Bigg Boss 19: Daily Discussion Thread - 17th Oct 2025
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Last Part
4 and a half months had now passed and Kashish was only two weeks away from her delivery date...these past few months Kashish was feeling a lot more tired but Sujal was there to support her...he had take the last 3 weeks of work to be with Kashish...it was now 5pm in the evening and Sujal was in the kitchen cooking dinner..Kashish was in there room upstairs as he had told her to rest..Kashish had just gone to the washroom and was coming out when she slipped on some water on the ground...she lost her balance and fell back on the ground...
Kashish: SUUUJAAAALLLLLLLLL.......SUJALLLLLL.....
Sujal just heard Kashish scream and quickly turned of the gas cooker...he ran out of the kitchen and up the stairs into the room..he didn't find her there when his eyes fell upon the washroom door...it was locked...
Sujal: KASHISH....KASHISH DARWAZA KHOLO...
He started knocking on the door and turning the hob to open it but all he could hear was her screams...he moved back and banged the door twice and it flung open...he was horrified to see Kashish on the floor holding onto her stomach...he ran to her and bent down beside her holding her head on his arm...
Sujal: JAAN...YEH SAB...rukko main ambulance ko phone karta hoon...
He took his mobile out with the other hand and called the ambulance...
Kashish: Sujal....hamari Pariii....use ..kuch...hoga...to nahi..
Sujal: shh...jaan kuch nahin hoga humari pari ko...tum ghabrao mat...main hoon na...kuch nahin hone dunga main tum dono ko..
Kashish: Sujal...muje apni nahi Pari ki chinta hai....
Sujal: jaan..abhi ambulance aati hogi aur phir sab theek hojayega...mera yakeen karo...pari ko kuch nahin hoga..
She was still crying in pain and Sujal was trying to console her...when he heard the ambulance..he got up and picked her up in his arms and started walking downstairs...the ambulance people saw Sujal walking out with Kashish and quickly opened the back door...Sujal climbed in and placed her on the bed...she grabbed hold of his hand tightly..
Kashish: Sujal...muje bahot darr lag raha hai...kahi kuch ...ple jaan mujse yeh dard bardasat nahi ho raha...
Sujals eyes were num seeing her in so much pain..he held onto her hand tightly and looked at her...
Sujal: jaan kuch nahin hoga...main hoon na tumhare paas...yeh dard bohat jald khatam hojayega..
Kashish; jaan...agar muje kuch bhi ho jaye to apna khayal rakhna...
Sujal: jaan yeh tum kya bol rahi ho..aisa dubara math kehna mein tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga...jab thak mein zinda hoon tumpe aik aanch thak nahin aane dunga
Kashish; Sujal....yaha pe na mera na tumhara chalta hai...sirf mujse vaada karo ki tum pehle Pari ko bachane ki koshish karoge...
Sujal: Kashish mein aisa koi vaada nahin karunga...na tumhe kuch hoga aur na pari ko...tum dubara aisa nahin sochogi tumhe meri kasam..
Kashish: mujse kuch aur nahi kahoge hospital pahunchne se pehle...
Sujal: nahin jaan mera woh matlab nahin tha...lekin tum aisa kyun soch rahi ho?kuch burra nahin hoga...tumhe mujhpe bharosa haina?
Kashish: bhagwan se bhi jyada...
Sujal: tho mera yakeen maano...kuch nahin hoga jaan...aur mein hoon na tumhare saath...tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga
Kashish just smiles at him holding his hand so tight closing her eyes in pain....He just holds onto her one hand whilst running his other hand in her hair to relax her...he bent forward and kissed her forehead...after sometime they reached the hospital...the ambulance door opened and Sujal picked up Kashish...he took her out and placed her on the stretcher...she was still holding onto his hand whilst he rushed inside with her..
Kashish: Sujal...agar aaj muje kuch ho jaye to itna yaad rakhna ki maine sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai...sirf tumse...
Sujal: jaan yeh tum baar baar kya kahe ja rahi ho...tumhe kuch nahin hoga jaan aur mein jaanta hoon ke tumne sirf mujhse pyar kiya hai...aur ussi pyar ki khatir tumhe waapis aana hoga jaan...apne Sujal ke paas kyunki mein tumhare binna nahin ji sakta..
Kashish: main wapis zaroor aaungi tumhare liye....mera intezar karna ....
Sujal: main tumhara intezaar karunga jaan...aur hamari pari ka bhi...tum dekhna tum dono ko kuch nahin hoga..
Kashish: I love you...
Sujal: i love you too jaan...
She gently releases his hand and he lets go of hers too...they take her inside and he was still stood there holding his hand out and tears were continuously flowing from his eyes.. They took her inside the OT room....nurse closed the door while Sujal was just staring at her......He doesnt know what to do or what not to do...He just sits on the chair near by thinking about her words....he was scarded of loosing his life ..his love ...Kashish.... 2 hours had passed but still no news...Sujal was getting restless...when he saw the nurse walk out...Sujal rushed to her...
Sujal: nurse...meri biwi Kashish kaisi hai?
Nurse: abhi filhal hum kuch nahi keh sakte...
Sujal: lekin nurse...
But the nurse just rushed from there...she returned taking a bottle of blood back with her...Sujal just stood there helpless............ Nurse rushed inside the OT room....Sujal can still hear her screams.......She was so much in pain.....when Sujal finally hears baby crying inside the OT room....a small smile appears on his face but at very next moment he was hoping for good news about Kashish..The doctor came out removing her mask when Sujal saw her and rushed to her...
Sujal: doctor...Kashish kaisi hai?..aur humara bacha...
Doctor: Congretulations Mr.Garewal....aapko beti huyi hai......aur Mrs.Garewal bhi ab stable hai....bas kuch dair me unhe nursary room me shift kr dete hai...phir aap apni biwi aur beti dono se mil sakte hai...
Sujal was so happy and he sighed in relief...he just stood there feeling so light and happy...
Sujal: thank you so much doctor...i am really greatful to you...aapne muje meri zindagi lauta di hai...thank you ever so much...
Doctor: dekhiye yeh to mera farz tha...ab aap intzaar kijiye.....Nurse aapko aake bata dengi ki kab aap unke room me ja sakte hai....ple have a seat...
Doctor leaves with all the reports to her office...Sujal just smiles and sits down on the bench whilst closing his eyes and resting his head on the back...he was so happy...for a moment he was so scared seeing Kashish's condition but now he was relieved....Sujal decided to call Angad and Kripa to inform them....they were so happy to know he had finally become a father when the nurse comes to Sujal....
Nurse: Mr.Garewal....aapki wife aur daughter ko room number 116 me transfer kar diya hai.....filhal to aapki wife so rahi hai....lekin aap ab andar ja sakte hai...unka room yaha se left hoke straight end pe...
Sujal: thank you so much nurse....
Sujal gets up in excitement and then rushes to the room....he gently opens the door as Kashish was asleep and then closes it behind him...he saw Kashish on the bed fast asleep...he walked up to her...the tiredness and the pain she had gone through was visible on her face...he bent down and gently kissed her forehead to rid her of every pain she has been through...he just smiled at her...when he heard a little angelic voice...his head turned to the right to find a cot lying beside Kashish...he went to the other side to see his angel stirring in her sleep whilst gently moving her tiny arms and hands...Sujal just looked at her...tears of happiness flowing through his eyes at the site of there daughter...she was beautiful...just like her mom he thought...he lifted her in his arms and kissed her forehead lightly and then held her tightly in his arms.... when Kashish moves her head slowly as she hears the voice of her love Sujal and her life her daughter.....She opens her eyes slowly with a smile seeing father and daughter togather.....
Kashish: Sujal....muje nahi dikhaoge kaisi lag rahi hai meri Pari...
Sujal turns his head as he turns to Kashish....he just smiles and walks upto her....he gently places there daughter in her arms....
Sujal: bilkul tumhari parchai hai jaan....
Kashish looks at her daughter and gently bends down kissing her on her forehead and cheeks.........she moves back and smiles at her...
Kashish: lekin iski naak bilkul tumhari tarah tuti huyi hai....
Sujal just looks at her in surprise....
Sujal: kya kaha tumne? meri naak tuti huyi hai?....ab tum bhi Angad ki tarah yeh kehne laggi....
Kashish: mazak kar rahi hoon.....tum dono ki naak bilkul thik hai.....
Sujal: hmmmm...lekin jaan shayad meri sach me thodi tuti huyi hai...lekin humari beti ki naak bilkul perfect hai...tumhari tarah....
Kashish: nahi...iski sirf aankhein aur hoth meri tarha hai.....baki sab yeh apne dad pe gayi hai....lekin jaan hum kab tak ise beti kehke bulayenge....inka naam tum hi bata do..
Sujal looks at Kashish and then at there daughter...
Sujal: waise maine ek naam socha hai pari ke liye...bataun?
Kashish: hmmmm...batao naa.....
Sujal: jaan tum jaanti ho na ke agar hume kissi ne milwaya hai to woh thi mom...to main soch raha tha ke kyun na hum apni beti ka naam Nandini rakhen...
Kashish: Nandini?.....mom ka naam....
Sujal: hmmm...kyunki humari beti bhi to ek aur kadi hai jisne humare rishte ko aur bhi mazboot bana diya...
Kashish: tumne sahi kaha jaan...shayad maine kabhi beti banke kabhi Mom ko pyaar nahi kiya woh ab main khud ek Mom banke is Nandini ko pyaar kiya karungi......
Sujal: aisa nahin hai jaan...tum achi tarah se jaanthi ho ke tum mom se kitna pyar karti ho aur yeh baat mom bhi jaanthi thi tum kyun aisa sochti ho..tumse achi beti kissi ko nahin milsakti...aur muje pata hai ke tum humari Nandini ko bohat pyar dogi
Kashish: aaj se meri duniya sirf mere Sujal aur meri Nandini se hai....aaj se meri ek aur nayi zindagi ki shuruaat hai...bas ab kuch saal me main Nandini ko uska bhai de doon aur mera parivar pura ho jayega jaan.....
Sujal: waise kuch saal kyun...main to kehta hoon abhi se mehnat karna shuru kardete hain.....
he smiles and tries to lighten the mood...
Kashish: abhi main us haalat me nahi....abhi muje apni beti ka aur tumhara khayal rakhna hai....
Sujal: arre main to bas mazaak kar raha tha jaan....tumhe jitna waqt chahiye tum le sakti ho aur ab main tumhara khayal rakhunga...waise jaan ek baat to main tumse kehna bhool gaya...
