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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: RSZR

Hiii sis How r u? HII SWEETY I AM FINE, AND HOPE THE SAME FOR U TOO..........

the ud was superb, mindblowing..😛 THANX A LOT DEAR.........
very happy to know that u have cont writing this....😃 SAME HERE DEAR..............
Raj- naina kitne ache lag rahe hain ek saath .... yipee😳 WOH TOH HUMESHA HI ACHCHE LAGTE HAIN SAATH-SAATH..........

Raj i mean rajveer sir i mean veer bilkul theek keh raha tha....😆 naina ko kuch ho gaya hai..
lagta hai khushi ke maare paagal ho gayi... haiiiiii....☺️ ABSOLUTELY RIGHT DEAR, NO DOUBT ABOUT THAT..........

Plss ud soon sis... pata tho chale woh kan tha jisne naina ke muh par haath rakha..
ab kause villan ki entry ho gayi......???😡😡😡 YES DEAR I WILL UD SOON......

waiting eagerly
lots of love
ritu😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
All i can say is that a wonderful start dear.👏 👏 👏
Mujhe khushi hai ki aap aage is fic ko continue kar rahi ho n Raj ki naughtiness n Naina's playfullness mujhe bahut pasand aayi is me.😳 😳 😳
Par ye kaun hai jis ne Naina k kandhe me achanak se haath rakh diya?😕 😕 😕
ud soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

All i can say is that a wonderful start dear.👏 👏 👏 thanky so much dear........
Mujhe khushi hai ki aap aage is fic ko continue kar rahi ho n Raj ki naughtiness n Naina's playfullness mujhe bahut pasand aayi is me.😳 😳 😳 mujhe bhi woh part likhte waqt bahut mazaa aaya tha, jitna ki tumhe padhte waqt.......
Par ye kaun hai jis ne Naina k kandhe me achanak se haath rakh diya?😕 😕 😕
ud soon. well yeh tumhe next part mein pata chal jaayega dear, and i will try to ud soon.......take care.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!! THANKY VERY MUCH..........

We continue the beautiful journey of Raj and Naina's love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 ABSOLUTELY............

Navin is very happy to see ke jo do insaan uske dil ke sabse kareeb hai aaj woh ek dusre ke kareeb hai hamesha ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN AB USSE ZYAADA KHUSHI AUR KISE HO SAKTI HAI.................

Usne sahi kaha ke yeh saath janmon ka hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ BILKUL AUR ITNI AASAANI SE NAHIN CHOOTEGA..........

Raj and Naina continue sharing this special moment!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 SO TOH HAI, AB AISE MAUKE BAAR-BAAR THODE HI NA MILTE HAIN.........

Naina Raj ki baahon mein leti huyi hai aur dono ush bench par baithe huye hai jahan pehli baar baithe thhe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳How romantic!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ AND SO BEAUTIFUL TOO.......PURELY NOTHING JUST TRUE LOVE..............

Raj Naina ke baalon ko hata raha tha tab Naina ki neend tut jaati hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 CUTEST KAHO SWEETY..........

Raj aur Naina kitne acche lag rahe hai ek saath!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ YEH BHI KOI KEHNE WAALI BAAT HAI, WOH TOH HUMESHA HI ACHCHE LAGTE HAIN..............

Naina ka toh waha se jaane ka mann hi nahi kar raha hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 KAISE KAREGA ? JAB RAJ AUR TANHAI DONO HI SAATH HO TOH...........

I loved Naina's playfulness!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Woh Raj ki acche se khichai kar rahi hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ME TOO, IT WAS REALLY HILARIOUS................

Naina ka bas Raj bulana was great!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Raj now pretends to be angry!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 ABSOLUTELY RIGHT DEAR................

The teasing between them is just too sweet and cute!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 THANKY...........EVEN WHEN I WAS WRITING IT JUST LOVED IT...........

Raj pucch raha hai Naina ko kya huya hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina said she is fine but Raj ko nahi lagta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN......RAJ KO TOH SAB KUCH PATA REHTA HI HAI..........

Waise lagta hai Naina khushi ke maare pagal ho gayi hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 HAAN RAJ KO BHI YAHI LAGTA HAI...............

Raj apni baat poori nahi karta hai and Naina gets irritated by it!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 YA............

