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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: snow white
very coooool

Thanks Snow white 😃

Keep reading

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul
the only word that comes after reading ur update is simply AMAZING!!!! it was reallly reallly goood nam!!! loved the way u just didn't apply the same story of movie here...urs is very unique yet amazing!!!! excited to read next one..and sorry for late comment!!!

Dipzzyyy! Haha new name for u!

Thankk uuu soo much

dont worry abt commenting late

just keep reading

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Heyy Guyss

Sorry for not updating earlier, ill try to update one of these days still have to write the part...

Thankss for all the lovely comments

Keep reading and leaving comments,

Take care,

Namrata

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Here is the part everyone:

dont forget to leave comments,

sorry for updating so late..

take care

Namrata

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Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Part 2:

Rahul: OH FISH!

Rahul read the letter 5 times over, the first few times he didnt know if this letter was his because he had no idea what was written in there but then he remembered exactly what he did couple years ago in history class. He just couldn't believe that he actually got a reply. He immediately took his cell phone and called Akshay.

Akshay: Hello?

Rahul: AKSHAY! Mujhe letter ka jawaab mil gaya!

Akshay: Uhh what?

Rahul: Dudee woh letter... remember?

Akshay: Yea yea WOH letter, ofcourse I remember. Abhey kis letter ki baat kar raha hai?

Rahul: Yaar woh letter joh maine college main history class mein likha tha... aur phir book main chod diya.

Akshay: Dude tu kya bol raha hai yaar?

Rahul: Are you dumb or what? Tujhe yaad kyun nahin a raha, remember history class' mera pyaara sa letter.... book mein chod diya... graduating.... tring tring tube light on hua?

Akshay: Ohhhhhh who letter!! What? Are you serious? Tujhe sach mein jawaab milla, woh haan tu hain wala letter?

Rahul: Haan, wohi.

Akshay: dude lekin kisne likha yeh?

Rahul: I dunno man, koi naam nahin hain.

Akshay: Tu abhi mere ghar par aa, mujhe woh letter parna hain.

Rahul: Okay darwaaza khol main a raha hoon.

10 minutes later Rahul was at Akshay's house door.

Rahul: Yeh le.

Akshay couldn't believe what he was reading.

Akshay: Fish yaar, isne toh pura gaana hi likh diya.

Rahul: Pura nahin yaar, lekin main kya karun? Yeh letter se toh lag raha hai ki kissi ladki ka hai joh ekdum bholi bhali, masoom si ladki hai, aur isse pata bhi nahin ki main kaun hoon, yaar this is messed up.. yeh hain kaun? aur isne jawaab kyun behja, aur agar yeh ek chotti se bachi ho toh?

Akshay: wow, wow, wow, relax... yeh ek bachi nahin ho sakti.... Lekin main bhi yahi soch raha hoon ki usne jawaab kyun behja? Usse pata bhi nahin ki tu kaun hai... aur yeh letter isse kaise milla?

Rahul: Pata nahin yaar.... hmm... ab kya karun?

Akshay: Reply to her

Rahul: What pagal ho gaya hai kya? Woh ek mazak tha, ab mujhe isse koi lena dena nahin hai.. main kuch nahin likhne wala.

Akshay: Mazak tha right? Phir bhi kissi ko toh yeh letter milla na, woh bechari tere letter ka intezaar karegi... woh teri tara usse bhul nahin jayegi, you know how girls are.

Rahul: So let them be that way.... okay agar main usse jawaab dun toh kya likhun? Naam puchun uska? Ya phir kehdun ki yeh sab ek mazaak tha aur yeh mera akrhi letter hoga?

Akshay: Noo don't do that.... tu shuru toh kar phir joh bhi tere mann main aye woh likh de.

Rahul: Oh god... you really think this is a good idea?

Akshay: Yea do it..

Rahul: Lekin shuru kaise karun? Dear.. my secret friend? Dude isn't that too cheesy?

Akshay: No yaar just write that.

Rahul took a piece of paper and started to write.