Kashish: kya...kya kehna hai tumhe..
Sujal: yahin ke i love you...and thank you so much for completing our family
Kashish: I love you too jaan...aur Thank you to muje bhi kehna chahiye kyunki tumhare pyaar aur saath ke bina yeh mumkin hi nahi tha...
Sujal: woh to hai...lekin yeh tohfa to tumne muje diya na...itne dard se guzri tum is sapne ko haqeeqat me badalne ke liye
Kashish: muje kaha dard hua.....dard to tumhari aankhoin me chodke gayi thi main...
He just gently hugged her...holding her head against his chest....
Sujal: main tumhe bata nahin sakta me kitna ghabra gaya tha...tumhari ek ek cheenk sunke mera dil aur bhi dard se guzar raha tha...lekin main kuch kar nahin paaya...
Kashish: tum aisa kyun soch rahe ho...tumne bahot kuch kiya hai....aur agar tum kuch wake me karna chahte ho to ple Nandini ko wapas uske cot me sula do....mujse ab betha nahi jata...
Sujal: haan jaan laao do...aur ab tum araam karo...
He takes Nandini from Kashish...she was now fast asleep again...Sujal gently kissed her and looked at his angel with a smile and then placed her in the cot...covering her with a blanket...he walked back upto Kashish and gently held her hand and making her lie down with care....he kissed her forehead and then sat beside her...holding her hand into his...
Kashish: Sujal...main thik hoon....aur waise bhi ab raat ho gayi hongi....tum ghar jana chaho to tum Subaah wapas aa sakte ho...
Sujal: tum pagal ho kya...main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi chodke nahin jaanewaala...aur waise bhi muje tumhare binna neend kahan aati hai...main theek hoon...tum araam karo
Kashish smiles at him......
Kashish: pagal hi to hoon tumhare liye....tabhi to tumhare liye ek patni aur ab ek maa bhi ban gayi....
Sujal: nahin main to aise hi kehraha tha...tum pagal nahin ho...tum meri jaan ho
Kashish: to tum bhi to meri zindagi ho...ab dekho main so jati hoon...agar Nandini uthe to muje jaga dena...thik hai...
He gently kisses her hand...
Sujal: theek hai jaan...tum so jao...mein jaga dunga agar usne tang kiya to...ab tum apni yeh khoobsoorat si aankhein band karo aur so jao...
Kashish holds his hand and close his eyes trying to reduce her pain with some rest...Sujal just smiles at her and continues to stare at her whilst holding her one hand into his and running his other hand gently in her hair...after sometime he rests his head on the bed besides her and falls asleep...
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It was now morning and Nandini had woken up...Kashish was also awake and was feeding Nandini milk whilst Sujal had gone to see the doctor to ask about the discharge as Kashish was insisting on going home....Sujal went and knocked on the doctors cabin...
Sujal: may i come in doctor?
Doctor: ple come in...
Sujal comes in and the doctor signs him to sit down...he sits down on the chair..
Sujal: thanks....woh actually me yeh poochne aaya tha ke kya main Kashish ko ghar leke ja sakta hoon?...woh yahan thora uneasy feel kar rahi thi to maine socha aapse pooch lun ke Kashish ko kab tak discharge millega...
Doctor: main uski halat samaj sakti hoon ki woh yaha kyun uncomfortable mehsoos kar rahi hai.....koi baat nahi aap unhe bata dijiye ki aaj sham ko sare report dekhne ke bad main unhe ghar jane ka discharge papers taiyaar kar dungi...
Sujal: ji doctor thanks...waise generally Kashish ki tabiyat theek haina?...i mean is everything normal now?
Doctor: everything is normal...lekin..muje aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai...
Sujal: ji kahiye doctor...kya baat hai
Doctor: aap to jante hi the ki unki delivary kitni complicated rahi....to is halat me after delivery kuch complications reh jate hai...jaise...
Sujal: jaise..
Doctor: I am sorry Mr.Garewal...lekin aapki wife dubara kabhi preganant nahi ho payegi.....
Sujal just looks at her in shock...it was like his whole life had fallen apart...tears started to flow down his cheeks...
Sujal: K...kya kaha aapne doctor...Kashish...phirse maa nahin bansakti?
Doctor: I am sorry Mr.Garewal...maine bahot koshish ki lekin unke kuch internal parts damage ho chuke hai.....I am really sorry....lekin muje aapki wife aur aapki beti ko bachane me muje yeh kadam uthana pada....
Sujal: lekin doctor...kya aur koi raasta nahin hai?i mean kuch to hoga na...Kashish yeh sadma bardasht nahin kar payegi
Doctor: maine kal apni aur se puri koshish ki ...
Sujal just holds his head in his hands whilst trying to think straight..he then looked up at her and wiped his tears...he had to be strong for Kashish...
Sujal: thanks doctor..
Doctor: abhi tak maine yeh baat aapki wife ko nahi batayi...agar aap chahe to main unhe...
Sujal: nahin doctor...abhi Kashish ki haalath bohat nazuk hai...sahi waqt dekh ke me usse yeh baat bata dunga..
Doctor: thik hai jaisa aap chahe...
Sujal: thanks for your help...ab main chalta hoon...
Sujal leaves the cabin and instantly rests his head and back against the wall...tears were flowing from his eyes...he was growing weak again...he felt completely shattered from the inside...but he composed his self...he had to be strong...he couldn't fall weak...he knew that he had to be there for Kashish...so he wiped his tears and took a deep breath...he started walking towards the room Kashish was in...he opened the door and saw Kashish looking at him..he planted a smile on his face...
Sujal: jaan...Nandini sogayi?
Kashish: haa...woh kab ki so gayi....lekin tum itni dair se kaha gaye the....aur doctor ne kya kaha...
Sujal: main..doctor ke paas hi tha...woh phone pe kissi se baat kar rahi thi isliye dair hogayi...aur doctor ne yeh kaha ke aap bilkul normal hai aur aaj shaam reports agar theek huyi to aap aur humari pari ghar ja sakte hain..
Kashish: sach...hum ghar ja sakte hai...
Sujal: haan kyun nahin...aaj shaam ko ja sakte hain..
Kashish: Sujal...
Sujal: hmm..kya hua?
Kashish: tum khush nahi ho is khabar se...
Sujal: Kashish ab iska matlab kya hua?..main khush kyun nahin hoga is baat se...
Kashish: muje aisa lag kyun nahi raha....kuch batana chahte ho..
Sujal: nahin...aisi koi baat nahin...sab theek hai
Kashish: tum mujse nazare kyun chura rahe ho...aur tum mujse durr kyun bethe ho...
Sujal: nahin jaan...aisa kuch nahin hai...laao main Nandini ko cot me sula deta hoon...tum bhi araam karo...
Sujal takes Nandini from Kashish without meeting her eyes and places her in the cot...
Kashish: Sujal .....yaha aao...betho yaha mere pass....kyunki main janti hoon ki koi baat tumhe pareshan kar rahi hai....
Sujal: woh tumhe bhook laggi hogi...main khaana leke aata hoon tumhare liye...
He was about to go when she holds his hand..
Kashish: meri kasam tumhe...batao kya hua...
Sujal just looks at her instantly...he knows he can't hide the fact anymore..he had to tell her...he sat down beside her and held her hand in his tightly...
Sujal: Kashish...ab jo main tumhe batane jaa raha hoon usse sunke tum kamzor nahin padogi...vaada karo mujse..
Kashish: jaan aisi kya baat hai batao na muje....pari ke reports to normal hai na.....ple jaan kuch bolo.....
Sujal: jaan pari ke reports bilkul theek hain...pari ko kuch nahin hua...lekin...lekin jaan doctor ne kaha hai ke...kyunki tumhari pregnancy bohat hi complicated thi...aur yahan aane se pehle jo haadsa hua...uski wajah se tumhe internal damages hogayi hain...aur ab tum...tum dubara maa nahin ban sakti...
He held her hand tightly as he said those words.. Kashish just took her hands back....
Kashish: tum mujse mazak kar rahe ho....
Sujal: jaan...yeh sach hai...please sambhalo khud ko..
Kashish: Sujal yeh sach kaise ho sakta hai.....jaan mera parivar adhura reh jayega....
Sujal just hugs her tightly and holds her close to him controlling his tears...
Sujal: nahin jaan...hamara parivar adhura nahin rahega...hamara parivar ab poora ho chuka hai...hamare paas Nandini haina to hume kissi aur ki zaroorat nahin hai..
Kashish: lekin maine tumse aur Pari se jo vaada kiya tha uska...Sujal Pari ke bhai ka sapna tut gaya mera.....
Sujal: jaan please khud ko sambhalo...main jaanta hoon ke tumhe yeh jaan kar kitni takleef hui hai lekin hum kuch nahin karsakte...par jaan humare paas humari Nandini haina...hum apna saara pyar isse denge...isse kabhi bhi bhai ya behen ki kammi mehsoos nahin hone denge...
Kashish: Sujal......I am sorry jaan....ple muje maff kar do....
Sujal: Kashish yeh tum kya kehrahi ho?...please jaan tum sorry mat kaho...isme tumhari koi bhi galti nahin hai...shayad kismat ko yahin manzoor tha..
Kashish: Sujal...hume to kisi ka kuch nahi bigada to phir Kismat ne hamare saath aisa kyun kiya...
Sujal was continuously running his hand in her hair whilst she cried uncontrollably on his shoulder...tugging onto his shirt..
Sujal: jaan kabhi kabhi kuch cheezain aisi hoti hain jinpe humara koi bas nahin hota...aur jaan shayad bhagwan ko yahin manzoor tha...lekin dekho na...hum phir bhi khush kismat hain ke humare paas kamsekam nandini tho hai..warna kuch log aise bhi hote hain jinki koi aulaad nahin hoti...
Kashish: Sujal...hum Nandini ko kabhi bhi kisi ki kami mehsus nahi hone denge....hum use duniya ki her khushi denge jaan.....hume kabhi use yeh dikhne nahi denge ki hume kisi aur ki zaroorat hai...
Sujal: haan jaan...bilkul sahi kaha tumne...hum Nandini ko kabhi bhi kissi ki kammi mehsoos nahin hone denge..usse bohat pyar denge hum..aur yeh mera tumse vaada hai...
Kashish: Jaan main tumse vaada karti hoon ki aaj ke bad kabhi main kamzor nahi padugi jaan....nahi aaj ke bad kabhi is baat ko leke meri aankhoin me aanshu honge....aaj se mere parivar me tum main aur hamari Nandini....
Sujal just smiles and then moves back looking at her..
