The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 46

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

you dont pm yaar

but ok i know you hav alot of work

very nice part

true love alwys remain 😊

👏 this is for this lovely part

amazing he prove his love with every effort

love need no gift only feelings and emotions tell the

feel

weell jab bhi kuch best baat ko yaad kargie to yeh lovely date hamesha

yaad rahegi😊

very nice

vo lutanic murder nahi tha is part me thx to u😊

when im reading this i also feel some tingling sesation in my heart

awesome part yaar

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

im finding some new smiley but dont get this

awesoooooome part

thankssssss a lot adi for such a lovely comment......i feel honoured to have such lovely reader like you....& i'm glad you considered this part as a best thing........😊

Originally posted by: .x.Shilky.x.

nice ff n updtz yaar....it was AWESOME........

thanksssss a lot........😊

Originally posted by: isha93

awesome parts. I got addicted right after reading the first part and then I couldnt stop until reading the rest. I am dying to find out who the murderer is and at first I thought it was mayank but now there is no way it is Mayank. You have made all the characters so lovable that I am in love with all of them right now (especially MAyank) and I would hate it if the murderer ends up being from someone in their group (ie. samrat, and even RV). By the way I am loving your FF more than the current story going on between mayank and nupur in mjht right now 😉 . I would just like to say you have amazing writing skills and I am so glad that I got the chance to read your ff as it is one of a kind.
P.S. please add me onto your pm list and update soon because I am dying to read the next part:)

thankssssssss a lot isha for such a lovely comment.....glad to know u liked it more than the current track between mayur.....i'll surely try to leave upto your expectations.......thanks for such lovely compliments.....i'll surely add you to the PM list......😊

hey yaar it was too good!!!..........loved every bit of it!!!!....sorry for late reply i too was damn busy!!!...........but i think u forgot to pm me!!!........dear pm me next time!!!.....plzzzzzzzzz.......any ways awesome update!!!....update the next part asap!!!...

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey yaar it was too good!!!..........loved every bit of it!!!!....sorry for late reply i too was damn busy!!!...........but i think u forgot to pm me!!!........dear pm me next time!!!.....plzzzzzzzzz.......any ways awesome update!!!....update the next part asap!!!...

thanksssss a lot for your comment......i'm glad u liked it....sorry if i forgot to pm you......wont happen again......😊

RECAP:

Mayur date.Nups tells mayu the reason for staying away from him.Both decide to face the murderer together.

PART 10:

Nupur got up with a smile on her face.She blushed remembering their date.She never knew mayu could plan such a lovely date.She was still in store room as they slept there only in each others arms.But she looked here & there & frowned as she realized she is alone & mayu had gone.She felt very bad that after a lovely night mayu left her like this.She didn't even know what the time was.Quietly she got up looking here & there hoping to see mayu come out from somewhere but he didnt.Sad & depressed she dragged her feet to her room.She opened her room door & banged it back in anger.'Why did he leave without telling me?'''was the question ringing in her ears.She turned around to find the walls of her room decorated with lovely greeting cards of various sizes covering each & every inch of the wall.She was surprised as well as happy.She took a look at each greeting all describing mayank's feeling.Some meant I'll always be there for you while some read made for each other.She smiled looking at each card since each card depicted his love for her.Since last night he had been surprising her.This was not something she ever dreamt of yet this was beautiful.She realized mayank had altogether given her a new feeling....a new happiness.She looked at a huge bouque placed on side table fully packed with fresh lovely roses.She went & took a look at it.A letter was placed on the card.It read "I'm sorry to leave you alone.Didnt want to wake you early & disturb you.Had to plan this surprise for you.Hope you like it.Going for rehearsels.Take your medicines & meet me at lunch since you have skipped your breakfast.Love you.Take care."She looked at watch & realized it was past 11 am.She didnt know she slept so much.Mayu knows her really well.He knows if she sleeps late she can never get up early in the morning.She felt too happy & relieved after last night & morning surprise.But her happiness was short lived.While she was going through all the cards on wall she came across one which she found little odd.This card had a very different picture.She looked at it closely.It had a devils photo on it.The devil showed its vicious laugh while there was a lady who was under his feet.Yes the photo depicted that the lady was defeated by the devil while the devil laughed at his victory.Nups took the card out of the wall & looked at with numbness.She opened to see whats written inside.It read "kyu be saali'.kal raat apne majnu ke saath bahut mazee kiye?teri himmat kaise hui uske saath jaane ki?Bahut khush lag rahi thi uske saath.Tujhe kya lagta hai ki main nahi jaanta tu kya kar rahi hai?Tujhko samjhaya tha na maine ki usko khud se dur kar de...tujh ko choone ka haq sirf mera hai.....tere uss loverboy ko tu dur kar warna main usko tujhse hamesha ke liye dur kar dooga....achaa hai jo kal raat tumne aisi-waisi koi harqat nahi ki warna aaj tum dono ki laash ko dafnaaya jaata.....maine tujhe kahaa tha na ki main 2^nd hand ladkiyaan nahi use karta....tum dono jitne dur rahoge utne khush rahoge yaad rakhna....bas ab aur bees(20) din....jitna khush rehna chahti ho reh lo par aisi koi harqat mat karna jisse mujhe gussa aaye warna tum jaanti ho...."Nupur threw the card in anger & sat on the floor crying.She so hated this murderer.All his words kept ringing in her ears while last nights memories kept flashing in her mind.He again put her in 2 minds.She closed her eyes & found mayu's smiling face in front of her.Her face lit up imagining him.She made up her mind.There was no way she was leaving mayu for some madman.She will live her life happily even if they are last days of her life.She wiped her tears as she took a ultimate decision.She freshened up & collected all those photos & letter & messages that the madman had sent her.She went to the inspector & gave him all those proofs.The inspector was glad that she gave these things as they may be of some use to trace the murderer.Nups promised him that she'll keep updating him about any such activities & in return she wants to be informed about any progresses made regarding the case.She behaved perfectly normal with all her friends & once again they all were happy to be a gang together.

2 DAYS LATER.

The inspector called both mayank-nupur.

I: We need to search your room Ms.Nupur.....

N: why my room?

I: we think that the murderer is keeping a thorough watch on you & he even seems to know what you are doing in your room.So its better we check your room once.Maybe we can get some clues.

M: but even I'll be there when you check the room.

I: ofcourse the room will be checked in your presence only.Tomorrow morning my men will come & check the room.

The next morning some men came & checked her room.To their horror they found cameras hidden in her room.2 cameras were placed above the cupboared placed under a cloth well hidden.Nups immediately caught mayu's hand as she was shocked on this discovery.Even mayu's face filled with anger on seeing this.The men took the cameras to the inspector while mayur followed them to the inspector.

I: so my thought was right.The murderer indeed kept an eye on you through cameras.

M: but how could he enter nupur's room & place the cameras without having key?

I: thieves & murderers dont need keys to enter a room....there has to be some way from where he entered.

N: may be on the 1^st day of my arrival'.(She recalled how mayu had played a prank on her on their 1^st day & when she entered the bathroom something was written on mirror & she thought it was part of mayu's prank.)She told them this.

M: par main toh uss raat tumhaare bathroom mein gaya hi nahi tha.

I: That means he came here around the same time as you people.So he had already marked you as his next victim in India & followed you here.No wonder we are not getting much clues against him.He seems to have planned his every move.He has even planned your deathday.

M: but how do we catch him?

I: its not easy to track such people.He takes each & every step with a right move & leaves no proofs behind.We will have to wait till he makes some mistake.We need to do something that will make him act on an impulse.Only then can we get some clues.I'll try to think of something.Till than you two be really careful.

Mayur nodded & left from there.They reached nupurs room but nupur was hesitant to go in.She still feared to enter her room alone.

M: tumhe darr lag raha hai??

Nups nodded her head slowly.

M: kiss baat ka?ab toh tumhaare room mein koi cameras bhi nahi hai.

N: par mayank usne mere room mein cameras rakhe aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala...itne din se woh meri har harqat par nazar rakh raha tha....main kab jaagti hu....kab soti hu.....kab hasti hu....kab roti hu....usse sab pata chal jaata....

