The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#431

it was AWESOME................i was totally into it, and u have written it so well, that i cud actually visualise everything................ gr8 job, do continue soon..........

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#432

hey pinky!!!!

wow!!! it was so romantic. kash mujhe bhi mayank jaisa boyfriend milta...............everything was sooo cute. awesome awesome awesome. thank god nupur has finally understood her feelings. really nice update. too good. loved it.

p.s.- I am not an active member. so I cant add you to my buddy list. sorry. but no probs..........yuo just change the name of your topic whenever you update. I will understand.

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taniya

@Taniya09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#433

CHOOOOOOOOOO CHWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!🤗🤗
LUVED THE MN PART!!!!😳
TK CRE.
DO PM ME THE NEXT PART.
TANIYA.

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#434

awesome part yaar

hats offfffffff 2 ur riting

update next part soooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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luv-myur

@luv-myur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#435

Pinky-totally, seriously loved it.

Thankyou 4 the long one and portraying their emotion. Especially the ending was supurb-Nupur discovering what she really feels-love it.

And the date--------was perfect. and Very realistic.

I enjoyed this more than the White godhe and etc.

Love it.

Keep it up.

Love u'r work totally.

V.Happy so 🤗 lots of hugs and kisses 4 u.

Loving it fully.

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Sufia

@.x.Shilky.x.

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#436

nice ff n updtz yaar....it was AWESOME........

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#437

that was long and cute part pinky....

finally she said luv u...their promise was too cute...

love u and ur writting....ur alwayz great as usual...

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#438

you dont pm yaar

but ok i know you hav alot of work

very nice part

true love alwys remain 😊

👏 this is for this lovely part

amazing he prove his love with every effort

love need no gift only feelings and emotions tell the

feel

weell jab bhi kuch best baat ko yaad kargie to yeh lovely date hamesha

yaad rahegi😊

very nice

vo lutanic murder nahi tha is part me thx to u😊

when im reading this i also feel some tingling sesation in my heart

awesome part yaar

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

im finding some new smiley but dont get this

awesoooooome part

Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago

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Isha

@isha93

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+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#439

awesome parts. I got addicted right after reading the first part and then I couldnt stop until reading the rest. I am dying to find out who the murderer is and at first I thought it was mayank but now there is no way it is Mayank. You have made all the characters so lovable that I am in love with all of them right now (especially MAyank) and I would hate it if the murderer ends up being from someone in their group (ie. samrat, and even RV). By the way I am loving your FF more than the current story going on between mayank and nupur in mjht right now 😉 . I would just like to say you have amazing writing skills and I am so glad that I got the chance to read your ff as it is one of a kind.
P.S. please add me onto your pm list and update soon because I am dying to read the next part:)

Edited by isha93 - 16 years ago