Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 12

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

very funny yaar

meri jaan nikal kar tujhe kya mila...nahiiinnn * hema malini style*

this gabbar is still waiting on her basanti's dance,patting her imaginery mustache!

hiiii meela!

meela di I edited my comment........

Originally posted by: amsjms

Hello All

This is the ice breaking update from me (havent done any for a long time) hope u will like it.

This goes for you all!

luv

jms (luv this initials of mine😉)

The tension and relief of Benji's case have long been worn off. Dates to padhai, basketball to movies, college to a lot of masti n other words the usual traits of excel college has been being pursued on. Today the three couples are having a "weekend at the beach". Though the summer doesn't permit it but since when Samrat has needed any permission? Specially when Mayank is eased up (credit goes to Nupur) there is no going back atleast not on this occasion. The Chores are divided via lottery, Ben-rim are the ones with the BBQ, Mayur are gonna handle the camping arrangements and sajan are the ones with carrying the gears.

Next to Samrat's car

Gunjan is leaning on her back on the car door Watching Samrat pulling out the camping-stuff form his car boot.

G (moving forward to help): Bas karo samrat kabse keh rahi hoon mujhe bhi thodi hath batane do par

S:Ji nahi, carrying things ladkiyon ki kaam nahin hain aur tumhara to bilkul nahi.

G: Chit ka idea kiska tha samrat? Aur jodyo me kaam karneka???

S (apologetically smiling): Sorry chashmish ye idea thodi flop ho gaya par tum dekhna ye camping na bilkul super hit rahega!

G(shaking her head, watching samrat dropping down the tent): Tent bhi??

S: haan to?

G: itne chhotisi outing ke liye ab tent ka kya zaryurat hain samrat?

S(stepping closer with his crooked smile making gunjan retreat):Bahat khans kam hain chashmish!(pulling her toward him holing her hand) Make out jo karni hain!

Gunjan normally doesn't shout but this time she must have put some effort in her "Kya!" cus that makes the neares branches of the trees totally birds-free.

Benrim

B(Shouting ,thankfully no tree there nearby): KYA!!! Main nahi chhilne wala hoon koi onion-wonion!! Bilkul bhi nahi!!

R : Aur koi kaam to hoga nahi tumse, thodi katai me meri madat karne se bhi inkar kar rahe ho!!jao baat nahi karni mujhe tumse!

B (nervously): Threat kiu karti ho? (holding an onion in his hand and a knife in the other)Kar to raha hoon na?(Stabbing the onion with absolute force as if it the one to be held responsible for his tribulation.

Rimjhim hides a smile.

Mayur

N(sitting beside mayank): ye samrat ka saman lane ka rafter na MASHALLAH! Kachue bhi aage nikal jayega usse By God! Abhi tak to first trip bhi nahi manage hua usse.

M: kaam me agar dhyan naho to aisa hi hoga na nupur?

N: kya matlab?

M: do premi apne aap aakele OUCH! (as nupur pinched him hard)

N: mere bahenke vaare me aisa kuchh soch na bhi mat samjhe tum? Bilkul aise waisi nahin hain wo

M(massaging his arm,interrupting ): Nupur! Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha that's it.Tum bina vaaje ita serious ho gayi.

N(swelling her remaining words,repentantly): Sorry mayank zyada zor se laaga kya?

M doesn't reply .

N: Sorry!?? Dekho ab to kaan bhi pakadli.

M (grumpily): its ok. Ab tum zara shanti se baitho to main thodi padhai karlu?

N:Yaha bhi kitab!!!! Tumne to hadh hi kardi mayank! Dekhna kahi Kitabon ke picchhe bhagte bhagte bechara Bolt ka chutti mat karwa dena!

M (smiling): Nahin, Bolt chain ke neend so sakte hain kiuki main bhagneka nahi padhneka practice me jute huye hoon wobhi kitab ki nahi balke tumhari Ankhiyo ki.

N(shockingly stammering): mmmmeri aaankhen?

M(looking directly in to her eyes): Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur until a third party doesn't interrupt)

R:oops! Sorry !dint meant to intrude!(deciding not to make the duo more uncomfortable) anyway nupur I really could do a hand! (indicating helplessly towards a very sweaty n teary benji still battling with his onion).

M(mutters staring at the poor chap): with pleasure!

Sajan

'samanfree' Gunjan is hurrying down the shore angrily,fully loaded samrat is having difficulty keeping up.

S: kaha na sorry chashmish! Wo to sirf joke tha!

G:jobhi tha ghatiyan tha!

S: I know! Sorry to bol raha hoon chashmish. Please maaf kar do!

G(staring at his face for a while): Thik hain. Apology accepted. Ab batao sach me wo tent kis liye hain?

S (looking relieved):ladkiyon ke liye portable changing room,basketball jo khelna hain hume!

G: basket ball? Beach pe? Beach pe insaan beachball khelte hain basketball nahin.

S: samrat ko niyam todne se pyar hain aur basketball se bhi. Apne pyar ke liye samrat sab kuchh kar sakta hain,yaha to do do pyar ka sawal hain chashmish!