Sujal: main jaanta tha ke meri Kashish bohat himmat waali hai...chahe kuch bhi hojaye woh kabhi kamzor nahin parsakti...i'm proud of you jaan...i really am...aur haan ab tum ansoon nahin bahaogi..
He gently wipes her tears and kisses her forehead
Kashish: Sujal ...mujse vaada karo ki is baat ko hum dono ke alawa aur koi nahi janega.....yaha tak ki is baat ka kabhi Nandini ko bhi khabar nahi lagni chahiye...
Sujal holds her hand into his...
Sujal: main tumse vaada karta hoon ke yeh baat sirf hum dono ke beech rahegi..kissi ko kuch pata nahin chalega
Kashish: thanks jaan...
Sujal: ab tum mujse bhi thanks kehne laggi?
Kashish: kya kahoon is waqt kuch samaj me nahi aaya....
Sujal: kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai jaan...aur na hi ab is baare mein sochne ki..aur waqt rehte sab theek hojayega..hum milke har mushkil ka saamna karlenge..
Kashish: hmm.....waise abhi Kripa ka phone aaya tha....kuch dair me woh milne aa rahi hai..
Sujal: haan woh maine Angad ko phone kardiya tha warna baad mein problem hojati ke hum usse kuch batate nahin hai
Kashish: hmm...abhi Kripa muje phone pe dat hi rahi thi..
Sujal: kyun?..woh tumhe kyun daant rahi thi?
Kashish: kal maine khud ka jo hal kiya uske liye...
Sujal: lekin usme tumhari galti to nahin thi na..to phir..aane do usse...is baar me usse dantunga
Kashish: tum aisa kuch nahi karoge...uska hakk banta hai muje datne ka...
Sujal: acha theek hai main nahin kahunga agar tum aisa chahti ho to...
Kashish: hmm...ab to muje chodo.....
Sujal: kyun?nahin pakar sakta tumhe?
Kashish: kisi bhi waqt koi bhi aa sakta hai...
Sujal: to...aane do...tum koi ghair thodi na ho...meri biwi ho tum..
Kashish: Sujallll...
Sujal: hmm..kya hua?
Kashish: chodo naa....
Sujal: theek hai...lekin ek shart pe..
Kashish: kaisi shart..
Sujal: hmmm...muje ek kiss chahiye..kal subah se nahin milli
Kashish: no way jaan....yaha to kabhi nahi....aur upper se Angad aa raha hai.....uski to her waqt ki aadat hai galat waqt pe aane ki...
Sujal: jaan please...kuch nahin hoga..koi nahin ayega..
He started moving towards her
Kashish: Sujal...ple ...no...aaj raat ko..
Sujal: nahin..abhi chahiye muje..
Kashish: Sujal jid mat karo....jane dona....
Sujal: tum jaanti ho na ke main hamesha apni zidd ko poora karta hoon...to phir..
Kashish: lekin main yeh bhi janta hoon ki meri marzi ke khilaf tum nahi jaogi...
Sujal just looks at her and then moves back..
Kashish: aaj itni jaldi samaj gaye....
Sujal: ab tum achi tarah se jaanti ho ke main tumhari marzi ke khilaf nahin ja sakta..
Kashish: hmm...ab ek kaam karoge....woh jo table pe meri painkillers nurse chod ke gayi hai...woh denge ple...
Sujal: hmm..abhi leke aaya...
Sujal lets go of her and then goes and picks her painkillers up and a glass of water...he takes it to her...
Sujal: mun kholo?
Kashish: main koi bachi nahi hoon....main khud kha sakti hoon jaan...
Sujal: acha theek hai...lo tum khud hi kha lo..
Kashish takes the medicine in her mouth and holds the glass in other hand....she drinks the water and than passes the glass to Sujal..Sujal takes the glass and places it on the table..
Sujal: ab tum araam karlo kuch dair
Kashish: lekin Kripa aur Angad....
Sujal: unhe main dekhlunga don't worry
When Kripa and Angad enter the room with Sia.....
Sujal: lo yeh dono aa bhi gaye...aaiye aap hi ka intezar horaha tha..
Angad: waise intezaar to hume bhi tha hamari Pari ko dekhne ka...
Sujal just smiles..
Sujal: woh wahan cot me hai...dekhlo...aur tum hi batao kiski tarah dikhti hai...
Kripa goes and takes Nandini in her hands....
Kripa: bilkul apni mom pe gayi hai.....
Sujal: dekha na...maine bhi Kashish se yahin kaha tha...kyun Kashish?
Kashish: haa....lekin Angad tumhe nahi lagta ki iski naak Sujal ke jaisi hai...
Sujal: Kashish please...yeh phirse shuru hojayega..
Angad: jiska darr tha wahin hua...iski naak sach me Sujal ki tarah tuti huyi hai...
Sujal looked at him in anger and Angad just laughed...
Kripa: tum dono ladna bandh karo.....waise Kashish ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai....aur kal ke liye main tumse bahot naraz hoon...isse achcha hota ki tum mere ghar chalti...main tumhara khayal rakhti....
Sujal: aise kaise chalti....agar woh chali jaathi to mera kya hota...
Kripa: to tum bhi saath me aajate...
Sujal: haan phir theek hai...aur Kripa tum Kashish se kyun naraaz horahi ho...galti uski thodi na thi...bas ek chota sa accident tha...lekin ab woh theek haina aur humari nandini bhi..
Kripa: Nandini....bahot hi khubsurat aur sahi naam hai.....lagta hai yeh bhi apni Nani ki tarah samajdar hogi...
Sujal: haan aur apne dad ki tarah bhi
Angad: tum kabse samajdar ho gaye...
Sujal: main to humesha se hi tha....ab agar main na hota to kya aaj SK us bulandi pe hota jahan woh aaj hai?
Angad: woh to Kashish ki waje se hua hai....warna ab tak to kabka bik gaya hota....
Sujal: main maantha hoon ke Kashish ne company ko ek alag hi mukaam dilwaya hai...lekin usme meri mehnat bhi gayi hai...aur Kashish ke aane se pehle bhi to SK ko chala hi raha tha main
Kashish: Angad....Sujal thik keh raha hai.....usne sabkuch apne mehnat se kiya hai...maine kuch nahi kiya....sirf saath diya hai jo mera farz banta hai...
Sujal: nahin Kashish...aisa nahin hain....haan maine SK ko apni mehnat aur Angad ki madad se khada kiya lekin usko bulandi tak tum hi ne pohanchnaya hai...tumhare aane ke baad sab kuch badal gaya...hume aur bhi contracts milne lagge aur ab hum Number one position pe hain jahan pe koi bhi competitor nahin hain
Kashish: aaj hum SK ki baat na kare to achcha nahi....
Sujal: oh haan...sahi kaha tumne....ok so SK ka topic aaj band...
Kashish just smiles at him when Kripa puts Nandini in her arms...
Kripa: kab ghar wapas ja rahi ho...
Sujal: doctor ne kaha hai ke aaj shaam ko discharge milni chahiye...woh shaam tak reports check karlengi aur uske baad Kashish ghar ja sakti hai
Kripa: ghar jake kabhi bhi meri zaroorat ho to muje phone kar dena.....
Kashish smiles at Kripa...
Kashish: agar muje kabhi bhi tumhari zaroorat padi to main zaroor tumhe call kardungi...but thanks for everything Kripa...
Kripa: Thanks muje nahi Sujal se kaho....kyunki usne tumhara bahot khayal rakha hai is halat me...kyunki muje pata hai ki is halat me sabse jyada zaroorat kiski hoti hai...
Sujal: lekin muje thanks ki koi zaroorat nahin hai kyunki maine jo kiya woh khud ke liye kiya...Kashish meri zindagi hai aur Nandini ussi zindagi ka ek hissa to main kaise Kashish ke saath nahin hota...woh bhi aise waqt me
Kashish: achcha baba nahi kehti.....waise kya muje ek cup coffee mil sakti hai.....9 mahine ho gaye...
Sujal: ofcourse jaan kyun nahin mil sakti...aaj tum jo maangogi woh main tumhe dunga...Angad jaa ke zarra ek cup coffee le aa please...
Angad: main nahi lanewala....biwi teri hai...tu jake le aa.....
Sujal just started to laugh...
Sujal: arre main to sirf mazaak kar raha tha tumse...muje pata tha tu yahin kahega...rukko main abhi leke aata hoon...Kripa zarra Kashish aur Nandini ko dekhna please...
Kripa: thik hai....main yahi hoon...lekin tum dono jaldi aana.........
Sujal: haan hum bas abhi aaye...chal Angad...ab saath chalne me to koi problem nahin haina...
Angad just looked at him and started walking towards the door...Sujal took Sia from him and started walking too whilst playing with Sia....Kripa was telling Kashish how to take care of Nandini and herself.....After 15 mins they both came with Sia.....Sujal was still playing with sia and Angad was holding 2 cups of coffee.....Kripa took Nandini and put her in the cot....Angad pass one coffee to Kripa and other to Kashish...
Kashish: thanks Angad...
Angad: paise maine nahi Sujal ne diye hai....thanks use kaho..muje nahi...
Sujal: haan lekin coffee to tumne hi pakdi haina...paison ka kya hai
Kashish: tum dono ko thanks ab thik hai...
Sujal: ab coffee pee lo warna thandi hojayegi..
Kashish smiled and took a sip of the coffee and was feeling so good after drinking coffee after so many days...They continued to talk whilst drinking coffee....
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10 months had now passed in Sujal and Kashish's beautiful life...within the last 10 months they were leadign a beautiful life with there little Angel...there life seemed complete now since Nandini came into their life and they were enjoying every moment of being parents..Within these 10 months both Sujal and Kashish had become a lot more responsible and handled all situations with maturity....It was sunday afternoon and Sujal and Kashish were at there beach house with Nandini....they were sat on the beach making a sandcasle whilst Nandini was sat across them watching her parents make a sandcastle for her....
Kashish: Sujal.....Sia ne to isi age me chalna sikh gayi thi.....Nandini kab kadam uthayegi....
Sujal: bohat jald uthayegi jaan....sab ka apna apna waqt hota hai aur har bacha alag hota hai
Kashish: i know jaan...lekin main kitni koshish karti hoon....
Sujal: jaanta hoon jaan...dheere dheere humari pari chalna seekh jaaeyegi...kyun beta...
Nandini just sits there smiling at Sujal whilst holding some sand in her hand...
Kashish: yeh hamesha tumhari baat manti hai...
Sujal: ab beti kiski hai jaan....