Naina toh Pooja ki tarah bolne lagti hai and realising it both of them start laughing!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 IT WAS REALLY FUNNY INDEED.......

Naina is not happy to reach the academy!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Woh toh Raj ke saath aur waqt bitana chahti hai naa!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 KAISE DIL BHAREGA USKA PYAAR MEIN BHI KABHIE MANN BHARTA HAI KYA? JITNA BHI KARO KAM HI PADTA HAI............

No matter how much time she spends with him it will always be less!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ LO TUMNE TOH MERE DIL KI BAAT KEH DI.......

Waise Naina ne yeh accha kaha ke woh ghadi dekhe ya phir Raj ko dekhe??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 AUR NAHIN TOH KYA, AB INSAAN EK BAAR MEIN EK HI KAAM TOH KAR SAKTA HAI NA.........

Dekhte hai Raj ne kya tareeka nikalta hai academy ke andar jaane ke liye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 YA LET'S WAIT AND WATCH.............

Woh kaun hai jisne Naina ke muh par apna haath rakha??😕 😕 😕 😕I hope woh Raj hi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 HOPING THE SAME HERE TOO............


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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: vvdn

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz UPDATE!

HERE IS THE UD FOR U NAMITA.................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

PART 2

Aur woh shaqs piche se naina ke saamne aata hai''''''

NAINA-raj tum?

RAJ-haan kyun darr gayi kya?

NAINA-obviously, aur abhi toh tum gaye the, aur turant wapaas bhi aa gaye'''.

RAJ-{Innocently}-thik hai agar tum kehti ho toh main phir se waapas chala jaata hoon'''..

NAINA-nahin ruko, ab maine aisa thode hi na kaha tha''''..

RAJ-paas aayun toh problem, door jaoon toh problem'''''.

NAINA-mere kehne ka woh matlab nahin tha'''''.

RAJ-toh phir kya matlab hai tumhaara?

NAINA-kuch bhi nahin ab chalein''''..

RAJ-afcourse, isiliye toh tumhe lene aaya hoon'''''

Aur iske baad raj naina ko jungle ki taraf le jaata hai''''..

NAINA-{chaunk kar}-raj hum jungle ki taraf kyun jaa rahein hain, humein toh academy ke andar jaana tha naa''''..

RAJ-{darate hue}-ab academy nahin naina hum sher ki goofa mein jaa rahein hain''..

NAINA-{questioningly}-magar kyun?

RAJ-taaki hum dono ko sher khaa jaaye'''''..

NAINA-kya?

RAJ-do u trust me or not?

NAINA-lekin main toh bas'''''

RAJ-just say yes or no''''.

NAINA-yes'''''''''

RAJ-toh bas ab koi sawaal nahin mera haath thame chup-chap mere piche-piche chalti raho''''''

Aur naina chup-chap raj ka haath thaame uske saath-saath chalti rehti hai, aur kuch hi der mein dono ek surang ke saamne pahunchte hain'''''.

RAJ-pahunch gaye''ab tum bol sakti ho'''''.

Magar naina kuch bhi nahin bolti hai, raj naina ki taraf turn karta hai''''..

RAJ-maine kaha na ki ab tum bol sakti ho''''..

NAINA-{thoda sa gusse se}-pehle aap decide kar lijiye ki mujhe bolna hai ya phir chup rehna hai'''''

RAJ-{softly}-waise tum gusse mein bhi bahut khubsoorat lagti ho'''''

Naina raj ki taraf dekhti hai'''''.

NAINA-{smile karte hue}-iska matlab ki main kuch pooch bhi sakti hoon''''.

RAJ{smile karte hue}-haan'''.aur waise bhi cadet naina ah singh bina sawaal kiye toh tum reh hi nahin sakti, toh phir pooch hi daalo'''''''

NAINA-kya hum sach mein is surang ke andar jaayenge?

RAJ-obviously, isiliye hi toh main tumhe yahaan par laayan hoon''''.ab agla sawaal surang ke andar'''''.

Aur phir raj aur naina dono surang ke andar enter karte hain'''''..

NAINA-yahan par toh bahut andhera hai, mujhe toh kuch nazar hi nahin aa raha hai'''''.

Tabhie raj mashaal jalaata hai''''..

RAJ-ab nazar aa raha hai'''''

NAINA-haan'''toh ab mera doosra sawaal''''poochon kya?

