~Na Tum Jaano Na Hum - Rm FF ~ UPD. Pg 19!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: komal793

heyy

awesome character sketch and intro.
cant wait 2 read the first part.
pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
luv
komal.

Thankk u komal
Do keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

Heyy Radhika!!
Thankkk u so much!
Will try to continue soon... uhmm about the pming, im not sure.. if people really need pms then i will because in my other FF it was just too many people that i had to pm so thats why i stopped... lets see how this goes..
Thanks for commeting, as usual u were the first.
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Well
i always wait for your update, that i check regularly that's why i am always first.
Aren't you glad that i am always first?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Nikki you're AMAZING! Na tum jaano na hum is one of my favorite movies! I have feeling I'm going to LOVE this FF just as much I Love your other one!!! I like the character sketch so far! I'm so excited!!!! Thanks for the PM!!!! waiting for the part!

komz <3

Komziiiiiiiiiii i was just reading ur One shot, will for sure comment there soon!
Thankksssss!
Even one of my favorite movies is Na tum jaano na hum, i loved that moviee!
Thank uuu soo much! Im waiting for ur comment in my other FF!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sweet anju

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

so intresting cnt fasssssssssssst
pm me

Thankkk uuu Anjuuu!!
Keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey namrata its a great n interesting concept!!!!
eagerly waiting 4 the next part!!!
its sounds awesome!!!!!
do PM me !!!!!

Thanks gauri!
Will try to continue soon,
Keep reading and leaving comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Part 1:

Sanya was sitting on the bed watching Muskaan struggle with all her old books she had from college, she was arranging them nicely on the book shelf, but right now she had too many in her hand. Suddenly they all fell down and so did she.

Sanya: Arrey Muskaan yeh tu kya kar rahi hai?

She gets off from the bed and helps Muskaan pick up her books.

Muskaan: Itni sare purane college ke books ek box mein pare the, socha ki achi tara se shelf par rakh dun.

Sanya: Haan lekin kya yeh zaroori hain ki tu sab books ek saath hi uthaye, le main tujhe help karti hoon.

Muskaan: Okay....

They had picked up all the books from the floor and arranged them neatly on the shelf. When Muskaan was about to walk back to the bed, she noticed a white letter on the floor, still with the address on it, unopened. It said:


Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai
Irradon mein tu hai

Tum kaun ho main nahin jaanta lekin maine yeh gaana sirf tumhare liya likha hain. Haan tu hi hai jo mere khwaabon main hain, aur tu hi hai joh meri irrado aur baaton main hain. Main nahin jaanta ki yeh letter tumhe kab aur kahan millega, lekin mujhe is letter ka jawaab ka intezaar rahega... jaana hai ki tum kaun ho. Main jaanta hoon ki jisse bhi yeh letter millega, woh is duniya main koi khaas insan hoga. Jab tak mujhe yeh letter ka jawab nahin millega, tab tak is letter pe koi naam nahin hoga, sirf mera address.

I'll be waiting

Your.....

"Secret Friend"

Flashback:

Rahul, and Akshay sitting in college, in Mumbai , bored in History class where the teacher is just talking and talking.

Rahul: Ey Akshay, Idea!

Rahul took out a piece of paper really quickly and a pen to write with.

Rahul: Hum waise bhi kuch hi hafton mein graduate hone wale hain...

Akshay: Toh?

Rahul: Toh, main ek letter likhunga.

Akshay: Kya? dekh graduate ho raha hai, suicide karne ka plan mat bana, letter wetter ki koi zaroorat nahin hain.

Rahul: Abhey mere baat toh sun.

Akshay: Bol...

Rahul: Dekh main ek letter likh kar, is book ke sabse last page pe rakhunga, phir pata nahin yeh books kahan jaate hain, jisse bhi yeh book millega usse mera letter bhi millega... What say?

Akshay: Tu pagal ho gaya hai? Tu yeh kyun karega? Agar teacher ya phir principal ke paas book paunch gaya toh?

Rahul: First point...yeh teacher ke paas nahin paunchne wala, kyunki end of the year hum apne books rakhte hain, teachers nahin. Aur main toh mom ko apne books deh dunga woh kisi na kisse ko deh degi. Ab please bak bak karna band kar aur mujhe bata ki main kya likhun.

Akshay: Dekh... I don't think this is right.

Rahul: Chor main khud sochta hoon ki main kya likhun.

Rahul started writing. Suddenly he started to laugh so loud that the teacher looked at him with his big eyes.

Sir: Rahul agar tumhe itni hassi a rahi hain toh tum please mere class se bhar jaoge?

Rahul: Sorry sir.

Akshay: Abhey tu itna has kyun raha hain?

Rahul: Kya karun yaar mera letter itna funny hain! Pata nahin agar kissi ladki ko yeh letter mil gaya mujhe pakka pagal samjhegi.

He started to read it to Akshay

Rahul: Haan tu hi hai jo mere khwaabon main hain, aur tu hi hai joh meri irrado aur baaton main hain. HAHAHAHAH! Yaar maine apna favorite gaana toh likh diya, phir maine isse ek romantic letter bana diya! Im a genius right??? Dekh kitna maza a raha hai yeh letter likhar atleast us budhe ki history tu nahin suni paregi.

Akshay: Yaar main kahan phas gaya hoon, you are unbelievable!