Kashish: meri bhi to hai....lekin muje pata hai....jis tarah maine kabhi mom ki baat nahi mani usi tarah yeh bhi mujse badla legi...Mom ka naam jo diya hai....
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: jaan yeh sab jaldbaazi me nahin hosakta...thoda waqt lagega...tum apni aur se mehnat kar rahi ho to woh jald hi chalne lagegi...
Kashish: agar yeh tumpe gayi hai tab to puri jaldbaz hogi...
Sujal: kyun...ab maine kaunsi jaldbaazi karli?
Kashish: kyun mujse pyaar kiya woh bhi jaldbazi me...
Sujal: haan woh to hai...lekin mera jaldbaazi me yeh kiya gaya faisla bilkul sahi saabit hua....par jaan pyar pe to kissi ka bas nahin chalta...woh bas hojaata hai...haan woh baat alag hai ke jab muje tumse pyar hua tab me tumhara naam tak nahin jaantha tha
Kashish: tumhare jaisa insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha...
Sujal: kyun ab muj me aisi kya baat ha jo kissi aur me nahin...
Kashish: aisa kya nahi hai tumme....sab kuch hai jo ek insaan me hona chahiye..
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: aur tum me bhi to who har ek khoobi hai jo ek ladki me honi chahiye'tum har baat me perfect ho'ek perfect beti'perfect dost'perfect biwi'aur ek perfect maa bhi..
Kashish: aaj mera word PERFECT bahot use karne lage...
Sujal: haan ab aap hi ka asar horaha hai mujpe...hum to ab aap ki zubaan bhi bolne lagge
Kashish: to thoda kuch wahi zubaan apni beti ko bhi shikha dijiye..
Sujal: aap fikr kyun karti hain jaan...main hoon na...sab kuch seekh jaayegi Nandini...ab zarra hum yeh sand castle ko dekhte hain...
Sujal comes up behind her and places his hands on hers making the sandcastle shape...Kashish smiles at him as she sees his hands on hers......Kashish looks at him and kisses him on his cheek....He smiles and then gently bent down placing his lips on the side of her neck moving down to her shoulders... Kashish smiles as his lips touched her neck....she gently pushed him with her elbow..... But he held on to her tighter wrapping his arms around her and placing his lips on the back of her neck...when Nandini placed her two little hands on the ground and pushed herself up standing on her feet...she came walking to Kashish...when Kashish saw her and looked up at Nandini and her eyes grew wide with happiness....Nandini rushed to Kashish and Kashish quickly grabbed her before she lost hr balance...
Kashish: Sujal ...tumne dekha....tumne abhi Nandini ko dekha....
Sujal just smiles whilst looking at the hapiness on her face...
Sujal: haan jaan dekha maine....maine tumse kaha tha na ke tumhari yeh khwaish bohat jald poori hojayegi...dekho humari pari ne aaj apna pehla kadam uthaya...aur woh tumhare paas chalke aayi...
Kashish: hmm....sahi kaha tumne jaan....woh meri beti hai to mere pass hi aayegi....jaan chalo na phir se koshish karte hai ek bar....
Sujal: theek hai...main tumhare saamne bethta hoon phir dekhte hain ke woh mere paas aati hai ke nahin.....
Sujal lets go of her and goes and sits across her at a little distance...Kashish turns her towards Sujal whilst still holding her from the back...Sujal holds his hand out to her...
Sujal: aaja beta....dad ke paas kaun aayega....
Kashish: nahi beta....tum mere pass rahogi...rahogi na mom ke pass....
Sujal: nahin...pari dad ke paas aayegi...kyun pari....
Nandini takes few steps towards Sujal....she stops in the middle and looks at Sujal and than Kashish.....Both were calling her to come......She just smiles at them and sat down in the middle on the sand castle...Sujal and Kashish just look at each other and start to laugh...they both bent forward and Kashish placed her hand on Nandini's back whilst Sujal placed his hand on Kashish's...both bent forward and kissed her on either side of her cheeks...Kashish picks up in her arms and places her in her lap.....She moved on side leaning over Sujal.....Sujal places his both arms around her to support her... Sujal just smiles...he felt so complete...he felt his family was complete and there's nothing more he would ever want to ask for from life...
Sujal: jaan main jaantha hoon ke tum muje thanks kehne se manna karogi lekin sach me jaan...thank you soo much meri zindagi ko jannat banane ke liye...mere har sapne ko poora karne ke liye...muje duniya ki har khushi dene ke liye....tum ne mere liye meri har khwaish se barkar kiya hai aur main tumhara yeh ehsaan zindagi bhar nahin chuka paaunga...thank you jaan...
Kashish: Sujal....agar aaj main tumse kuch mangugi to tum muje donge na....
Sujal: haan Kashish main zaroor tumhe dunga...tum mujse kuch bhi maang sakti ho...
Kashish: muje aur Pari ko hamesha apni zindagi ki sabse badi priority banaye rakhna......
Sujal: jaan agar tum yeh na bhi kehti tab bhi main tum dono ko bhoolne ka soch bhi nahin sakta....tum hamesha mere liye har cheez aur har kaam se barkar ho aur main tumse vaada karta hoon ke aage jaa ke kuch bhi badalne nahin waala...tum aur pari hamesha meri zindagi ki sabse badi priority rahoge...tum dono se pehle mere liye aur kuch bhi nahin
Kashish: thanks jaan....ab chalo na pari ko pani me leke dekhte hai....use bahot maza aayega...
Sujal: theek hai chalo jaan....laao main usse uthata hoon.....
She moves a little forwad and Sujal gets up...he takes Nandini from Kashish and carries her in one arm whilst holding his other hand out for Kashish to hold onto...Kashish smiles and holds on to his hand gently getting up...when he pulls her towards him with a smile and gently places a kiss on her forehead...
Kashish: I love you jaan...
Sujal: i love you too jaan...
He gently lets go of her and then places his one hand around her waist whilst she rests her head on his chest and they started to walk towards the water....when they reached the edge Sujal let go of her and she moved back...she bent down whilst Suajl bent down next to her placing Nandini in the water...Nandini sat down happily and started to splash in the water whilst giggling...
Kashish: lagta hai yeh aadat Pari ne apni mom se li hai ....kyun jaan..
Sujal: bilkul...tum bhi paani me kadam rakhte hi aise hi khush hoti ho...
Kashish: kya karoon muje samundar ki lehero se bahot pyaar hai....
Sujal: woh bhi bachpan se...aur dekho na aaj Nandini bhi tumhara bachpan ji rahi hai...usse dekh ke tumhe apne bachpan ki yaad aarahi hai....
Kashish: bahot yaad aa rahi hai us pal ki....pata hai main aise hi pani me jati thi aur Mom durr se muje dekha karti thi....aur phir agar main zara bhi andar jau to mom zor se chilati thi ...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: woh isliye kyunki mom tumse bohat pyar karti thi...agar unke liye kuch mayne rakhta tha to woh thi tum...yeh to bas unka pyar tha tumhare liye...
Kashish: haa....lekin kitne itefaq ki baat hai....aaj bilkul waisa hi ho raha hai jo aaj se kareeban 28 saal pehle tha....bas fark sirf itna hai ki aaj main Nandini ki mom hoon..
Sujal: haan sach me....kitna ajeeb itefaq hai yeh...lekin phir bhi itna khubsurat...
Kashish: Khubsurat to hoga hai....kyunki hum teeno hi itne khubsurat hai ki hamara koi mukabla hi nahi kar sakta....kyun Nandini...
Nandini just smiles and crawls to Kashish sitting in her lap and splashing again whilst bending forward....
Sujal just looks towards both his angels and smiles...
Sujal: is baat se to main bhi sehmat hoon jaan...lekin yeh teesra kaun hai?...muje to yahan sirf do hi khubsurat ladkiyaan nazar aarahi hain is waqt....
Kashish: teesra muje kya pata...hai koi handsome ...meri Nandini ka dad...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: really?....par Nandini ka dad to mein hoon...lekin yeh handsome kaun hai?
Kashish: oh..kya maine tumhe bataya nahi...uske dad hai koi SK concepts ka malik...Sujal Garewal...
Sujal: oh really...iska matlab kaafi dashing personality hogi unki,....kyun?
Kashish: bahot....do saal ke bad bhi aaj bhi use dekh ke muje ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hota hai..
Sujal: acha....kaisa ehsaas hota hai aapko?
Kashish: woh hum sirf unko hi batate hai raat me...
Sujal: to mein koi ghair thodi na hoon...aaj raat aap muje bhi bata sakti hain chahe to
Kashish: kyun aap lagte kya hai hamare...kya rishta hai aapka humse..
Sujal: hum aapke kya lagte hain woh hum nahin jaante lekin haan ek baat jo hum jaante hain aur woh yeh ke hum aapke deewane hain
Kashish: to hum us deewane ki deewani hai...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: i must say he is a lucky guy....
Kashish: nahi ...she is very lucky lady...
Sujal: no way...he is more lucky
Kashish: waise us deewane ka pura parivar hi lucky hai...
Sujal: chale yeh bhi theek hai....is baat par behas nahin karte hum aapse...but ek baat jo main aapse kehna chahta hoon....you really are soo beautiful.....
He places his palm on her cheek whilst gently caressing it with his thumb...
Kashish: jaanti hoon main....her subaah yahi sunti hoon main tumhare muh se...
Sujal: sirf subah ko?....main to raat ko bhi kehta hoon...tab aapka dhyan kahan hota hai?
He just winks at her...
Kashish: tab mera dhyan meri beti me hota hai...jab main usko sula rahi hoti hoon..
Sujal: aur jab sulane ke baad aap mere paas aati hain tab?
Kashish: tab pata hai muje....ab andar chale..
Sujal: chalte hain jaan...lekin pehle muje bhi to batao ke kya pata hai tumhe?
Kashish: tab....tab main...main nahi rehti...main sirf tumhari Kashish ban jati hoon jo tumhare isharo pe chalti hai...
Sujal moves closer to her with a smile and bends down beside her ear whispering..
Sujal: sach me....muje to pata hi nahin tha...chalo koi baat nahin aaj raat ko dekh lenge..
Kashish: chale andar.....andhera hone ka aa raha hai...aur Nandini ko bhi dinner karana hai...
Sujal: hmmm chalo...aur dinner ke baad Nandini ka sone ka time bhi hai aur phir...
Kashish: uske aage ki tum socho....main andar ja rahi hoon..
Sujal: to main bhi chalta hoon na...rukko...
