Aashna.......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....8/30 - Page 139

first of all guyz congrates ye safar bhi haste rote pura ho gaya sujal kashish ka .... i m very SAD ke ab ASHNA hum se vida ho gaye hai kyu ke adat ho gayi thi na aashna ki chalo har achi cheez ka aant hota hi hai but siriously bohot khub bohot acha kaam kiya hai KASHISH OR SUMMI DI aap dono ne really i loved to read it ...mujhe sare hi part bohot ache or mindblowing lage superbly likhe gaye the sare part dono ke pyar, romance ,sweet, cute ,sad ,emotional scenes bohot ache se discribe ker ke bataye the aap logo ne jo ke read ker ke sach mein maza ata tha kabhi aap logo ne hamein rulaya ASHNA mein kabhi hasaya or kabhi khush kiya bohot ache ache moments the jo ke hamesha yaad rahe ge sply kuch cheze to bohot bohot bohot achi thi jo ke mein aap ko savaloo ke javab mein batau gi .....or is safar ki starting jitni achi to dilchasb thi utni ki ending bhi achi thi ........... last part ki start mein ye jo tum logo ne kashish ko gira diya tha us mein to mujhe laga ke kuch garbard na bata do tum log but aap logo ne sahi hi bataya or PARI ko le aye sujal or kashish ki choti si family ko complete kerne ke liye or PARI ka b,day to bohot hi acha banaya sachi mein read ker ke maza a raha tha or yehi tha ke ye khatam na ho mein bas read hi kerti jau isey mindblowing , superb , fantastic , awesome , amazing parts ....... keep it up or aap ki next story ka intazar rahe ga 😊................weise meine first time itna lamba comment kiya hai to koi galti ho to plzz nazar andaz ker dena .....😆😳😳

hey dears what can i say u both always gimme the surprise................ i didnt expect u will post the last part this soon..................... but twas very very very beautiful, lovely, touching, romantic, awesome............... seriously yaar u both r wonderful writers................... the dialogues the situation the emotion u always make me feel it for real..................... i just love the way u both write every part......... in the biginning of the story u made me get angry on kashish then made to think abt what all she went thru' her life and then she changing and loving sujal exclusively with pure love and full heart....................... and abt sujal he is so very different in this ff...................... very romantic from the start and soft type............................ i loved the last part very very very much like the remaining parts................... when kashish slipped even i too got scared but thank goodness everything went fine and both kashish n the baby were fine n out of danger..................... and sujal's happiness was out of bounds.................. but when the doc said kashish cant be pregnant again i felt very bad for sujal and kashish............... kashish in the beginning didnt like kids but now when news she heard from sujal twas very painful to c her in that state but still they have nandini and the name selection was very nice and reasonful.............. the baby trying to walk for the first time was very cutely n beautifuly described and i really was awwed when the baby sat down when she realised that both sujal and kashish were calling her to come to them................ it showed how she really loves both her parents................ even in that age she wants to be both of theirs kid and loves both the same extent and wants the same from them.............the story sujal told nandini was very nice n i knew he will for sure tell his and kashish's love story only and so happened.................... the disneyland scene i really loved................. huge hugs and kisses to u both for this particular scene.............. i really love mickey n minnie.................. and the love sujal and kashish heve for each other till now and for ever was very beautifully deacribed and expressed....................... the last part where sujal wrote in his diary abt his successful and happy past and present and kashish writing the beautiful future they will have was very mind blowing............... on the whole i just loved this ff very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much............................ hats of to u both...........................

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1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?

i loved sujal's consistent positive thoughts and his love for kashish n kashish's strong character and later her love for sujal............ n also nandini aunty's char for being so very supportive of kashish n also to have considered and accepted that sujal is the best life partner for kashish............

2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.

i always was looking when sujal and kashish will say jaan and angad's thoughts abt the word food...........

3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?

of course it goes without asking or saying.................any1 can read from their eyes..................they r made for each other n their love is for eternity.................

4. agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?

i will always rate it 10 on 10...............

5. aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?

firstly its sk then its a ff by kashish and summi then the concept n the way the story progressed...........sujal's loving char and kashish's stubborn char in the beginning.................twas like opposites attract...........in the beginning twas like repel but who can change the scientific law they were attracted and ek atoot bandhan mein bandh chuke hain................

6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?

in the beginning when kashish behaved rudely with sujal but it had to go with the story but still i didnt like when she slapped him..............

7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?

well to me it was very beautiful already but always we will want more n will think much more better can be put into..............

8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?

there r many situations but nandini aunty's sacrifice touched me so much and kashish's realisation and taking their relationship to the next level n sujal's breakdown when kashish said she doesnt love him.................all were touching.............

9. aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?

of course angad...............

10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?

pyaar maeans sk and every sk romantic scene and lovely talks are bohut kareeb hain to me..........

11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?

all the touching scenes and sujal crying scene.........

12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?

i have always loved sk n will so any story of sk will do...............hope i understood the quest correct..................

13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?

any kinda of sk with true love..............

14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?

dears i already love the way u both write and make every scene so very real............

15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?

to be honest am getting ideas from ur stories but nothing has come to my mind on its own..............

16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?

galti????????????????????? nah never kabhi bhi nahi....................

keep up the good works sweeties........................ do continue writing more ffs and i love u both for writing such beautiful and lovely and touching stories................ hoping to c u both starting another ff of sk very soon........

and the best news is my exams r over and am very free n happy....................... so dears start soon.............

Awesome ending!!!

Hmm...so Ashna has cum to an end....lovely part. Sujal n Kashish wid Nandini...a complete happy family. It was sad that they cudnt hav another child but its ok I guess. Nandini was so sweet. Sujal n her gang up against Kashish was so cute....kitne pyaar se kehte hai 'Mom kuch nahi janti'.....I hav always felt girls r closer to the fathers specially in such situations father-daughter do gang up n rock. It was very beautiful. Sujal n Kashish gave her such a wonderful bday. And it was sweet that Nandini while walking cudnt decide btwn Dad n Mom n so she sat down....so sweet yaar!!! Ek Sujal thodi kaam tha jo uski beti bhi itni sweet hai....hehe.

Btw....I hav always liked ur '116' thing....hospital ward no bhi ye tha...how cute. But ek sawal tha mera: "Do u really think Sujal ki naak tuti hui hai???????" Actually uss din meri mom bhi uske naak k bare me kuch keh rahi thi.....I was irritated n stopped her. Well....mujhe to uski naak bhi bahut achhi lagti hai....mujhe kuch kyun nahi dikha...khair, thats a stupid discussion. Its tym for answering the questions.....

1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?

umm.....I guess it's Sujal for me.....waise to I always like him a lot but this tym his AASHNA was awesum. And Kashish n Nandini (the mom) was also gud.

2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.

Its 'Jaan' from both SK.....it makes the 'I love u' all the more beautiful

3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?

Of course....no doubt abt that.

4. agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?

10 on 10......its not a ques to ask😉

5. aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?

coz it explains AASHNA.....I had said in the beginning "Aashna" (the word) seems very special to me n thru this ff u guys hav delivered a certain positive attitude towards lyf which I hav loved thoroughly.

6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?

When Kashish was leaving Sujal n he was crying like hell....its not that I didnt like the sequence...it was actually beautiful....but it really did hurt....or u can take it like u guys described the scene so well that it touched the heart.

7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?

Nah.....

8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?

At the end when Sujal n kashish wer consoling each other for not being able to hav another child....it was so touching n beautiful.

9. aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?

Angad aur uska khana....such a funny relief he was!!!!

10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?

Each n every moment of SK was special😳😳😳 but i liked the one when Kashish was staying wid Sujal after the divorce n the lights went out.....it was sweet.