Dear my secret friend,

Wow itne saalon baad mujhe is letter ka jawaab milla... sach kahun toh main toh is letter ke bare me bhul hi gaya. Ab mujhe sab yaad ara hain, woh history class jab maine woh letter likha, phir book main chod diya.. us waqt toh main bore ho raha tha isiliye main letter likha.. sirf ek mazaak tha.. mujhe yakeen tha ki yeh letter kissi ko nahin millega.. But I was wrong. The world is small after all. I cant believe this haan tu hain maine toh aisi hi likh diya tha kyunki woh mera favorite song hai lekin tumhara bhi? Coincidence I guess...

Tumhare baatein se tum kitne innocent sound karti ho.. tum ho kaun? Naam nahin batana hai toh mat batao.. lekin kya phir hum har bar ek dusre ko secret friend bulayenge? Gosh agar mujhe pata hoga ki tum kaun ho toh yeh sab kitna asan hoga. Agar tum ek chotti si bachi ho toh main tumhe babli ya rinku ya aisa kuch bulata.. agar tum ek budhi dadi ho toh main tumhe respect se dadiji bulata' lekin tumhare us letter ke ilawa mujhe aur kuch nahin pata isiliye main tumhara letter ka wait karunga aur tab tak ke liye secret friend hi theek hai. I will be waiting....

Your,

Secret friend

Rahul handed the letter over to Akshay and Akshay read it..

Rahul: I think it's a crap letter.

Akshay: No its perfect! Tu abhi ja post office aur isse behj de.

Rahul: Nahin abhi nahin.... woh mujhe Sanya se milna na..

Akshay: Toh uske baad.

Rahul: yea.. so you sure? Should I send it?

Akshay: Zyaada soch mat, its good.

Rahul: Okay.. ab main chalta hoon. Bye

Akshay: Bye

Rahul took the letter and left to go meet Sanya and Muskaan. They were meeting out for lunch at a good Chinese restaurant.

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Muskaans house:

Sanya was already ready but Muskaan was still lazing around the house really not in the mood to go eat Chinese food in the first place.

Sanya: Muskaan tu abhi tak tayaar nahin hui? Jaldi kar please.

Muskaan: Sanya kya tu akeli nahin ja sakti?

Sanya: Nahin.. come on yaar ek lunch hi toh hai.

Muskaan: Lekin main kyun chalun tumhare saath tumhare cousin se milne.. and anyways I don't want chinese.

Sanya: Then don't eat chinese.. hum badme phir mcdonalds jayenge just come pleaseee

Muskaan: Sanya.....

Sanya: Muskaan..... pleasee mere liye

Muskaan: Fine...

Sanya: That's like a good girl, now come on hurry up.

Muskaan got up still lazily and went to get ready.. she came out wearing a simple black top with jeans. She just kept her hair loose with little make up on.

Sanya: Chale?

Muskaan: Like I have a choice...

Sanya: Okay now smile, and be nice to rahul okay.

Muskaan smiled a fake big smile.

Muskaan: Aise chalega?

Sanya: Yea yeah.. okay chal hum already late hai.

They reached the restaurant and rahul was already there he got up from the table and walked over to sanya and muskaan. He gave sanya a big hug.

Sanya: Rahulllll.... Bhaiyaa!

Rahul: Ey don't call me bhaiyaa, im not that old okay.

They both were talking and laughing by themselves and for a minute both of them completely forgot about muskaan standing right next to them.

Sanya: Oh sorry.... rahul yeh meri best friend hai muskaan, muskaan this is rahul... mera sabse pyaara bhai, hum bhai behn toh hai lekin mumbai a kar, hum bahut kum milte hain.

Muskaan: Oh.. hi.. nice to meet u.

Rahul: Same here... soo table us taraf hain.. jake beht jaye?

Sanya: Yea sure...

Muskaan felt like she is wasting her time here, it would have been much better if she stayed home and went off to sleep instead of being here.

Rahul: Soo ladies.. hows it going?

Sanya: Ey apni angrezi band kar, humme impress karni ki koshish mat kar.

Rahul: Eyy sanya relaxx, main tumhe impress karni ki khoshish kyun karunga? Tum toh meri behn ho.

Sanya: Haan lekin muskaan teri behn nahin hai.... tum abhi tak nahin sudre jahan bhi ladki dekh liya waha tumhara flirting chalu.

