iS tHiS lOvE? (Mayur Based Part9 updated Aug. 23) - Page 4

It was very very nice.

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome .................i loved it.plzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list.update soon.😳

Thanks! I am trying to keep the Mayurian flavor 😃 They are soo cute that story turns out awesome.

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

wow .... wow..... wow...... wow....wow.....wow..... wow.... yaar main to aap ki fan he ho gayi hu sooooooooooo excellent, fantastic, fabulous, awsum, gr8, work dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏........ really just loved it............ plzzzzzzz jaldi se 4th part bhi update kar do............ just brillant work........ really maine phele bhi bola tha what a gr8 work yaar mere pass to words he nahi bache hai ..... plzz do continue 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

itne saare compliments! will keep me going thanks! words dhoond ke rakhna for the next time 😛

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

awesome yaar

toooooooooooo good !!!...in speechless

both are in there characters perfectly...awesome work

first day --they becum frnds, knw each-other and fight also..and now they are repenting.....wow..i loved it to core

I know rite. Couldn't help it their characters demanded it.

I hope it didn't sound like a rushed thing. I was trying to exploit how both were trying to ignore their infatuation towards each other. Its like 1st meet love, but they don't know yet. That's how I felt when i started mjht.

Mayur always had an attraction for each other even in the show. I am trying to keep it close to the show but they mingling in different situations. I hope I made sense there. lol.

Originally posted by: angelz

it was soo cute loved it <3

Thanks angelz that's very sweet of u. Keep reading and commenting. 😊

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow tht was amazinggggggggg i love it 2 and 3 part

Yeah 2 and 3 is the start of their friendship. I love those parts as well. Hopefully 4th one will make you happy as well. Keep enjoying!

hey

Lovely update

Waitin 4 next part eagerly

Originally posted by: jusrockingon

it was really cute.keep it up!👍🏼

Thank you! these nice comment will keep fueling me, thanks once again!

Originally posted by: jan4artimayur

muah!!!

mayur4ever..

U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks 😃 😃 😃
I'll try n keep it up.
😃

Nishithini loveudaniel SweetyMJHT muneefah


Thank you guys! I'll update part 4 soon.