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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

seems interesting enough... mujhe bhi pm list mein add karo please!!!:D



thnkx for ur coments 😊.
waise u don't have u ask u to add u in pm list as i always pm u 😉.
as u r tolerating my fics and coment on it 😉😉😉.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

interesting concept....

conitnue soon



thnkx for ur coments 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Part 1 –

Voice 1 – it's me. Tell him to do the work, boss has said.

Voice 2 – okay I'll.

Voice 1 – she'll tell him.

Boss – good, work should be done today.

Voice 2 – hello it's me. Go and talk to him, if he doesn't understand then you know what you've to do.

Man 1 – okay I'll, go and talk to him.

Man 2 – okay I'm going.


In Mumbai times office editor's room –

Editor singh – give this in printing on front page.

Worker – okay, anything else sir?

Editor singh – bring tea for me.

Worker – okay sir.

Editor singh – this news will be the sensational one. By this that drug dealer will be caught 😊😊. (when his phone rings) hello.

Man 2 – are you going to print that news 😕?

Editor singh – yes I'll and who the hell are you😡?

Man 2 – don't you love your life and your family.

Editor singh – I'm not a coward person, what you want?

Man 2 – how much money you want so that you don't print the news?

Editor singh – I'm a honest person and I publish only truth and no amount of money can buy me understand 😡😡.

Man 2 – then wait and watch what I can do😡😡😡 (and disconnects the phone)

Editor singh – hello can I talk to any senior officer?

Man – wait I'll call, whose calling?

Editor singh – it's me editor singh from Mumbai times office.

Man – okay, sir there is call from Mumbai times office.

Sir – okay, Mahesh send this report to sharma sir. Hello.

Editor singh – angad I got a call from a person who was blackmailing me.

Angad – why?

Editor singh – because of the news.

Angad – okay I'm reaching there as early as possible then tell me in detail.

Editor singh – okay see you soon angad.

Angad – Mahesh ask driver to bring the car, I've to go to the Mumbai times office.

Mahesh – yes sir. That lady has came again.

Angad – what the hell is this 😡? Now what's your problem?

Lady – you know my husband again came home drunk and beated me.

Anagd – this is not police station, this is C.I.D. office, go and complain in police station 😡😡😡.

Lady – there no one listen to the, complain.

Angad – so you come here daily and eat our head. Ram singh now onwards kick her out if you see her coming in this office again 😡.

Ram singh – okay sir, now go away from here.

Lady – he's so good looking I wish he was my husband ☺️.

Anagd – I don't want a fat ugly wife like you 😆😆.

Lady – (crying) is this, the reason my husband beats me 😭.

Anagd – she is the big drama queen 😆😆😆.

Mumbai times office –

A smart good looking guy is walking towards the editor's office when some one going inside editor's room.

Editor singh – who's this?

Man – I told you don't mess with our boss.

Editor singh – ohh so it's you who called me.

Man – yes now listen don't publish this article.

Editor singh – I'll okay I'll do that.

Man – okay then here is the result of that (stabs editor singh, and goes from there)

Blood drop from the knife was dripping in the corridor and the guy who was coming to his office didn't noticed and walked on blood drops on the floor.

Near the elevator, angad and Mahesh see's the guy who murdered editor singh but didn't cared.

Angad – editor singh, editor singh.

Editor singh – angad he killed me.

Anagd – Mahesh, Mahesh come her call the ambulance fast. God he was there the killer was there in the elevator I think he's the murderer. You stay here and call the police also I'm going to catch that guy.

Promo – will he be able to catch the killer or not?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Intersting part
Cont soon
Thanks for the pm
Javeria
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
wooh! cool eh!
loved it!!!
continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey gr8t part 1. Can u plz PM wen u update. Thankx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice prt.
Thanks for pm
update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28


thnkx for ur coments 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 26javey26

Intersting part
Cont soon
Thanks for the pm
Javeria



thnkx for ur coments 😊.
ll cntinue soon 😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowowow tht was amazingg i hope angad catch tht killer

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