Rahul: Hello, main flirt nahin kar raha, english main kya bol diya tum toh kuch aur hi sochne lag gayi.

Sanya: Main sab jaanti hoon okay.. tumhare girlfriends ki list toh mere phone bill se bhi zyaada hain.

Rahul: Arrey tu kabhi kuch acha nahin bol sakti? Main itna bura bhi nahin hoon...

Sanya: ohhh tumhe bura laga?? Im sorry... mujhe muskaan ke samne yeh sab nahin kehna chahiye tha. She said sarcastically.

Muskaan: Okay guys enough... ab khana order karen please?

Rahul: Thanks, lagta hai ki Sanya bhul gayi ki hum restaurant mein hain, muskaan ko bhook lagi hai yaar sanya stop it.

Sanya: Ahhhh muskaan ko bhook lagi hain.. okay.. khana order karo.

Rahul and muskaan just rolled their eyes at sanya, for muskaan it was like living hell why was sanya teasing them both anyways?

Rahul: Soo muskaan tum itni chup kyun ho?

Muskaan: Woh... nahin...

Sanya: Main batati hoon... woh usse tumhare samne sharam a rahi hain.

Muskaan: Sanya.... Mujhe bolna aata hain... thanks tumhe mere liye bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.

Sanya: Okay as you wish...

Muskaan leaned forward and whispered to rahul:

Muskaan: Sorry pata nahin woh aisa kyun behave kar rahi hain.... Don't mind her okay.

Rahul smiled and whispered back:

Rahul: Im used to it... jab bhi woh mere saath hoti hai uske dimaag ka screw thoda loose ho jaata hain...

Both of them laughed and sanya is just staring at them.

Sanya: Oyee kya khusar phusar ho rahi hain huh mujhe bhi toh batao.

Rahul: Kuch nahin... yeh mera aur muskaan ka secret hai, okay?

Sanya: Secrets aur mujhse? Please batao, kya tum mere bare main baat kar rahi the?

Muskaan: Sanyaa, kuch nahin.. please ab khana order karen?

Rahul: Hmmm..

They all were looking at their menu when rahuls phone rang.

Rahul: uh excuse me.

Rahul: Hello?

Akshay: Rahul, kahan hai tu?

Rahul: Maine bola toh tha sanya ke saath hun, kyun?

Akshay: Yaar main wahan a sakta hoon? Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai aur ghar par kuch nahin hain..

Rahul: Akshay... uh... ek minute main unse puch kar aata hoon theek hain?

Akshay: Okay please hurry up, wapas phone karna.

Rahul: okay...

Rahul walked back to the table, and asked if akshay could join them.

Sanya: Yea sure why not.. muskaan tumhe toh koi problem nahin hai na?

Muskaan: No its fine..

Rahul: okay toh main usse phone karta hoon. He called him back and akshay will be there in a few minutes.

Sanya: Okay so main vegetable noodles order kar rahi hoon' hmm rahul you want chicken?

Rahul: Uhmm muskaan tum chicken toh khati ho na?

Sanya: Rahul! Main tumse baat kar rahi hoon, ab tu muskaan se kyun puch raha?

Rahul: Abhey teri problem kya hain, main akela pura chicken khatam nahin kar sakta, isiliye puch raha hoon taki hum share kar sakte hain, tu toh veg hai na?

Sanya: Okay toh theek hain, haan muskaan chicken khati hain.

Rahul: haan okay so tu apna noodles order kar, main aur muskaan chicken share karenge aur jab akshay a jayega woh apna khana khud order kar lega. Okay? Kissi ko aur kuch chahiye? Oh shit sorry.. muskaan sanya toh aise hi bak bak karti hai maine toh pucha hi nahin, tumhe share karne mein koi problem nahin ha na?

Muskaan: Nahin mujhe toh koi problem nahin hain.... par sanya ko shahid problem hogi.. kyun san? Jalan ho rahi hain?? Huh huh???

Muskaan shrugged against sanyas shoulder with a wide smile teasing her.

Sanya: Ha ha jalan aur mujhe? Please rahul toh hai hi bewakoof mujhe kyun jalan hogi.

Just then Akshay barged in the restaurant and ran to their table.