RAJ-I guess tum wahi kar rahi ho''''.anyways poocho'''''''..

NAINA-hmmm''..toh raj yeh kya hai?

RAJ-galat sawaal, tumhe yeh poochna chahiye ki yeh kyun hai, aur kisliye hai?

NAINA-lekin?

RAJ-{naina ke lips par haath rakhte hue}-sshhhh''''.mujhe pata hai balike ki tumhaare aage ke prashna yahi hone waale hain, isiliye ab tum shant dimaag se inke utaar suno humse'.{in a smooth flow}-toh balike yah ek surang hai, jise mere khayaal se humaare poorvajo ne khudwaayi thi, kyunki umhe bhi aane waale bhavishaya ke baare mein gyaat ho gaya tha ki, ek din ekseevin shatabdii mein ek rajveer naamak purush aur ek naina naamak yuvti is surang ke pravesh dwaar se bheetar tak pahunchenge aur antataha apne manzil ki taraf prasthaan karenge, toh isiliye''''..

NAINA-{raj ko beech he mein rokte hue}-bas-bas-bas main samajh gayi''''.

RAJ-achcha toh tum kya samajh gayi?

NAINA-yahi ki yeh raastah humein kma ke andar sahi-salamat pahunchadega''''.

RAJ-yah toh bahut hi achchi baat hai balike, humein gyaat nahin tha ki tumhaari budhdhi itni teeksahna hai''''..

NAINA-kya hai? Plzzz raj kya ab tum humaari normal language mein baat karoge'''

RAJ-kyun nahin awayshya balike'''''

NAINA-phir se''''.

RAJ-I mean naina''''ab thik hai''''

NAINA-haan ab kuch samajh mein aaya '''''

RAJ-waise naina mere khayaal se tumhe humaari raashtra bhaasha par thoda sa research aur kar hi lena chahiye, taaki tumhaari pakad uspar aur bhi mazboot ho jaaye''''.

NAINA-lekin iske liye toh mujhe ek adhayaapak ki awashyakta hogi'''''.

Raj naina ko chaun kar dekhta hai''''..

NAINA-aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumse achcha toh koi aur is kaarya ko kar hi nahin sakta hai''''.

RAJ-magar mujhe nahin lagta hai ki ab iski koi zaroorat hai, anyways ab bahut hansi mazaak ho chukka hai, let's be serious''''.

NAINA-magar kyun?

RAJ-kyunki humein is surang se bahar bhi nikalna hai, aur ab tum apni saree zara sa upar karlo'''''

NAINA-{very innocently}-kitni upar raj?

Raj chaunkar naina ki taraf dekhta hai''''''..

NAINA-{realizing her mistake}- I'I mean ki kyun raj?

RAJ-woh main tumhe baad mein bataayunga, philhaal tum apni saree ko ek inch upar karlo'''..bas''''

NAINA-ok'''..achcha raj yeh toh batao ki hum kab tak academy ke andar pahunchenge?

RAJ-bas kuch hi der mein pahunch jaayenge''''.

NAINA-achcha raj jokes apart and now seriously I want to know ki aakhir yeh surang banwaayi kyun gayi hai?

RAJ-well naina u see ki yeh surang humaari army ke hathiyaaron ki supply ke liye banwaayi gayin hain, aur is jagah ke baare mein brigadier chandok, captain abhimanyu rai chauhan , aur mere ilaava kuch aur army officials ko pata hai, aur ab in sab mein tum bhi shaamil ho gayi ho, and I hope ki'''''.

NAINA-don't worry raj main is jagah ke baare mein kisi ko kuch bhi nahin bataungi, u can trust me'''''..

RAJ-afcourse I trust u naina isiliye toh main tumhe is jagah se academy ke andar le jaa raha hoon''''.

Raj ki baat sunkar naina halke se smile karti hai, aur raj bhi naina ko dekhkar dheere se muskuraata hai'''''

NAINA-{again in similar tone}-achcha raj''''..

RAJ-{naina ko beech hi mein tokte hue}-achcha toh main hoon hi naina, lekin ab ek aur sawaal kiya toh phir mujhse bura koi nahin hoga''''..

NAINA-achacha'''..i mean ok'''''ab aur koi sawaal nahin'''''..

RAJ-that's much better, lo hum log pahunchgaye''''..