Sujal get up and then takes Nandini from Kashish....she held his hand and got up and then both started walking towards the house hand in hand...
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2 years had now passed in the life of Sujal and Kashish...Nandini was now 3 years old and had just started to go to nursery in the mornings...it was now weekend and like normal they would spend there weekends at the beach house...it was now 9pm and it was Nandini's bedtime..she was in her bed and Kashish was trying to put Nandini to bed..
Kashish: beta...kya hua...aaj tumhe sona nahi ...dekho 9 baj gaye hai..
Nandini: mom...pari ne kahani sunni hai..
Kashish: dekho beta..mom doesnt know any story...mom ko story banani nahi aati...tum so jao...kal hum story book lene jayenge...
Nandini: nahin mom kal nahin aaj hi sunni hai....matlab aaj..please mom sirf choti si hi sunade
Kashish: pari...muje nahi aati..
When Sujal walks into the room after getting changed into his pyjamas...he comes and sits on the other side of the bed beside Nandini..
Sujal: kya hua meri pari ko...abhi thak soyi nahin tum?
Kashish: use kahani sunne ki zidd ki hai...and you know...main aur kahani
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: bas itni si baat...aaj dad apni pari ko kahani sunayenge...ek prince aur uski princess ki kahani..
Kashish: tum sunaoge kahani....aati bhi hai....
Sujal: ofcourse aati hai muje...i know the perfect one
Kashish: aaj to pari ke saath main bhi sunungi...Nandini yaha aao mere pass so jao beta....
Nandini goes closer to Kashish and snuggles in her arms and Kashish gently runs her hand in her hair whilst holding her close...Sujal just looks at them and smiles..
Sujal: to yeh kahani hai ek prince aur uski princess ki...kuch saal pehle ek prince ek bade se palace me akela rehta tha...uska koi nahin tha..na mama na dad...woh akela hi bada hua..phir ek din woh prince subah subah park me gaya tha..jahan pe usne ek bohat hi khubsurat princess ko dekha...jab usne usse dekha to usse dekhte hi rehgaya..aur prince ko princess se pyar hogaya..woh uske baare me kuch nahin jaanta tha...uska naam tak nahin jaanta tha..phir bhi woh usse nazrein hata nahin paaya...
Nandini; phir kya hua...kya naam tha us princess ka....
Sujal: hmm...princess ka naam...woh to prince bhi nahin jaanta tha...do hafte tak woh har roz us princess ko dekhne jaata tha..phir do hafte baad woh princess se milla aur tab usse pata chala ke princess ka naam to bilkul uski pehchaan thi...uska naam tha Kashish..
Kashish smiles at him...
Kashish: aur us prince ka naam tha Sujal....
Nandini: woh to mere mom aur dad ka naam bhi hai
Kashish: to yeh kahani bhi tumhare mom aur dad ki hi to hai..
Nandini: sach!...dad phir kya hua?
Sujal: phir ek din princess ko pata chala ke prince usse bohat pyar karta hai...lekin princess tab prince se pyar nahin karti thi...princess ghussa hogayi aur usne boldiya ke woh prince se bohat door chali jayegi...tab prince ka dil toot gaya aur usse samaj nahin araha tha ke woh kya kare...kaise roke apni princess ko...tab humari zindagi me humari fairy godmother aayi...aur jaanti ho pari...unka naam Nandini tha...
Nandini: kya woh Nandini bhi meri tarah thi....
Kashish: tum uski hi parchai ho ....
Nandini: dad phir kya hua...
Sujal: phir fairy godmother ne prince aur princess ko milwa diya humesha humesha ke liye...aur woh unse durr chali gayi...lekin aaj bhi woh dono unhe bohat miss karte hain...phir prince aur princess ki shaadi hogayi...woh ek doosre ko aur bhi achi tarah se jaane lagge aur dheere dheere princess ko prince acha lagne lagga...lekin usse lagta tha ke woh prince ko uske hisse ka pyar nahin de pa rahi to princess ne phirse prince ko chodne ka faisla karliya..
Kashish: aur phir sabse jyada pastava bhi us din princess ko hua tha.....kyunki woh to prince se bahot pyaar karti thi sirf kehne se darr rahi thi....
Nandini: to kya princess chali gayi...
Sujal: nahin...woh prince se itna pyar karti thi ke woh usse durr ja hi nahin paayi...phir dheere dheere princess ko ehsaas hogaya tha ke usse prince ki kitni zaroorat hai to usne apne pyar ka izhaar kiya..aur us din prince khushi se pagal hogaya..usse aisa lagga jaise usse uski khoyi hui zindagi mil gayi ho...
Kashish: kya kare woh prince ko dukhi bhi to nahi dekh sakti...aur phir woh to janti thi ki prince use kitna pyaar karta hai......
Sujal just smiles
Sujal: aur princess bhi to apne prince se bohat pyar karti thi isliye woh wapis apne prince ki zindgi me aagayi...
Nandini: to phir main kaha se aayi...
Sujal starts to laugh gently...
Sujal: bohat mehnat karni padi...i mean humari phirse shaadi huyi aur humne bhagwan se bohat pray kiya aur tab humari zindagi me aap humari pyari si angel banke aayi aur humari zindagi ko khushion se bhar diya..
Kashish: ab tumhari story yaha par khatam hoti hai...ab chalo so jate hai hum dono....thik hai....Sujal light off kardo...
Sujal: main karta hoon...goodnight angel...
Sujal bent forward and kissed her forehead and then went to close the light..Kashish lies down beside Nandini holding her hand in her hand.....Nandini closed her eyes.....Sujal was running his hand over her forehead...After sometime Nandini fell asleep...Sujal and Kashish were just admiring the innocence reflecting on her face and how warm and peaceful her smile was... Sujal and Kashish both get up....Kashish covers her in blanket and turn on her night lamp.........Sujal puts her favorite doll beside her.....
Sujal looked at Kashish and whispered..
Sujal: jaan Nandini so chuki hai...to chale
Kashish: hmm...
Kashish bends down and kiss her forehead and walks towards the door...Sujal bent down and gently kissed Nandini's cheek...he then followed Kashish out of the room closing the door behind them..he held her hand with a smile and then lifted her in his arms taking her towards their room..
Kashish: kya baat hai....aaj itna pyaar aa raha hai....
Sujal: hmm...woh to roz hi aata hai jaan...
Kashish: waise aapne aaj story bahot choti kar di..
Sujal: choti kardi matlab?..ab details ke saath thod na bata sakta tha me..
Kashish: woh bhi sahi hai.....lekin hume to bata sakte hai...
Sujal: to aap sach me jaanna chahti hain...
He entered their room and pushed the door to close it with the back of his foot
Kashish: hmm...sach me...
He just smiles at her and then places her on the bed gently coming on top of her...he went closer to her ear and whispered..
Sujal: batane ka waqt nahin hai...dikha dun?
Kashish: aaj bhi nahi badle tum...waise ke waise hi ho...besharm...ab rasta do muje change karna hai....
She gently pushed him back to get up when he pulled her back down...firmly holding her against the bed...
Sujal: tumhe change karne ki kya zaroorat hai...main hoon na madad karne ke liye...
He bent down and pressed his lips against her neck whilst his hand passionately ran along her back as he started to open the strings on her blouse..
Kashish: muje nahi chahiye tumhari madad...kyunki tum shuru hone ke bad rukhte nahi.....
Sujals lips were now moving to her shoulder as he gently moved her blouse down from them...
Sujal: lekin muje tumhari madad karni hai...
As he kissed her shoulders his hands moved down to her waist...he gently caressed her waist with his thumb and then pulled out her folds..
Kashish: meri madad kar rahe ho ki muje kamzor bana rahe ho....
Kashish moves her hands and wrappes them around his neck....running her fingers in his hair...Sujals lips ran along her neckline as he whispered in one breath...
Sujal: dono...
Kashish: aur us dono ke liye...I love you jaan...
Sujal moved back and looked at her with a smile...
Sujal: i love you too jaan..
He bent down towards her bringing his lips closer to her trembling ones...he captured her lips into his in an instance and kissed her passionately...she just closed her eyes as she felt that passion run through her lips.....she moved her hands on his hands holding them tight.....He kissed her deeply as he felt her hands on his...he held her hand into his and enclosed there fingers together... after sometimes she just pushed him while moving her head in other direction not able to look into his eyes.......He just looked at her catching his breath back whilst smiling at her...he bent down near her and gently rubbed his lips on her ear whispering...
Sujal: kya hua?
Kashish: kuch nahi...
Sujal: to phir meri aankhon me dekho..
Kashish: nahi dekh paungi....
Sujal: kyun?
Kashish: main puri tarah se tut jaungi tumhare pyaar ko dekh ke...
Sujal runs his lips down to her cheek from her ear...
Sujal: nahin tutne dunga tumhe..
Kashish: abhi to yahi kar rahe ho...maine tumse kaha tha na ki tumhari baahoin me aake main tumhari Kashish ban jati hoon...
Sujal: to aaj mere isharon pe nahin chalogi?
Kashish: hamesha chali aur aaj bhi waise hi hoga,,,
Sujal: main tumhare pyar ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon..
Kashish looks into his eyes and sees unconditional love for her....she looks down and moves her hands to open the buttons of his shirt...He just closed his eyes as he felt her fingers touching his chest as she opened his buttons...she removed his shirt from his shoulders when he opened his eyes...he looked at her intently whilst taking off his shist and throwing it on the ground...she held him tightly against her whilst running her hands along his back as he kissed her every feature on her face..she just closed her eyes while looking down placing her lips on his neck.....he felt her passionate love through only one kiss.....she moves back and looks at him and than moves her hand to turn off the light...He held her hand and ran his lips along her arm pulling it towards him...when he let go of her hand and closed the light...and pulled the curtains to close them...
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2 more beautiful years had passed in the life of Sujal Kashish and there little Angel Nandini...life was beautiful for them and the past 2 years had passed with many beautiful moments...Nandini had now started full time school but at the moment was enjoying her holidays with her mom and dad...Sujal had promised Nandini that he would take her to Dsney Land when she would be 5 so here they were in Disney Land Paris enjoying there vacations together...lets check and see what the three are upto....they were sat inside a resteraunt at Disney Land whilst Sujal had gone to order the food..Kashish was getting Nandini settled inside the chair....Sujal returned after placing the order and sat across Kashish beside Nandini...
Nandini: Dad...aaj mera birthday hai to aaj sab meri choice ka....
Sujal: ofcourse beta...aaj to sab aapki choice ka hoga...sabse pehle pizza aur phir.....hmmmmm surprise.....