11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?

Besides, Sujal's crying scene, Nandini's death was painful.

12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?

SK hai to aur kuch nahi chahiye but haan next tym pls KA ko bhi include karna....😳😳

13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?

Well, kahani k baare me nahi pata (I am too dumb for that) but haan in this (n even Saajhi) Sujal n Kashish wer really matured n understanding.....agli baar thoda pagalpan hoga to maza ayega.....lol.

14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?

I am extremely Uncapable to say anything abt this.....hehe. Anyways, guys u rock.....agar zyada rock karoge to earth-quake aa jayega....lol

15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?

Ahh....again too wrong for this ques!!!!

16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?

I dont think itne pyaare logo ki pyaari kahani me galtiya hoti hai....at least I didnt find any😊

well guys, I did want toskip sum questions but ur '16' factor stopped me😉 cudnt break it...hehe.

Anyways, it was a gr8 story n a gr8 journey. W8ing for another one eagerly.

Lovely end to a Lovely fic !!

Superb part kashish n summi………………..awesome n emotional ending👏…………….ur fic is best one of all…………aur end mein jo msg tha buhat he acha tha……………..haqeet mein hum sabko apne liye ek humsafar dhoodna hai jo humare liye har tarah se perfect ho…………………

1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?

Ofcourse sujal n kashish ka…………….dono ne har tarha se apne apko change kia………..jis mein kashish ne zyada kia………….👏

2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.

When they both says jaan to each othe😳r……………….aur angad ki feelings abt foods items😛…………..

3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?

Yes definitely…………….sujal ka pyaar sach tha tabhe tu usske pyaar ne kashish ko bhi badl dia…………aur who bhi use bahot pyaar karne lagi………………….

4.agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?

Always fo Aashna 10 out 10⭐️…………..

5.aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?

Because yeh fic sujal kashish ki thi phr written by summi n kashish………………pehlay pyaar sirf one side love tha………..sujal loves kashish very much………..on the other hand kashish ko aise kuch feelings he nai thi…………who pyaar, shaadi aur bachon se nafrat karti thi……………lkin sujal ke pyaar ne sab kuch change kardia………….uski feelings ko, emotions ko hare k baat ko…………..is liye fic ko parhen mein buhat maza aya ………………har parts mein kuch na kuch suspense hota tha shuru ke……………..

6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?

Kashish ka rude behavior towards mens specially…………..

7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?

Nai…………..ap dono ne is kahani ko already buhat he acha banyia tha……………

8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?

Jab kashish ro rahi thi after talking to her dad………….hotel wala scene …………aur jab kashish ne sujal se divorce mangi thi……………..tht 2 parts touched my heart seriously……………….

9.aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?

Jab sujal kashish ko eye specialist ky pass ly kar jata hai……………..n angad scenes

10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?

All romantic scenes of sk

11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?

Kashish jab hotel mein ro rahi thi……………..k kyun who sujal se pyaar nai kar sakhi……………..

12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?

Always sk characters……………

13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?

Sk true love story filled with soooooo much love n romance……………

14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?

No……..i think you both wrote superb fics…………..

15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?

No……… I don't have any ideas……………

16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?

Galti tu nai hui…………..han lkin eik hai kyun yeh fic itni jaldi khatm hogi……………….

Plllllzzzzzzz jaldi he koi achi fic start karna………….v all r waitng………….love u tooooooooo……………………….

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superb part guys do write a new ff

hey guys, 1stly wanna say sorry for not commenting for all thse parts since was really busy since clg restarted,but i use 2 regularly read all parts & w8 eagerly for the next 1 2 be posted. Coming to the FF, must say u both did an amazing job, accd to me its 1 of ur best FF's so do keep up the gr8 gud wrk. all the parts were amazing & luve dthe last 1 too,.it was very cute. Will look forward to ur next ff & thnx a ton for the PM's😊👏👍🏼