Aashna.......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....8/30

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Deepa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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oh my god wat a start.................the char of sujal and kashish is lik earth and sky...............am so shocked................but its too lovlier.............wit kripa's description sujal is dependent and family minded and soft and so much of a dreamer but i dunno how he made it to the President of SG..........not shrewd not so tough..........the usual Sujal Garewal is missin here......hes too gentle..........but kashish is so business minded so career oriented............usko tho kaam ke alawa kuch sochti bhi nahi....its lik ses jus livin for the sake of livin.............completely different kashish.....so independent and reserved and so tough.............hope opposites wil get attracted very soon..............and angad is doin al the work for sujal........the 1st 3 candidates were really useless...........lagta hai sujal in 24 hrs major part of the time he dreams abt the gal..........i mean kashish for the past 2 wks............kashish's interview was too good.........shes a complete professional and career freak...........she didnt speak abt personal matter quests and i dont think she wil speak abt it to any1 also.......now sujal is completely dependent on kripa to get to know abt kashish...........hope kripa gets close to kashish and sujal's and kashish's love story begin faster.................angad was somewhat very funny and supportive at the same time............infact sujal's life surrounds around angad and kripa and from now on kashish too.........and i also hope sujal's love and heart makes kashish to become softer and starts to believe in love..........loved it...........cont soo and i hope this ff also is a happy go one.............