Kashish: Surpriseee!!!.....
Nandini: kaisi Surprise dad......
Sujal just smiles at her excitement and then looks at Kashish....
Sujal: bilkul apni mom pe gayi ho tum...surprise ka sunke hi itni excited hojati ho...lekin dad surprise kabhi bhi nahin batate isliye aapko wait karna hoga....
Kashish: Sujal tum jante ho ki mujse intzaar nahi hota.....Nandini ko na sahi muje to batao...
Nandini: no Dad...pehle muje...ple Dad..
Sujal: ahaan....main nahin batane waala...sabse pehle aap dono pizza khaane waali hain aur phir surprise ka pata aapko chalega....woh dekho pizza bhi aagaya...
The waitress brings the pizza and places it on there table....Sujal smiles at her and thanks her and she left with a smile.....
Nandini: Mom...jaldi khatam karo....muje surprise chahiye....
Kashish: nahi tum dheere dheere khana khaogi...
Sujal: mom is right...tum dheere dheere khaaogi...khaana araam se khaana chahiye....i promose main zyada wait nahin karaunga apni angels ko....
Kashish: ab thik se khao...aur apne kapde mat bigadna...
Nandini: mom main choti nahi...main badi ho gayi...
Sujal: yes mom...ab pari 5 saal hi hogayi hai....woh apna khayal ache se rakh leti hai....kyun beta?
Nandini : I know dad....mom aise hi sab keh rahi hai...woh kuch nahi janti..
Sujal: mom nahin jaanthi par dad to jaante haina so its ok....ab chalo aap pizza khaao araam se...
Sujal passes her a slice and she starts to eat...he then picked up another slice and passed it to Kashish....
Sujal: this is for you jaan...
Kashish: achcha to ab mom kuch nahi janti....ghar jake sab batati hoon...kitna main janti hoon aur kitna nahi.....
Nandini: mom....khana khate waqt baatein nahi karte...right Dad...
Sujal: right angel....mom...pehle aap khaa lijiye phir baad me baatein kar lena....
Kashish: thik hai jaisa aap kahe Dad.....
Kashish eats her pizza while helping Nandini with her pizza while wiping her mouth every time she bites.....Sujal was admiring them both and eating with a smile...when after 10 minutes they finished there pizza....the waitress returned and cleared their table...Sujal gently winked at her without letting Kashish or Nandini realise and she nodded her head with a smile....she left the table and they just sat there waiting...Sujal continuously looking towards the door of the resteraunt.....
Kashish: Sujal...tum kabse darwaze ki aur kyun dekh rahe ho....
Sujal: nahin....kuch bhi tho nahin...
When he looks at the door and smiles.....Kashish turns around whilst Nandini followed when they saw Mickey Mouse and Minnie Mouse walking into the resteraunt holding a huge chocolate cake in their hands....two waiters accompanied them holding violins...they stood beside Nandini and started playint the happy birthday tune whilst the rest of the disney characters followed after surrounding there table.....the cake was placed on the table and donald duck came with a bunch of balloons with happy birthday printed on them passing them to Nandini....They all started to sing Happy Birthday...Nandini gets up from the chiar in the excitment....Nandini holds Kashish hand and than both look at Sujal....Sujal comes and picks up Nandini in his hands..... He smiled at her and then kissed her cheek....
Sujal: Happy Birthday Nandini....kaisa lagga aapko dad ka surprise....
Nandini: you are the best dad in the world....I love you so much...
Sujal: i love you too my Angel....ab cake kaaten...sab tumhara wait kar rahe hain....
Nandini: yes Dad....lets do it...
Sujal smiles at her and then holds onto Kashish's hand helping her up.....Goofy came with a beautiful ribboned knife and passed it to Sujal...Sujal gently placed the end in Nandini's hand and then olaced Kashish's hand on top pf Nandini's and his holding Kashish's...they bent forward and Nandini blew out teh candles and then they cut teh cake while all the disney characters and waiters that were in the resteraunt gatehred together and sang Happy Birthday whilst clapping.....Sujal and Kashish both pick up the piece of cake in thier hands and than puts the whole piece in Nandini's mouth.....Nandini hardly can chew the cake.....Sujal and Kashish and rest started to laugh....Kashish takes the napkin and wipes her mouth...She looked so cute with chocolate all over her mouth....when she picked up another slice and first fed Sujal and then Kashish...they bith kissed her cheek and then Mickey mouse held his arms out to Nandini...she went to him and then all the Disney characters started playing with the birthday girl...Wishing her and making her feel special....they all managed to hold her whilst the waiters were taking pictures using Kashish's camera..Sujal just looked at Kashish and placed his arms around her shoulder whispering...
Sujal: i love you...
Kashish looks at him while leaning on her shoulder ...
Kashish: I love you too for this moment....
Sujal just smiles at her and asks cutely...
Sujal: just for this moment?
Kashish lowers her eyes....
Kashish: for every moment of my and nandini's lives..
Sujal just whispers...
Sujal: kaash hum is waqt apne room me hote...
Making her blush even more....
Kashish: yeh mat bhulo ki aaj Nandini hamare saath sonewali hai hamare kamre me...
Sujal: uska kamra humse alag hai jaan...maine socha ab jab hum Paris dubara aaye hain to second honeymoon mana lenge...
Kashish: sab kuch soch ke rakha hai ....
Sujal: ofcourse jaan...tum to muje jaanti ho na...main binna soche samje kuch bhi nahin karta...aisa mauka thodi na jaane dunga main....pichli baar honeymoon me sirf ek cheez ki kammi thi..is baar woh bhi puri hojayegi...
Kashish: Sujal...kuch to jagah dekh ke bola karo.....ab chalo yaha se chalte hai...
He just smiled and then gently let go of her...he went towards the disney characters and thanked them for making his Angels birthday so special....they passed Nandini back to Sujal and then they left the resteraunt after Sujal paid them all...He paid the waiters and then they left the resteraunt...Sujal placed Nandini on his shoulders whilst holding Kashish's hand...they were walking through the theme park and having fun...Nandini was playing with the balloons she got and was enjoying every moment...
Kashish: pari tumhe pata hai.....agar tum is balloon ko upper aasman me chod ke jo bhi wish mangoge woh aaj Nani puri karegi....
Nandini: sach mom!!!...main abhi wish maangungi....
Nandini released the balloons and then closed her eyes asking for a wish...Kashish just looked at her innocent face and smiled...
Sujal: kya wish maangi humari pari ne nani se?
Nandini: Mom ne kisi ko wish batane se mana kiya hai...
Sujal: haan tumhari mom bhi muje kabhi nahin bataya karti thi apni wish...chalo dad pray karenge ke aapki har wish poori ho..
Kashish: maine to apne her din ki khwaish batayi hai...
Sujal: haan lekin tum jab bhi bhagwan se kuch maangti ho tab nahin batati...lekin baad me main pata laga hi leta hoon
Kashish: to ab isi tarah main bhi pata laga leti hoon Pari ki khwaish ka....woh raat ko neend me muje bata deti hai...
Sujal: oh to yeh baat hai...lagta hai aaj raat ko muje darwaze ke paas chupke se khada hona parega..
Kashish: aaj raat tum hi Pari ko sula dena....lekin is waqt Nandini ko dene ke liye mere pass kuch hai...
Nandini: sach!mom kya hai please batao na!
Kashish: pehle neeche aake apni aankh bandh karo..
Nandini: dad neeche utaro na muje...
Sujal gently lifts her from his shoulder and places her on the ground...she closed her eyes placing her hands on her eyes..Kashish smiles at her and than she gets a small chain with a pandant named Nandini from her purse....she placed it around her neck and than kissed her forehead....she takes off her eyes and looks at the chain......
Nandini: mom ispe to mera naam hai...
Kashish: yeh chain tumhara nahi hai beta....yeh tumhari Nani ka hai.....woh bhi isi tarah bachpan me ise pehnti thi....ise kabhi alag mat karna apne aapse...thik hai...aur yaad rakhna Mom loves you and cares for you....
Nandini: pari bhi mom se bohat pyar karti hai...
She hugged Kashish really tightly wrapping her arms around her neck...Sujal just looked at them and was admiring the love they both share...
Kashish: achcha ab tum yeh to batao...tumhe kya karna hai ab...kaha jana hai...
Nandini: mom muje us train pe baithna hai...
She pointed out to a train ride in the distance..
Kashish: chale Sujal...
Sujal: haan chalo...
They both held onto Nandini's hand and took her towards the ride...Sujal lifted her and made her sit in the train and fastened the safety belt for her...he kissed her cheek and then went back standing besides Kashish...the ride started and Nandini was looking so happy...Kashish was taking photographs of their little Angel whilst she was on the ride...
Kashish: aaj kitni khush lag rahi hai na..
Sujal: hmm...bohat...aur tum bhi to aaj bohat khush lag rahi ho...
Kashish: kyunki aaj tum dono hi kuch jyada khush ho isi liye...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: aaj humari pari 5 saal ki ho chuki hai...to hum kaise khush nahin honge
Kashish: sahi kaha...yeh dekho woh aa bhi gayi....main use leke aati hoon...
Sujal: theek hai jaan...
Kashish goes towards Nandini and takes her in her arms...Sujal just smiles...he then walked upto them and they went on more rides...Sujal bought her an ice cream and also one for Kashish and himself...they all had ice cream and then had some more fun
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It was now 9.30 and Sujal,Kashish and Nandini were back at the hotel...Sujal and Kashish were in Nandini's room which was next door to there's...they were trying to put her to sleep...it wasn't much difficult as she was tired after the day at Disney Land...Sujal and Kashish were lying on either side of Nandini...whilst Kashish was gently tapping her...Sujal was running his hand in her hair...
Kashish: Nandini.....bacha apni mom se apni wish nahi kahoge....batao mom ko kya manga aaj tumne Nani se...
Nandini smiles at Kashish...
Nandini: aaj maine Nani se yeh maanga ke har saal meri birthday Disney Land me hi ho...yeh mere liye sabse special birthday thi...
Sujal just smiles and bends down kissing her forehead...
Sujal: agar humari Pari ki yahin khwaish hai to main aur Nani milke yeh khwaish poori karenge...we promise ke har saal tumhara birthday yahan Disney Land me manayenge..
Nandini: Thanks Dad...
Kashish: ab aapki khawaish puri ho gayi na to ab chalo aankhein bandh karke so jao...
Nandini: goodnight mom..goodnight dad...
