Aashna.......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....8/30

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ravikaran2009

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1391

Hi goodkashish..i am a new member and in two nonths,i read lots of ur fictions..i am crazy about ur fictions..they are awesome..this was super cool..plz start a new one as early as possible

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1392

hey summi n kashish, first of all congratulations both of u for comleting ff.... n no thanks buddies for giving us such a wonderful ff🤗🤗....saajhi ki tarah aashna be hameesha hamaray dil main rahay ga.😊😊😊 i just read last part its awsome yaar i'm just speechless. i like each n every scene , sabhi dialogs bohat achay thay. sujal nay apni beti ka naam nandni rakha so sweet ore us nay bilkal sahi kaha nandni nay un kay payar ko milya tha ore aaj is nandni nay un kay rishtay ko ore be mazboot bana dia. i love all scens with nandni espcially her first step on beech , itna payar itni muhabbat they'r just perfect. i like last words at the end, koi be rishta perfect nahi huta usay perfect banana parta hay apni koshish ore apni muhabbat say ore yehi hum nay aashna say learn kia.

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aarti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1393

it was a superb ff....mindblwoing story and outstanding ending....i luv it i enjoyed it alot.......sabhi scene dailogs awesome the aur woh last mein pari ke scene bhi bohot cute the ....too good...

1. Is kahani me aapko kaunsa kirdar sabse jyada achcha laga?

sujal kashish

2. aise koi kirdar ki ek shabd jo woh bar bar bol raha ho aur aapko uska intezaar ho?.

phele toh kashish ki coffy and den jaan

3. kya aapko lagta hai ki Sujal aur Kashish ke beech me jo pyaar tha woh sacha wala tha?

of coures ek dam sacha pyar

4. agar aapko Aashna ko rate dena ho to 10 me se kitna denge?

10 mein se 9

5. aapko Aashna kyun pasand aayi?

because it was sach a cute and sweet story

6. aisa kya tha jo aapko pasand nahi aaya Aashna ki kahani me?

bohot socha yaar par kuch mila nahi sab thik tha

7. kisi dor pe aapko aisa laga ki hum is kahani ko aur behtarin kahani bana sakte the?

nahi sab kuch perfect tha

8. Is kahani ka kaunsa woh pal hai jisne aapke dil ko chu liya?

is kahani mein sujal kashish ke pyar ne mujhe chu liya tah....bohot sare cute, sweet. emotional scene the....

9. aisa koi pal jisko leke aapki hasi ruk hi nahi rahi thi?..

woh doctorr wala

10. aisa koi pyaar ka khass pal jo aapke dil ke kareeb hai?

sk ke sabhi pyaar bahre scene

11. aisa koi pal jise padhke aapki aankhoin me aanshu aa gaye?

jab jab sk rooye tab tab apni eyes bhi num huwi

12. kya aap aage koi aisi kahani sunna chahte hai jisme aapke chune huye kirdar ho to hume yaha pe bata sakte hai?

emm chuna hua kirdar mujhe lelo hehehe

13. kis tarah ki kahani aap agli ff me dekhna chahte hai?

bilkul prem kahani hi

14. kya hume apni writing me kuch improve karna chahiye?

improve jitna karo utna kaam hota hai isliye jo hai best hai

15. kya aapke pass pyaar karne ke koi naye tarike hai jo hum apni agli ff me istmal kar sakte hai?

nahh...!!!

16. kahi kabhi koi humse galti huyi ho is kahani me to aap hume yaha bata sakte hai?

galati koi ho toh bataye na

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crystal fantasy

@crystal fantasy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1394

Hi! Kashish,Summi iam really very sorry for late reply.Mera net kharab hogaya tha bas kal hi theek hua hai. Part 37 bohot hi accha tha maine socha sujal kashish ke pass ayega magar yaha kashish hi sujal ke paas chali aayi aur last mein painter aur canvas ka scene bohot accha tha.

Part 38 ye part bhi bohot accha tha.Sujal kitna sweet hai kashish ke kehne par jaakar doosre kamre mein sogaya kuch kaha tak nahi.Karva chaut to bohot hi accha tha aur jab sujal ne pucha kitne pin lagaye hai mujhe sks ke meena shah ka episode yaad aagaya jahan kisi sawaal par rajeev ne unhe pucha kitne pin lagaye the.Aur last scene to bohot hi zyada hot aur romantic tha😳.

Part 39 Is part mein to tie wala scene bohot hi accha tha aur hamesh ki tarah angad ne disturb kardiya.Bohot accha laga jab sujal ko woh contract milgaya aur club ka president bhi banaya gaya.Bechara sujal kashish ko ye acchi khabar sunane ke liye kitne pyar se phool laya tha magar waha kashish nahi thi aur woh i quit wala note chodkar chaligayi.Kashish ka bhi kya tareeka tha sujal ko good news dene ka woh to darr hi gaya aur sujal ka congrats kehne ka tareeka bohot hi accha tha.Aur mujhe woh bhi accha laga jab sujal kehta hai ke jaan itna tasty dudh maine aaj tak nahin peeya 😳.

Part 40 Is part mein marketing club ka launch bohot accha tha aur sujal ka speech bhi accha tha. Hotel taj mein dono ka dinner bohot accha tha aur phir se barish so romantic😉.Sujal ne sia ka acche se khayal rakha aur sujal ne acche se sabit kardiya ke usse kitna pyar karta hain.Kashish bechari woh sapna dekhkar kitna darr gayi magar usse yeh ehsaas hua ke uski maa uski itni fikar kyun karti hai. Sujal kashish ki anniversarry bhi bohot hi acchi thi.