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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kashu dear, summi janu.. i'am here with my comments on the first part of Aashna.. hope you like the comment..😊 well first part kii shuruwaat tho bohat hii achche se hui... first part ke first scene mein mujhe sujal kii entry bohat pasand aayi... woh jaise barish mein apna haath rakh raha tha.. just this small gesture by him showed kii sujal dil ka kitna achcha hai, he is soft, kind hearted person.. he is a warm person jiske saath people will want to spend their life.. he is a sweet person..tho sujal ko barish pasand hai... mujhko bhii baarish bohat pasand hai.. sujal ke woh sapne... his khayali duniyaan... yeh ladkon mein thoda kum dekhne ko miltha hai.. lekin sujal ke yahii gunn make him loving, caring & a complete sweet heart... i'am happy kii you have shaped sujal's character like this.. this character of sujal is very different from what i have read in other fanfics.. actually sujal's character is think is too good to be true... every time sujal kuch boltha hai mera mann kartha hai kii main yeh bolun "kahiin nazar na lag jaye sujal ko"....sujal ko pyaar par kitna yakeen hai that i could see in the first part... red & white even i agree are the colors of love.. red & white create the perfect atmosphere for pyaar.. and seeing sujal's office i feel like singing "love is in the air..jaaniye..heeriye".... sujal, aur angad ke beech kii baatein.. yeh sujal tho apni pari ke khayalon mein itna khoya hua hai kii sahab ko yaad hii nahii kii uski important meeting hai.. aisi haalat mein main sujal se kehna chahoongi sambhal jao babumoshay... warna business mein nuksaan utana padega.. tho khayali duniya se baahar niklo aur kaam mein lagg jao.. hehehe... yeh tho achcha hai kii angad hai aur usne interviews ko sambhal liye... now coming next to the interviews kii baat... kya log aa rahe interview ke liye... mann.. sab ek se badhkar ek sample pieces hai... bechara angad ek , ek kii interview le raha hai aur sujal mahashay tho apne sapno kii duniyaan mein khoye hue hai.. aur bechare angad kii kismat buri nikli kii sab item people are coming for the interview.. bechara.. dost ke liye kya-kya nahii karna padtha.. bura phasa angad tho... ab next baat karti hoon main kripa ke entry kii.. well kripa kii entry tho badi achchi thi... aur kripa ke entry se humein ek aur baat patah chali kii sujal pichle do hafte se apne dream girl , pari ko subaah jogging karthe waqt joggers park mein dekh raha hai.. tho ab main samjhi sujal itna khoya hua kyun hai.. now it is justified kii sujal is lost in his dream land.. woh kya hai na agar koi insaan apne sapne mein aane waali pari ko real mein dekh le tho uska haal bilkul sujal jaisa hoga.. sujal is a example for many aashiq going for the morning jog.. hehehe.. i'am sure pichle do hafte se sujal jogging chod kar apni pari ko dekh raha hoga... ab next scene jahaan the last candidate is sent in.. & woh last candidate kashish hai.. humari heroine ka entry tho bade hii dhamakedaar style mein hua hai.. bohat achche... jis tarah kashish goes & introduces herself to sujal & angad.. mannn.. i could sense confidence pouring out of her bartaav.. she is good & she knows it.. woh jaanti hai kii she can achieve any thing... she is representing todays women... but in this may be i can add she is a bit too confident...ab coming to the interview... usne angad ke sawaalon ke jawab bina kissi jhijhak ke diya.... pehle tho angad asking her kii kyun she has used her mother's name at the end instead of her father's.. then regarding why kashish moved down to India leavingf a prospering career in New York.. kashish ne dono sawaalon ko bohat hii achche se tackle kiya.. she told angad in a no nonsense tone kii it is her personal matter & she does not mix business matters with her personal life.. yeh baat sahii bhi hai.. business ka ek osool hai never mix business with pleasure & your personal life.. they are two different things.. they are poles apart.. jab business karna hai kaam karo.. jab personal life mein enjoy karna ho tho masti karo.. this indeed is a good rule... agar koi aur hotha kashish kii jagah tho woh fumble kartha.. lekin kashish was the moorat of confidence... she faced angad head-on... i liked the way kashish took up the challenge aur usne kaha kii presentation next day subaah thak taiyaar hogi.. & finally sujal , joh kii humare hero the great hai itni dher woh chup baitte the atlast he opened his mouth aur kashish se kaha she is hired... waah jii waah kya baat hai.. too good... ab kashish ke jaane ke baad angad ne sujal se poocha kii during kashish's interview sujal ussi ko dekh raha tha all the time.. hehe.. is baat par main angad se kehna chahoongi, angad, kashish, sujal kii heroine hai obviouslu usko hii ghoorega na... agar kissi aur ladki ko ghoorega tho kashish usse agge chalkar kachcha chaba jayegi.. hahahaha... tho sujal mahashay kii sapno kii pari, his dream girl , jis ladki ko he is seeing at the park, is none other than kashish.. aur sujal ne kashish ko job de diya, nice issi bahane kashish sujal ek dusare ke saath aur waqt bita paayenge... tho ab sujal & angad go to kripa.. to take kripa's help.. aur yeh kya angad has already started calling kashish bhabiejee.. Thank God sujal has not started calling her my dharam patni jii.. hahaha... ab kripa se sujal kii baat shows how excited sujal is.. he wants to know every minute detail about kashish.. in short sujal