C.I.D. (ak,an ff) end on page 30

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#221

thanks for the pm..but u kind of just ended it too aburptly.. i understand cuz u wre so bzy and this interfere's with studies but im sure if you had more time u couldve wrote a better ending..

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

Thank You Very Much For Sharing With Us. sad ending

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#223

wowow nice part i dont understand ending line all the six died at last what thts mean

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sameira

@AKForever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#224

hey sad ending... good job any way ..

thanks fo rthe pm..

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Nadz_YuNalover

@Nadz_YuNalover

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#225

Hey thanks yaar i read the whole update but i'm dissapointed with the end.... They all died??? You're such an awesome writer you should have tried and made an happy ending... but anyways thanks for this! will defo wait for your other FFs... if u're still planing to write!

Luv ya
Nadz