujhe pakar lo
ridzi slowly put her arm on hi shoulder very gently
armaan luks at his shoulder and smiles
ridzi sees this and removes her hand
armaan: pakar lo mein tumhe kha nahi jaaonga
ridzi puts her hand on again
armaan presses the brake
ridzi is pushed on his back and her hand is around his waist ?
she notices and removes very quickly
armaan just laughs
he stops the bike
ridzi : kya hua rukh kyu gaye
armaan: i dont mind taking you on a long drive as your veryyy beautiful par sanjeevani aa gaya
ridzi: blushes : thanku
ridzi starts going in the hostpital
armaan puts his helmet back on but waits for ridzi to trun
armaan: she will she will
and before closing the door she waves back luaghing
armaan:hasi to phasi
yaar me to gaya
hope you guys like itt
this was my 1st FF
hope it wasnt boring
PLZZZ COMMENT
if u guyz like it then ill continue
plzz
pm list index
1. angelic_swancy part 1- page 1
2. sanjana25 part 2 - page 2
3.k_anjali12 part 3- page 5
4.aliyaha part 4- page 9
5.KaSh_4_eva part 5- page 13
6.sanisweetie part 6-page 17
7.sheel_dmgdiva part 7- page 20
8.ammy_furor part8-page 22
9.rinxkashsujen part 9-page 26
10.~sumedha~ part 10-page 30
11.mkp1995 part 11-page 35
12.panjwani part 12-page 39
13LIKEDMG part 13-page 44
14.jessica18 IMP note-page 49
15.karan05 part 14-page 53
16.cutie_yachu NOTE-page 62
17.karansharda_fan part 15- page 62
18.KaSu_foreva part 16-page 65
19.riddss part 17- page 70
20.ksg_sonia part 18-page 74
21.mithila2 part 19-page 82
22.SuKash part 20-page 85
23.Kash4life part 21-page 89
24.lilsunshine_rav PART 22-PAGE 93
25.xxxxminixxxx part 23-page 97
26.nidha1983 part 24-page 100
27.dhruviarmaanfan
28.karans_angel
29.shalika
30.swamii92
31._MONU_
32.-neelam-
33.angel_riya
34.tamanna17
35.scorpio95
36.ibdt2004
37.aneeshadgr8
38.cutie_mahima
43.AbhiNikiLuver
excetp of Love at 1st sight i thought PEHLE TAKRAAR PHIR PYAAR suits teh storyline better plz give opinions on this if u dnt like it plz feel welomed 2 criticize
hello evry
this is my first FF so hope you enjoy it
my charcters
sme as DMG
PART 1
riddhima : di chaloo late ho jayegi pehle din meh hi
anjali : aa rahi hoon
riddhima: acha me jaati huun tum papa ke saath aa jana
anjali: tikh hai
riddhima trying to stop a taxi
ridzi: taxi taxi
taxi doesnt stopp
ridzi: aaj kal ke logh bhi naa
a motorbike goes past her and stops
the man rides back
takes his helmet off and slides his hand through his lush hair
armaan: need a lift?
ridzi: no thanku (feeling awkward)
armaan: iill drop you me waise larko sa nahi huun so dont worry
ridzi: nah its ok
armaan : ok fine
ridzi: u can go now
armaan:u wont get a taxi aa jaoo(trying to force her)
ridzi ignores him and tries getting another taxi
ridzi: taxi taxi
no taxi stops
armaan: aaj kal ki ladiyan ziddi kahin ki
ridzi: kuch kaha aapne
armaan : nahi aapne kuch suna(cheekily)
ridzi: ab aap jao mujhe aapse lift anhi chahiye thanku
armaan: pakka ok mai jah raha hu
he starts the motorbike
riddhima still trying but no luck
so she thinks and then she goes
ridzi: acha suniye
armaan: kya
ridzi: aap mujhe sanjeevani hospital chod sakta hai please
armaan:(laughs)
ridzi: kyun hase?
armaan: aapkko pata chal jayega
betiyen ji
by the way aapka naam?
riddhima sits trying to keep her distance
ridzi: riddhima aur aap
armaan: aap mujhe nahi jaanti
sari ladkiyan mujhe jaanti hai
main mallik armaan mallik
ridzi: O K then (whispering)
armaan: kya
ridzi: nothing to aap jah kaha rahe the
armaan: dont worry mujhe paka pakro warna gir jaogi
ridzi: mujhe kuch nahi hoga
he starts the bike
rides it very fast
ridzi: dheere chaloa
armaan: maine kaha na mujhe pakar lo
ridzi slowly put her arm on hi shoulder very gently
armaan luks at his shoulder and smiles
ridzi sees this and removes her hand
armaan: pakar lo mein tumhe kha nahi jaaonga
ridzi puts her hand on again
armaan presses the brake
ridzi is pushed on his back and her hand is around his waist ?
she notices and removes very quickly
armaan just laughs
he stops the bike
ridzi : kya hua rukh kyu gaye
armaan: i dont mind taking you on a long drive as your veryyy beautiful par sanjeevani aa gaya
ridzi: blushes : thanku
ridzi starts going in the hostpital
armaan puts his helmet back on but waits for ridzi to trun
armaan: she will she will
and before closing the door she waves back luaghing
armaan:hasi to phasi
yaar me to gaya
hope you guys like itt
this was my 1st FF
hope it wasnt boring
PLZZZ COMMENT
if u guyz like it then ill continue
plzz
pm list index
1. angelic_swancy part 1- page 1
2. sanjana25 part 2 - page 2
3.k_anjali12 part 3- page 5
4.aliyaha part 4- page 9
5.KaSh_4_eva part 5- page 13
6.sanisweetie part 6-page 17
7.sheel_dmgdiva part 7- page 20
8.ammy_furor part8-page 22
9.rinxkashsujen part 9-page 26
10.~sumedha~ part 10-page 30
11.mkp1995 part 11-page 35
12.panjwani part 12-page 39
13LIKEDMG part 13-page 44
14.jessica18 IMP note-page 49
15.karan05 part 14-page 53
16.cutie_yachu NOTE-page 62
17.karansharda_fan part 15- page 62
18.KaSu_foreva part 16-page 65
19.riddss part 17- page 70
20.ksg_sonia part 18-page 74
21.mithila2 part 19-page 82
22.SuKash part 20-page 85
23.Kash4life part 21-page 89
24.lilsunshine_rav PART 22-PAGE 93
25.xxxxminixxxx part 23-page 97
26.nidha1983 part 24-page 100
27.dhruviarmaanfan
28.karans_angel
29.shalika
30.swamii92
31._MONU_
32.-neelam-
33.angel_riya
34.tamanna17
35.scorpio95
36.ibdt2004
37.aneeshadgr8
38.cutie_mahima
39. shayan90
40.cute_trisha
41.munomoni
42.dipu40.cute_trisha
41.munomoni
43.AbhiNikiLuver
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