M: tum har baar yeh kyu bhul jaati ho ki woh yahi chahta hai ki tum darro.....tumhaare darr mein woh khud ki jeet samajhta hai.woh yahi chahta hai tum darr jao.....tumhe khush rehna hai tabhi uski haar hogi...

N: main jaanti hu mayank tum jo keh rahe ho woh sach hai par main yeh soch kar ghabraa jaati hu ki pataa nahi woh aage kya kare'

M: kuch nahi kar sakta woh jab tak hum saath mein hai....hum koi na koi raasta dhoondh lenge'.tum bas fikar mat karo.....ab jaldi apna mooh dho lo.....sab log humaara neeche wait kar rahe hai'

Nupur nodded & washed her face to remove her fear when a thought struck her'did I ever change clothes in room?No I dont think so.I always change them in bathroom.Thank god I never had the habit of changing clothes in the room.'She checked each corner of the bathroom for her own satisfaction & was glad that there were no cameras in the bathroom atleast.

When she came out she received another message from the serial killer:"tumhe kya lagta hai ki tumne cameras hataa diye toh mein tum par nazar nahi rakh sakta?Well dear you are highly mistaken.I've my own ways to watch my victims.Mujhe koi nahi rok sakta."Nupur showed this message to mayank.

M: tum fikar mat karo nupur....woh chahe kuch bhi karle humaara kuch nahi bigaad sakta....humaare pyaar ki taakat uske saamne zaroor jeetegi....

Nupur hugged him & for the 1^st time she didnt cry or feel sad after reading a message.She knew she & mayu would win on the strength of their love & their trust on god.

3 more days passed like this.Nupur was used to getting messages from the killer reminding her number of days left but unfortunately they were of no use in helping find the identity of the killer.No girl was yet attacked so everyone were getting little normal in the enivroment.However 1 thing or rather 1 person had changed completely.There was a drastic change in dia's behaviour.She had stopped throwing tantrums & remarking on strugglers.She had stopped showing pride.Her arrogance had some how disappeared.But the problem was she completely didn't talk to anyone.She maintained a low profile & just did her practices.She would only answer how much she was asked for.She stopped treating strugglers as slum.The gang members often had a talk about the reason about this sudden change in dia.Although she left her arrogance she didn't become friendly with anyone.Mayu was very sure this sudden change was somewhere related to RV.Also gunjan was getting suspicious about mayur.She realized often they would talk to inspector but she didn't understand why were they so often called in his office.On asking them they would just give some random reason that inspector wanted to know if they had seen anything abnormal.They still didnt want to tell everyone about nupur being the target.Gunjan knew they were lying & that they are related more closely to this case than others but she decided to stop questioning them & give them their own time in disclosing the truth.

Everyone were called for an announcement.A one day outdoor trip was announced since everyone were banned from leaving the premises since the time serial killer had entered.The manager decided everyone deserved a one day break hence all the sessions & practices were stopped for one day.This came as a surprise to everyone.All the gang members were enthusiastic regarding this trip.The trip was planned for next day.

G: wow hum sab baahar ghumne jaa rahe hai....i'm so excited....

S: seriously itne din se lag raha tha jaise ki hum jail mein kaid hai...yahaan ka mahaul kitna depressing tha....finally hum poora ek din mazaa kar sakte hai.....

N: mujhe bhi bahut saari shopping karni hai.....

G: haan mujhe bhi bahut saara saamaan lena hai....ghar jaakar mom-dad ko dena hai.....

M: tum girls ko shopping ke ilaawa aur kuch nahi aata???

S: aur nahi toh kya.....hum wahaan jaakar mazaa karni ki soch rahe hai aur tum log shopping ko lekar baithe ho.....

N: kyu tum logon ko kya problem hai???hum kal shopping zaroor karenge.....tumhe humaare saath aana ho toh aao warna hum akele chale jaayege.....

G: aur nahi toh kya....jab khud ko kuch khareedna hota hai tab itni chappar-chappar nahi karte aur kal humme khareedi karni hai toh tum log ko itna problem hai.....

S: theek hai baba ab chup karo.....jitni shopping karni ho kar lena par humara sir mat khao....