Sujal: Goodnight bacha...we love you
Nandini closed her eyes while still holding on to her parents hands.....after 5 mins Kashish and Sujal both took out their hands slowly...Sujal and Kashish kissed Nandini's cheeks on either side and then got up from the bed...Kashish covered Nandini with a blanket properly and then both Sujal and Kashish walked towards the door..Sujal switched on the night light and then they left for there room...Sujal opened the door of there room and they walked inside..
Kashish: Sujal main bas abhi aayi fresh hoke...
Sujal: theek hai jaan...
Kashish walks to the closet taking out her clothes and goes to the washroom..whilst Sujal walked upto his bag taking out his diary...he took it to the table and sat on the chair opening the diary...he picked up a pen and got lost in thoughts...he just smiled and then started to write..
Sujal (to his diary): kuch saal pehle jo maine is diary me likhta tha woh sirf mere dekhe huye khawab the....muje kabhi pata hi nahi tha ki khwab jab haqeeqat bante hai to woh usse bhi jyada khubsurat lagte hai....jab main Kashish aur Nandini ko dekhta hoon to sochta hoon ki zindagi ka jo maksad tha woh to pura ho chuka hai....haa kuch andekhe khawab bhi the jo pure ho gaye is badalte rishte me....zindagi ke jo darwaze kabhi maine bandh kar diye the uske piche ki khubsurat zindagi ko aaj dekhke jo khushi milti hai use batane ke liye mere pass shabd nahi....ab sirf yeh janna baki hai ki meri aage ki zindagi kaisi hogi...kya woh bhi biti huyi zindagi ke jaisi khubsurat hogi ya phir usse bhi jyada....iska jawab aaj mere pass nahi lekin shayad kal haqeeqat aane ke bad hi pata chalega muje...
When Kashish came out of the washroom wearing her night dress...she saw that he was sat at the table...she just smiled and walked upto him placing her hands on his shoulders
Kashish: kya ho raha hai aaj is diary ke saath...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: kuch nahin...bas is diary me aaj apni khoobsoorat zindagi ke baare me likh raha tha
Kashish: achcha aisa kya likha...main bhi to dekhu..
Sujal just holds onto her hand and brings her around making her sit on his lap...
Sujal: to maine kab roka hai...dekhlo
Kashish: sach me...
Sujal: hmm...sach me...tumhara poora haq banta hai..
Kashish takes the diary in her hands and starts to read what he had written today....
Kashish: jaan bura na mano to main kuch likhu...
Sujal just looks at her...
Sujal: ab isme burra maan ne waali kya baat hai...maine kaha na ispe tumhara poora haq hai...tum kuch bhi likh sakti ho
Kashish: achcha ....pen to do phir...
Sujal: yeh lo jaan..
He passes her the pen and rests his head on her back as she began to write..
Kashish (to his diary): Sujal....tumne gujra hua kal aur aaj to dekh liya,...lekin maine tumhari aankhein me aanewale kal ko dekha hai....jo aaj se bhi jyada khubsurat hai...itna khubsurat hai ki haqeeqat hone ke bad bhi woh kisi jannat ke khawab ki tarah lagega....usi khwab me maine hamari pari ko SK ko ek nayi pehchan dete dekh rahi hoon.....aur usi khwab me maine apni pari ko lal jode me bhi dekha hai....jo sapne hum aaj dekh rahe hai woh barso bad pure honewale hai....lekin hamara pyaar hi hoga jo hamari Pari ko humse jude rakhega....hum kabhi bhi Pari ko humse alag nahi hone denge....woh hamesha hamari zindagi ka woh sahara banegi jiske sapne aaj hamari aankh me hai.....us haseen sapno me sirf khushiyaan hi hogi ...na kabhi aanshu honge na kabhi koi judaai....sirf pyaar hi pyaar hoga...
She places the pen down and he moves back looking at her...
Sujal: kya likha tumne jaan?
Kashish: tumne gujra hua kal likha aur maine aanewala kal likha...yeh lo..
Sujal bends forward placing his arm beneath hers whilst holding the diary and reading what she wrote...he just smiled when he read it and closed the diary...
Sujal: jaanti ho jaan...is diary me jo tumne likha hai ab usse sach hone se koi nahin rok sakta...kyunki tum to jaanti ho na...tumhari har khwaish ko poora karne ka vaada jo kiya tha maine..
Kashish: hmm muje achche se yaad hai tumne muje kaha tha ki meri khwaish ko puri karne se koi nahi rok sakta....
Sujal: haan aur main apna vaada humesha nibhaunga..lekin tumne apne aaj ki khwaish nahin batayi..
Kashish: meri aajki khwaish yeh hai ki tum her janam me isi tarah meri her khwaish ko puri karoge,,,
Sujal: to main tumse vaada karta hoon ke tumhari yeh khwaish me zaroor poori karunga..
Kashish: I love you jaan so much..
Sujal: i love you too jaan..
He placed his arms around her waist and gently kissed her neck..
Kashish: aaj kya hai tumhari khwaish...
Sujal just smiles...
Sujal: bas tumhare itne kareeb rehna chahta hoon..
Kashish: kitna kareeb....kitna kareeb tak reh sakte ho...
Sujal takes her deeper in his arms...
Sujal: batadun?
Kashish: hmm...bata do..
He gently turns her around making her face him...he moved closer to her placing his lips on her forehead..moving down to her eyes and then down to her cheeks...he moved down to her neck and started kissing her along her neck rubbing his hands on her arm.....She just moved back and looks at him....she holds his face in her palms and looks into his eyes .....She closed her eyes placing her lips on his...He captured his lips into hers whilst kissing her back passionately...his hands ran along her back as he rubbed her back passionately whilst pulling her closer....after sometimes she moves back and looks at him....She just looks into his arms going into his arms... He hugged her back tightly whilst gently rubbing his lips on her shoulder..
Sujal: main tumhare itne kareeb rehna chahta hoon
Kashish: aur yaha tak aake main tumhe apne aap se durr nahi hone de sakti..
He gently moves back and looks at her intently...
Sujal: to kya main tumhare aur kareeb aaun?
Kashish: kehne ki zaroorat hai..
Sujal just smiles and gets up whilst still holding onto her...she wrapped her arms around his neck whilst he carried her towards the bed...he placed her on the bed whilst gently coming on top of her...he bent down and kissed her neck whilst his hands went down to her night gown opening the belt...he gently removed her gown whilst his lips were still circulating her neck...he slowly pulled down her night dress from her shoulders as his lips gently moved to her shoulders..she just closed her eyes while feeling his love with each kiss placing on her body.....she opens her eyes and pulls him into her arms ....she gently moves forward placing her lips on his neck while her hands ran across his chest opening the shirt buttons......As she opened the buttons he ran his fingers through her hair passionately whilst feeling her love rush through his body...when she opened the last button and removed his shirt...she pulled him closer and kissed his chest near his heart which began to beat faster whilst he closed his eyes to feel the moment...he was so close to her that she could feel his heartbeats through her body...he just opened his eyes and gently opened the strings of her night dress whilst placing his lips on top of hers again...making her his once again..and telling her how much he loves her..she moves her hand towards the light to turn off....when Sujal just holds her hand and moved his hand to turn off having their privacy in their own love castle...
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Zindagi me kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai jo kabhi na humne na kabhi aapne socha hota hai...bas usi tarah se Kashish aur Sujal ki zindagi me bhi wahi hua......kabhi kabhi ek halki si leher to kabhi ek toofan kafi hota hai kisi riste ko banane ya use todne ke liye bhi....lekin woh tuta hua rishta jab phir se judta hai to aur bhi majbut hota hai kyunki us rishte me aap apna pura vishwas aur pyaar rakhte hai....zindagi me sabkuch akele aur nafrat se nahi paya jata....hum sabko bhi kahi na kahi ek humsafar ki zaroorat padti hai...kisi ko aaj ehsaas hota hai kisi ko kal....lekin woh ehsaas to hokar hi rehta hai....waisa hi ehsaas hamari is kahani me Kashish ko bhi hua....lekin kya hua thodi dair se hua to lekin usne woh koshish nahi chodi......agar aap koshish karenge to sabkuch ek saath hi hasil kar sakte hai.....ek naam...ek pehchann.....apna pyaar....bahot se rishte...sab kuch....lekin karni hai sirf ek koshish.....aur kayi bar aisa bhi hoga ki koshish karne ke bad aapko asafalta mile lekin Sujal ki tarah kabhi bhi apni chah ki aashna nahi chodni chahiye.....kyunki aashna nahi rahegi to dekhe huye khwab haqeeqat me kaise badlenge.....bas usi tarah hume bhi zindagi me aashna aur koshish ka saath kabhi nahi chodna chahiye kyunki usse hume sari safalta mil sakti hai....yaha tak ki sachchi mohabbat bhi jo humne dekhi aaj Sujal aur Kashish kii.....
The End
Hume bahot khushi ke saath kehna padta hai ki Aashna jaisi kahani ka safar ab yahi khatam hota hai.....Is safar me aapne hamara her pal saath diya...woh pyaar aur apnapan aap ne apne shabdo ke zariye hum tak pahonchaya......aur un her ek shabd ke liye hum apne dil se aapka sukriya karte hai....yaha tak ki kabhi kabhi hum ne aapki marzi ke khilaf jake Sujal aur Kashish ke beech ladai bhi karvayi to aap hi sabhi ko manane ke liye humne phir se uska rishta jod diya....humne is kahani me kafi rang dekhe rishte ke lekin sabse gehra lal rang pyaar dekha....is safar ke uchav chadav me hamesha aapne hamara saath diya hai....aur hum hamesha aapke sukar guzar rahenge is saath ke liye...yeh kahani sirf mumkin huyi hai aapke pyaar ki waje se ..hum aapse vaada karte hai ki jald hi hum aapke Sujal aur Kashish ko phir se ek nayi kahani ...naye kirdar....naye prem ke saath leke aapke samne aayenge....tab tak ke liye sirf intzaar kijiye kyunki intzaar bhi bahot meetha safar hota hai....lekin jane se pehle aapse kuch sawaal karna chahte hai aapki Aashna ke bare me....
1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?
2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.
3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?
4. agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?
5. aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?
6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?
7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?
8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?
9. aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?
10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?
11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?
12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?
13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?
14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?
15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?
16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?
Love
Summi n Kashish
Hey Kashish and Summi....
I havent commented in a while...I hope this will make up for it......for all the times i didnt comment....
