Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5

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Meela

@amsjms

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: waiting
Hi Meela, 🤗
welcome back!!! the update was absolutely mind blowing sweets!! 👏👏
spcly the Riyank and the Nuben mix up -- totally unexpected but very very cute..lolzz 😆😆
i loved the Mayur scene and Mayu's dialogue

Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabon se zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur

hilarious!! lolzz 😃
loved every bit of it. Eagerly waiting forn the next update!!😳😳

luv ya,
Himi

Thanlx a ton himi!

well as i said to lekha, the mixed up is indeed some 'kaamchor-convinience' 😃 n yeah mayu to kuchh aisa hi hain na? i mean some typical 'jhil ki terha bright ya phinr samunder se bhi zyada gehra' in sab se kitabi kira kya kuch zyada sambandh to ho nahi sakta! aur with such a wide range of literature-pundits...it came pretty easy n cosy at the end!

hope not to keep you waiting for long!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Hey Meela

You're back with a bang haan...?!! I started commenting only few updates back so this is the first update of yours i'm reading....thanks for the PM.

This one day camping idea is so good...hehe...and only mayank can bring his books to a thing like this! That whola para where mayank was describing how mch he loved her eyes...comparing to all those poets and writers...it was my fav part!

And rimjhim just HAD to interrupt...huh!

LOL...and Sam's "make out" line...! What was he thinking anyway! It was really funny!

i'm looking forward to reading the next update when the camping happens...

Great job on this one!!!

Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Meela Salam ,

I am a reading first chapter by u ... and u have a way with one liners too just like nihu " Make out "🤣

@ Sami what a gentle didn't Let gunjan pick things ...😉

@ loved the talks about Nups eyes ... Mayu is just best 😳

@ nups disability for cooking 😛... i think if girls r responsible for fixing the camp ... it will be a disaster 😆

thanks for the pm ..... now i am waiting for next one ... bec i have a feeling this camp is going to be hilarious + romantic ..👏

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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Meela

@amsjms

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: hgrhr
Hey Meela

You're back with a bang haan...?!! I started commenting only few updates back so this is the first update of yours i'm reading....thanks for the PM.

This one day camping idea is so good...hehe...and only mayank can bring his books to a thing like this! That whola para where mayank was describing how mch he loved her eyes...comparing to all those poets and writers...it was my fav part!

And rimjhim just HAD to interrupt...huh!

LOL...and Sam's "make out" line...! What was he thinking anyway! It was really funny!

i'm looking forward to reading the next update when the camping happens...

Great job on this one!!!

Thanks nidhi dear

loved that u liked mine too. yeah its mayu so its gotta be 'hatke' right? n yeah to me the 'make out' thing is one of the samrat specials to cherish his personal fave (chashmish ka chehre ka rang utar jana wo bhi outta such empty threats!!!)😆

btw you must have missed out most of the parts of crazy love1 then, as its my first update for you to read. awww! you should give that a try u know both nihu n i had really put some pricy (apart from some of my pathetic mistyping😉) effort there n never the less some other updaters as well. why dont u give that a try at ur free time...trust me u wont regret!

luv 😊

Edited by amsjms - 16 years ago

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

hEY Nihu , Meela

howz u dng girlzzz?>

i am really sorry guyzz, i was damn stuck with work, so i just managed to read nihu's update..

meela dont kill me re !!! i am gonna read ur update asap !!!.

Nihu..

do i need to say anythng ?????...it was fantabulous jaani..

i was dumbstuck after reading ur update...mindblowing, fabulous ,

aur kya kahun yaar...i lack words now

it was soo soo mesmerising..i cant evn tell u when i read that update , i was surrounded by mushy feelings all over

loved it re !!!..awesome meri jaan

paratham called them titli..hehehe..mein bhi shock ho gayi thi, toh mayu ke expressions toh mein samajh sakti hoon...by god !!!..kya twist tha

just one word-----''STANDING OVATION ''

love u re !!!

ruchi

meela nxt update gonna be urs...i am read it soon

love u jaani

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Meela

@amsjms

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar
Meela Salam ,

I am a reading first chapter by u ... and u have a way with one liners too just like nihu " Make out "🤣

@ Sami what a gentle didn't Let gunjan pick things ...😉

@ loved the talks about Nups eyes ... Mayu is just best 😳

@ nups disability for cooking 😛... i think if girls r responsible for fixing the camp ... it will be a disaster 😆

thanks for the pm ..... now i am waiting for next one ... bec i have a feeling this camp is going to be hilarious + romantic ..👏

Walaikumusalam Sana!

first of all Thanks to ALLAH tht i have been bestowed with such writing ability!!!😃 thanks for liking my works!

now for sammie ----well sammie will be sammie right😉? n being sammie includes incapabilityof giving his chashmish ne sorta stress...that also includes absolute decency too!

for mayu---ummm...thts wat mayu is strict as a pole but still soft n adorable.

n nupur's cooking skills--- is a bit higher than zero ....yet but dont worry girls can easily eliminates such tiny barriers in a jiffy specially heroines😉. iske aage chhoti -motisi camp-fixing kya chiz hain?😃

aur camping me aur kya hota hain???? wo to aage chalke hi pata chalega!!!!

aur haan,,,,agar tumne cl1 nahi padhi puri terha se to u have missed a heck loads of quality stuff. so try to give that a try!!!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

@ meela : no yaar...actually I've read the whole of crazy love fanfic!! I read it in one go one day some time earlier!! You guys write brilliantly!!

Its actually your first update that I'm commenting on....hehe...😳😳😳 i was really lazy...but I'm regular in the comments now!!😳😳

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Meela

@amsjms

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hEY Nihu , Meela

howz u dng girlzzz?>

i am really sorry guyzz, i was damn stuck with work, so i just managed to read nihu's update..

meela dont kill me re !!! i am gonna read ur update asap !!!.

Nihu..

do i need to say anythng ?????...it was fantabulous jaani..

i was dumbstuck after reading ur update...mindblowing, fabulous ,

aur kya kahun yaar...i lack words now

it was soo soo mesmerising..i cant evn tell u when i read that update , i was surrounded by mushy feelings all over

loved it re !!!..awesome meri jaan

paratham called them titli..hehehe..mein bhi shock ho gayi thi, toh mayu ke expressions toh mein samajh sakti hoon...by god !!!..kya twist tha

just one word-----''STANDING OVATION ''

love u re !!!

ruchi

meela nxt update gonna be urs...i am read it soon

love u jaani

😡😡😡 "mar diya jaaye ya chhod diya jaaye?

ye to reply padhne ke baad hi decide kiya jaaye!!!'

grrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrrr

darrr ruchi darrrrrrrrrrr!!!

hahaha----ab main pet pakad kar hans sakti hoon!!! 🤣

Edited by amsjms - 16 years ago

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Meela

@amsjms

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: hgrhr
@ meela : no yaar...actually I've read the whole of crazy love fanfic!! I read it in one go one day some time earlier!! You guys write brilliantly!!
Its actually your first update that I'm commenting on....hehe...😳😳😳 i was really lazy...but I'm regular in the comments now!!😳😳

thats impressive! keep it up nidhi hun!😛🤗

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: amsjms

😡😡😡 "mar diya jaaye ya chhod diya jaaye?

ye to reply padhne ke baad hi decide kiya jaaye!!!'

grrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrr grrrrrrrrrrrrr

darrr ruchi darrrrrrrrrrr!!!

hahaha----ab main pet pakad kar hans sakti hoon!!! 🤣

very funny yaar

meri jaan nikal kar tujhe kya mila...nahiiinnn * hema malini style*

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