Akshay: Hi sanya, sorry yaar mujhe aise nahin aana chahiye tha lekin mujhe itni bhook lagi hain, woh mere ghar par kuch khane ke liye nahin hai aur mujhe pata tha ki rahul toh lunch ke liye tumhare saath gaya hain toh main a gaya, waise toh main......

Then he stopped talking because he noticed the most beautiful face sitting right next to him, he just couldn't take his eyes off her, he has never seen her before. Muskaan didn't realize that he stopped talking and was staring at her.

Akshay: Hey.... Maine tumhe pehle kabhi nahin dekha... tum...??

Sanya: Tum agar humme bolne ka mauka doge tab toh main tumhe muskaan se introduce karwa saku na. Akshay yeh hai meri friend Muskaan, Muskaan yeh hai akshay rahul ka best friend.

Akshay: Ohh hi... nice to meet u.

He gave his hand forward and shook muskaans.

Akshay: You're beautiful

He slightly kissed muskaans hand.

Muskaan: Uh... thanks... nice to meet u too..

Rahul: sanya tujhe lagta hai ki main flirt karta hoon, isse dekh ate saath hi muskaan ko kiss bhi kar liya.

Sanya: Tumse hi sikha hoga.

Akshay: Look guys shes beautiful so she deserves a kiss, anyways enough of the talk, khana order kar liya?

Rahul: humare liye haan, abhi tumhe joh chahiye woh tum order kar lena.

Akshay: Are you serious? Tum kuch bhi order kar sakte the yaar, mujhe abhi itni bhook lagi hai ki main yeh puri table kha sakta hoon.

Rahul: Relax yaar, hum bas abhi order kar hi rahe the aur tu agaya, jaldi bata ki kya chahiye.

Akhay: tu kya kha raha hain?

Rahul: Main toh chicken kha raha hoon.

Akshay: Ohh aur muskaan tum?

Muskaan: Main bhi rahul ke saath chicken share kar rahi hoon.

Akshay: Oh.. okay mere liye bhi ek chicken hi order kar le.

Rahul: Okay.

They ordered their food, and muskaan and rahul started to eat when akshay noticed them and got jealous.

Akshay: Oye par tum log share kyun kar rahe ho? Chakar kya hain?

Sanya: Yaar akshay, in log ke beech main toh chakar chal raha hain joh humhe nahin pata.

Akshay: Ohh rahul not fair yaar, tumhe koi hak nahin banta ki tum itni khubsoorat ladki ke saath khana share karo.

Muskaan: Thanks for the compliment lekin no humare beech main koi chakar nahin chal raha.

Akshay: good main toh dar hi gaya tha.

Soon they finished eating and paid the bill.

Rahul: Okay guys had fun today.... mujhe abhi jaana hoga...

Sanya: Haan hum bhi bas abhi ghar hi ja rahe hain..

Rahul: Okay toh chalte hain phir... bye then

He hugged sanya and waved to muskaan, whereas akshay hugged muskaan and waved to sanya.

Rahul headed off to the post office with akshay and sanya and muskaan headed off home.

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Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Really nice part and Rahul is sanya's bro... That's a good part!!!!

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Fizza

@fizzazaza

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

awesome update ive been waiting for this haha :D
ohh nice looks like the start of some drama :)

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428279

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

This is really good Namrata, its so cute how Rahul and Muskan shared the chicken, and ugh I hate that Akshay guy for liking Muskan, but that goes with the storyline, so wat can we do, lol. Waiting for the next update!!!

~ Saby

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-Mishti_Divz-

@-Mishti_Divz-

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Hey Namiii...wonderful update yaaar👏 👏 reallly luved it 😳 😳 😳 awww Rahul an Muski sahred the chicken aawwwww soo sweeett 😳😳😳.....hahah luved the part where aksahy got jeaoulse..😆

do update soonn will be waiting for next part 😳

Thankss 😊

Edited by divyashaz - 16 years ago

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

awwww it was really sweet part!!!!👏..loved how RM shared their chickenn but dun like the fact that akshay likes muskaaan..i hope ur FF doesn't go exactly like the movie..i want RM to unite ASAP as always..lol..but it was really cute part..will be waiting for the next part!!!!!