I have read soo many ffs...from harry potter.....to kasam se.....twilight...and I can say that Aashna is by far the best.......I just love it...I won't make the same mistake and say that nothing can beat it....bc the both of u....proved my wrong when i said that Saajhi was the best.....as much as I loved Saajhi......Aashna....was hotter....more romantic...116% better than Saajhi.......I cant wait until ur next ff......bc I know tht it will be even better than Saajhi and Aashna........from the start of the intro.....that gave me insight to the characters unique personality......I fell in love with the characters right from the introductions......then U introduced sujal........wow........from the beginning......I knew that he was romantic....lover boy..the way he was lost in an unknown girl's life.....to me that is true love....when it hits....nothing else matter..........no wry....abt family history.....social standings....or money........u fall for the person nothing else matters......that is how sujal loves kashish........thats the kind of love everyone including me...search for.......then came the shocking first meeting.........wow....talk abt confidence......Kashish...walked in the door and took control of the situation she knew who she was meeting..and their work in the company......poor Sujal...felt soo bad for him...he is soo sweet and totally in love...then there is kashish who is totally focused on her career and has no time for anyone else'''.Angad and Kripa are really the best friends anyone could ask for'they support Sujal in every way they can'''and Nandini'.talk abt a sweet and caring mom'..she loves kashish a lot but'.unlike most houses'.its kashish whose rule runs in the house'...Nandini is scared of her''.then the morning park scene'.wow'.i think I will be visiting the park more often if it will get me a guy like sujal''..Sujal of course..has to become friends with Nandini'.after all woh uski honewali saas hai''..but the relationship they form is soo sweet''.Nandini got her son and Sujal got his mother''.at first Sujal didn't have the courage to ask Kashish simple questions'but later after the love confession''look at his confidence rise'.but still not a much a Kashish'but which ever Sujal he is'he always compliments Kashish and vice versa''from the other billion things that I loved abt the ff'..one of them is that I can see a love story like this taking place in reality'..Aashna is not like the other love stories where u know that they are fictional and can never happen. Sujal and Kashish are like the people you meet in real life and u can see them doing the things that happen in the ff'I can see Kashish who is hard to the world but is very emotional and soft in the inside'..she may say that she doesn't want to get married but like every girl she at one point had the dreams of her own wedding'''..when I heard abt her past'.it just broke my heart''.when something like this happens is turns your world upside down'but finding out abt ur future hubby's affair minutes before the wedding'..that is just sooo sad''and to top it off'..Kashish was already in her wedding outfit and had the idiots mendhi on her hand''in addition the loser was cheating with her best friend'''..I would completely break down''.but tht is after killing both of them'''she showed a lot of courage in wht she did'.so I can really blame her for being cautious with other people'...further I love the relationship of Kashish and Nandini'yeah Kash bosses Nandini but she loves her mom a lot'..I cant even imagine how she felt when Nandini passed away'.she must have felt soo lonely'..but a usual Sujal was there to take care of her''when they finally got married'I was soo happy tht their love was finally gonna meet its goal''but the distance between them kept them separate'.when she finally called Sujal to the date'I thought that finally they were gonna confess their love'.but my heart stopped when I heard her ask for the divorce'cant believe'..she did tht'..tht night when Sujal held her arm'..I could feel his pain'and the pain tht Kashish felt in making her decision'''but it became soo much more interesting when kashish stayed with Sujal even after the divorce'..I really don't have to say anything abt the romantic scenes''.omg'.he put his shirt in the box'.wow'tht was just precious''.then I almost cracked my ribs..at the doctor scene'poor Kashish'..Sujal must have had a blast'..but I love the style of his making up to her''then came the meeting with Kashish's dad'.god I felt like slapping him''I don't know why Kashish didn't'.but'.she didn't'.and when she broke down in her room'.wow'the first time she ever cried'.but of course'Sujal was there for her to cry on'.then the shock next morning'left me breathless''talk abt a shocking confession''.but I was soo happy tht they finally'..confessed their love and tht their new lives were gonna start'''I can just imagine Angad and Kripa's face when they heard abt the news''.finally their love increased stage by stage..finally they became one in a wedding ceremony''but their thinking weren't the same yet''.when the fight happened with abhinav'.wow'.the first time I have seen Sujal tht angry''.but I think tht distance was nessecary for them to understand each other even more'''..then do I really have to say anything abt the romance part'wow'.those parts were amazing'..I couldn't control my heart when I read them'..but I must say they were beyond wht I expected''''..but after a long journey'..their life was filled with joy and happiness''..it may have been a little sad when they found out tht Kashish cant have anymore kids but u know wht'their lives were happy with the three of them'' I just love Aashna''it made me cry'.happy'sad'..heartbroken''laugh''and at points stopped my heart'...all the emotions one can feel I felt while watching SUjal and Kashish's journey in finding each other and the unforgettable'everlasting'.love''a love tht everyone deserves in their life'..I must admit tht u guys did prove me wrong abt Saajhi'..I know I said tht nothing can beat Saajhi'but Aashna did out do Saajhi'.but don't get me wrong'..Saajhi hold a special place in my heart and I am sure in the heart of all the readers'but Aashna also made the another special place in my life and heart'.and 116% sure tht it left a mark on the hearts of all the readers tht have read this wonderful'spectacular' SK fanfiction''but unfortunately all good thing come to an end'..though I will miss this sujal and kashish'I cant wait for the next Sujal and Kashish tht u create in your next ff''.Thanks a billion for this ff'and all the best for ur up coming ffs.....finally I can enjoy an SK story without all the other bs in tht ekta puts in her serials''.
Lots of Love
Mira
Originally posted by: goodkashish
Dear Readers,
Hume bahot khushi ke saath kehna padta hai ki Aashna jaisi kahani ka safar ab yahi khatam hota hai.....Is safar me aapne hamara her pal saath diya...woh pyaar aur apnapan aap ne apne shabdo ke zariye hum tak pahonchaya......aur un her ek shabd ke liye hum apne dil se aapka sukriya karte hai....yaha tak ki kabhi kabhi hum ne aapki marzi ke khilaf jake Sujal aur Kashish ke beech ladai bhi karvayi to aap hi sabhi ko manane ke liye humne phir se uska rishta jod diya....humne is kahani me kafi rang dekhe rishte ke lekin sabse gehra lal rang pyaar dekha....is safar ke uchav chadav me hamesha aapne hamara saath diya hai....aur hum hamesha aapke sukar guzar rahenge is saath ke liye...yeh kahani sirf mumkin huyi hai aapke pyaar ki waje se ..hum aapse vaada karte hai ki jald hi hum aapke Sujal aur Kashish ko phir se ek nayi kahani ...naye kirdar....naye prem ke saath leke aapke samne aayenge....tab tak ke liye sirf intzaar kijiye kyunki intzaar bhi bahot meetha safar hota hai....lekin jane se pehle aapse kuch sawaal karna chahte hai aapki Aashna ke bare me....
1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?
OMG.....Tht is hard to decide...all the characters have their own uniquness.....I cant pick........between them......I love all of them...Sujal for his unparellal capacity to love....his childishness....and his hope......Kashish for her strength....independence......love......Nandini for her wisdom....and...her quidance.....Angad for his support and comic relief.....Kripa for her friendship and advice.........each of them have a special place in my heart........sooo I cant really pick......
2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.
Sujal and his I love u....part...god I wish it was me..wink wink...3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?If Sujal and Kashish love is not real then I dont think any other love would be real.....their love is not superfical....Sujal doesnt love Kashish because of her status or her outer beauty...he is in love with her for wht she is....his love for her is immense and real...no matter how much pain he went through his love for her never lessened...and he never held any grudge against her......as for Kashish....she changed herself completely for Sujal...she changed her heart about getting married.....then she changed her decision to not have kids...all because of her love for Sujal......now how can their love not be true....
4. agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?
I would rate is 116 out of 10........its descriptive so I can see all the scenes and characters as if watching a movie.......
5. aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?
Aashna........I cant even describe why I love it.........again soo many reasons tht I cant pick one........but I can list some of them.......the romance between Sujal and Kashish........the love between nandini and Sujal.....kashish and Nandini's relationship......I loved it for alll of the love...happiness...romance....tears...joy.......laughter.....sadness.......All the emotions the characters go through and with them so do I.......for each of the them I love Aashna...
6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?
Muje Aashna maine sab kuch pasand aaya......lekin ek baat hai jo muje pasand nahi aaye.....par maine janti hoon ki tum dono is baat ko badle nahi sakte.......jo cheez muje pasand nahin aye woh hai...ki aashna ki kahani bahot choti thi.....muje aur bhi parts chaye.....lol.....mazak kar rahi hoon..........muje Aashna ki sabhi parts bahot he pasand hain.....
7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?
Nahi.....muje aisa kabhi nahi laga..kyunki muje pata hai.....ki agar ek cheez badle jaye...tho puri kahani badle jayegi......aur yeah kahani ka ruk he badle jayega......isliye yeah kahani bilkul perfect hai....
8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?
The part that touched my heart the most is Sujal and Kashish's love confession........tht is the part of the story tht changed everything........finally the eternal pair untied once again.......
9. aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?
Muje who pal jaha par Sujal..kashish ki tasveer banana ko kehta hai'..aur who Kashish ko hitler ke pose maine tasveer banake ko kehta hai''.I just couldn't control my laughter then''
10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?
Yeah to bahot he mushkil sawal hai''Sujal aur Kashish har pyaar ka pal mere dil ke paas hai'..maine choose nahi kar shakti''.
11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?
Pehla pal'..jab nandini hospital maine thi aur kashish uske saath baat kar rahe thi'''dushare pal'jab raat ko SK hotel maine hoti hai'..Harsh sinha ko milne ki baad'..aur final pal'.jab SK ko pata chalta hai ki Kashish kabhi ma nahi banengi'..
12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?
Muje''sirf aur sirf SK se matla hai'.jab who dono hai'tho muje kissi aur ki zaroorat nahi'.lekin'I luv nandini..and of course Angad's comedy part''.if u can have this two characters'ple'.
13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?
Bahot ideas hai mere paas'''..almost 50 plus''maine tumhe pm kardongi''..
14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?
Sirf ek cheez'..I know tht I am being picking but its just me''ple don't take offense'.the English'..but other than tht''nothing wrong with ur writing'wish I could write hindi like u guys''.
15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?
Arre'kya marne ka irada hai kiya''..I think wht I would come up with is no match for u guys''.u did a gr8 job'..keep it up''.
16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?
Ha'.tum dono ne bahot badi galti ki'''.is kahani ko katamb karke'..lol'.just playing''I know tht all good things come to an end''.it was a suberb ff''..no mistakes''.
Love
Summi n Kashish
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