Aur phir raj aur naina dono us surang ko paar karke seedha academy ke store room mein enter karte hain''''..

NAINA-{chaunk kar}-yeh toh hum academy ke store room mein pahunchgaye'''..

RAJ-haan naina''''..aur ab humein yahan se bhi bahar nikalna hain''''

NAINA-lekin hum yahan se nikelenge kaise, yeh toh bandh hai, aur mere khayaal se darwaaze ke bahar taala bhi laga hua hai''''.

RAJ-khayaal se nahin naina, taala asliyat mein hi laga hua hai'''..

NAINA-haan mere kehne ka wahi matlab tha'''''

Raj naina ki taraf dekhta hai phir halke se muskuraata hai''''

NAINA-badi hansi chut rahi hai, aakhir maine aisa bhi kya keh diya''''

RAJ-kyun naina kya ab main hans bhi nahin sakta'''''.

NAINA-ab maine aisa thode hi na kaha tha, aur waise bhi aap hanste hue bahut hi sweet lagte hain{naina rajveer ke paas jaati hai, aur uske dono cheeks par pinch karte hue kehti hai}-chooooooooo cuuuuuuuteeeeee, my cheweetieeeeeee pie'''..

RAJ-{thoda sa sharmaate hue}-{aur phir naina ke gaalon ko pinch karte hue}-well naina mujhe yeh toh nahin pata ki main sweet hoon ya nahin, magar mere liye toh tum is duniya ki sabse sweet ladki ho'''''

NAINA-{smiling cutely]-haan aur yeh sab aap hi ki sangat ka asar hai''''..

RAJ-very smart''''..

NAINA-ismein toh koi shaq hai hi nahin'''ab aap challenge bhi ya phir yahin par khade-khade bak-bak hi karte rahenge''''

RAJ-{chaunkar}-kya main bak-bak kar raha hoon''''

NAINA-{very innocently and softly}-toh kya main bak-bak kar rahin hoon, raj''''.

RAJ-chodo yaar, main bhi kisse bahas kar raha hoon'''''.

NAINA-usse jisse aap bahas mein kabhie jeet hi nahin sakte''''

RAJ-achcha ab bahut bahas baazi ho gayi hai, chalo ab humein yahan se bahar bhi nikalna hai''''..

NAINA-sach kahun raj mera toh yahan se ab kahin bhi jaane ka mann hi nahin kar raha hai'''''

RAJ-toh kya yahin par baithe rahein''''

NAINA-{in utter excitement}-haan-haan, kyun aisa nahin ho sakta kya''.?

RAJ-{strictly}-nahiiiiiin''''

NAINA ' achcha thik hai, lekin yahaan se nikelenge, tab na bahar pahunchenge, warna toh yahin par baithna padega''''.

RAJ-woh sab tum mujhpar chod do, aur philhaal tum mujhe apna hairpin do''''

NAINA-lekin'''''.?

RAJ-hairpin''''..

Aur naina raj ko apna hairpin nikaal kar deti hai''''.raj us hairpin ki madad se store room ka darwaaza khol deta hai, aur woh dono bahar nikal jaate hain''.

RAJ-ok chalo naina main tumhe tumhaare hostel tak chod deta hoon''''.

NAINA-it's ok raj main khud chali jaongi''''..

RAJ-lekin naina''''.

NAINA-are baba main jaa sakti hoon khud''''

RAJ-thik hai, magar samhal ke jaana'''..

NAINA-raj'''..tum toh meri fikar aise kar rahe ho, jaise ki main koi choti si bachchi hoon''''..

RAJ-aisi koi baat nahin hai naina, main toh bas'''..

NAINA-main toh bas kya raj, yeh kyun nahin kehte ki tum mere saath aana chahte ho''''..

RAJ-{in a very romantic way}-sahi kaha main tumhaare saath aana chahta hoon, {naina ke aur kareeb jaate hue}-aur'.aur''.main'''.tumhe'''

NAINA-{ghabraakar turant}-ok bye raj'''''

Aur phir naina wahan se chali jaati hai''''.aur raj bhi dil hi dil mein muskuraate hue apne room mein chala jaata hai''''..room mein enter karte hi maan raj ke mobile par ek message aata hai''..jise padhkar raj chaunk jaata hai''

Next morning in the canteen''''

Naina enter karti hai''''..