kashish kii kundali, her life style jaan na chahtha hai.. hehehe.. good... apni hone waali biwi ke baare mein jaankari rakhna achchi baat hothi hai..aur sujal abhi se woh karr raha hai... hahahahahaha... ab next baat roz kashish jogging par bench par baiti hai aur book padhthi hai.. and her mom goes for a walk.. aur book bhi kaunsi something relating to independent woman..ohhh...mann.... this itself shows kii kashish kitni zyada independent hai... kashish ke liye shayad kissi pe chotti si baat ke liye bhii depend karna, shayad kashish ke hisaab se gunaah hoga.. now coming to kripa baatein.. kii sujal, kashish are totally opposite from each other.. this same point i was referring to in the intro.. lekin achcha hai dono itne opposite hai kii saath mein aakar ek doosre kii khamiyaan ko durr karr denge & they will make a perfect couple... i like kripa's concern.. for her sujal is like her elde brother & this fact shows... i loved sujal explanation for being opposites kii aasmaan, zameen have to meet sahil at one place or the other.. aur mere hisaab se tho ussi milan ka naam sujal, kashish hoga...kyun meri soch sahii hai na..ab coming to the idea kii sujal ko kashish kii mom ko patana hoga... idea achcha hai.. maa ko patane se beti kii dil ka raastha aur bhii aasaan hotha hai.... kripa ne yeh bhii sahii kaha kii agar kashish ko patah chal gaya na kii sujal kya karne kii koshish karr raha hai tho zaroor kashish usko thappad marregi... and i think sujal tho khushi-khushi kashish ke haaton ka thappad bhi kha lega... ab sujal na ek number ka pyaar ka marra hai.. bechara paanch baje uth kar aayega to see kashish at the park.. lage raho sujal.. bohat sahii jaa rahe ho tum.. pyaar sachchi insaan se kya-kya karwathi hai bechare sujal ko ab paanch baje park pohanch na padega.. hehahehahehaheha...it is good to see angad, kripa being so supportive of sujal... ab kashish ka scene in her home.. i liked kashish's attachment with her mother.. but i feel kii kashish thodi practical hai... the things were she says kii woh zindagi mein agge badh chuki hai and all stuff like that... i'am trying to read the meaning of these sentences and that is why i feel kii kashish ne apni zindagi mein koi ghehri chot khayi hai.. aur ussi chot ke dard se ubhar ne ke liye kashish has immersed herself in work.. and she has become a workaholic.. kashish ke zindagi mein aisa zaroor kuch hua hai jisse kashish bhaag ne kii koshish karr rahii hai.. aur ussi koshish mein kashish ne khud ko kaam mein itna involve kar liya kii no other life exists for her.... nandini is just like any other mother.. who loves & cares for her daughter..& wants her well being... it is good to see the relationship which kashish & her mother share.. both are each others jeene ka sahara.. abhi kami hai tho bas sujal kii.. who will complete the family picture... kashish kitna kaam karti hai.. seems like work is her life.. her mother & her work are her worship.. this is the first time kashish's character is shaped like this & it is indeed different & very good.. i'am sure once sujal, kashish kii zindagi ek dusare se judh jaye they both will change for the better.. & a new future is waiting for them... very well written guys.. mujhe sachchi bohat achchi lagi.. keep up the good work going.. it is absolutely awesome.. amazing.. rocking....👏
now coming to my guess on the next part.. well next part mein i think it is going to be very eventful.. eventful as in sujal, nandini se milega.. and i think sujal, nandini kii khoob jummne waali hai. aakhir kyun na jume dono jisse pyaar karthe hai woh ek common person hai kashish.. sujal and nandini rapport will click from the start.. unki dosti bhii ho jaayegi.. aur kashish ko yeh patah bhii nahii chalega.. then presentation hoga, which will be a hit.. kashish ke kaam ko khoob saraha jayega. and i think kripa in order to know more about kashish, kashish se dosti bhii karegi.. lekin kashish will surely maintain thoda sa distance.. as she does not want to get attached to anyone...and i also think kii there will be small encounter between sujal & kashish.. & shayad sujal , kashish ko shaam mein office ke baad ghar chod ne jaye... issi bahane sujal, kashish ka ghar bhii dekh lega... sujal will fall for kashish more.. & kashish ke liye he will be her boss... so i think yeh sab hoga in the next part.. so kya main sahii hoon.. do tell me.. i really want to know... 😉summi jaanu, kashu yaar please post the next part soon.. me waiting for the next part very damn eagerly...😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Nice part!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the PM.

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

sweet part di thanx for the pm do continue s0on

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352397

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey dears wonderful update yaar.👏 i like the first scene most when sujal us kay khyalu main khuya hua window say bahir barish ki bundhu ko dekh raha huta hay ore agand usay chairta hay ..i always like their friendship. n kashish character is so different bt thats intersting . she's so strong n confident thats good ore sujal ki tu baat he ore hay naa..i really enjoy it ,waiting for next part buddies.... 😊

Edited by sknra - 16 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

i am a lot like kashish so i really like her right now..lol..

ab mera bhi sujal ayega kya?lol

continue soon!! and thanks for he meanings(helps a lot..lol)