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but I give you my heart and soul.
I send to you all the love I have to give,
and anything else that would give me the
chance to touch your heart.

I could never tear my eyes from you,
you are able to make my life worth living.
But, without you, just like a rose,
I would wither and die.

Not all at once, but little by little,
petal by petal.

Slowly at first, because you have made me
stronger and stronger each day you're with me.
But eventually, without you, I will loose
all those beautiful petals you have given me."

With Luv: ~
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Luv Nadz!

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Part 2 –

The murderer sits in the car.

Man – work done?

Murderer – yes work done 😊.

Man – good boss will be happy now.

Angad reaches and find's the car going, when he sees a girl in her mid – twenties, putting shopping bags in her car.

Angad – excuse me mam, could please follow that car 😕?

Girl – why should I follow that car and who're you 😲😲?

Angad – I'm a C.I.D. officer and most probably there is a murderer in that car 😊.

Girl – I will not follow that car 😡.

Angad – then I've to😊 (he goes and sits in the car)

Girl – stop the car 😡.

Angad – madam I told you before that I've o follow that car and there is a criminal.

Girl – you looks like a criminal 😡.

Angad – I told you I'm C.I.D. officer 😊.

Murderer's car –

Murderer – is that car following us?

Man 1 – I think so.

Murderer – (to the one who was driving) drive fast and yes remember to change the number plate afterwards 😊.

Man 2 – okay we'll 😊.

Girl's car –

Girl – if you're a nice person then let me go 😡😡.

Angad – I'll drop you at your home but first let me catch that criminal.

Girl – you can't catch that car 😡😡.

Angad – I'll once I overtake that car.

Girl – what the hell 😡😡😡.

Mumbai times office –

The guy who was walking even had injured hand and blood stains were there on his shirt.

Mahesh – you're under arrest mr.

Guy – what 😲?

Mahesh – common you're under arrest.

Guy – have you gone mad 😲😲😲?

Voice – what, happened now Mahesh?

Mahesh – kartik sir there're blood stains on his shirt and see stains on shoes also. He's the culprit.

Kartik – okay arrest him and where is angad 😕😕?

Mahesh – sir angad sir has gone after a guy whom he thinks is the real culprit and he'll be coming back any moment.

Kartik – okay till then call all the workers and arrest him.

Guy – what the f*** 😡?

Girl's car –

Girl – (murmuring) god where I've stuck up. Who this jerk is? Why in this whole Mumbai he found only my car to follow some other car 😡. It's a good option. She takes out the keys and automatically car has to be stopped.

Angad – what have you done? We're going to catch that culprit. Give me the keys 😡😡😡.

Girl – no and throws the keys out of the car.

Angad – you're mad. You jerk what the hell is your problem can't you understand it was important to catch that car 😡.

Murderer's car –

Murderer – thank god the car is now not following us.

Man 1 – was that car following us or it was just our thinking?

Murderer – shut up will you, we should go to madam and tell her 😡.

Man 2 – yes let's go.

Girl's car -

Angad – congratulations now it's raining 😡.

Girl – then why the hell you're saying me congratulations, I want to go to my house 😡.

Angad – then go and find the keys 😈.

Girl – in this, heavy rain? Have you gone mad 😡😡?

Angad – then spend whole night here. Now choice is your mam 😆😆.

Girl – okay fine I'm searching. Jerk, dog, idiot, stupid, duffer, mentally retard 😡.

Angad was sitting in the car and laughing at her and she was searching the keys in heavy rains.

Girl – I couldn't find the keys 😭😭.

Angad – okay then I'm going to near by area to find some one who can help us in finding the car.

Girl – wait you're going to leave a young girl here alone in this heavy rain 😭?

Angad – you won't be scared of me mam 😊?

Girl – no, I won't.

Angad – okay then sit.

Girl goes and sits in the back of the car feeling cold.

Angad – feeling cold 😕😕?

Girl – yes (closes the windows of back)

Angad – (takes out his coat and gives her) take this, no problem 😊.

Girl – thanks 😊.

Mumbai times office –

Kartik – where is angad? His cell is also not reachable. I hope he finds some conclusion. Mahesh go to the hospital and tell me the present situation of editor singh 😕😕.

Mahesh – right sir. I hope that guy blurt out the truth .

Kartik – else tomorrow morning he has to.

Next morning –

Girl's car – angad and the girl was sleeping in car.

Angad – god rain has stopped I've to go to office.

Girl – rain stopped 😲😲😲?

Angad – can't you see 😡😡😡?

Girl – why you're so rude 😕😕😕?

Angad – I'm not, I think we should find the keys now, if you want to go to home otherwise stay here.

Girl – fine help me.

Angad – it's better.

Girl finds the keys and goes away from there without telling anagd and throwing his coat on him.

Angad – what the hell? Now I've to take a taxi, I guess first I should go to Mumbai times office 😡.

Mumbai times office –

Kartik – where were you last night?

Worker – sir send me give some papers for printing.

Karitk – lie, he send you just 5 minutes before the murder took place. Who else was there 😡😡?

Worker – morning shift people had left 30 minutes before and night shift people were going to reach in 15 – 20 minutes.

Kartik – okay anything else he said before you left his cabin?

Worker – sir asked for tea.

Angad – Mahesh what's happening?

Mahesh – sir everyone is here and one who we thought is culprit is been arrested.

Angad – okay and who is doing the enquiry 😕?

Mahesh – sir, kartik sir is doing.

Angad – okay, thanks.

Editor's cabin –

Kartik – angad good to see you, Mahesh was telling you went after a guy.

Angad – yes, but couldn't catch him. Who're you?

Person – I'm sub editor for this newspaper.

Angad – okay (when he sees a cigarette on the floor, he picks it up) did mr. singh use to smoke 😕😕?

Sub editor – no he neither smoke nor drink.

Angad – smells the cigarette, Mahesh give this in testing lab. Take finger prints on each and every thing in this room.

Kartik – almost we've taken pictures for finger prints except this table.

Anagd – okay, I'm going home for a while. See you at office, and yes I want to see the person according to you is a culprit.

Kartik – okay angad, sharma sir will be coming back today evening.

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