HUDA-are phoolan tu kahan thi ab tak?

NAINA-kyun kya hua?

HUDA-kuch nahin bas teri yaad aa rahi thi''''..

AALEKH-{teerchi nazar se huda ki taraf dekhte hue}-nautanki saala'''..

HUDA-kya bola be kaidi?

AALEKH-{huda ke saamne jaakar}-nautanki''''saala''''..

Tabhie yudi undono ke beech mein aata hai'''''.

YUDI-hey dude chief ka woh matlab nahin tha'''''

AALEKH-apun ka wahich matlab tha''''.

Yudi aalekh ko ek side mein le jaakar uske kaano mein kehta hai'''..

YUDI-hey chief main aapko bachaane ki koshish kar rahan hoon, aur aap hain ki bas fighting karna chahte hain''''

AALEKH-{seriously yudi ki taraf dekhta hai}-tu''. apun ko bachaayega, pehle khud ko toh bacha le'''..ab agar tune apna mooh khola, toh apun ka yeh mukka bola'''.

YUDI-ok chill chief'''..

AALEKH-chal kalti maar yahan se''''..

Aur yudi naina ke paas jaakar baith jaata hai'''''.

Aalekh aur huda phir se ek doosre ke aamne-saamne aakar khade ho jaate hain, magar isse pehle ki dono kuch kar paate achanak se ali aur pooja ek saath canteen mein enter karte hain''''..

POO-yeh tum dono ne aapas mein apna network kyun bhida kar rakha hua hai?

Aur itna kehkar pooja bhi naina ke saamne jaakar baith jaati hai'''''..

ALI-yeh aap dono kya kar rahein hain?

NAINA-ali rehne de chup chap aakar yahan par baith jaa, tut toh jaanta hi hai ki indono ko kuch bhi bolne ka koi bhi faayada nahin hai'''''..

Tabhie suri jii bhi canteen mein enter karte hain'''''.

SURI JII-oye puttar yeh sab yahan par kya ho raha hai?

Suri ji ki awaaz sunkar sablog chup-chap baith jaate hain'''..

AALEKH-{gusse se huda ki taraf dekhte hue}-kuch khaas nahin suri ji, bas apun kisi ke dimaag ka pench tight kar raha tha, kuch zyaada hi dheela ho gaya tha''nikal kar bahar girne hi waala tha ki'''..apun ne socha ki kas doon zara'''

Huda bhi gusse se aalekh ki taraf dekhta hai'''''..

HUDA-haan suri jii aalekh bilkul sahi keh raha hai, magar isse pehle ki bechara aisa kar paata, uska toh penchkas hi haath se phisal gaya'''''.

SURI JII-yeh kya golmol baatein kar rahein ho tumdono, mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha hai''''.pench, dheela, penchkas''''.

POOJA-are suri jii chodiye na indono ka toh network hi out of range hai, isiliye toh aaj kal mechanic ke dhande par lage hue hain''..

SURI JII-oye puttar jii thik hai, magar ismein bhi competition, ki kaun kisse achcha mechanic hai''''.

Suri jii ki baat sunkar sab hansne lag jaate hain'''..

SURI JII-{chaunk kar}-oye tum sab hans kyun rahe ho?

NAINA-kuch nahin suri jii, bas aise hi''''.

Aur iske baad sab log rajveer ki class ke liye canteen se ravana ho jaate hain'''..

SURI JII-{making an innocent expression}-oye, phir mujhe kyun hansi nahin aayi''

Cut to the class room, jahan par rajveer pehle se hi baitha hua hai, aur kuch kaam kar raha hai, ki tabhie naina enter karti hai''..

NAINA-{smile karte hue}-goodmorning raj {rajveer naina ki taraf dekhta hai}, {ki tabhie piche se pooja bhi enter karti hai,{naina changes her dialogue instantly}, veer sir'''

RAJ-goodmorning cadet singh'''.

POOJA-goodmorning sir''''.

RAJ-goodmorning cadet ghai''''..aur baki sab kahan par hain?

POOJA-bas aa hi rahein hain hain sir''''..

Naina aur pooja jaakar apni-apni seats par baith jaate hain''''aur kuch hi der mein baaki sab bhi ek-ek karke class mein enter karte hain'''

RAJ-hmmm, toh sab aa gayein, ya ab bhi koi bacha hai''''..