Akshay started to laugh too, but not at the letter, he was laughing at his nutthead friend, Rahul. Rahul finished the letter, read it over, and laughed a little more than folded it and put it in an envelope, wrote his address and put it in his book.

Rahul: Done!

Akshay: Ab kya karega, ek aur letter likhne ka iraada hai kya?

Rahul: No yaar, ab toh bas intezaar hai ki mujhe jawaab millega bhi ya nahin... imagine agar mujhe millega.... abse 5 saal baad, ek ladki ka jawaab ayega, aur mujhe usse pyaar ho jayega! Wahh!

Akshay: Abhey pyaar letter likhar nahin hota, pyaar hota hai agar tu usse dekhe, aur usse baat karey, na ki letter likhar. Ek letter se tu uska chehra nahin dekh sakta, agar kissi budhi ko yeh letter mill gaya toh? Kya tu usse pyaar karega? Nahin na, tere toh itni girlfriends already hai toh tujhe itna bhi nahin pata ki letter likhar pyaar nahin hota?

Rahul: Okay okay mere baap! Samaj gaya, maine lecture ke liye nahin pucha.

Jus then the bell rang and the students started to pack there things and leave.

Rahul: Ab chale ya phir tumhara lecture khatam nahin hua?

Akshay: Haan chal.

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Muskaan read it over and over, she got a strange feeling inside, she didn't know who it was and the best thing would be to ignore the letter and throw it away, but she just couldn't do that.

Sanya: Mus, yeh tere haath main kya hain?

Muskaan: Uhm... yeh mere book se gir gaya.

She handed the letter to Sanya, and Sanya started to laugh.

Muskaan: Tu hass kyun rahi hain?

Sanyaa: Sorry, yaar kis idiot ne yeh likha hain, aur college ke book main chod diya? Jisse bhi yeh letter millega woh is duniya main ek khaas insane hoga. Hahaa mujhe toh is letter ko pad kar hi hassi a rahi hai, pata nahin kisne yeh letter likha hoga, aur kyun?

Muskaan: Itna bhi funny nahin hain... haan tu hain mera favorite gaana hain, tumhe nahin lagta ki shahid is sab ki peeche kuch hai? I mean mujhe hi yeh letter kyun milla?

Sanya: Forget it yaar, leave the letter. Koi pagal sa ladka hoga jisse aur koi kaam na ho. Im going to sleep, aur haan kal subhe ko jaldi uthna hain.

Muskaan: Kyun?

Sanya: Bhul gayi? Maine kahan tha na ki mujhe tumhe Rahul se milana hai.

Muskaan: Ab yeh Rahul kaun hain? Tune mujhe yeh pehle nahin bataya.

Sanya: Bataya tha tu sirf bhul gayi. Rahul mera cousin, remember??

Muskaan: Tera cousin hai tu chali ja usse milne.

Sanya: Mujhe akele nahin jaana, tu please chal na mere saath.

Muskaan: Nahin main nahin aane wali.

Sanya: Zyaada natak mat kar, hum teri aur rahul ki shaadi fix nahin kar rahe hain joh tu itna natak kar rahi hain, mera cousin hai, so relax.

Muskaan: Pata nahin tere dimaag mein kya chal raha hain, tere saath ko kuch bhi
possible hai, rahul aur mere shaadi bhi.

Sanya: Whatever muskaan, i think you need sleep.

Muskaan: I can't go to sleep! Us letter ko main bhul nahin sakti.

Sanya: Oh fo! Maine kaha na, bhul ja aur yaad karke kya faida tu thodi na us letter ka jawaab degi.

Muskaan: Hmm.. I guess you are right...

Sanya had soon drifted off to sleep but Muskaan couldn't forget about the letter. She already started dreaming about a hot guy writing this letter and she was the lucky one to get it... she made sure Sanya was fast asleep and got up and replied to the letter. She wasn't entirely sure what to write but she tried anyways.

Tumhare letter ke baad lag raha hai ki main woh khaas insan hoon jisse tumhara letter mila. Shahid tumhe pata bhi nahin hoga ki main kis letter ki baat kar rahi hoon ,wohi letter joh tumne mere history ki book me rakh diya kuch saal pehle. Main bhi nahin jaanti ki main kisse yeh letter likh rahi hoon, tum kaun ho? Tumhare baatein ek rajkumar ki tara lagte hain, mere sapno wala rajkumar. Aur phir woh gana joh tumne likha.... Mera favorite hain....

Koi bhi aaisa lamha nahin hai
Jisme mere tu hota nahin hai
Mein so bhi jaao raathon mein lakin
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai
Irradon mein tu hai

Shahid tumhe yeh letter kabhi millega bhi nahin, but I will be waiting.

Your....

*Secret Friend*

Muskaan read the letter over, still hesitating whether to put it in an envelope and seal it. She didn't think again she just put it in and wrote her address. She went and hid it in her closet and thought she will go to the post office tomorrow to mail it. Now she finally drifted off to sleep.
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy friends!! I just posted the first part, i hope its a good start.. it was really hard to start it off.. hope you all like it.
Do comment/critisize
Take care
Namrata
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Great part and really good start!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi!
Wow! Absolutely... Dhamakedaar first part! 👏... Loved it to bits! ... What else can I say... It's left me speechless...

Can't wait for the next part! 😛

Please update soon! 😆...
Take Care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome part namrata!!
will definitely be waiting for your next update!!

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