G:basket kaun fix karega?

S: don't worry chashmish! Everything will run as smooth as silk!

G(shrugging): Rab ka shukr hain ke benji ne apne hisse ka saman khud hi le aya! Varna '.

Samrat smiles.

The Spot

The swap deal between benrim n mayur lands mayank instead of nupur in the kitchen dept (thanks to nupur's cooking ability or better say disability!).When sajan reaches the spot riyank have already finished their cooking preparation n nuben has done with the basket ball ring.

M(freeing sam): Timing to koi tumse sikhe!

S (smiling naughtily): sirf timing hi kiu mayank mujhse sikhneko aur bhi

M(snapping his words): Girls fix the camp'benji come with us.

B: sure. Par kaha?

M:inke car tak saman jo ana hain! Inke bharose rahenge to

S(taking him back on his snapping with a smile):ab baatein karke waqt kaun barbad kar raha hain???

B(b4 mayank cud giv samrat a jaw breaking reply):yaar tune car itne dur kiu park ki?

S: simple'car hain teri terha jeep nahi is liye.

B mutters something hurrying after already started Sayank helplessly.

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

reserved I'll comment tom........

edited:

Hey meela di.......so FINALLY ur back wid ur update haan........Y did do dis u kno how much i missed u.............. 😭 😭 but THANK GOD ur back....... 😃 😃 😃now cuming back to ur update........it was AMAZING......I dont now wat to say abt u or ur update........I mean itna acha aur sweet sa update tha.........


D sajan scenes were so JANUABLE just like U..........I just loved dem.......I mean u always portray it so well.......I can always imagine clearly wen ur writing......Mayur were gud too...........


Ben-Rim scene r just very cute and my poor benjy bechara pyaar main bhi kam karna pardta hain usse............ Hmmmmmmmmm I always wonder ki aap itne romantic ho toh kahin koi aapke life main toh nahi...........sorry if I sounded personal but its just for teasing u ok!!!!!!

Love Adya!

aare yaar mujhe to kabhi pata hi nahin tha ke koi itni pyar se itni der tak mere liye intezar kar sakti hain!!!😲 😳 thanks yaar! aur kya likkhuu? tune to mujhe in search of words hi chhor diya! i agree sajan is my forte as i can understand gunjan better n samrat kinda comes in a package with that😉

M (smiling): Nahin, Bolt chain ke neend so sakte hain kiuki main bhagneka nahi padhneka practice me jute huye hoon wobhi kitab ki nahi balke tumhari Ankhiyo ki.

N(shockingly stammering): mmmmeri aaankhen?

M(looking directly in to her eyes): Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur until a third party doesn't interrupt)

meela gabbar , tere dhamki se mein itna darr gayi ki meinne abhi ke abhi padh dhala saara update... u are back with a bang !!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome update and the above dialogues......awwwwwwwwwwww....mera fav , when it comes to mayur , i am bit biased...u know yaar !!! *flashing the best possibble smile !!!*

and dont dare to forget to pm me.. aacha..waise tune mujhe chodh diya ya nahn??? love u

Originally posted by: Senny

hey i don't get it so nihu you won't be updating this one anymore, oh this part just blew blew blew my heart away, everything was amazing, mayur rockedddddddd man, they stole the entire show away, i can so imagine them looking just perfect, simply gorgeous and mayank is soooo romantic man, the song, dialogues, expressions, rain, everthing was just perfect, i was humming the song as well while reading it, i was totally lost like in a trance or something, nihu again you have done wonders, all the best for your next ff man, God bless and love you loads. you are and alaways will be my highness, queen and goddess of romance.

nihu jaan..this is one..

Originally posted by: komal793

heyy

nice part

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

luv

komal

nihu for u...

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

heyy nihu!!

awww.....i'll miss u and ur updates but i'm looking forwrd for ur new FF on mayur!

coming to this update....

kya mast update tha.....sooo romantic!

awesome, fantastic, amazing, mindblowing!!

finally the real murderer is caught.......sam and mayu did a fab job of catching him!

OMG elora wanted to kill gunjan.....thank god that dinesh killed elora!

pratham bhaiya and titli!!........lol imagine mayank and sammy's expressions...

and mayur.....*sigh*

loved the last scene.....mayur r sooo cute and romantic!

the moon kahan hai and todays no moon day dialougue was tooo good......lol!

thanks for the PM

continue soon.....

another one nihu..

Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA

YEA!!! I'm the first to comment
Hey Meela!!!!
WELCOME BACK!!!
and what a come back....with such a outstanding update...👏 👏
that's what is called back with a BANG!!!😆
The perfect chemistry between the couples....
Now how is Samrat going to play basketball on the beach hmmm...
Loved the ruthna manana part....of all the couples specially Mayur😳
And like i used to do with all of Nihu's update
the best dialogue...
I loved Mayu's dialogue...Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayari yon bhi romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep....JUST loved it!!!
Continue Soon
Thanks for the pm and do pm me in the future too
Lots of Luv
Tina

another one nihu..