CLASS-no sir''''

RAJ-cool, a very goodmorning to u all'''''

CLASS-goodmorning sir''''..

YUDI-kya baat hai sir, aaj aap bahut khush nazar aa rahein hain''''.

RAJ-kyun main har roz kya dukhi nazar aata hoon''''

YUDI-nahin mera matlab woh nahin tha''.

RAJ-I know yudi''''bas samajh lo ki aaj ki subah kuch zyaada hi khaas hai'''

CLASS-khaas magar kyun sir?

RAJ-{cutely smile karte hue}-kyunki aaj ki is khaas subah mein main tum sab ko kisi khaas insaan se milwaana chahata hoon''''.

Suddenly there arises a lot of curiosity in the class room''''.and there is a big question mark kind of an expression on all the faces''''

RAJ- mujhe pata hai ki aap sab logo ke mann mein tarah-tarah ke sawaal uth rahein honge ki main kiske baare mein baat kar raha hoon'''well-well isse pehle ki aap sab mujhe sawaalon ke ghere mein khada karein let me introduce that particular person to u all''''.

END OF PART 2'''PLZZZ DO COMMENT''''..

Edited by mayadika11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
very nice fic
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Accha hai ke woh Raj tha jisne Naina ko bulaya and no one has seen them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Jab Naina ghabra gayi toh Raj bada innocent behave kar raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj said ke paas aaye toh problem dur jaaye toh problem!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jab Naina puchti hai woh log jungle ki taraf kyun jaa rahe hai then Raj jokes about it!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He asked her whether she trusted him or not and Naina said yes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne kaha ke bina koi sawal puche uska haath thame chup chap uske piche piche chalti rahe!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina wahi karti hai and I sure she will be content to do that all her life!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina thoda gussa ho jaati hai toh Raj kehta hai woh gusse mein bahut khubsurat lagti hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne sahi kaha ke Cadet Naina Ah Singh bina sawal kiye toh reh hi nahi sakti!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Haan Naina toh hamesha uske paas aa jaati hai koi na koi sawal liye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka surang wala idea bahut accha tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Surang hamari academy mein surang!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It was funny to see Raj talking in pure hindi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆This is the second time he has done it since his first class!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj realised that Naina is no less at speaking shudh hindi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne jab kaha ke Naina apni saree zara upar karle Naina asked kitni upar!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊It was very funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina bolti hi jaa rahi hai aur Raj uski bak bak bandh karne ki koshish kar raha hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved it when Naina pinched Raj's cheeks and said choo cute my chweetie pie!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj and Naina are so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina itne der se bak bak kar rahi thi aur ab woh keh rahi hai ke Raj bak bak kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina is right ke Raj usse behas kar raha hai jisse woh behas mein kabhi jeet hi nahi sakta!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka toh wahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi kar raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Akhir kare bhi kyun kyunki Raj ke saath toh usse kahin bhi accha lagta hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wanted to drop Naina to her hostel but Naina said she can go by herself!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

She wanted him to admit that he wants to go with her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ish baat pe jab Raj romantic ho gaya tab aur Naina ke kareeb gaya toh Naina ghabrakar chali gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj aisa kya message padhta hai jisse padhkar woh chauk jaata hai??😲 😲 😲 😲

Aalekh and Huda are again fighting with each other!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aalekh's dialogues are fabulous expecially when he answered back Yudi when Yudi talked of saving Aalekh!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina knows its useless to tell them anything!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Surji was very funny and he was confused as to what Aalekh and Huda were talking about!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina very smartly changed her dialogue when Pooja entered!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj is very happy akhir ho bhi kyun na usse uska pyaar jo mil gaya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I am very curious to know ke Raj kisse sabko milana chahta hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
Cool part. Gr8 that it was Raj. I luved each n every dialog of Raj n Naina. Their convo was throughout fantastic. And I agree that Naina sawal bahut poochti hai.
I luved Raj's pure Hindi. Totally cool. Its so not Raj kind but luved it.
In the canteen Aalekh's dialogues wer fab specially when he told Yudi if he thinks of saving Aalekh. And Suriji was also very funny.
Now I'm very curious 2 knw whom Raj wants to introduce to the cadets.
Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
that was really good
but who is this new person
plz continue soon

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