Edited by crystal fantasy - 16 years ago

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1395

Originally posted by: No1Aamnafan
lovely parts yaar 1 after one sorry main late comment kar rahi hoon per i was not coming on net but all the parts were awesome seriously loving the ways sk's relatio is getting strong day by day sujal is so caring kashish is so lucky 2 have him in her life and so as sujal b'coz kashish changed herself just 4 his love aur aaj ki kashish ko dekh k koi nahi bol sakta hai k aik waqt tah jab woh pyaar mein shaadi mein believe bhi nahi karti hogi but we know aur kashish ka sujal k liye khud ko itna badalna is remarkable sach mein ab woh khana banana chahta hai aur sujal tou hai he sikhane k liye aur kya sikhaya hai jaise woh kripa se keh raha tha k main sikha dunga tabhi main samjjh gayi thi his intenstions lolz😉😆😆he is getting naughty day by day😳😳and sk mein kashish ki jagah new lady hmm ,last scene was awesome 😊well aik aur baat aaj kashish ki jagah tumne pm kia tumhara style kafi change tha per acha laga😊i hope kashish bhi jald laute love u both and cont sooooooooon

hey sheela sweetehart thank u soo much 4 ure lovely comments...we are glad u r liking all the parts....n dnt apologise dear, its more than enough 4 us that u r commenting wenever u get a chance 2 come...we are glad u r liking SK's relationship n hw there bond is getting stronger as each day passes by....yes they are both lucky 2 have each other and both have done a lot for the other....thats wot u call true love wen both the girl n boy make compromises 4 each other...we are glad u liked his way of teaching her how to cook...tho tum Sujal k iraade samajh gayi thi pehle se hi😆no doubt he is getting naughtier as each day is passing...n dear mera pm karna was a one off...my partner is handling the pms once agen....thanx once agen 4 ure comments...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1396

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
i really enjoyed the romantic scenes between SK and i knew that when kashish would give her picture sujal will be busy staring at the picture rather than doing work.Sujal is such a romantic i really like the way he always wants to spend time with kashish and also kashsih has changed soo much after falling in love with sujal.

hey dear thank u soo much 4 ure lovely comments...we are glad u liked this part....we are lad u njoyed the romantic scenes between Sujal and Kashish....n it was obvious that Sujal would be staring at her pic all day😆😆😆he is very romantic no doubt n we are glad u like hw he always wants 2 be with Kashish....and Kashish has changed after falling in love with Sujal...thanx once again 4 ure comments...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1397

Originally posted by: afreenaamna
Hey, great part, kitchen k scene were awesome, i felt that it was happening in front of my eyes. Kash itne kubsurat haseen pal SK ko KTH milte to maza aa jata. The night scene were..... OMG maine ache bacho ki tara kuch b imagine nahi kiya afterall i am under 18. Well who was Abhinav. UD Soon as possible. BYE .

hey afreen dear thank u soo much 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked this part....we are glad u liked the scene in the kitchen and u could visualise it..we always try n write enough description 4 u guys 2 see it happening infront of u....yhh it would be gr88 if SK got such scenes in kth...but they created a lot of majic with the scenes they already did too...they just have 2 look in2 each others eyes and chemistry is created....😆yaar night scene itna bhi extreme nahin tha ke tumhe over 18 laga😆😆😆...Abhinav was SK Concepts ex creative director...b4 Kashish came...thanx 4 ure comments once agen...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1398

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha
awesume uptdate thanks a ton for da PM

hey lekha sweetheart thank u soo much 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked this part...n ure most welcome 4 the pm....luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1399

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Lovely part. Sujal-Kashish's morning scene regarding who is more 'ziddi' was very cute coz both r equally 'ziddi'. And then Sunday afternoon me their cooking session was just amazing. Aise hi Sujal ko Sundays achhe nahi lagte.....bahut valid aur romantic reason hai uska. I liked their convo thruout the whole session. Each n everything showed their immense luv 4 each other.

Kashish n Shikha's convo was also cute. Got to knw more abt Sujal from Kashish's POV. It was overall very nice. And when Sujal ran to help Kashish cross the road.....that was so nice. He was behaving as if crossing the road without seeing anything else (other than Kashish) was so obvious. Absolutely mad lover!!!!

And the night scene was also gud. Sujal so lovingly applied ointment!!!! And he very nicely cheered her up when she was upset abt that Abhinav thing. Too gud!!!

I've loved every bit of this part. Pls continue soon.

hey sumaiya dear thank u soo much 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked this part and the morning scene regarding who is more 'ziddi'...and ure right...in dono mein se na koi kam hai aur na zyada...yeh dono equally ziddi hain....we are glad u liked the Sunday evening cooking session.....😆😆😆your right Sujal does have a valid reason for loving Sunday's....Sunday is romance day for him😆😆😆we are glad u liked there convo throughout and that we managed 2 portray there feelings through that scene....

we are glad u liked Kashish and Shikha's convo...yes it was more of an insight of Kashish's views and love for Sujal....we are glad u liked how Sujal ran in the middle of the road wen he saw Kashish tring to cross...n yes he was unaware of the traffic around..all he could see was Kashish...n no doubt he is a mad lover....we are glad u liked the night scene...hw Sujal applied both ointments😆 and yes he did cheer her up after knowing that she was upset.....we are glad u liked this part dear...thanx 4 ure comments...luv Kashish and Summi😳