M(whispered to samrat): kal 2-3 ghante shopping mein beet jaayenge....tayyaar rehna torture ke liye....nupur toh baat-baat par advice maangegi....(mimicking nupur)'yeh achaa ki woh achaa hai??tumhe kya pasand hai???bataao na mayank'

S(whispering): same to same gunjan...uff inke saath shopping mein humaara dimaag kharaab ho jaayega.....main toh soch rahaa hu yeh log shopping karenge tab hum wahaan se nikal jaayenge.....

M: not a bad idea....mauka milla toh zaroor nikal jaayege....(but than he remembered the serial killer.)nahi hum unhe akela nahi chod sakte....woh serial killer yahin kahin hai....its not safe....

S: ya you are right....shayad humaare naseeb mein yeh torture hi likha.....par yeh log toh saath mein rahenge fir unhe khatraa kiss baat ka?waise bhi woh killer gunjan ka kuch nahi bigaad sakta....

M: kyu??

S(jokingly): kyunki gunjan itne zor-zor se rone lagegi ki woh killer khud hi darr ke bhaag jaayega....believe mein gunjan ka rona itna infectious hai....usse chup karaana kissiko nahi aata....

Both laughed & hi-fived each other.Girls were busy discussing what they'll buy when the boys laughter interrupted them & they saw mischevious smile.Immediately boys replaced their smile with a normal look.Mayu decided to tell RV about the torturous girls shopping plan but to his surprise RV was not there.He looked here & there & saw RV was missing.He went to RVs room & was about to knock when he heard a girls voice coming from inside.He recognized the voice to be dia's.

D: I dont know RV..mujhe thoda aur time chahiye...i'm not prepared....

R: par problem kya hai???

D: no one will accept me....sab mujhse nafrat karte hai....

R: koi tumse nafrat nahi karta....jab sabko pata chalega ki tum kitni achchi hu koi tumse nafrat nahi karega...main samjhaoga sabko.....

D: par mujhe darr lagta hai....main khud ko iss glamourous duniya mein kho chuki hoon....main ab woh nahi jisse tum pyaar karte ho....

R: tum aaj bhi woh hi ho jisse maine pyaar kiya hai....aur main jaanta hoon tumne khud ko chupaane ki bahut koshish ki hai.....tum duniya se khud ko chupa sakti ho par mujhse nahi chup sakti.....tum jaanti ho tum mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti....main sirf tumhaara jawaab jaan na chahta hoon....

D: I love you too RV....tum jaante ho main tumse pyaar karti hoon par agar tumhaare gang members ne mujhe accept nahi kiya toh kya tum mujhe chod doge???

R: I'm very sure sab log tumhe accept karenge....tumhaari achaai main sabke saamne laaoga....aur agar kissi ne tumhe accept nahi kiya tab bhi tum meri life mein rahogi....tum meri life mein in sab logon se bahut pehle aayi ho....aaj agar main yahaan hoon toh sirf tumhaari wajah se....aur yeh baat sabko samajhni hogi....

Mayank left from there hearing this.So he was right in thinking there is something between RV-dia.This sudden change in dia was indeed due to RV.He knew dia since a long time & their story didnt start here;it started in India only.Now dia was hesitant to get into group.Mayank decided he would do something on the trip that would make easier for everyone to accept dia in the group.He smiled as he realized one more couple in their group fell in love.A couple no one could imagine- a good sweet boy & a rude arrogant girl.

Nupur was half asleep when she received a message from the serial killer:"be ready for next shock tomorrow.I'll be infront of you tomorrow.Lets see if you can recognize me."

She woke up instantly after reading this message & smiled to herself.

N: tum kuch nahi kar sakoge.Kal mayank poora waqt mere saath hoga.Main chahti hu kal tum mere saamne aao aur tumhaari kahaani main hamesha ke liye kal khatam kar du.I'll wait for you.

Okay I'm really very sorry for this horrible delay.I'm really busy with studies.I've exams from 24^th so I'll update next part after 28^th.If I get time in next week I'll try to update but I cant promise anything.

Please comment/criticize....😳

pinkey good luck for exam

Nice part dear

wow dear awesome update dear very well written keep it up the good job..:)